Fetch Friend
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Kira
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- Joined: Fri Sep 21, 2018 12:36 am
- Race: Human
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Fetch Friend
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Last edited by Kira on Wed Apr 24, 2019 11:58 pm, edited 2 times in total. word count: 1
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Mads
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- Joined: Sat Sep 08, 2018 3:37 pm
- Race: Human
- Profession: hex hawker
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- Wealth Tier: Tier 5
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Re: Fetch Friend
Kira
Knowledge.........
Stealth: Matching footsteps to the rhythm of ambient music
Meditation: Music can soothe the mind.
Discipline: Trying until it works
Necromancy: Fetches can be made from clay
Necromancy: Fetches can be made to look like a human
Necromancy: There is music to this magic
Meditation: Music can soothe the mind.
Discipline: Trying until it works
Necromancy: Fetches can be made from clay
Necromancy: Fetches can be made to look like a human
Necromancy: There is music to this magic
Loot....................
None
Consequence......
-5 SN
Renown..............
None
Experience...........
10 - Novice Necromancy
A couple errors with captilisation, otherwise good. Again, same notes with the names and "would", but the content itself was pretty playful. The connection between the magic and the music was also subtle and nicely done, more of her own opinion than an objective fact for her, which I enjoyed! Keep it up!
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