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Review Requests 2.1.6

Sat Aug 04, 2018 12:27 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Stumbling Through The Dark
City/Area: Etzos Area
Notes/Warnings: Memory, no warnings
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Field Craft: Building a torch
Navigation: Navigating in the dark
Navigation: Following weak directions
Navigation: Plotting a course
Navigation: Finding your location on a map
Navigation: The varying usefulness of different map types


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic EXP: N/A
word count: 70
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Review Requests 2.1.6

Sat Aug 04, 2018 12:28 am

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Thread Name: Up The River
City/Area: Etzos Area
Notes/Warnings: Memory, no warnings
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Navigation: Terrain related delays
Navigation: Following a river
Navigation: Flow direction of a river
Navigation: Asking for directions
Navigation: Cities are distinctly easier to find
Persuasion: Getting someone to let you hitch a ride


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic EXP: N/A
word count: 70
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Nightshade Eld
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Review Requests 2.1.6

Sat Aug 04, 2018 12:28 am

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Thread Name: Back Again, Back Again
City/Area: Etzos Area
Notes/Warnings: Memory, no warnings
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Field Craft: Pacing for safety
Field Craft: Sleeping outside without shelter
Field Craft: Fire Starting Method: Fire plow
Navigation: Retracing your steps
Navigation: Judging location by travel time
Navigation: Return trips are easier


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic EXP: N/A
word count: 70
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Auyaree
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Review Requests 2.1.6

Sat Aug 04, 2018 7:26 am

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Thread Name: From Stone We Acquire Life
City/Area: Winemoore Alley, Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Intelligence: Give contacts a reason to depend on you
Intelligence: Show personability to contacts.
Intelligence: Reward contacts for good work
Strength: Swinging a sledgehammer
Endurance: Crushing stones
Detection: Seeing blackened iron in ore

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Small, for being a present business woman in the community
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (No)
word count: 76
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Yavanna
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Review Requests 2.1.6

Sun Aug 05, 2018 6:13 am

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Thread Name: The Heroine of Darkness
City/Area: Rharne, Dust Quarter
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:

Investigation: Ensure you know all the details
Detection: Noticing when someone is upset
Detection: Assessing the situation
Intimidation: Holding the groin hostage for Intel
Intelligence: Everybody Has Secrets
Intelligence: Gathering small details from a story

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Will leave it to the reviewer
For hearing the concerns of the forsaken and heading their call for help

Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (No)
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Last edited by Yavanna on Tue Aug 14, 2018 6:10 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 86
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Review Requests 2.1.6

Mon Aug 06, 2018 12:42 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: End Of Land
City/Area: Etzos, Outer Perimeter
Notes/Warnings: Language and Violence

Something of a wrap up from last season, that ended up going on for longer than I thought it would. Still... interests of completion and all that. I really didn't like the end of it, seemed kinda rushed and hacky, but I tried. Enjoy!

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Discipline: Do Not Stop Until the Job is Done
Intelligence: Tailing an Underling to Find the True Target
Intelligence: Questioning Hired Muscle About Their Employers
Intimidation: Reminding a Man What He Has To Lose
Persuasion: Always Provide an Easy Alternative
Stealth: Keeping Your Distance While Following Someone


Non-Skill Knowledge:
Etzos: Sewage Flows to the Southwood River
Location: Southwood River Mill
Location: Feral's Fastness
NPC Donal: Dimwitted Muscle-For-Hire
NPC Mikos: Married Man and Street Sellsword


Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nada
Renown: Yep, considering this was designed to send a message to other debtors
Collaboration: Nein
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Kasoria on Tue Aug 14, 2018 3:32 pm, edited 2 times in total. word count: 167
"This is the life we choose, the life we lead. And there is only one guarantee: none of us will see Heaven."
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Tristan Venora
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Review Requests 2.1.6

Mon Aug 06, 2018 6:39 am

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Thread Name: Full Oakleigh Alchemist
City/Area: Oakleigh
Notes/Warnings: Sintih told me to just submit this thread for review as he's been struggling with writing.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acting: Pretending that you need a cane
Acting: Acting polite and humble
Alchemy: Using the wrong amount of something can lead to explosions
Alchemy: You don't always have to plan everything out
Leadership: Interacting with your subjects
Persuasion: Being humble helps
Persuasion: Flattering people helps
Persuasion: Dumping a potion into the water supply might persuade people to like you better
Persuasion: If you want to persuade somebody to do business with you, show interest in their work
Persuasion: Asking people what might persuade them to do business with you
Persuasion: Persuading somebody occasionally takes time

The Oonco family: largest supplier of glassware in Oakleigh

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Maybe a little for meeting Mr. Oonco?
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
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Last edited by Tristan Venora on Tue Aug 14, 2018 12:49 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 158
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Hikaru
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Review Requests 2.1.6

Tue Aug 07, 2018 2:48 am

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Thread Name: Metalworking and alchemy
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

Business Management: Keeping your workplace tidy
Business Management: Shop Maintenance & Upkeep
Business Management: Finding Business Partners
Business Management: Differentiating from competitors
Jewelry Crafting: Don’t use so much brass!
Negotiation: Proposing a partnership for mutual benefits
Appraisal: Alchemy can add value
Socialization: Introducing Yourself
Socialization: The art of small talk with strangers
Alchemy: Don’t need a spark to use
Alchemy: Can change properties of materials

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Hikaru on Thu Aug 16, 2018 11:53 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 96
Dedicated Grading Account :)
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Emerit
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Review Requests 2.1.6

Tue Aug 07, 2018 7:08 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: [Havardr] Oh brother...
City/Area: Havardr, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Storytelling: Stories have climax
Deception: Fitting emotions for desired effect
Endurance: Withstand small pain
Persuasion: Impress strangers
Caregiving: Physical contact brings comfort
Stealth: Avoiding attention

Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: At viewer's discretion
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Emerit on Wed Aug 15, 2018 4:05 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 54
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Lucas Nardovino
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Wed Aug 08, 2018 3:51 pm

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Thread Name: [Prison]The Good, The bad and The Darkness
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Mild violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Brawling: Use your environment to your advantage
Brawling: Don't be afraid to hit a man when he's down
Brawling: Tackling your opponent
Brawling: Using your legs to get out from under someone
Brawling: Punching at the kidneys
Brawling: Don't give them chance to recover
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Cut up right arm: 20 trials to heal if not infected. Bruised: 10 trials to heal. Also coming with a hell of a headache.
Renown: Maybe up to you reviewer!
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Lucas Nardovino on Wed Aug 15, 2018 12:00 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 109
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