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Theo Nji'Ryn
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Thu Oct 11, 2018 4:02 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Brother's Love
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: They're awful people?

Requested Rewards:
Theo

Knowledge:
Deception: Working with a partner to maintain balance
Deception: Making it seem like you don't want to be heard
Deception: A rogue
Deception: Deep undercover requires attention to detail
Etiquette: Greeting nobility
Etiquette: Videnese customs
Etiquette: Appropriate distance between two people
Etiquette: Appear interested in what the other person has to say
Etiquette: Boundaries of "proper"

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown:Yes please
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: N/A

Zana

Knowledge:
Deception: First impressions set the scene
Deception: Making it seem like you don't want to be heard
Deception: An air of innocence is hard to maintain
Deception: Wring your hands slightly to appear anxious
Etiquette: Greeting nobility
Etiquette: Videnese customs
Etiquette: Proper behaviour for a young lady
Etiquette: Appear interested in what the other person has to say
Etiquette: Informality can be key.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes please
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: N/A
word count: 192
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Yanahalqah
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Thu Oct 11, 2018 8:27 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Oppa Gangui Style
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Gangui's rambling.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Gangui

Rhetoric: Anti-Noth
Rhetoric: Wealth
Rhetoric: Patriotism
Rhetoric: Fear
Rhetoric: Anti-Angyryl
Discipline: Preaching Patience
Endurance: Working drunk
Seduction: Talking to military women
Blades(Dirk): Hanging wanted posters
Rayna: Sexy One-Eyed Beauty
Rayna: Not a real patriot.... yet
Rayna: Claims to be hunting Noth



Yana:

Deception: Pretending to support Gangui’s cause
Etiquette: how to address a commander
Politics: greasing the wheels by using the correct title
Politics: discussing important matters over ale
Politics: The clash between Noth and the Turkeys
Politics: the influence of crime on Etzos
Politics: agreeing with someone doesn’t always make them like you
Politics: removing an opposing party from the playing field
Leadership: say please
Poisons: Pig Squeal
Poisons: poisoning the ale
Gangui: Turkey Commander
Gangui: Thorn in Noth's side
Gangui: Spouts non-stop nonsense


Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Gangui might have some... trouble the next few days hehehehe.
Renown: Most likely
Collaboration: Yes
word count: 171
"Speaking" - Thinking - "Others speaking"
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Profession: Ambassador of his People
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:41 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Bloodied Water
City/Area: Outside Desnind
Notes/Warnings: Blood, animal cruelty
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Polearm (Quarterstaff): At Your Side
  • Polearm (Quarterstaff): Block and Defend
  • Polearm (Quarterstaff): Weakness to Melee
  • Polearm (Quarterstaff): Push Attacks Away
  • Polearm (Quarterstaff): Use to Hook
  • Acrobatics: Fleeing Flip
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Overstepping likely not, but a thigh gash that will take 20 trials to heal, unless immediate medical attention is paid.
Renown: Likely none. +5 for battling an Uwär Bysez if you're feeling kind.
Collaboration: No

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: Yes - Defiance
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: Competent
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: Nope
word count: 120
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Fri Oct 12, 2018 9:20 am

Closing this up!

We are implementing a new system, as per player suggestion, and moving to a system of two review queues. The "non magic" review queue is here and the review queue for those threads including Domain Magic requests is here

Reviewers please complete the reviews for this thread first

Players please post in the new thread(s) linked above.
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