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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Mon Oct 08, 2018 5:35 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Sanctuary
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: Not really
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Becoming: Chrysalis Ability
Becoming - Chrysalis: Drains a lot of ether
Becoming - Chrysalis: Achieved by pouring ether into a totem to fix the damaged parts of a form
Running: Dashing up the stairs
Stealth: Hiding under a bed is usually a solid option
Throwing (Knife): Side flicked throw
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Renown: Nupe
Collaboration: (Negatory)

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: (Yes, Becoming) Please specify the type of domain magic xp.(ie: Defiance)
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: Expert. This is the discovery of the expert ability Chrysalis and its first application.
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
Nope
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Mon Oct 08, 2018 6:42 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Relevant Vhalar Thread 3
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: sort of violent, but it's a plant
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

endurance -
casting a barrier under duress

unarmed combat -
left hook
shuffling backwards
following up a block with an attack
sometimes a weapon is needed
gauging an opponent's stance

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: not applicable
Renown: none requested
Collaboration: no
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Mon Oct 08, 2018 8:08 pm

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Thread Name: Mothly Rivalry
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Inaccurate titles
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: IDK
Collaboration: No
word count: 23
Just because I shouldn't doesn't mean I won't.

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Tue Oct 09, 2018 1:12 am

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Thread Name: Come All Ye Needy
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Drugs, Minor Violence, maybe a couple sexual innuendos? Nothing out of the ordinary for our PC's
Requested Rewards:
Maxine
  • Discipline: Knowing When to Stand Down
  • Intimidation: Reminding One of Their Place
  • Intimidation: Reminding A Powerful Person of Their Limited Influence
  • Negotiation: Counter Offering
  • Resistance: Ambrosia Clears and Focuses the Mind
  • Resistance: Ambrosia Addiction
  • Resistance: Mixing Alcohol and Ambrosia
  • Resistance: Battling Effects of Ambrosia Addiction
  • Tactics: Baiting a Subject with Mockery
  • Tactics: Close Distance After a Ranged Attack

Enrick
  • Stealth: Avoiding Groups At Your Own Disclosure
  • Resistance: Ambrosia Addiction
  • Resistance: Mixing Alcohol and Ambrosia
  • Resistance: Battling Effects of Ambrosia Addiction
  • Meditation: Observing Your Environment When You're High
  • Gambling: Making Bets on Any Situation
  • Drug: Ambrosia and it's Effects
  • Drug: Ambrosia is Highly Addictive
  • Drug: Ambrosia is Smoked like Tobacco
  • Maxine: A Temperamentally Wild Woman
  • Mercy: A Threatening Merc
Loot: Pretty sure Maxine got away with a few Ambrosia blunts in this. Should be in her ledger already. :)
Injuries/Overstepping: Major hangover for Enrick naturally since he opted to bear against the addiction later.
Renown: Up to you
Collaboration: Yes
word count: 194
Seasonal Plans - Workshop - Rambles - Vlogs
"Every side attacks ya, when y' don't take sides."

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Tue Oct 09, 2018 1:18 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Game of Groans
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: I've not heard nor seen the other PC involved, so I figured might as well turn this old dusty thread in as well.
Requested Rewards:
Enrick
  • Gambling: Struggling With A Good Poker Face
  • Seduction: Letting Your Natural Charm Affect Others
Loot: Nuuuuuthin
Injuries/Overstepping: Ditto
Renown: Up to you
Collaboration: Yes
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Tue Oct 09, 2018 1:24 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Makings of a smith 2
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: memory thread
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Smithing: Striking steel
Smithing: The feel of swinging a hammer
Discipline: Deciding not to quit your job
Meditation: Finding the will to stop crying
Meditation: Praying can be peaceful
Meditation: Learning to ignore the sounds of a forge

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: not applicable
Renown: none requested
Collaboration: no
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Tue Oct 09, 2018 2:18 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Temporary Home
City/Area: The Orm'del Sea
Notes/Warnings: Sort of a filler thread following Ellen the trial after she washes up on the island.
Requested Rewards:

Field Craft: Water, food, and shelter
Field Craft: Prioritize certain resources
Field Craft: Don't waste time in a survival situation
Field Craft: Green fuel produces a lot of smoke
Navigation: Scouting a small island
Shortbow: A clean shot through the neck

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Collaboration: No
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Ellen'wyn
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Tue Oct 09, 2018 7:01 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Home Sweet Home, Part I
City/Area: Desnind
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Flying: For easily reaching high places
Flying: Bypasses ladders
Meditation: Sometimes you need help to find clarity
Meditation: Letting out pent of emotions
Meditation: Having a good long cry relieves stress
Storytelling: Let it all out

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Collaboration: No
word count: 65
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Auyaree
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Profession: Blacksmith
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Tue Oct 09, 2018 9:21 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Returning to the Shop
City/Area: Winemoore Alley, Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Not really
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Construction: Tearing down old bricks
Construction: Chiseling away mortar
Axes and Bludgeons (Sledgehammer): Overhead swing
Axes and Bludgeons (Sledgehammer): Shifting weight forward to back with a swing
Rhetoric: Baring the hard, emotional truth to a crowd
Politics: Speaking the truth
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Small+, giving a speech to the neighborhood
Collaboration: (No)

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: (No) Please specify the type of domain magic xp.(ie: Defiance)
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
word count: 116
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Tue Oct 09, 2018 9:42 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Home Sweet Home, Part II
City/Area: Desnind
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Meditation: Guided meditation
Meditation: Reaching out to your familiar
Meditation: Tea in preparation
Meditation: Burning lavender for cleansing
Meditation: Don't try too hard
Storytelling: Recalling a dream

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Collaboration: No
word count: 57
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