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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Climbing Around, Part 1
City/Area:Desnind, the forests
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Climbing: Using claws to get a purchase.
Climbing: Using a tail as a lifeline.
Climbing: Being startled off a branch.
Climbing: Using hand and foot-claws to secure a hold.
Climbing: Using a tail to help support body weight.
Climbing: Safe up in the trees.
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: No
Collaboration: no

Domain Magic Only - Aberration
Magic EXP: Nope
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: Novice
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: Nope
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: I don't know where, I'm confused about how, as well
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None

Requested Rewards:
Faith

Knowledge:
Intimidation: Short can be scary
Persuasion: Sometimes, not even marauding pygmy bandits are persuasive
Persuasion: Trying to persuade a stubborn man
Resistance: Staying lucid as a memory returns
Zuuda: Banish: Forces ghosts away
Zuuda: Banish: Can make ghosts attack if they are able to

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A

Padraig

Knowledge:
Discipline: Not showing your temper
Discipline: Working to not feel your emotions for someone else's protection
Discipline: Being a stubborn man who is not persuaded
Endurance: Standing against a buffeting by angry souls
Engineering: Rigging up a pulley system
Engineering: The usefulness of a spelunking kit
Engineering: Weights and balances
Shields: Using a shield to protect someone else
Shields: Keeping balance
Shields: Protecting from all angles.
Strength: Breaking wood with your hands

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewers Discretion
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Climbing Around, Part II
City/Area:Desnind, the forests
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Climbing: sleeping in trees takes careful planning.
Endurance: Holding your grip.
Endurance: Supporting your own weight.
Abrogation: Basic barrier
Abrogation: Spreading a barrier thin oer your skin.
Aberration: The bond between Harvester and mage allows basic communication.
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: No
Collaboration: no

Domain Magic Only - Abrogation
Magic EXP: Yes
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: Novice
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: Nope
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: [Egilrun] Flying Wonders
City/Area: Scalvoris, Egilrun
Notes/Warnings: Minor violence, nothing graphic. As a note, this thread does meet a number of the challenges for the event challenge.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Animal Husbandry; Scalvwing Steeds: get skittish if not fed
Animal Husbandry; Scalvwing Steeds: can fly for extended periods of time; their bones are less dense like a bird's are to make them light enough to allow them to fly
Animal Husbandry; Scalvwing Steeds: how to groom them properly
Animal Husbandry; Scalvwing Steeds: look like horses, but aren't quite the same
Animal Husbandry; Scalvwing Steeds: lifespan approximately 30 arcs
Animal Training; Scalvwing Steeds: they need to bond to their owner and really learn to trust them before they will let you fly with them


Non Skill Knowledges


Location: Egilrun
Egilrun: home of a ranch that raises and sells Scalvwing Steeds

Loot: the Scalvwing Steeds she bought
Injuries/Overstepping: general exhaustion and sore muscles from hard work and the fight
Renown: maybe small or slight (5-10) for saving an animal from being stolen, and attempting to fight off would be thieves
Collaboration: no

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: no
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Ice-hole Fishing
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Unfinished/abandoned social thread :(
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Fishing: Ice Fishing during the colder season.
Fishing: Tying multiple hooks to a line.
Fishing: Using a stash of old fish meat for bait.
Fishing: Flashy lures.
Fishing: Fishing is a slow game, but rewarding for the wait.
Fieldcraft: Keeping the warm while remaining stationary
Teaching: Sharing key principles of one's trade.
Teaching: Teaching through example
Endurance: Weathering the cold air.

Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Possibly slight for teaching a lad to fish.
Collaboration: Yes

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: (Yes/No) Please specify the type of domain magic xp.(ie: Defiance)
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Into the study
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Ehhh.
Requested Rewards:
Lockpicking: Doesn’t work on windows
Lockpicking: combination locks have virtually infinite combinations
Climbing: Hanging from a windowsill
Stealth: using eye-catching objects/people to draw attention away
Appraisal: considering the worth of documents
Appraisal: seizing up a steel vault

Knowledge:
Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: IDK
Collaboration: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Where One is Fed
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Non-linear, bad dream
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: Scything arms
Strength: trying to hold off a crowd
Strength: trying to break down a door
Cooking: bread and honey
Logistics: label jars correctly
Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: n/a
Collaboration: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Of Ivy and Men
City/Area: Scalvoris, Surrounding wilderness
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Woodcarving: Going with the grain
Woodcarving: Working slowly
Woodcarving: capturing movement in stillness
Woodcarving: Studying a live model
Woodcarving: Go with the grain, and you'll never need sandpaper
Woodcarving: Softer woods take shapes much easier

Loot: +1 Small carving of Ivy
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: n/a
Collaboration: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Learning to Play
City/Area: Scalvoris, Surrounding wilderness
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Abrogation: Commanding the spark
Abrogation: Learning to make smaller shields quickly.
Abrogation: Weaving the ether
Abrogation: Using barriers to stop water
Discipline: Concentrating over distraction
Discipline: Learning combat skills while playing

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: n/a
Collaboration: No

Magic: Abrogation
Magic EXP: Yes please
Requesting advancement: Nope, just practicing.
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Another Arc Older
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Bella
Discipline: Pick Your Battles
Endurance: Emotional Pain is Just as Hard as Physical
Endurance: Experiencing Unrequited Love
Endurance: Sometimes it Comes from Every Angle
Endurance: Quiet Resolve
Etiquette: Saying Thank You
Etiquette: Societal Norms of Celebrations
Medicine: Evolution Means Survival
Persuasion: Your Interlocutor Needs Emotions for it to Work
Rhetoric: Copious Apologies
Psychology: Accepting a Loveless Life
Psychology: Different Doesn’t Mean Wrong

Virikai: Will Never Love Me

Virikai
Discipline: Pick Your Battles
Etiquette: Societal Norms of Celebrations
Investigation: Emotions to Gauge an Approach
Investigation: Facial Expressions can be a Hint
Investigation: Sometimes it’s Better to Wait
Medicine: Evolution Means Survival
Research: Long-Term Experiments
Research: Using Unwitting Subjects
Seduction: Expensive Gifts
Seduction: Give in to Reptilian Reflexes
Seduction: Providing Emotional Support

Maebella: Loves Me

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Bella has a concussion
Renown: Perhaps?
Collaboration: Yep
Magic: Nope
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