Review Requests 2.1.5

Here we go!

For completed review request threads only.

Moderators: Advocates, Peer Reviewer, Storytellers, Lore Analysts, Developers

Locked
User avatar
Wendell
Approved Character
Posts: 302
Joined: Mon Oct 03, 2016 6:07 am
Race: Mixed Race
Renown: 0
Character Sheet
Prophet Notes
Plot Notes
Templates
Letters
Wealth Tier: Tier 1
Medal count: 14

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Review Requests 2.1.5

Wed Jul 18, 2018 10:05 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Here
City/Area: Sea off Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: NA
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Navigation: A better view from the Crow's Nest
Navigation: How to tell when you've gone off course
Navigation: Always check the map
Navigation: The technique of tacking to pinpoint direction
Seafaring: Slacking the headsail
Seafaring: Easing out the spanker
Seafaring: How to outrun an enemy ship
Leadership: The importance of having a second in command
Leadership: Give and take

Loot:

Contract for trade route between Rynmere and Rharne.

Injuries/Overstepping: NA
Renown: Not sure
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Image
word count: 97
Image
User avatar
Oberan
Approved Character
Posts: 414
Joined: Fri Jul 28, 2017 6:32 pm
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Part-time God
Renown: 0
Character Sheet
Prophet Notes
Plot Notes
Templates
Wealth Tier: Tier 1
Medal count: 2

Contribution

Miscellaneous

Review Requests 2.1.5

Wed Jul 18, 2018 6:43 pm

Rewards Requested
Eye of the Tiger
City/Area: Warrick, Rynmere. Memory
Notes/Warnings: This was a little challenge I'd set for myself, and boy did I struggle! It turned out meh because of it. I just hope it's coherent.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Strength: Combat training
  • Unarmed: the importance of distance
  • Unarmed: Know the range of your opponent
  • Unarmed: Circling your opponent
  • Unarmed: Use an opening to strike
  • Unarmed: Know the limits of your capabilities
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (Magic is for those who cannot trust in their natural abilities)
Image
word count: 90
Just because I shouldn't doesn't mean I won't.

"Speaking"| If it's a sentence, then it's a thought|"Others speaking"
Mortalborn Abilities | Die Roller
User avatar
Tio Silver
Approved Character
Posts: 809
Joined: Thu Apr 13, 2017 3:04 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Teacher
Renown: +422
Character Sheet
Prophet Notes
Plot Notes
Letters
Wealth Tier: Tier 6
Medal count: 24

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Review Requests 2.1.5

Wed Jul 18, 2018 8:42 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Building a Better Golem
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Necromancy: Creating a golem
Necromancy: Creating a giant thrall
Necromancy: Combining a giant's strength with a golem's toughness
Necromancy: Implanting wells into thralls
Necromancy: Making a golem from stone and clay
Teaching: Pop quiz!


Loot: +1 Giant stone/clay golem, named Craggy.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes - Necromancy
Image
[/anchor]
word count: 73
Fast Facts
Noticeable quirks your character can see when threading with Tio.

Bone Mask

Tio has a white bone mask permanently fused to his face. It has no features besides a left eye hole and a pair of ram-like horns.

Terrible Shirt

Tio wears perhaps the most horribly ostentatious jacket on Idalos. It is magically enchanted to make him feel good as long as he wears it, but is so awful that most people can't help but cringe.

Skeletal Shadow

The shadow Tio casts is that of a skeleton. It looks pretty spooky, but doesn't really do anything special.

Cold Wind

A gentle breeze of slightly chilly wind clings to Tio, following him wherever he goes.

Fred the Fox

Tio has a sentient pet fox called Fred. It can talk to him, but everyone else just hears fox noises.

No Reflection

Tio has no reflection, nor do the clothes he wears.
User avatar
Mute
Approved Character
Posts: 169
Joined: Mon Jun 25, 2018 8:42 pm
Race: Human
Renown: 0
Character Sheet
Prophet Notes
Plot Notes
Templates
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 4
Medal count: 1

Contribution

Review Requests 2.1.5

Wed Jul 18, 2018 8:58 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Courier
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nothing beyond a bit of crass humor
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Combat [Bludgeon]: Uppercut
Combat [Unarmed]: Targeting the groin
Combat [Unarmed]: Using your body to trip the opponent
Detection: Spotting a Tail
Detection: Listening to footsteps
Etiquette: Shaking someone's hand in greeting

