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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Sun Sep 16, 2018 7:59 am

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Thread Name: Kiss the Skye II
City/Area: Andaris Farms, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Mount (Flying): Signaling where to move
Mount (Flying): Entering a Dive
Ranged (Shortbow): Quickfire
Ranged (Shortbow): Bad in close-quarters
Ranged (Shortbow): Shoot first, think later
Ranged (Shortbow): Difficult in the air

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Poppy Verath: Potential romance
Poppy Verath: A kiss in the skies
Poppy Verath: Expert rider
Poppy Verath: Good for the soul
Order of the Mantis: Handles Mages

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Burns and cut across the bicep
Renown: +10 (stopping a magefire)
Collaboration: No

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: (Yes/No) Please specify the type of domain magic xp.(ie: Defiance)
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Sun Sep 16, 2018 2:32 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A journey to the woods Saun 8

City/Area: Scalvoris - travelling to the woods

Notes/Warnings: NA

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

Rupturing: Creating portals in combat
Discipline: Not fleeing from a monster

Loot: None
Injuries: no
Renown: No
Collaboration: No


Domain Magic Only -
Magic EXP: Yes - Rupturing (using portals in combat for the first time)
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: 25
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: no
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Sun Sep 16, 2018 9:04 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Helping a Medic Saun 12

City/Area: Scalvoris

Notes/Warnings: Warning: minor gore

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

Empathy: Calming down the wounded
Empathy: Has no effect on pain
Empathy: Manipulating multiple tangles at once is draining
Medicine: Focus on the most critical patients first
Medicine: Alleviating pain
Medicine: Triage, seal, and go

Loot: None
Injuries: no
Renown: No
Collaboration: No


Domain Magic Only -
Magic EXP: Yes - Empathy (testing how empathy can help the wounded - pushing the limit for working multiple tangles at once)
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: 25
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: no
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Sun Sep 16, 2018 9:15 pm

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Thread Name: Rescue
City/Area: Scalvoris, Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Nothing graphic, but rape and torture are mentioned.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledge

Caregiving: everyone needs someone to take care of them sometimes
Caregiving: different people have different needs
Detection: determining the gender of a person by the sound of their footsteps
Endurance: hunger
Endurance: thirst
Singing: it's hard to sing with a throat raspy from thirst

Non Skill Knowledge

Language: Common
Common: swears

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: Severe bruising and lacerations to her legs, chest, and abdomen from being caned and whipped, the effects of extreme hunger and thirst, and injuries from being raped. Her eyes are also extremely sensitive to the light after being blindfolded and kept in the dark for a prolonged period of time. With treatment, and rest, it should be healed by the end of the season.

Renown: Possibly slight or small (5-10) for the circumstances she was found in, and for being connected to a man who was arrested (Ren'zar).
Collaboration: no

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Magic EXP: no
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Sun Sep 16, 2018 9:31 pm

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Thread Name: Dye Making
City/Area: Scalvoris, Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Chemistry: dyes can be made out of roots, nuts, and flowers
Chemistry: mordants, or color fixatives are substances that combine with a dye or stain and fix it to a material
Chemistry: types of color fixatives include salt fixatives, plant fixatives, and mordants made out of cream of tartar, iron, tin, alum or chrome
Chemistry: salt fixatives are made by combining half a cup of salt with eight cups of cold water; they are used with dyes made out of berries
Chemistry: plant fixatives are made by combining four parts cold water with one part vinegar with all "parts" being equal so that if a part is a cup, then one cup vinegar would be mixed with four cups of cold water; they are used with dyes made out of plants
Textile Production: fabrics must be treated with a mordant, or color fixative before they can be dyed


Non Skill Knowledges

Language: Xanthea
Xanthea: language of the Sev'ryn people
Xanthea: spoken and written in Desnind
Xanthea: roots, nuts, and flowers
Xanthea: "Yes, mother."

