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Dosan
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Re: Domain Magic Review Requests 0.0.1

Sat Nov 24, 2018 5:49 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Let The Games Begin
City/Area: Quacia, The Gleam
Notes/Warnings: Violence, per usual in Quacia
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
{Dosan}

Exotics{Claw Grieves}: Are good for close quarter combat
Acrobatics: Balancing on balcony ledges
Acrobatics: Stretching before combat helps keep ya loose
Acrobatics{Spins & Twists}: Dancing with spins and twirls
Endurance: Dancing take a lot out of you
Resistance: Holding your liquor
Stealth: Melding in with those on the dance floor
Stealth: Using high places to avoid being seen
Stealth: Listening for Reactions to One's Own Noises
Stealth: Tracking Important People
Detection: Picking out a warcy over an arena of cheers
Detection: Feeling pressure on your body when numb
Detection: Picking a specific face out room of people


{Mads}

acrobatics -
following the movement of someone one is in physical contact with
timing one’s movements to a beat
catching food mid-fall

discipline -
needing orders only once
allowing oneself to defer to someone else in power
not letting one’s personal ideologies get in the way of professionalism

endurance -
following the orders of unbearable superiors
the appraising gazes of nobility
dancing
bumping into another dancer
eating rich food

stealth -
using magic to subtly interfere in a fight
blending into a crowd by chatting and making small-talk

Injuries/Overstepping: Dosan: Gash on his right arm
Renown:
- Dosan: Participating in Blood Games
- Mads: Having the nobility believe you are a foreign dignitary

Collaboration: (Yes)

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: (Yes) Abrogation {Mads}
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: Master{Mads}
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: No
 ! Message from: Pegasus
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word count: 289
㊮ "I'm nothing more than a snake. With cold skin and no emotions, as I slither around searching for prey with my tongue, swallowing down whoever & whatever looks tasty." ㊮
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Re: Domain Magic Review Requests 0.0.1

Sat Nov 24, 2018 5:52 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Robin in Love Pt. 2
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Robin
Discipline: Minding your tongue
Intelligence: Question Game
Intelligence: Heroes and Villains
Tactics: Watching an Opponent Fight
Tactics: Abrogation's muting
Acrobatics: Jumping Back
Acrobatics: Walking on Sand
Acrobatics: Using the Earth to Dodge

Mads

abrogation -
shackles have difficulty with air defiers
shields as platforms
backlash added to replicated armour is an effective omnidirectional counter-defense

acrobatics -
keeping one’s balance while walking through sand
maintaining one’s balance while being buffeted by a sandstorm

unarmed combat -
smashing a skull with the heel of one’s boot
shackled opponents are easier to attack
without magical assistance fists and feet are ineffective weapons against defiance

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: not applicable
Renown: if applicable
Collaboration: yes

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: (Yes) Abrogation {Mads}
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: Master{Mads}
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: No
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Mads
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Re: Domain Magic Review Requests 0.0.1

Sat Nov 24, 2018 8:02 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Trouble with Longpig
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Zipper

Attunement:
Frequency: Graciana Moreno
Note: Cannibalism

Dreamwalking
Branding: Allows one to Cross over to someone in Idalos
Crossing: An urgent Crossing into Emea to escape an unsavory situation
Crossing: Carries the entire body into Emea

Meditation
Finding the right state of mind to Cross into Emea



Mads

medicine -
you should bandage wounds
if one doesn’t know how to treat another, find one who does
not all poisons work on all people
some antidotes are harmless if ingested with no poison in the body
pushing fingers into a wound is not a good way of helping another heal

meditation -
focusing on several things at once

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: Zipper's injuries are from a previous thread
Renown: if applicable
Collaboration: yes
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word count: 144
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Re: Domain Magic Review Requests 0.0.1

Sun Nov 25, 2018 3:47 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Breakfast at Gracie's
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Zipper

Attunement:
Note: Meat


Mads

abrogation-
counter-corosion

intelligence-
the give and take of information

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: if applicable
Renown: if applicable
Collaboration: yes
word count: 44
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Re: Domain Magic Review Requests 0.0.1

Wed Nov 28, 2018 5:10 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Look What the Viper Dragged In!
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)

Becoming: The Three Sovereign Substances{Blood, Bone, Hair}
Becoming: Totems can take any form
Becoming: Pouring ether into the totem to make it work
Becoming: Totem help in becoming the creature
Meditation: Become one within an Item
Fieldcraft: Making a necklace out of animal remains

Loot:
- Blood Bat Totem
- 1 Shortsword{Doa}

Injuries/Overstepping: Mild headache for working his brain after a cuncussion
Renown: Nah
Collaboration: (No)

Magic EXP: (Yes) Becoming
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: Novice{25}
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: no
word count: 116
㊮ "I'm nothing more than a snake. With cold skin and no emotions, as I slither around searching for prey with my tongue, swallowing down whoever & whatever looks tasty." ㊮
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Re: Domain Magic Review Requests 0.0.1

Thu Dec 20, 2018 1:41 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Welcome Hone
City/Area: Central Reservation, travelling to Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Just note that Rey, after having her Abro spark removed, has lost a part of her soul - hence the hollowness that Violet saw :)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Hone: Initiating
Hone: Runes can drain you
Hone: A harsh initiation
Hone: Runes are drawn with hand motions
Hone: Different Runes with different effects
Endurance: Standing through the numbness

Loot: NEW MAGIC WOOOOO
Injuries/Overstepping: Nothing lasting
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Nope

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: Yes, Hone
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: Just initiated
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: Nope, just the initiation!
word count: 118
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Re: Domain Magic Review Requests 0.0.1

Sun Dec 23, 2018 5:01 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Heroes
City/Area: Central Wilderness, random village that will become important to his plot later but means nothing overall
Notes/Warnings: Might be a bit graphic. A little.
Requested Rewards:

Defiance: Raising the earth to trip opponents
Defiance: Softening the ground
Defiance: The call of the Elements
Defiance: Giving a command
Axes and Bludgeons: Planting an axe in a grounded target
Unarmed: Biting through bones

Loot: Maybe a bit of gold from the bandits or villagers. No more than 10 gold I'd imagine :P
Injuries/Overstepping: Small cut on his arm and minor overstepping (numbness)
Renown: Maybe five
Collaboration: Nope

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: Yes, Defiance
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: Novice
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: Yep
word count: 136
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Re: Domain Magic Review Requests 0.0.1

Tue Jan 01, 2019 5:40 pm

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