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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Begin the Vendetta
City/Area: Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Focusing on Nothing but the Task at Hand
Intelligence: Choosing a Likely Source for Information
Intelligence: Soliciting Information Via Threat
Intelligence: Corroborating Information from Different Sources
Stealth: Surprising a Target
Stealth: Hiding Violence in an Alleyway

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Slight. Beating a dock hand
Collaboration: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Summer Fayre
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Some mature content and nudity. We are investigating why the dutiful wives of Scalvoris are committing adultery. The ending's a bit abrupt due to Hikaru's retirement.

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Devin

Knowledge:
Investigation: Two people get things done faster
Investigation: Sometimes it's best to simply ask for directions
Investigation: Inspecting your surroundings
Investigation: Putting together clues
Investigation: Observing your target
Stealth: Sneaking in through the back
Stealth: Hiding behind objects in your vicinity
Stealth: Crouching
Stealth: Making sure that nobody is watching you
Stealth: A noisy environment makes it easier for you to go unnoticed
Storytelling: How I got my blessing

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: N/A

Siorey

Knowledge:
Stealth: speak in whispers.
Investigation: Small details can be incredibly important.
Investigation: It's important not to get hung up on minor details
Investigation: Putting together clues
Investigation: Reading Body Language
Investigation: Check chests and armours for clues
Investigation: A good investigation starts with a plan
Investigation: Taking samples
Investigation: A theory without proof is just a theory

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: N/A
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Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Linguistics Memory 1
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: I'm not proud of what I've done.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

linguistics -
Common
Common greetings
Common pleasantries
Common farewells
Common agreement statements

discipline -
speaking with confidence in spite of a lack of it

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: not applicable
Renown: none requested
Collaboration: no
word count: 58
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: (Balls Aren't For Me)
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Kissings
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acting: Pretending to be in Love
Etiquette: Avoiding Awkward Conversation
House Venora: Rose Family Crest
Negotiation: An offer isn't always desirable
Negotiation: Trading Favours
Psychology: Men are less attracted to larger women
Seduction: Teasing
Seduction: There is warmth in embrace
Stealth: Sneak past while others are distracted.



Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: No Idea
Collaboration: (Yes/No) < Whut?
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Expensive Salmon & a Dungeon
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Tension & Nudity
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Unstable Ground Makes Jumping Difficult
Acrobatics: Dodging Objects
Climbing: Dangerous When High
Climbing: Rooftops Are Slippery
Discipline: Resisting Temptation
Running: Lighter is Faster
Psychology: Panic Attack
Psychology: Anger is easier than Sorrow
Seduction: The Power of Flattery
Seduction: The Allure of Sensation
Singing: Increases Morale
Singing: Multiple People Singing Badly Doesn't Make it Better
Torture: Making Loud Noises to get what you want
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Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Sore Back from landing in the guards arms? I dunno she's crazy. Whatever you want. It was a while back.
Renown: -15, stealing and annoying the guards.
Collaboration: Yes?
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Linguistics Memory 2
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Again. This isn't about pride. This is about shame.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

linguistics -
Common has rules
Common breaks most of its rules
studying via repetition of transcription
spelling a word out loud
languages can be obnoxiously arbitrary

discipline -
pushing through mistakes to complete a self-given assignment

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: not applicable
Renown: none requested
Collaboration: no
word count: 72
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Hello Again
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings:Mild Nudity
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Hidden Intention
Discipline: Not Giving In To Your Emotions
Discipline: Restraint Upon Acting on a Thought
Endurance: Battling Your Own Will
Immortal: Chrien
Seduction: Fashion is Attractive
Seduction: The Chase
Seduction: The Difference Between Sleeping With Someone and Sleeping with Someone You Love
Seduction: Vulnerability is an Advantage

Loot: Nooo
Injuries/Overstepping: Pride?
Renown: Nah
Collaboration: Yes
word count: 74
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Arriving in Viden
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings:none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Necromancy: Preserve can prevent corrosion
Meditation: Not letting the mind think about sickness
Meditation: Being so calm you fall to sleep
Meditation: Finding your happy place
Endurance: Battling sea sickness

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: no
Renown: Nah
Collaboration: no
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Relevant Vhalar Thread 2
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

stealth -
stepping quietly
covering up discovery with normalicy

detection -
reading simple emotions
searching for indications of lying
determining humanoid outlines in low-light

linguistics -
imitating a dialect

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: not applicable
Renown: none requested
Collaboration: no
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Makings of a smith
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: memory thread
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Smithing: Assembling a dagger
Smithing: Using fasteners
Smithing: Anvil’s tang
Smithing: Anvil’s horn
Discipline: Doing your best even if you’re clueless
Discipline: Trial and error

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: no
Renown: No
Collaboration: no
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