Language: Lorien
Lorien: spoken language of the Avriel
Lorien: spoken primarily in Athart
Lorien: swears

NPC: Mi'aris
Mi'aris: a Sev'ryn
Mi'aris: mother
Mi'aris: doesn't like Ari'sora
Mi'aris: is very proud of her heritage

Mi'aris: a slave
Mi'aris: doesn't like wasting her time

NPC: Mi'zuri
Mi'zuri: sister

NPC: Ren'zar
Ren'zar: Ari'sora's guardian
Ren'zar: Mi'aris's master
Ren'zar: wants Ari'sora to be useful to him

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: none
Collaboration: no

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: no
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Sun Sep 16, 2018 9:36 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Dye Making 2
City/Area: Scalvoris, Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Chemistry: when gathering plants to make dyes, the blossoms should be in full bloom, the berries should be ripe, and the nuts should be mature
Chemistry: some plant dyes are poisonous, so it is important to be careful when using them
Textile Production: applying the mordant; add the fabric to the fixative and simmer for a break, then rinse the material and squeeze out the excess before rinsing it in cool water until the water runs clear.
Textile Production: dying process; place wet fabric in dye bath, and simmer together until desired color is obtained. The color of the fabric will be lighter when its dry.
Textile Production: the longer the fabric is soaked in the dye, the darker the color becomes; for a stronger shade, allow the material to soak in the dye overnight
Textile Production: dyes can stain your hands, so it is important to use gloves while using them


Non Skill Knowledges

Xanthea: swears

Location: Faldrass

Location: Scalvoris Town
Scalvoris Town: Town Square
Scalvoris Town: Peytr's Pots & Potions
Town Square: where the marketplace is located
Peytr's Pots & Potions: apothecary, cosmetologist and herbalist

Mi'aris: hates having to wait

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: none
Collaboration: no

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: no
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Sun Sep 16, 2018 9:41 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Dye Making 3
City/Area: Scalvoris, Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Chemistry: mulberries will give you a royal purple color when used on something that has been treated with a salt fixative
Field Craft: when gathering plants to make dyes, never take more than 2/3 of what you find in the wild; leave the rest to grow back so there will be more in the future
Medicine: some of the plants that can be used to make dyes can also be used in herbal remedies
Medicine: Herbs; uses of mulberries
Textile Production: Dye Values; gold is the most expensive, followed by red, purple, orange, yellow, green, blue, brown, black, and finally beige, which is the cheapest
Textile Production: Dyes; custom dyes, gold dyes, red dyes, and purple dyes are rare


Non Skill Knowledges

Xanthea: color names

Ari'sora: gets her love of nature from her Sev'ryn half

Ren'zar: likes mulberry wine

Sev'ryn: love nature
Sev'ryn: cherish forests

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Possibly slight (5) for doing well enough at her task to (grudgingly) earn a reward from her mother.
Collaboration: no

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: no
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Mon Sep 17, 2018 5:35 am

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Thread Name: Meditation Memory 1
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

meditation -
close your eyes
steady your breathing
listen to the silence
maintain a point of focus
use your natural competitive nature to force yourself to focus

discipline -
respond to questions, regardless of whether you want to or not

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: not applicable
Renown: none requested
Collaboration: no
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Mon Sep 17, 2018 7:17 am

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Thread Name: Meditation Memory 2
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

meditation -
fight to remain calm
seeking focus in spite of stench
seeking focus in spite of wanting to vomit
seeking focus in spite of physical pain
seeking focus in spite of noises around oneself

discipline -
willingly continuing to participate in an exercise that is uncomfortable

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: not applicable
Renown: none requested
Collaboration: no
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Tue Sep 18, 2018 1:45 pm

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Thread Name: The Science of Uncertainty
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: medical topic: seizures
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Leadership: Taking Control of An Incident
Leadership: Physicians Have Respect
Medicine: Convulsive Seizures
Medicine: Neurology: Effects of Alcohol
Medicine: Neurology: Hearing is First Sense to Leave and Return
Politics: Importance of Contributing to Society
Viden: Alcohol Prohibition

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: not applicable
Renown: Reviewer discretion
Collaboration: nope
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