OOC Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Virikai Talius
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Art of Probability
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: medical topic: seizures
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Medicine: Neurology: Neurological Assessment
Persuasion: Speak with Conviction
Persuasion: Try not to Scare the Patient
Rhetoric: Appropriate Bedside Manner
Rhetoric: Keeping a Patient Calm
Rhetoric: Rephrasing so People Understand

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: not applicable
Renown: Reviewer discretion
Collaboration: nope
word count: 59
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Shielding Memory 2
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

abrogation-
donning replicating armor while moving
perfection over precipitancy
creating ether copies of one’s self
replicated armor doesn’t defend against abberation’s spheres
sometimes fields are more trouble than they’re worth

acrobatics-
ducking under an aberrant’s sphere

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: a slight burn on his left shoulder, if treated with a simple healing salve will heal completely in 10 trials with no scarring - if not, will heal within 12 trials with slight scarring

Renown: none requested
Collaboration: no


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Magic EXP: abrogation
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: competent
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: not requested
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Shielding Memory 3
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: minor gore near the end
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

abrogation -
aberration sphere counter-spell
otherwise painful strikes can be avoided with replicative armor
replicative armor can shatter layer by layer
more ether, more coverage
don’t rush head first into a fight with an unknown magic

unarmed combat-
shielded headbutt

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: though he was able to escape the aberrant’s conjunction in time to avoid a gruesome death, he lagged a bit behind with his right foot; after a trial, several of the same flies that burst out of the aberrant will break through itching bumps on the top of his foot; these lesions will heal completely after 10 trials but will leave seven, small, permanent, erratically shaped circular scars

his left hand will be sore and bruised from where he struck the aberrant for the next five trials

Renown: if possible, renown would be appreciated here
Collaboration: no


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Magic EXP: abrogation
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: competent
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: not requested
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Just as You've Seen Me
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Violence. Suggestions of sexual assault.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Kasoria:
Blades (Gladius): Don't Waste Time Grinding Swords Together
Blades (Gladius): Using the Flat of The Blade
Intelligence: Recognizing and Recruiting Potential Talent
Philosophy: Sometimes, Death Really Is Preferable
Tactics: Hiding a Weapon Behind a Hat
Tactics: Taking Out The Biggest Threat First
Tactics: Assessing a Potential Asset, By Giving Them a Chance to Escape
Teaching: Don't Pull it, Unless You're Gonna Use It
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Block a Dagger Swipe By Grabbing The Wrist
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Taking Down a Target With a Chair to the Legs
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Knockout Punch to the Jaw

Non-Skill Knowledge:
PC Max/"The Girl": Feisty, Sly, and Still a Fucking Idiot
PC Max/"The Girl": Willing to Stay, Even When Given an Out
PC Max/"The Girl": Has Potential in the Underworld

Max:
Discipline: Staying Quiet Despite Gore
Intelligence: Observe Surroundings for Telling Clues
Intelligence: Eavesdropping on Your Targets
Intimidation: Don't Pull It Unless You're Going to Use it
Stealth: Using Shadows and Obstacles to Avoid Detection
Stealth: Don't Let the Door Slam
Stealth: Hiding Under the Bed
Stealth: Don't Make a Sound
Tactics: Move When Enemies are Distracted
Tactics: Find an Alternative Exit
Tactics: If You Don't Have a Weapon, Find One
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): Knockout Punch to the Jaw

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Kasoria: Some Sort of Assassin
Kasoria: A Reluctant Teacher
Kasoria: Has Connections to the Etzori Underground World

Loot: Max stole a dagger; Kasoria took brass knuckles
Injuries/Overstepping: Max likely has minor bruising.
Renown: Maybe
Collaboration: Yes
word count: 284
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Fayre Play
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: Naw
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Mount (Flying): Initiating a take-off
Mount (Flying): Soaring
Mount (Flying): Reducing rider size to increase speed
Mount (Flying): Urban flying
Mount (Flying): Utilizing altitude to gain advantage
Animal Husbandry: Petting an animal to calm it

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Kane Family: Born to cheat

Loot: +30 gn (winning a bet)
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: +5 (outflying a Skyrider Sergeant)
Collaboration: No

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Magic EXP: (Yes/No) Please specify the type of domain magic xp.(ie: Defiance)
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Stone Soup part 4
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Much food. Final part of a multi part Starter quest
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Baking: cinnamon-honey sauce
Baking: Fruit kebabs
Cooking: Melon boats
Cooking: Preparing a leafy salad
Cooking: Dicing vegetables
Etiquette: feed your scrubbers

Loot: +25 gn? (Odd job payment)
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Collaboration: No

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: (Yes/No) Please specify the type of domain magic xp.(ie: Defiance)
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Clam
City/Area: Rharne Lake Lovalus
Notes/Warnings: I believe Habani is abandoning her character, so I'm not sure what knowledge she wants if any. Please leave a note that if she decides to continue with the character to resubmit or contact the reviewer.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Fishing: Clams hide in the sand.
Fishing: Low tide allows for easier clamming.
Fishing: Clams reveal themselves with a bit of water spittle.
Fishing: Buckets full of water/saltwater can keep clams alive for longer.
Fishing: Rakes are useful to dig up clams that are deeply imbedded in sand.
Seafaring: Keeping a rowboat steady as someone clambers aboard.
Navigation: Watching for obstacles while rowing your boat prevents disaster.
Strength: Row row rowing a boat takes a bit of strength.
Logistics: Preparing for a fishing expedition.


Loot: Wages due. Purchases, the loss of a rake. Nothing else on review.
Injuries/Overstepping: Arms a bit sore from rowing a boat and working.
Renown: No
Collaboration: Yes

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: (Yes/No) Please specify the type of domain magic xp.(ie: Defiance)
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Shielding Memory 4
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

abbrogation:
creating a barrier while maintaining a field
maintaining a field for a prolonged period of time
replicated armor is effective at defending against mundane projectiles
creating a curved barrier
a field is more than protection; it is control over everything within

meditation:
accepting discomforts as part of one's self

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: not applicable
Renown: none requested
Collaboration: no


Domain Magic Only
Magic EXP: abrogation
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: competent
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: not requested
word count: 107
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Bear the Sadness
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned with the death/departure of Will, not feeling motivated to try and solo it out. Also, excuse my sudden shift from third to first person; I guess I still thought this was a Mute post
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: N/A
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes

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Magic EXP: (Yes/No) Please specify the type of domain magic xp.(ie: Defiance)
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Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
word count: 105
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Theo Nji'Ryn
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Go To Your Room, Young Lady!!
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: None

Requested Rewards:
Theo

Knowledge:
Acting: Warring siblings
Acting: A stormy silence in public
Acting: Rational but furious
Acting: The brother who knows his sister of old
Deception: Being aware of the slightly open door
Deception: Knowing when carrying bedding is an excuse for listening in
Deception: Seeming to be unmoved
Deception: Brotherly concern for an upset younger sister.
Strength: Hauling a wriggling woman up the stairs.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A


Zana

Knowledge:
Acting: Warring siblings
Acting: A stormy silence in public
Acting: Righteous fury
Acting: Crying on demand
Deception: Consider who might hear you and where they might be
Deception: Acting like you don't care who's listening
Deception: Not understanding something obvious
Deception: Mix truth in with lies
Deception: Pretending to be confused can be helpful.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes please
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A
word count: 187
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