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Lucas Nardovino
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Posts: 43
Joined: Thu Jul 26, 2018 11:46 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Prisoner Scum
Renown: +20
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Wed Aug 08, 2018 5:01 pm

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Thread Name: [Prison]In Darkness I Repent
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Emotional suffering/turmoil
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Nursing your own injuries
Endurance: It isn't only physical it is also mental
Endurance: Distract yourself from the pain
Endurance: The pain of a broken finger
Strength: Hitting a door with all your might
Detection: The sound of thunder outside
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Broken finger: 30 trials to heal
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Varlum
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Posts: 49
Joined: Fri Apr 13, 2018 2:35 pm
Race: Ithecal
Renown: 0
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Wed Aug 08, 2018 10:21 pm

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Thread Name: Power Within (Solo, Initiation)
City/Area: Rharne, Stormlands
Notes/Warnings: Magic Initiation WOOOOOOO
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Defiance:Initiation
Defiance: Elemental bond
Defiance: Coaxing the earth
Defiance: Don't overdo it
Defiance: Feeling the elements around
Strength: Pushing out of the ground
Loot: DEFIANCE WOOOOOO
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: YAS
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Last edited by Varlum on Thu Aug 16, 2018 11:56 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Ellen'wyn
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Posts: 295
Joined: Sat Oct 14, 2017 12:42 am
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Huntress
Renown: +69
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Thu Aug 09, 2018 10:30 pm

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Thread Name: Bright Feather, Black Feather
City/Area: Etzos Underground
Notes/Warnings: Ellen confronts Noth about the Sons of Justice's propaganda.

Ellen’wyn
Intelligence: Certain people congregate in certain places
Investigation: Search for your own answers
Investigation: There's always two sides to a story
Politics: Propaganda
Politics: Trying to remain neutral
Rhetoric: A civil disagreement
Persuasion: Honesty can be the best policy
Persuasion: Trying to make someone see your intentions
Discipline: Brief bursts of bravery while intimidated
Discipline: Don't look back
Navigation: Multiple routes to one location

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: n/a

Noth
Rhetoric: There is no neutrality
Persuasion: Don't always threaten
Persuasion: Isolate someone
Persuasion: Don't draw a weapon
Persuasion: Compound with Intimidation

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: n/a

Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Hanabi
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Posts: 38
Joined: Mon Jul 30, 2018 1:18 am
Race: Human
Renown: 0
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Thu Aug 09, 2018 11:26 pm

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Thread Name: A run at the park
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

Running: Pacing by heartrate
Endurance: Gauging Heartrate
Running: Pacing by breath rate
Running: Pacing by steps
Strength: Keeping your breathing steady
Running: Adjusting power based on surface hardness

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: none
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Hanabi
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Fri Aug 10, 2018 4:52 pm

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Thread Name: Morning Run
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

Running: Run up hills
Running: Stretch after warming up
Running: Adjusting stride
Endurance: Physical pain of stiff joints
Endurance: Slowly increase Distance
Strength: It takes strong legs for momentum

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: none
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Hanabi
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Fri Aug 10, 2018 7:44 pm

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Thread Name: Joining Thunder
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

Intimidation: Being loud to assert dominance
Socialization: Telling the honest truth
Interrogation: Barrage of questions
Socialization: Having a drink with comrades
Socialization: Crossing cultures through celebration
Negotiation: Explaining what you want


Non-skill:
Location: Rharne, Sky Quarter
Location: Rharne, Lightning Cathedral

Awarded upon joining per This Thread
Faction: Thunder Priestesses
Thunder Priestesses: The Oath
Immortal: Ilaren

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: +2 for becoming a Novitiate
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Hanabi
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Posts: 38
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Race: Human
Renown: 0
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Sat Aug 11, 2018 2:52 am

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Thread Name: A liaison to remember
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

Unarmed Combat (Brawling): Full body lunge
Endurance: Slamming into a hard surface
Strength: Fighting when you know you're overpowered
Socialization: Feeling shame when wrong
Intimidation: Shouting your demands
Resistance: Light alcoholic drinks

Non-skill:
Location: Rharne, Earth Quarter
Location: Rharne, Earth Market
Location: Rharne, The Bronze Bar

