OOC Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Anya
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Devils of Stone
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: No?
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: None
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: No

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: (Yes/No) Please specify the type of domain magic xp.(ie: Defiance)
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
word count: 66
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Pray for the Weak
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: INone

Requested Rewards:
Faith

Knowledge:
Intelligence: Use previous information to build on
Intelligence: Knowledge is like diseases - symptoms and causes
Intelligence: Look for patterns in behaviour.
Negotiation: Make a valid point... but stop when they're agreeing
Negotiation: Facts trump opinions
Negotiation: Set clear guidelines.


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Nope.
Magic EXP: N/A
word count: 81
"Every evil has its good, and every ill an antidote."

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Cuauhtemoc
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: [Placeholder] A Withering Touch
City/Area: Desnind
Notes/Warnings: Former Ymiden placeholder
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Aberration: Learning to communicate with spirits
Aberration: Managing the bond
Aberration: Mages grow close to their companions
Aberration: Harvesters are predators
Aberration: Draining
Aberration: Draining things with a soul gives ether.
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: No

Domain Magic Only -
Magic EXP: (Yes) Aberration
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: Novice
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:No, just practicing
word count: 89
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Kasoria
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Futile Gestures
City/Area: Middlecleft
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language, Nauseating Violence

This is good ol' swordplay-n-skulduggery mostly, but I warn ye, it's gonna get NASTY after this. BAD nasty. You were warned...

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Dancing Away From a Skilled Opponent
Blades (Gladius): Thrust Horizontally into Torso to Avoid Ribs
Discipline: Don't Waste Time or Words on The Dead
Tactics: Pay Attention to Your Peripheral Vision
Tactics: Positioning a Target So Someone Else Can Get Behind Him
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Nerve Strike to Forearm Can Kill An Enemy's Grip


Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Jonas: Short-Lived Traitor, Useful Meatshield
NPC Miyam: Honorable Blackjack, Family Man, Fine Swordsman... Poor Tactician
NPC Cobbles: Unwisely Brought a Crossbow to a Swordfight


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No(t yet!)
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Kasoria on Fri Oct 05, 2018 5:35 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 143

Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Eric Karlson
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: [Scalvoris Mountains] A Shepherd's Story Part 1: Morning Routine
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope just a simple morning routine
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cooking: Making Oatmeal
Endurance: Using a staff to help conserve energy
Meditation: Close your eyes
Attunement: Some notes suggest movements
Attunement: The sound of Contentment
Attunement: Notes are subjective and many express a similar meaning however vastly different.
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: None
word count: 78
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Raven Talius
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Classical Keys
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Just study
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cryptography: Substitution Ciphers
Cryptography: Monoalphabetic Cipher
Cryptography: Polyalphabetic Substitution Cipher
Cryptography: Transposition Cipher
Cryptography: Columnar Cipher
Research: Analysis

Collaboration: No - Solo
Last edited by Raven Talius on Fri Oct 05, 2018 9:14 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 37
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"Cold, Emotionless and a little bit Dark"
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Kyreen
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Icing on the Cake
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Green words are just markers for the challenges

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Baking: Simple Glace Icing
Baking: How to flavour icing
Baking: Icing small cakes
Baking: Icing thickness changes how it flows
Research: trying out different methods
Baking: Taste testing

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Kyreen on Sat Oct 06, 2018 12:57 pm, edited 2 times in total. word count: 66
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Kasoria
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Dying of The Light
City/Area: Middlecleft
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language, Extreme Violence, Harm to Children

This is THE darkest thing that I've written on here (so far). You have been warned.

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Sliding Forwards on Knees
Acrobatics: Backwards Roll
Blades (Gladius): Feint
Discipline: Learning From the Mistakes of Others
Tactics: Cutting Off Likely Escape Routes
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Targeting an Enemy's Wounds for Maximum Pain


Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Carrow: Over-Confident and Mono-Handed Thanks to That
NPC Miyam: The Strength of a Man Fighting For Love


Loot: No
Injuries: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Kasoria on Sat Oct 06, 2018 9:47 am, edited 2 times in total. word count: 111

Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: She's a Beauty
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Becoming: Comparing the senses of various forms
Intelligence - Andaris Contact: Charlie the Cat
Intelligence - Andaris Contact: Sprinkles the Cat
Intelligence: Give contacts what they want to earn their trust
Running: Cats leap mid stride more than standard running
Tactics: Using two separate distractions to cover an attack
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: maybe a small amount, in the cat community, for a successful burglary
Collaboration: (No)

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: (No) Please specify the type of domain magic xp.(ie: Defiance)
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
word count: 125
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Yavanna
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: You Mad? Wanna Fight About It?!
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: The F-bomb is prevalent
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Unarmed Combat: How to dodge a moving target
Combat: Unarmed: Groin shots work on girls too
Combat: Unarmed: Standing ones ground
Unarmed Combat: Breaking out of an upper body grab
Unarmed Combat: Struggling to break an opponents hold
Intimidation: Letting Them Know That You Mean Business

Injuries/Overstepping: Lots of bruises and damage on her back
Renown:
10 - Facing off against 2 or more opponents
10- Challenging a mob to fight her

Collaboration: (No)
word count: 97
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