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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Sun Aug 12, 2018 5:26 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A laborer's life
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

Seduction: Sweet talking
Seduction: Flutter eyelashes
Strength: Carrying rocks
Strength: Rest days are mandatory
Strength: Overtraining is detrimental
Endurance: Pushing through muscle fatigue

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: upper body muscle fatigue (mandatory rest for 2 days)
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Sun Aug 12, 2018 5:29 pm

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Thread Name: Hot as an Oven
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill
Baking: kneading bread dough
Baking: refreshing a yeast starter
Baking: luke-warm water is best for bread
Baking: combine dry ingredients before wet ones
Etiquette: dressing for an interview
Storytelling: begin at the beginning

Non-skill
Location: The Knight's Rest Inn & Tavern
Whit Freidston: owns the Knight's Rest
Lenon: a cook who doesn't talk
Zana Freidston: Whit's daughter

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: Slight (got a job)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Sun Aug 12, 2018 6:47 pm

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Thread Name: Something Beginning with S
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None

Requested Rewards:
Vega
Knowledge:
None

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: Not for this, no
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A
Arlo
Knowledge:

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Not for this, no
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Mon Aug 13, 2018 8:13 am

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Thread Name: The Elements Want You!
City/Area: Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Mild Language?
Requested Rewards:

Investigation: Reading Body Language
Detection: Listening to inflection in tone
Polearms{Trident}: Pronged weaponry are useful in disarming enemies
Strength: Forcing an enemy against a Wall
Socialization: Working a crowd.
Socialization: Offering Assistance to Others


Loot: 70 or 100 gold nel for helping a damsel in distress {Up to reviewer's discretion}
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: 10 or 15 for helping a barmaid when no one else would? {Up to reviewer's discretion}
Collaboration: No v.v
Magic EXP: Ew magic >.< {no}
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Mon Aug 13, 2018 5:58 pm

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Thread Name: Pay My Respects to Grace & Virtue
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Mature.

Requested Rewards:
Zana
Knowledge:
Acting: The unsure and nervous girlfriend
Acting: Think about not blushing to make yourself blush
Acting: Pretending to not care
Alchemy: Can use reagents in all three states (solid, liquid, gas)
Alchemy: Mediums can be in all three states
Alchemy: Reagents can be powdered.
Alchemy: Powdering things doesn't mean they lose potency, if done properly
Alchemy: Powdered reagents can be added to liquids or solids, or other powders.
Chemistry: Solid, liquid and gas
Chemistry: Powdering solids
Discipline: Not giving in to temptation in a cafe

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: Maybe? Being seen around the Academy.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A
Theo
Knowledge:
Acting: Playing the part of a student
Acting: Appearing disinterested
Acting: Pretending to be a nosy housewife
Acting: Throw yourself into the part
Detection: Spotting someone familiar
Detection: Spotting an expression on someone who is looking at someone else
Detection: Watching details
Disguise: Props are helpful
Stealth: Melting into a crowd
Stealth: Moving around an adjacent wall
Stealth: Move when your mark is otherwise engaged

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Maybe slight for being seen around the academy, etc.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Tue Aug 14, 2018 5:11 am

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Thread Name: Restoring the Shrine, Part One: Repairs
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: -
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acting: Playing a businessman
Endurance: Taking a beating
Persuasion: Giving people food and drinks helps
Persuasion: How to make people work for free
Persuasion: I have money, don't kill me!
Tarouz Ability: Wings of Steel: Makes you look quite intimidating

Loot: A new Tarouz ability maybe?

Apart from that Devin loses money - I'd say 40 gn for 20 bottles of beer, and another 10 to 20 gn or so for a few roast chicken and maybe the odd board or hammer.

Injuries/Overstepping: Devin was punched in the stomach and might have a few bruises as well. Nothing too serious though.
Renown: Yes, for restoring the shrine - and scaring the bad guys away.
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: no

PEGASUS TO REVIEW!!!
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Tue Aug 14, 2018 6:47 am

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Thread Name: Coming of Age
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Business Management: Repaying a loan on time
Business Management: Handling monetary transactions at the bank
Discipline: Keeping to the budget
Storytelling: Leaving out certain details
Storytelling: Consider what is appropriate for the audience
Writing: Writing a letter to family

Loot: -300 Gold nels
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None?
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Tue Aug 14, 2018 1:09 pm

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Thread Name: Distress
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Unfinished. Don't think it will be completed
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Intelligence: Obtaining tips from acquaintences
Business Management: Seizing an opportunity
Socialization: Rebuffing unwanted advances
Socialization: Making your compassion known
Detection: Perceiving a painful past
Negotiation: Putting forward a fair and caring deal

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Small for taking on the offer of a "cursed" passenger?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Tue Aug 14, 2018 3:19 pm

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Thread Name: Worth a Whipping
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Brutal, Violent. Sexual assault.
Requested Rewards: 10xp

Knowledge:
Whips: How to Use a Bullwhip
Whips: Different Whips for Different Wounds
Whips: The Most Brutal Teacher
Whips: How to Split Flesh
Whips: How to Choke Your Opponent
Strength: Use Your Own Weight to Add Power

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Small for brutalizing a man and being arrested?
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Tue Aug 14, 2018 3:51 pm

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Thread Name: Remembrance
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:

Faith
Knowledge: N/A
Non Skill: N/A

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Yes
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Sephira
Knowledge:
Cosmetology: Striving to appear “normal”
Detection: Picking up on a familiar face in the crowd
Etiquette: Apologizing for being in someone’s way
Etiquette: Keeping your nose out of someone else’s business
Leadership: Making a public speech
Leadership: Inspiring your fellow soldiers
Meditation: Relaxing and breathing helps control your Spark
Stealth: Footsteps can be loud over a stone surface

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Faith: Was previously a slave
Faith: Led the repair and recovery of the docks collapse

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Yes
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Kura
Knowledge:
Rhetoric: Cutting through someone's attempt at rationalization
Medicine: Hiding from pain doesn't help it heal
Medicine: Ghosts can help people heal
Medicine: Sharing your pain to help another
Discipline: Keeping control of your irritation when talking to someone
Discipline: Putting the anger away

Non-Skill Knowledge:
N/A

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Yes
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Rynata
Knowledge:
Socialization: Attending public events
Discipline: Fighting off sleep
Discipline: Functioning through emotional turmoil
Acrobatics: Balancing on stepping stones
Leadership: Having your voice heard through a speech
Rhetoric: Delivering a short speech
Rhetoric: Keep the message simple
Rhetoric: Expressing a hopeful sentiment

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Faith: Was previously a slave

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Yes
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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