OOC Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Tue Oct 09, 2018 11:16 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Culling the Storm
City/Area: Rharne, Lightning Cathedral
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:

Deception: Joining a faction to supply oneself with a cover
Deception: Using good acts to deceive the public
Deception: Telling someone what they want to hear
Deception: Having ulterior motives
Deception: Using a group as a means to an end
Socialization: Always look someone in the eyes

Non-skill:
Faction: Thunder Priestesses
Thunder Priestesses: The Oath
Immortal: Ilaren

Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: +2 Joining the Thunder Priestesses
Collaboration: (No)
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Tue Oct 09, 2018 11:55 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Nothanks to mining
City/Area: Scalvoris town
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:

Mining: Pickaxe grip
Mining: Mining form
Strength: Wielding a heavy pickaxe
Meditation: Trying to ignore fatigue
Meditation: Throbbing muscles make it hard to concentrate
Maerzek: Ore purification lets me remove impurities from metals

Non-skill:
Aeva: Must have some connection to minerals

Injuries/Overstepping: soreness
Renown: became known as a girl who could chew rocks
Collaboration: (No)
word count: 73
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Wed Oct 10, 2018 1:21 am

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Thread Name: Just One More Drink
City/Area: The Swallowing Rooster, Winemoore Alley, Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Mild violence and sexual assault. Nothing graphic.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Business Management: Getting paid first
Socialization: Always smile at customers who might tip
Socialization: Showing interest in topics talked about near you
Socialization: Giving compliments
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): Hit 'em with whatever is in your hands!
Strength: Carrying a tray full of beers in each hand
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Small, For working in a bar and making a scene
Collaboration: (/No)

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: (No) Please specify the type of domain magic xp.(ie: Defiance)
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
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word count: 133
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Wed Oct 10, 2018 6:29 am

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Thread Name: Dream Thread 1
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: I didn't like how this solo turned out and where it was headed. Alternate outcome dream, instead.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: none

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: not applicable
Renown: none requested
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Wed Oct 10, 2018 9:45 am

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Thread Name: Dog SPark
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: imma seal
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: none

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: not applicable
Renown: none requested
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Wed Oct 10, 2018 3:14 pm

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Thread Name: Relevant Vhalar Thread 4
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

medicine -
wrapping a cloth bandage

intelligence -
asking around for information
mulling over facts
friendly faces make for good contacts

discipline -
saying what is best for one's wellbeing but not what is on one's mind

detection -
recognizing familial resemblance

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: not applicable
Renown: none requested
Collaboration: no
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Wed Oct 10, 2018 4:40 pm

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Thread Name: Windchimes
City/Area: Southern Swamps
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Defiance: Air as an Ally
  • Defiance: Listen to the Windchimes
  • Defiance: The Apparition Thanks You
  • Meditation: Remain Still
  • Meditation: Ignoring Distractions
  • Meditation: Autumnal Ambience
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Light overstepping for subconsciously forming an apparition
Renown: Likely not
Collaboration: Nope

Domain Magic Only
Magic EXP: Yes - Defiance
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: Competent
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: Nah
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Thu Oct 11, 2018 1:11 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Whisper: Sibling Rivalry
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Business Management: Leveraging Information
Business Management: Seeking Alternative Opportunity

Intelligence: Masking your Identity with a Doll
Intelligence: Learn Enough to Find the Mark
Intelligence: Probe for Answers

NPC: Vadrassar: Shadeblade Mage
NPC: Mal Shelkor, Etzori Businessman and possible murderer
Location: The Whisper Business
Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: ?
Collaboration: No

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: No
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
word count: 95
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Thu Oct 11, 2018 4:03 am

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Thread Name: Summer Fayre
City/Area: Rynmere, Andaris
Notes/Warnings: This thread covers several challenges for the challenge event.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Baking: don't over mix the cookie batter because it will make your cookies dense
Baking: placing cookies too close together on the cookie sheet will cause them to merge together into a "cookie cake" as the dough spreads when they bake
Baking: scraping the bowl is important because it helps you to mix the ingredients evenly; failure to do so causes pockets of flour and pockets of egg, sugar, and butter that will cause some cookies to flatten out like pancakes and others to look like biscuits
Baking: if you don't cream your butter and sugar long enough, your cookies will be flat instead of be light and fluffy; at least 3-5 bits of beating is needed, it's the same with the eggs
Cooking: taste everything as you go
Unarmed Combat; Brawling: a good blow to the groin will drop a man if it hits, and doesn't require much skill if the target is distracted


Non Skill Knowledges

Andiron: is a good person

Serin: buys some of the herbs she can't grow herself at the Herbal Shop in Midtown

Location: Herbal Shop
Herbal Shop: located in Midtown
Herbal Shop: run by Hannah Yavich
Herbal Shop: Hannah buys and sells all kinds of herbs, plants, seeds, flowers, and roots from all over Idalos, and has done so for as long as Andaris has existed
Herbal Shop: Hannah fills all orders she gets within ten trials


Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: possibly some bruises from the fight, but nothing too severe since she had the element of surprise, and attacked in a group against one target
Renown: Possibly slight or small (5-10) for her part in finding a lost child, and saving said child from being kidnapped, and possibly being sold into slavery.
Collaboration: no

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: no
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
word count: 354
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Thu Oct 11, 2018 3:19 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Mate and Checkmate
City/Area: Uleuda (the Yludih VIP zone)
Notes/Warnings: Sin has been inactive for a while, so I figured I'd go ahead and try to finish this one, as anticlimactic as that might be. Sigh.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Tactics: Pincer attack
Tactics: Deploying a scout to find the enemy
Tactics: Divide and Conquer
Tactics: Using the terrain to your advantage
Deception: Poker Face
Logistics: Managing your army
Logistics: considering which troops to deploy
Logistics: considering the make-up of your army
Logistics: considering the size of your army
Etiquette: Meeting your partner’s parents
Etiquette: Introducing yourself

Loot: nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Nooo
Collaboration: Yeeees
word count: 114
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