OOC Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Virikai Talius
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Patching Things Up
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Bella
Medicine: Signs and Symptoms of Head Injury
Medicine: Treatment for Head Injury
Menochoros: Learning to Defend Myself
Menochoros: Martial Art
Negotiation: Standing Your Ground
Rhetoric: Honesty is Policy
Rhetoric: Judging Emotions Based on Another’s Words
Rhetoric: Responding Sarcastic Quips

Virikai: Loves Me?

Virikai
Intimidation: Idle Threats
Investigation: Asking Questions from Patients
Investigation: Knowing When Someone is Being Honest
Investigation: Requires Keen Observation
Investigation: Using All the Senses
Leadership: Delegating Tasks
Leadership: Managing a Medical Ward
Medicine: Signs and Symptoms of Head Injury
Medicine: Treatment for Head Injury

Bella: Emotional Epiphany

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Bella has a concussion
Renown: Perhaps?
Collaboration: Yep
Magic: Nope
 ! Message from: Banshee
Claimed by Kasoria
word count: 126
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Aneka Tristal
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Swinging Swords
City/Area: Rharne, Training Grounds
Notes/Warnings: Sparring, some minor amounts of blood
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Longsword: Staying on the offensive is not a good idea
  • Tactics: Don't let your guard down
  • Endurance: Never giving up, never quitting
  • Endurance: Digging deep for some energy.
  • Longsword: Quick attacks followed by another attack is effective.
  • Endurance: Coping with a hangover
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Maybe a few bruises, but nothing permanent I think.
Renown: I'm not sure, but does training count for renown?
Collaboration: No

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: (Yes/No) Please specify the type of domain magic xp.(ie: Defiance)
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Decisive Strike
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: INone

Requested Rewards:
Faith

Knowledge:
Intelligence: Research people under as many names as you have
Negotiation: Shared experiences set common ground in negotiation
Negotiation: Sometimes, it's best just to assume they said yes
Politics: Building alliances requires some common ground
Politics: Ensure that you get your point across, but there's no need to shout.


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Nope.
Magic EXP: N/A
 ! Message from: Banshee
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word count: 95
"Every evil has its good, and every ill an antidote."

~ Rharne HQ
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Slow Knife
City/Area: Slags Deep, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Blades (Gladius): Hamstringing Your Enemy
Blades (Gladius): Incapacitating Your Enemy
Deception: Confusing with Voice
Deception: Combining Deception Tactics for Better Results
Deception: Attack and Disappear
Deception: Confusing with Dialogue
Stealth: Move After Distraction
Tactics: Leading a Courier to Your Enemy

Non-Skill:
Root of Dissent: Uncovering a Grudge
Windstorm: Rivaling the Wind Summoned By Another

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Small. Murdering a well-established inmate with a fierce reputation.
Collaboration: No.

This is a three part series for Aegis to review please. (3/3)
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Walls Have Eye
City/Area: The Lair, Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:

Stealth: Staying out of the line of sight
Stealth: Dark corners are your friend
Stealth: Treading lighting on rooftops
Stealth: Using a crowd to hide in plain sight
Detection: Finding your Target in a Crowd
Investigation: Eavesdropping helps gather intel

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Headache from bustling streets
Renown: Up to reviewer
Collaboration: (No)
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㊮ "I'm nothing more than a snake. With cold skin and no emotions, as I slither around searching for prey with my tongue, swallowing down whoever & whatever looks tasty." ㊮
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Joseph Meier
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: [Job Thread] The Dahlia's Forecastle
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Job Thread
Requested Rewards:

Woodcarving: using angles to please the eye
Woodcarving: Walnut
Woodcarving: imperfection is key
Woodcarving: waterproofing with beeswax
Woodcarving: Camellia oil preserves without changing color
Business Management: Building a Client Base


