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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

Tue Dec 18, 2018 6:53 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Flesh for Flesh
City/Area: Andaris, Mantis Blacksite
Notes/Warnings: Not much violence but a little
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Intimidation: Showing no motives leaves people afraid
Intimidation: Killing without relent
Intimidation: Follow even the darkest orders
Deception: Playing to their desires
Deception: Lies can't be read through hollow eyes
Deception: Getting what you want through lies

Loot: Misplaced trust
Injuries/Overstepping: Burning on her back from the insect legs, whens he unsummons then. Doesn't last long
Renown: Maybe 5 or 10. I imagine word of her might spread out, through the Mantis at least. She's meant to betray her own boss after all :D
Collaboration: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

Wed Dec 19, 2018 2:59 am

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Thread Name: Guarded Secrets
City/Area: Northern Wilderness
Notes/Warnings: Rey is gross. That is all.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Intimidation: Showing your true nature
Intimidation: Fighting against the odds
Intimidation: Refuse to back away from a fight
Unarmed: Impaling a man with your 'legs'
Unarmed: Stabbing your legs in to their vitals
Unarmed: Using insect legs as weapons

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Same as on her CS, two hours of burning pain from her power usage
Renown: Maybe some? I doubt much though
Collaboration: Nope
word count: 87
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Korva
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

Wed Dec 19, 2018 4:02 pm

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Thread Name: All the Little Children
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Violence and blood?
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Korva:
Medicine: Checking for a pulse
Endurance: Dragging a body when exhausted
Endurance: Fighting on when injured
Tactics: Create plans on the fly
Tactics: Changing plans when necessary
Tactics: Working as a team
Leadership: Taking charge in turmoiled situations
Combat: Wrestling a thrall
Combat: Using a net as a weapon
Discipline: Keeping your cool in turmoiled situations
Medicine: Using a shirt as a bandage

Non skill:
Holidays: (Scalvoris) A Day of Remembrance
People: Kesindir: Biqaj
People: Kesindir: A child even if he’s tall
People: Kesindir: Passed out from blood loss
People: Kesindir: Good at following orders
Creatures: Thralls
Magic: Necromancy makes Thralls
Creatures: (Thralls) Someone makes them
85th of Vhalar (718): Someone let Thralls loose in Scalvoris

Kes:
Tactics: Following others orders
Tactics: Differing to those with more knowledge
Tactics: Waiting for a cue
Tactics: Working as a team
Endurance: Fight through the pain
Endurance: Running with injuries
Blades (Knife): Good for stabbing
Blades (Knife): Stabbing the neck kills
Discipline: Fighting through fear
Discipline: Keeping your cool even when scared

Non-skill Knowledge:
Creatures: Thralls

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping:

Korva:
Slices on arm, deep cut on foot

Kes:
Bite on arm, cuts and bruises

Renown: +1--for both for helping fight thralls?
Collaboration: Yes w/ Kes & Devin


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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

Thu Dec 20, 2018 4:03 am

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Thread Name:Turn Cloak
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Torture included
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Max:
Acting: Playing the Role of Traitor
Acting: Disguising Underlying Emotions During Performance
Acting: The Demeanor of a Mage Hunter
Acting: Don’t Break Character
Acting: Serving Appropriate Lines
Acting: Improvising Character Responses
Acting: Eyes, Expression, and Body Language Convey a Message
Torture: Removing a Mage’s Spark With An Artifact
Torture: Secure Your Victim Before Acting

Rey’na:
Endurance: Losing a soul
Endurance: Torture beyond the body
Endurance: Surviving against the odds
Endurance: Focus on your friends to survive the pain
Discipline: Relentless in your discipline
Discipline: Hold on to what keeps you sane
Discipline: Losing emotions doesn't mean losing hope
Discipline: Never back down

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Rey’na’s Spark removal and method of removal was pre-approved by Aegis.
Renown: Slight or small for both
Collaboration: yes


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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

Fri Dec 21, 2018 9:17 pm

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Thread Name:Everybody's Job
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Deals with death
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Logistics: Setting up in a new city.
Logistics: Identifying what's needed where.
Teaching: Considering all the factors in an individual's performance.
Woodworking: Demonstrating to a beginner.
Woodworking: Making shelves

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Yes, please.
Collaboration: No.

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

Fri Dec 21, 2018 11:05 pm

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Thread Name: That Lucky Bird
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Bit boring. Job thread.
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

Seafaring: Zig-Zagging to sail upriver
Searfaring: Dropping anchor partially.
Seafaring: Walking the gangplank.
Seafaring: Taking the wheel.
Leadership: Directing crewmembers to their tasks.
Fishing: Sometimes even fish get spooked out of their habits.

Loot: City job wages.
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: No



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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

Sat Dec 22, 2018 8:32 pm

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Thread Name: Dance for Drunken Dreamers
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Solo, memory. Just a bit of character exploration that I abandoned in a doc some time ago. I still enjoyed it a bit, so I wanted to wrap it up and submit it for review. Thanks.
Requested Rewards: 10xp
Knowledge:

Dancing: Biqaj “Swing Dancing”
Dancing: Box-Step
Dancing: The Fish Tail
Dancing: How to Twirl
Acrobatics: How to Swing around a Body
Acrobatics: How to Optimize Momentum

Loot: 10 gn?
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: 5 renown? Participating in a public performance.
Collaboration: No


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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

Sat Dec 22, 2018 10:07 pm

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Thread Name: Tying Up Loose Ends
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Fishing: Tying A Bedsheet Knot
Fishing: Checking a Net for Damages
Swimming: Doggie Paddle
Singing: Rhyming lyrics
Woodworking: Can't Carve Wet Wood
Endurance: Swimming in Cold Water

Collaboration: No


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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

Sun Dec 23, 2018 9:31 am

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Thread Name: Be Very Very Quiet, I'm Hunting Heretics!
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Lots of bloodshed and murda!
Requested Rewards:

Blades{Dao Sword}: Basic Swordsman Techniques
Blades{Dao Sword}: Easy for close quarter fighting
Thrown Weapons{Knives}: Throwing multiple guarantees a hit
Tactics: Knowing how to instill fear at a moment of calm
Acrobatics: Leaping from rooftop to rooftop
Acrobatics: Combat rolling to dodge a strike

Non-skill:
The Scarlet Belief: Rise of the Scarlet Beast
The Scarlet Belief: Perfect for Controlling the masses
The Scarlet Belief: The faithful are easily swayed when scared

Loot: The Scarlet Beast Alias/ 100gn for a job well done
Injuries/Overstepping: minor cuts and slashes on his arms and legs from a sword fight.
Renown: +5 or 10 for doing work for the Theocratum and becoming the "Scarlet Beast"
Collaboration: (No)
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

Tue Dec 25, 2018 7:46 pm

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Thread Name: Unstoppable
City/Area: Central Reservations, small unnamed village
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Endurance: Prolonged lifting
Endurance: Slow movements make lifting harder
Endurance: Constant workouts, no breaks
Endurance: Pushing through pain
Endurance: The burning pain of muscle strain
Strength: Lifting a log

Loot: None yet, weapon will be obtained once the PSF ticket for it is approved
Injuries/Overstepping: Sore for a day or two, not much though
Renown: 5 if any, probably none though
Collaboration: No
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