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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Becoming a Mercenary
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Weaving in-between people
Running: Running through the city
Blades (Katana): Well made blades are not overly heavy
Discipline: Not taking a reward unless it’s earned

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Collaboration: No
word count: 55
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Acrobatics Memory 1
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

acrobatics-
tuck and roll
ducking under a roundhouse punch
wriggling free from a hold
stretching to reach your toes
stretching helps with muscle soreness

unarmed combat -
keep your distance to avoid getting punched

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: light to mild bruising along the sides of his body, shoulders, back and shins that lasts about 20 trials, becoming less painful as the trials progress.
Renown: none requested
Collaboration: no
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Devin Learns To Use a Sword
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: -
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Blades (Shortsword): How to hold your sword correctly
Blades (Shortsword): Basic stance
Blades (Shortsword): Strike
Blades (Shortsword): Thrust
Blades (Shortsword): Slice
Strength: Pulling a sword from the ground

Loot: no
Injuries/Overstepping: no
Renown: Not sure. Do I get renown for losing a fight?
Collaboration: no
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Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: A Shipment to Hijack
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Bit of the usual for Patrick. Violence. Explosions. The whole fun shabang.
Requested Rewards: Get ready, it's a big'un!

Patrick
  • Leadership: Doing What's Necessary Even If You Dislike It
  • Acrobatics: Vaulting Onto Ships With A Grappling Hook
  • Stealth: Sneaking Aboard A Ship
  • Stealth: Softer Landings Make Lesser Noise
  • Endurance: Wrestled Down From Above
  • Leadership: Making Tough Calls
  • Acting: Staging A Hostage Situation
  • Intimidation: Application of Bluffs to Tense Situations
  • Acrobatics: Diving Off A Ship Into Water
  • Swimming: Treading Cold Water
Non Skill
  • Location: Fordwell
  • Miscellaneous: A Shipment For Raimeus
  • Miscellaneous: Blackpowder
  • Ellen'wyn: Half-Bred Avriel Ginger
  • Ellen'wyn: Ginger Huntress
  • Ellen'wyn: Swooped In On You... Literally.
  • Ellen'wyn: Has A Wild Temper
  • Niv: Knows Ellen Apparently
  • Niv: Saved You Unintentionally
  • Expedition: New Members To The Team
  • Operation: "Hijack Shipment" A Success... Sort Of!
  • Miscellaneous: Blackpowder Ignites and Even Explodes

Ellen'wyn
Skill
  • Acrobatics: Vaulting over a ship's rail
  • Acrobatics: Steep aerial dive
  • Flying: Spiraling slowly
  • Flying: Carrying a small passenger
  • Flying: A running start for takeoff
  • Unarmed (Brawling): Tackling someone from above
  • Intimidation: Cursing loudly
  • Intimidation: Holding someone at knife point
  • Field Craft: Layers protect you from the cold
Non Skill
  • Location: Fordwell
  • Niv: A friend of Patrick’s
  • Patrick: Leading an expedition to Orimar
  • Patrick: Good at being distracting
  • Patrick: Enemy of Raimeus
  • Oberan: Expedition member
  • Finn: Expedition member
  • Crowley: Patrick’s right hand man

Oberan
Skill
  • Acrobatics: Swinging from a rope
  • Acrobatics: Jumping from a swinging rope
  • Acrobatics: Kill downward momentum of a fall with your knees
  • Stealth: Landing quietly
  • Stealth: Use commotion as a distraction
  • Stealth: Dark clothing to hide in dark places
  • Stealth: Harder with more people
  • Stealth sneaking up on guards
  • Running up a set of stairs
Non Skill
  • Patrick: Bad at stealth
  • Finn: Not a bad sneak, actually
  • Thrill Control: Can be used to knock people out
  • Thrill Control: Boosts physical abilities
  • Thrill Control: keeps seasickness at bay

Finn
Skill
  • Acrobatics: swinging onto a ship along a rope.
  • Stealth: sneaking into the hull of a ship.
  • Defiance: taming the fires started by a special breed of unintelligent mortalborn.
  • Swimming: diving overboard.
  • Swimming: swimming a long distance to shore.
  • Endurance: outlasting the cold water.
Loot: Nothing necessary for this.

Injuries/Overstepping: Fairly obvious things I'm assuming.

Renown: Well people survived so perhaps 10 or 15 for everyone, you know for blowing up an entire ship? Also Gangui's faction "The Sons of Justice" should be credited the 15 as well please.

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Lost City
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Another crucial plot point finally wrapped up, the finale due to find it's way here sooner or later. :D
Requested Rewards:

Patrick
  • Research: Delving Into Lost Ruins
  • Logic: Themes With Puzzles and Riddles
  • Research: Paying Mind To Symbols
  • Strength: Holding Open A Stone Door
  • Investigation: Searching For Clues In Riddles and Puzzles
  • Investigation: Connecting Signs and Symbols
  • Leadership: Instructing Others When Helping
  • Leadership: Working With A Team To Get Results
  • Tactics: Surrendering When It's The Only Option
  • Logic: Survival Above All Else
Non Skill
  • The Orimatsu: Heavily Relied On Symbols
  • The Orimatsu: The Owl, The Bear, The Dragon Symbols
  • The Orimatsu: Created An Elaborate Test For Entry
  • The Orimatsu: Worshipped More Than Just Emea?
  • Raimeus: Caught Up With The Expedition
  • Raimeus: Opened The Gate
  • Kleo: Knows More About The Orimatsu Than Usual
  • Kleo: Bought Finn's Act
  • Expedition: Surrendered to Raimeus With Terms
  • Location: The Lost City of Orimar