Location: Almund Bazaar
Location: The Kennel
NPC: Dana Guiscard: Kennel Master

Loot: +50 gn (Payment for Odd Job)
-6 sn for bag purchase (Large (4 sn) x Waterproof leather (1.5 multiplier) x Shoulder Straps (.5 multiplier)
Injuries/Overstepping: Perhaps a bit of bruising from where the attacker's legs collided with the right side of his body
Renown: Perhaps a better reputation with The Kennel for a successful completion of the job
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
Image
word count: 130
User avatar
Doran
Approved Character
Posts: 635
Joined: Sat Sep 03, 2016 3:43 am
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Alchemist
Renown: +255
Character Sheet
Prophet Notes
Plot Notes
Player Review
Templates
Letters
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 1
Medal count: 22

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Events

Review Requests 2.1.5

Thu Jul 19, 2018 6:10 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Refining the Sword
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: no

Requested Rewards:
Doran
Knowledge:
Blades (Longsword): Disarming somebody
Blades (Longsword): Don't hold your sword in a vice-like grip
Blades (Longsword): Cross Strike
Endurance: A practice fight
Endurance: Improves automatically if you regularly work out
Endurance: If you don't build up your endurance, you won't last long in a fight
Strength: Necessary for a swordman to have
Strength: Building up the strength in your arms
Strength: A forceful thrust
Strength: Building up your strength by attaching a weight to your sword
Teaching: Teaching somebody to fight with a sword
Teaching: Asking a student to show you what they are capable of

Zasalamir: My Student

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes, for teaching Zasalamir.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A

Zasalamir
Knowledge:
Strength: Tensing your muscles during exercise is a good method of isolating muscles for working out
Detection: Listening to inflection in tone
Endurance: Pushing Through Exhaustion
Endurance: Ignoring fatigue
Blades: Slice and stab
Blades: An on-guard stance
Armed Combat: Blade is an Extension of the Body
Bladed Combat (long sword): Slicing with a long sword
Bladed Combat (long sword): Trusting when unable to slash
Bladed Combat (longswords): Remain relaxed, flexible and responsive
Bladed Combat (longswords): Fight from the hips
Bladed Combat (longswords): Leaning/ducking to avoid attacks

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: N/A
word count: 262
User avatar
Navyri
Approved Character
Posts: 453
Joined: Mon Jun 19, 2017 5:27 pm
Race: Naerikk
Profession: Thief
Renown: +253
Character Sheet
Prophet Notes
Plot Notes
Partner
Templates
Letters
Wealth Tier: Tier 7
Medal count: 9

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Review Requests 2.1.5

Thu Jul 19, 2018 2:36 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Diamond in the Rough
City/Area: Outside Egilrun
Notes/Warnings: N/A Mentions of murder, subtle hinting at suicide.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 10xp
Appraisal: Consider Return Value
Appraisal: Don't Let Rumors Ruin a Good Deal
Appraisal: Death Makes Real Estate Cheap
Appraisal: How to Spot a "Flip"
Business Management: How to Buy a Property
Discipline: Resist Old Traumas & Persist
Loot: A House! (Previously approved by Pegasus)
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes, please! Small. Rumors spread of a stunning winged woman buying the haunted property, fearless of the home's history. Many expect an ill fate to befall the foreigner.
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No
word count: 110
"At last. It has been too long since I have walked the face of this world. Too long have I been locked there, awaiting my champion to release me. My champion... This is you, daughter of Audrae. You have, whether knowingly or not, released me from my self imprisonment, and are here to fulfill the destiny I have seen written in the tapestry of nature. You, daughter of Audrae's daughter, will be my foothold in this world." - Belaera to The Nightingale, after the 600 arc imprisonment
User avatar
Pegasus
Lore Analyst (TL)
Lore Analyst (TL)
Posts: 6236
Joined: Sun Sep 11, 2016 1:08 am
Race: Prophet
Profession: Desnind's Keeper
Renown: 0
Plot Notes
Office
Templates
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 10
Achievements
Medal count: 32

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Staff

Miscellaneous

Events

Review Requests 2.1.5

Thu Jul 19, 2018 2:51 pm

Thread Closed!


Peer reviewers, please continue to review threads here until they are all reviewed (I'll keep the reviewed by up to date!)

Players, please post new review requests: here

Thanks!
word count: 32
Image
"In Play by Posting Role Playing, inaccurate and inconsistent lore is considered especially heinous.
On Standing Trials, the dedicated investigators who investigate these vicious felonies are members of an elite squad known as the Lore Analysis Unit.
These are their stories..."
Locked

Return to “Archive Review Request Threads”