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Lei'lira
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: [Warrick] Back Again
City/Area: Rynmere, Warrick
Notes/Warnings: This thread probably needs to be reviewed by a mod because it is being used to earn a medium renown reward (10% of price list prices), and for the rewards I am requesting (redeeming a key earned for bribing a guard here). It also covers one of the challenges from the challenge event.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledge

Animal Husbandry; Scalvwing Steeds: come in many different colors including deep purples, blues and green as well as pure black, pure white, and every shade in between
Animal Husbandry; Scalvwing Steeds: dietary needs; primarily hay and grass
Animal Husbandry; Scalvwing Steeds: need larger stalls to accommodate their wings
Animal Husbandry; Scalvwing Steeds: special care is needed when grooming their wings to ensure the feathers aren't damaged
Animal Husbandry; Scalvwing Steeds: have the same instincts as horses
Animal Training; Scalvwing Steeds: respond to treats just as a horse would

Loot: 21 journals (her mother's diaries from the time she was married to her father), a book containing some flute music (also written by her mother), a box made out of tightly woven grass, 19 necklaces made out of bone beads of varying types, and 1000 GN found in a chest belonging to her mother that the key I am redeeming opens - this was approved by Pegasus, and 2884 GN for the sale of her farm, and a number of items/land/etc.

Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: maybe slight (5) for doing a good deed in giving Rias some things in addition to what he was buying
Collaboration: no

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: no
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:

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Joseph Meier
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Remembering the Past
City/Area: Ne'Haer
Notes/Warnings: Memory.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Aberration: The initiation
Aberration: Not always consensual
Aberration: Strikes when you least expect it
Endurance: Thinking through pain
Endurance: Remembering self defense after a strike
Endurance: Ignoring agony



Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: No
Collaboration: no

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: no
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
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Joseph Meier
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Damn You to Hell
City/Area:Scalvoris, on the road
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Aberration: Hated
Aberration: Must be hidden
Aberration: Flaying
Abrogation: Self-defense at its finest
Abrogation: Protects not just the mage
Abrogation: The path to self-reliance



Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: No
Collaboration: no

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: no
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
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Joseph Meier
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Renown: 0
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Why Give you the Satisfaction?
City/Area:Scalvoris, on the road
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Aberration: Mage and Harvester have an unusual relationship.
Aberration: Peace is useless.
Aberration: Harvesters mourn their mages.
Deception: Let them think you're harmless, then destroy them.
Deception: Lying to stay alive.
Deception: Using a diminutive figure to your advantage.


Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: No
Collaboration: no

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: no
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
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Joseph Meier
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Strange Way of Hunting
City/Area:Scalvoris, on the road
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Aberration: Draining
Aberration: Must be strong enough to flay
Aberration: Flaying through physical contact
Abrogation: Shields must be maintained by the mage
Abrogation: Barrier
Abrogation: Barriers must be woven.

Loot: 1x Small feather pillow, 1x small horse carving
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: No
Collaboration: no

Domain Magic Only - Yes
Magic EXP: Yes, Abrogation and Aberration
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: Novice to both
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: Nope, just practicing.
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Joseph Meier
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Oh, Shut Up
City/Area:Scalvoris, on the road
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Abrogation: Muting
Abrogation: Muting must be maintained throughout the cast.
Abrogation: Muting will cloak the user from detection.
Aberration: Being muted feels uncomfortable.
Fieldcraft: Dressing salmon

Loot: 2x small salmon
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: No
Collaboration: no

Domain Magic Only - Yes
Magic EXP: Yes, Abrogation
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: Novice to both
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: Nope, just practicing.
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Joseph Meier
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Planning for the Future
City/Area:Scalvoris, on the road
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Writing: Basic literacy
Writing: How to write one's own name
Writing: The alphabet
Aberration: Draining animals gives no ether
Aberration: Ether requires a soul, which only mortals have
Aberration: Starting small

Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: No
Collaboration: no

Domain Magic Only - Yes
Magic EXP: Yes, Abberation
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: Novice
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: Nope, just practicing.
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Joseph Meier
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Renown: 0
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Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Gathering Materials
City/Area:Scalvoris, on the road
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Abrogation: Using muting as a precautionary measure
Abrogation: Avoiding detection
Abrogation: Carefully weaving ether together
Woodworking: Ironwood, extreme hardwood
Woodworking: Maple, soft wood
Woodworking: Yellow Dragonwood, medium wood

Loot: - 2x Capon, 3x small yellow dragonwood pieces, 3x small ironwood pieces, 3x small maple pieces. Suitable for turning or handcarving; cannot be built as they are only scrap-quality.
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: No
Collaboration: no

Domain Magic Only - Abrogation
Magic EXP: Yes
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: Novice
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: Nope
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Joseph Meier
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Make Feathers While the Sun Shines
City/Area:Scalvoris, on the road
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Abrogation: Strengthening the barrier
Abrogation: Patiently weaving a better shield
Aberration: Striking hard and fast with ether
Discipline: Waiting patiently
Discipline: Learning when to strike.
Stealth: Avoiding detection by staying stock still.

Loot: 2xCapon
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: No
Collaboration: no

Domain Magic Only - Abrogation and Aberration
Magic EXP: Yes
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: Novice
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: Nope
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Putting a Pin in it
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Investment thread. Soz.

Requested Rewards:
Faith

Knowledge:
Business Management: Running an exclusive boutique
Design: Fashion: Consider the line of a dress
Design: Fashion: Cover irregularities with a feature
Design: Fashion: Colours can match seasons
Design: Fashion: Fabric choice can change a design
Design: Fashion: Consider the practicalities of what you're designing

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Nope.
Magic EXP: N/A
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