Ellen'wyn
Skill
  • Detection: An unknown presence
  • Detection: Sometimes it's a feeling
  • Investigation: Use all your senses
  • Intelligence: An educated guess
  • Field Craft: Have more than one light source
  • Strength: Instances of brute force
  • Acrobatics: A good handhold can save poor footing
  • Tactics: A choke point can trap you
  • Tactics: Don’t turn your back on the enemy
Non Skill
  • Location: The Lost City of Orimar
  • Finn: Possibly a backstabber
  • Raimeus: Caught up with the expedition
  • Raimeus: Opened the gate to Orimar

Oberan
Skill
  • Acrobatics: sliding underneath a door
  • Appraisal: considering the power of emean entities
  • Appraisal: gauging the mindset of your companions
  • Appraisal: studying a sealed door
  • Deception: try to goad someone into making a promise
  • Deception: crossing your fingers behind your back to make a promise non-binding
  • Deception: pretending to be calm and collected
  • Linguistics: Exposure To Orimatsun
  • Strength: propping up a door
  • Strength: tired arms don’t provide much power
Non Skill
  • God Key: was nullified? IMPOSSIBLE!
  • The Guardian of Orimar (Entity): It Exists!
  • The Guardian of Orimar (Entity): Supremely Powerful
  • The Guardian of Orimar (Entity): Possibly Emean
  • Language: Orimatsun Dialect From The Guardian
  • Location: The Lost City of Orimar

Finn
Skill
Opted for no lore requests

Loot: Nothing necessary for this.

Injuries/Overstepping: No known injuries.

Renown: A pretty big event seeing as how a ruin was actually revealed, so 15 for everyone if that sounds fair enough. (Or more if you deem it worth more) Also the "Sons of Justice" will accumulate the renown points for Gangui's NPC participation.

Collaboration: Yes
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Acrobatics Memory 2
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

acrobatics-
balancing on a ledge
crouching to center one's weight
dodging via small shifts to the left and right
focusing on a target in order to anticipate how to avoid it
keep still to better maintain balnace on a shifting surface

meditation-
the feeling of panic

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: not applicable
Renown: none requested
Collaboration: no
word count: 75
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Music of the Night
City/Area:Emea
Notes/Warnings: None
Sephira
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
N/A Dream
Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: Yes

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable N/A
Magic EXP: (Yes/No) Please specify the type of domain magic xp.(ie: Defiance)
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
Noth
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
N/A Dream
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: None
Collaboration:Yes

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable N/A
Magic EXP: (Yes/No) Please specify the type of domain magic xp.(ie: Defiance)
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: The False Bounty
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Cashing in an old thread
Requested Rewards:
Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: not applicable
Renown: none requested
Collaboration: Yes
word count: 31
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: The First Victim
City/Area: The sea between Rynmere and Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Mild hunting related violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Trapmaking - Using existing structures to make unexpected traps
Trapmaking - Creating traps to capture instead of kill
Becoming - House cat form
Becoming - Blending Aye-aye mouse and gasping skitterer together
Hunting - House cat kill
Unarmed Combat (Inner Beast) - Sacrificing a limb for a better position
Loot: x4 House Cat totems
Injuries/Overstepping: A new totemic relic (See Qit'ria's mutations)
Renown: no
Collaboration: (No)

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: (Yes, Becoming) Please specify the type of domain magic xp.(ie: Defiance)
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: Expert. She used blending, an expert level technique.
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Our Particular Talent
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:

Anya

Knowledge (Skill):
  • Defiance: Calling the Elements
  • Defiance: Using Wind to Move Faster
  • Defiance: The Relationship Between a Mage and Elements
  • Defiance: Using Air to Sense Movement
  • Defiance: Stone Maintains its Shape at Novice
  • Investigation: Identifying the Source of Commotion
  • Linguistics: Finding a Common Language
  • Unarmed Combat: Aggressive Attacks Break Defenses
  • Unarmed Combat: Attacking in Rage Wears You Out
Knowledge (Nonskill):
  • Morgana Dare: Burned Your House Down
  • Morgana Dare: Aberrant
  • Quiet: Defier
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Grader's Discretion
Renown: +10 for participating in a battle with Morgana Dare, or Grader's discretion
Collaboration: Yes

Quiet

Knowledge (Skill):
  • Polearm (Quarterstaff): Bonk
  • Polearm (Quarterstaff): Two-Handed Overhead Strike
  • Polearm (Quarterstaff): Use the Wind
  • Polearm (Quarterstaff): Default to Defensive Position
  • Polearm (Quarterstaff): Don't Rely on Blind Jabs
  • Meditation: Refocus Your Senses
  • Acrobatics: Two-Step Wall Climb
  • Defiance: Climb Higher
  • Defiance: Not Always Effective
  • Defiance: Small, Concentrated Blast
Knowledge (Nonskill):
  • Anya: Bearer of The Gift
  • City: Ne'haer
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Scratches on cheek, light overstepping
Renown: +10 for participating in a battle with Morgana Dare, or Grader's discretion
Collaboration: Yes

Domain Magic Only
Magic EXP: Yes
Anya: Defiance (Novice)
Quiet: Defiance (Competent)
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: Quiet: No, Anya: No
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