Loot: I spent 2cn on ale which was consumed
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Arlo Creede
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Posts: 1083
Joined: Wed Jan 11, 2017 9:15 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Traveler
Renown: +438
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Sat Aug 11, 2018 2:53 pm

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Thread Name: When Cooler Heads Prevail
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None

Requested Rewards:
Vega

Knowledge:
Intimidation: Actions speak louder than words. Especially when that action is a punch.
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: A punch to the face beats a slap across one.
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: A kick to the knee
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: Fighting multiple opponents
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: Front kick is easier than side kick
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: Pulling yourself out of a grip
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: Keep your weight even
Strength: Putting your weight behind a punch
Strength: Kicking using your leg muscles for extra power


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Multiple cuts and bruises to her upper body. Mild concussion. She gets healing in this thread so it'll take 10 trials to heal. She'll have headaches and stuff for 30 trials after.
Renown: Yes, please. Maybe 10 for this?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A

Arlo

Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Using your flexibility to hit in a variety of places
Acrobatics: Acrobatic dodging
Acrobatics: Jumping and running through a crowd
Acrobatics: Maximizing distance covered.
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: User whatever is near to you as a weapon
Unarmed Combat: Brawling : Punching to the kidneys is very effective.
Unarmed Combat: Brawling:: Jabbing
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: Multiple, speedy jabs are very effective.
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: Weaving, ducking and diving

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Black eye, bumps and bruises.
Renown: Yes, please. Maybe 10 for this?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A
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Hanabi
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Posts: 38
Joined: Mon Jul 30, 2018 1:18 am
Race: Human
Renown: 0
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Sat Aug 11, 2018 6:34 pm

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Thread Name: First lesson at the cathedral
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

Acrobatics: Cartwheel
Strength: Supporting body weight with arms
Strength: Muscles tear when exerted
Strength: Muscles grow stronger when they repair
Endurance: Tighten core to absorb frontal blows
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): Putting full body weight into an attack

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Eddrick Brodon
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Posts: 181
Joined: Tue Feb 23, 2016 3:05 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Deserter/Bandit
Renown: +133
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Sun Aug 12, 2018 9:02 am

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Thread Name: Separate Ways
City/Area: Rhakrii Mountains Stronghold, Hotlands
Notes/Warnings: Betrayal, Violence and Execution
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge: Eddrick Brodon:
  • Interrogation: Invite Belligerency to Justify Harsh Accusation
  • Interrogation: Let the Subject Contradict Himself
  • Interrogation: Playing Both "Good Cop" and "Bad Cop"
  • Leadership: Do Not Prolong an Execution
  • Leadership: Let Those Who Want to Go, Leave Amiably
  • Persuasion: An Honest Revelation of Future Plans
  • Persuasion: Let Those Who Support You Be Heard
  • Story Telling: The Fortress Battle and The Council of Raskalarn
  • Weapon: Ball and Chain: Both Longer and Shorter Reach Than a Longsword
  • Unarmed Combat Brawling: Use a Stabbed Item to Get Leverage on the Blade
Non-Skill Knowledge: Eddrick Brodon:
  • Adrienna: Prefers Bandit Life
  • Coren: Deceased
  • Coren: Trusted Lieutenant Turned Traitor
Skill Knowledge: Adrienna:
  • Deception: Lies told as truths
  • Disguise: Cuts to fake a fight
  • Leadership: Execute traitors to maintain power
  • Leadership: Words stir up crowds
  • Psychology: Bear no emotional attachments
  • Psychology: Concessions shows weakness
  • Psychology: Stubbornness kills
  • Psychology: Terrible anger management
  • Tactics: Attack from behind to gain advantage
  • Tactics: Moment of surprise
Non-Skill Knowledge: Adrienna:
  • Coren: Dead
  • Coren: Traitor
  • Eddrick: Remains Rhakrii leader
  • Eddrick: Serves an immortal
  • General: Loyalty can be broken
  • Rhakriis: Bandits turning goodie two shoes
  • Rhakriis: Once a good home, now a memory
  • Rhakriis: To be absolved of their crimes
Loot: NA
Injuries/Overstepping: Eddrick: A few scrapes and shallow cuts
Renown: Eddrick +5 victory, word of future plans / Adrienna +5 Rejection of those plans
Collaboration: Yes - Eddrick and Adrienna
Magic EXP: No
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