Loot: +1 knife-sharpening block
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown:
Collaboration: (No)
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Kirei Qe'Azour
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Researching New Dishes
City/Area: Rynmere, Andaris
Notes/Warnings: This thread covers a number of the challenges for the challenge event.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Cooking: Recipe: Pork Schnitzel
Research: is something that is done in order to increase knowledge
Research: can be as complex as analyzing data and testing complicated theories, or as simple as looking something up in a book
Research: is something that scholars do
Research: is required work for students at the university
Research: can strain the eyes if you do it for too long without taking breaks

Non Skill Knowledges

Common: "journal"
Common: alphabet
Common: numbers

Language: Ith'ession
Ith'ession: spoken and written in Etzos
Ith'ession: originated in Etzos
Ith'ession: alphabet
Ith'ession: numbers
Ith'ession: "journal"

Language: Leni
Leni: language of the Ellune
Leni: spoken and written in Treidheart
Leni: originated in Treidheart
Leni: alphabet
Leni: numbers
Leni: "journal"

Lorien: alphabet
Lorien: numbers
Lorien: "journal"

Language: Nysin
Nysin: spoken and written in Western Idalos
Nysin: originated in Western Idalos
Nysin: a common language
Nysin: alphabet
Nysin: numbers
Nysin: "journal"

Rakahi: the primary language spoken in Ne'haer
Rakahi: alphabet
Rakahi: numbers
Rakahi: "journal"

Language: Vorkelien
Vorkelien: spoken and written in the Hotlands
Vorkelien: originated in the Hotlands
Vorkelien: an uncommon language
Vorkelien: alphabet
Vorkelien: numbers
Vorkelien: "journal"

Xanthea: primary language spoken in Desnind
Xanthea: language of the Sev'ryn

Kirei: Elyari's opinion is very important to her

NPC: Aiden
Aiden: Kirei's friend

NPC: Lissa
Lissa: works at Elyari's Hope

Senryo: is fluent in Common, Haltunga, Nysin, Rakahi, and Xanthea, and is conversational in Ith'ession, Leni, Lorien, and Vorkelien.

NPC: Serani
Serani: works at Elyari's Hope

Loot: The travel fare from Rynmere to Scalvoris is being paid by Elyari (a city NPC) since it is a work expense; this has been approved by Pegasus since Rynmere is closed for Vhalar and all PCs had to leave.
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: maybe slight for pleasing her mentor, and working on building her reputation as an apprentice chef
Collaboration: no

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: no
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Sprucing up the Library, Part 1
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Job Thread
Requested Rewards:

Woodcarving: Spruce
Woodcarving: Quick and dirty
Design: Minimalism at its finest.
Business Management: Word of Mouth
Business Management: Discounts in exchange for spreading word
Business Management: Using tokens


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown:
Collaboration: (No)
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Joseph Meier
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Sprucing up the Library, Part II
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Job Thread
Requested Rewards:

Woodcarving: Copying a design
Woodcarving: keeping your tools sharp
Woodcarving: Making a matching set
Design: examining a subject
Design: Age of a design
Design: Filing away ideas for later.



Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: Maybe some nice new table carvings are noticed by the patrons? Who knows.
Collaboration: (No)
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Kasoria
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: No Good Deed
City/Area: Middlecleft
Notes/Warnings: Mature Language, Mild Violence

First of a three parter, an "origins of a hero" idea I've had in my head for months now... only Kas is on the opposite side of the telling

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Detection: Noticing When Someone Has a Personal Connection to Someone They're Speaking Of
Discipline: No Speeches, No Theatrics, Just Do The Job
Discipline: Kill Often Enough, For Long Enough, And Fear Becomes a Thing Harder to Evoke
Intelligence: Identifying a Likely Escape Route
Intelligence: Finding the Watering Hole for Local Muscle
Tactics: Avoiding Where Your Enemy is Strongest


Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Vorund: Father to a "Murdered" Son
NPC Vorund: Has Contacts in Cities Across the Continent, But Not Over the Sea
NPC Vorund: Demands Wholesale Slaughter for His Dead Son
NPCs Carrow, Venger, Cobbles, Merry: No Contract Too Despicable
NPC Carrow: Leader of the Pack
NPC Merry: Sickening Even By The Pack's Standards
Middlecleft: Not Nearly as Busy as Foster's Landing


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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