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Wendell
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Renown: 0
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Review Requests 2.1.5

Wed Jul 18, 2018 10:05 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Here
City/Area: Sea off Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: NA
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Navigation: A better view from the Crow's Nest
Navigation: How to tell when you've gone off course
Navigation: Always check the map
Navigation: The technique of tacking to pinpoint direction
Seafaring: Slacking the headsail
Seafaring: Easing out the spanker
Seafaring: How to outrun an enemy ship
Leadership: The importance of having a second in command
Leadership: Give and take

Loot:

Contract for trade route between Rynmere and Rharne.

Injuries/Overstepping: NA
Renown: Not sure
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Oberan
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Posts: 414
Joined: Fri Jul 28, 2017 6:32 pm
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Part-time God
Renown: -63
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Review Requests 2.1.5

Wed Jul 18, 2018 6:43 pm

Rewards Requested
Eye of the Tiger
City/Area: Warrick, Rynmere. Memory
Notes/Warnings: This was a little challenge I'd set for myself, and boy did I struggle! It turned out meh because of it. I just hope it's coherent.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Strength: Combat training
  • Unarmed: the importance of distance
  • Unarmed: Know the range of your opponent
  • Unarmed: Circling your opponent
  • Unarmed: Use an opening to strike
  • Unarmed: Know the limits of your capabilities
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (Magic is for those who cannot trust in their natural abilities)
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Just because I shouldn't doesn't mean I won't.

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Tio Silver
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Race: Yludih
Profession: Teacher
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Review Requests 2.1.5

Wed Jul 18, 2018 8:42 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Building a Better Golem
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Necromancy: Creating a golem
Necromancy: Creating a giant thrall
Necromancy: Combining a giant's strength with a golem's toughness
Necromancy: Implanting wells into thralls
Necromancy: Making a golem from stone and clay
Teaching: Pop quiz!


Loot: +1 Giant stone/clay golem, named Craggy.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes - Necromancy
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Fast Facts
Some strange little quirks your character can notice when threading with Tio.

Missing Eye

Tio lost his right eye, and has a nasty looking scar where it used to be. This scar serves as Cassion's curse mark, but has the side of effect of allowing Tio to see strands of faintly glowing words made of light surrounding people who will be part of a story in the future. He wears an eyepatch to cover this eye up.

Terrible Shirt

Tio wears perhaps the most horribly ostentatious jacket on Idalos. It is magically enchanted to make him feel good as long as he wears it, but is so awful that most people can't help but cringe.

Skeletal Shadow

The shadow Tio casts is that of a skeleton. It looks pretty spooky, but doesn't really do anything special.

Cold Wind

A gentle breeze of slightly chilly wind clings to Tio, following him wherever he goes.

Magic Jewelry

Tio wears a range of jewelry with assorted magic effects. See the character sheet for more details.
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Mute
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Review Requests 2.1.5

Wed Jul 18, 2018 8:58 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Courier
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nothing beyond a bit of crass humor
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Combat [Bludgeon]: Uppercut
Combat [Unarmed]: Targeting the groin
Combat [Unarmed]: Using your body to trip the opponent
Detection: Spotting a Tail
Detection: Listening to footsteps
Etiquette: Shaking someone's hand in greeting

Location: Almund Bazaar
Location: The Kennel
NPC: Dana Guiscard: Kennel Master

Loot: +50 gn (Payment for Odd Job)
-6 sn for bag purchase (Large (4 sn) x Waterproof leather (1.5 multiplier) x Shoulder Straps (.5 multiplier)
Injuries/Overstepping: Perhaps a bit of bruising from where the attacker's legs collided with the right side of his body
Renown: Perhaps a better reputation with The Kennel for a successful completion of the job
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 130
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Doran
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Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Alchemist
Renown: +255
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Review Requests 2.1.5

Thu Jul 19, 2018 6:10 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Refining the Sword
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: no

Requested Rewards:
Doran
Knowledge:
Blades (Longsword): Disarming somebody
Blades (Longsword): Don't hold your sword in a vice-like grip
Blades (Longsword): Cross Strike
Endurance: A practice fight
Endurance: Improves automatically if you regularly work out
Endurance: If you don't build up your endurance, you won't last long in a fight
Strength: Necessary for a swordman to have
Strength: Building up the strength in your arms
Strength: A forceful thrust
Strength: Building up your strength by attaching a weight to your sword
Teaching: Teaching somebody to fight with a sword
Teaching: Asking a student to show you what they are capable of

Zasalamir: My Student

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes, for teaching Zasalamir.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A

Zasalamir
Knowledge:
Strength: Tensing your muscles during exercise is a good method of isolating muscles for working out
Detection: Listening to inflection in tone
Endurance: Pushing Through Exhaustion
Endurance: Ignoring fatigue
Blades: Slice and stab
Blades: An on-guard stance
Armed Combat: Blade is an Extension of the Body
Bladed Combat (long sword): Slicing with a long sword
Bladed Combat (long sword): Trusting when unable to slash
Bladed Combat (longswords): Remain relaxed, flexible and responsive
Bladed Combat (longswords): Fight from the hips
Bladed Combat (longswords): Leaning/ducking to avoid attacks

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: N/A
word count: 262
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Navyri
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Race: Naerikk
Profession: Thief
Renown: -163
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Review Requests 2.1.5

Thu Jul 19, 2018 2:36 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Diamond in the Rough
City/Area: Outside Egilrun
Notes/Warnings: N/A Mentions of murder, subtle hinting at suicide.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 10xp
Appraisal: Consider Return Value
Appraisal: Don't Let Rumors Ruin a Good Deal
Appraisal: Death Makes Real Estate Cheap
Appraisal: How to Spot a "Flip"
Business Management: How to Buy a Property
Discipline: Resist Old Traumas & Persist
Loot: A House! (Previously approved by Pegasus)
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes, please! Small. Rumors spread of a stunning winged woman buying the haunted property, fearless of the home's history. Many expect an ill fate to befall the foreigner.
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No
word count: 110
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Profession: Telling Stories!
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Review Requests 2.1.5

Thu Jul 19, 2018 2:51 pm

Thread Closed!


Peer reviewers, please continue to review threads here until they are all reviewed (I'll keep the reviewed by up to date!)

Players, please post new review requests: here

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