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Hanabi
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Sun Aug 12, 2018 5:26 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A laborer's life
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

Seduction: Sweet talking
Seduction: Flutter eyelashes
Strength: Carrying rocks
Strength: Rest days are mandatory
Strength: Overtraining is detrimental
Endurance: Pushing through muscle fatigue

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: upper body muscle fatigue (mandatory rest for 2 days)
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Kyreen
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Sun Aug 12, 2018 5:29 pm

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Thread Name: Hot as an Oven
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill
Baking: kneading bread dough
Baking: refreshing a yeast starter
Baking: luke-warm water is best for bread
Baking: combine dry ingredients before wet ones
Etiquette: dressing for an interview
Storytelling: begin at the beginning

Non-skill
Location: The Knight's Rest Inn & Tavern
Whit Freidston: owns the Knight's Rest
Lenon: a cook who doesn't talk
Zana Freidston: Whit's daughter

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: Slight (got a job)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Kyreen on Sun Aug 19, 2018 2:01 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 97
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Vega
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Sun Aug 12, 2018 6:47 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Something Beginning with S
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None

Requested Rewards:
Vega
Knowledge:
None

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: Not for this, no
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A
Arlo
Knowledge:

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Not for this, no
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Mon Aug 13, 2018 8:13 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Elements Want You!
City/Area: Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Mild Language?
Requested Rewards:

Investigation: Reading Body Language
Detection: Listening to inflection in tone
Polearms{Trident}: Pronged weaponry are useful in disarming enemies
Strength: Forcing an enemy against a Wall
Socialization: Working a crowd.
Socialization: Offering Assistance to Others


Loot: 70 or 100 gold nel for helping a damsel in distress {Up to reviewer's discretion}
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: 10 or 15 for helping a barmaid when no one else would? {Up to reviewer's discretion}
Collaboration: No v.v
Magic EXP: Ew magic >.< {no}
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Last edited by Siorey on Sun Sep 02, 2018 4:50 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 102
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Theo Nji'Ryn
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Mon Aug 13, 2018 5:58 pm

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Thread Name: Pay My Respects to Grace & Virtue
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Mature.

Requested Rewards:
Zana
Knowledge:
Acting: The unsure and nervous girlfriend
Acting: Think about not blushing to make yourself blush
Acting: Pretending to not care
Alchemy: Can use reagents in all three states (solid, liquid, gas)
Alchemy: Mediums can be in all three states
Alchemy: Reagents can be powdered.
Alchemy: Powdering things doesn't mean they lose potency, if done properly
Alchemy: Powdered reagents can be added to liquids or solids, or other powders.
Chemistry: Solid, liquid and gas
Chemistry: Powdering solids
Discipline: Not giving in to temptation in a cafe

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: Maybe? Being seen around the Academy.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A
Theo
Knowledge:
Acting: Playing the part of a student
Acting: Appearing disinterested
Acting: Pretending to be a nosy housewife
Acting: Throw yourself into the part
Detection: Spotting someone familiar
Detection: Spotting an expression on someone who is looking at someone else
Detection: Watching details
Disguise: Props are helpful
Stealth: Melting into a crowd
Stealth: Moving around an adjacent wall
Stealth: Move when your mark is otherwise engaged

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Maybe slight for being seen around the academy, etc.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A
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Devin
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Tue Aug 14, 2018 5:11 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Restoring the Shrine, Part One: Repairs
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: -
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acting: Playing a businessman
Endurance: Taking a beating
Persuasion: Giving people food and drinks helps
Persuasion: How to make people work for free
Persuasion: I have money, don't kill me!
Tarouz Ability: Wings of Steel: Makes you look quite intimidating

Loot: A new Tarouz ability maybe?

Apart from that Devin loses money - I'd say 40 gn for 20 bottles of beer, and another 10 to 20 gn or so for a few roast chicken and maybe the odd board or hammer.

Injuries/Overstepping: Devin was punched in the stomach and might have a few bruises as well. Nothing too serious though.
Renown: Yes, for restoring the shrine - and scaring the bad guys away.
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: no

PEGASUS TO REVIEW!!!
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Rynata
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Tue Aug 14, 2018 6:47 am

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Thread Name: Coming of Age
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Business Management: Repaying a loan on time
Business Management: Handling monetary transactions at the bank
Discipline: Keeping to the budget
Storytelling: Leaving out certain details
Storytelling: Consider what is appropriate for the audience
Writing: Writing a letter to family

Loot: -300 Gold nels
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None?
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Rynata
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Tue Aug 14, 2018 1:09 pm

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Thread Name: Distress
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Unfinished. Don't think it will be completed
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Intelligence: Obtaining tips from acquaintences
Business Management: Seizing an opportunity
Socialization: Rebuffing unwanted advances
Socialization: Making your compassion known
Detection: Perceiving a painful past
Negotiation: Putting forward a fair and caring deal

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Small for taking on the offer of a "cursed" passenger?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Navyri
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Tue Aug 14, 2018 3:19 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Worth a Whipping
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Brutal, Violent. Sexual assault.
Requested Rewards: 10xp

Knowledge:
Whips: How to Use a Bullwhip
Whips: Different Whips for Different Wounds
Whips: The Most Brutal Teacher
Whips: How to Split Flesh
Whips: How to Choke Your Opponent
Strength: Use Your Own Weight to Add Power

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Small for brutalizing a man and being arrested?
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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"At last. It has been too long since I have walked the face of this world. Too long have I been locked there, awaiting my champion to release me. My champion... This is you, daughter of Audrae. You have, whether knowingly or not, released me from my self imprisonment, and are here to fulfill the destiny I have seen written in the tapestry of nature. You, daughter of Audrae's daughter, will be my foothold in this world." - Belaera to The Nightingale, after the 600 arc imprisonment
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Tue Aug 14, 2018 3:51 pm

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Thread Name: Remembrance
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:

Faith
Knowledge: N/A
Non Skill: N/A

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Yes
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Sephira
Knowledge:
Cosmetology: Striving to appear “normal”
Detection: Picking up on a familiar face in the crowd
Etiquette: Apologizing for being in someone’s way
Etiquette: Keeping your nose out of someone else’s business
Leadership: Making a public speech
Leadership: Inspiring your fellow soldiers
Meditation: Relaxing and breathing helps control your Spark
Stealth: Footsteps can be loud over a stone surface

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Faith: Was previously a slave
Faith: Led the repair and recovery of the docks collapse

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Yes
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Kura
Knowledge:
Rhetoric: Cutting through someone's attempt at rationalization
Medicine: Hiding from pain doesn't help it heal
Medicine: Ghosts can help people heal
Medicine: Sharing your pain to help another
Discipline: Keeping control of your irritation when talking to someone
Discipline: Putting the anger away

Non-Skill Knowledge:
N/A

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Yes
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Rynata
Knowledge:
Socialization: Attending public events
Discipline: Fighting off sleep
Discipline: Functioning through emotional turmoil
Acrobatics: Balancing on stepping stones
Leadership: Having your voice heard through a speech
Rhetoric: Delivering a short speech
Rhetoric: Keep the message simple
Rhetoric: Expressing a hopeful sentiment

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Faith: Was previously a slave

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Yes
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Last edited by Rynata on Tue Aug 14, 2018 4:20 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 252
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