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Leeson Andaris
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Profession: Please Employ Leeson
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Sun Jul 15, 2018 6:59 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Crunchy Outer Coating
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Leeson gets very sad, Vega gets mildly mad
Requested Rewards:

Leeson:
Knowledge: I'm not sure if there are any applicable. If you think of any, feel free to reward them. Doesn't need to be 15 and you don't need to award any at all but I'm at a loss here
Loot: Those chocolates, I think
Injuries/Overstepping: Broken heart
Renown: 10, stop small crime

Vega:
Knowledge: None
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: 10, stop small crime

Collaboration: Ye
Magic EXP: Nah
Last edited by Leeson Andaris on Sun Jul 15, 2018 9:30 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Oberan
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Posts: 272
Joined: Fri Jul 28, 2017 6:32 pm
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Part-time God
Renown: -63
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Sun Jul 15, 2018 8:01 pm

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Thread Name: Vokunkiin
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: I like dreams
Requested Rewards:
None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Magic is only for the feint of heart.
Just because I shouldn't doesn't mean I won't.

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Oberan
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Sun Jul 15, 2018 8:48 pm

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Thread Name: Vokunkiin 2
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Dreams, I like
Requested Rewards:
None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Ah, magic, the most vile of practices in existence
Just because I shouldn't doesn't mean I won't.

"Speaking"| If it's a sentence, then it's a thought|"Others speaking"
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Faith
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Posts: 3160
Joined: Sat Jun 25, 2016 12:12 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Philanthropist
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Sun Jul 15, 2018 9:38 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Fractured Family
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: no

Requested Rewards:
Kura

Knowledge:
Rhetoric: Cutting through someone's attempt at rationalization
Medicine: Hiding from pain doesn't help it heal
Medicine: Ghosts can help people heal
Medicine: Sharing your pain to help another
Discipline: Keeping control of your irritation when talking to someone
Discipline: Putting the anger away

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: yes please if applicable
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A


Faith & Ela

No knowledges for either of us, please.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes for Ela if appropriate. Faith is at Max
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: N/A
"To be free is not merely to cast off one's chains, but to live in a way that respects and enhances the freedom of others."

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Finn
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Posts: 253
Joined: Mon Sep 19, 2016 10:06 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Priest
Renown: +85
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Mon Jul 16, 2018 5:25 pm

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Thread Name:Time to Return
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Etiquette: Remain polite even when at loss
Disguise: Hiding lack of knowledge
Location: Ne’haer: Temple of all God and its shrines
Toman Stott: Acolyte turn priest
Telar: Deceased
The Faithful: Religious organization

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Probably none?
Collaboration: Solo
Magic EXP: No
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They do not yet understand the purpose of forgiveness. It is not to spare wrongdoers a punishment they deserve. It is to spare the injured ones the ongoing pain they do not.

~ Ymiden
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Qit'ria
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Posts: 490
Joined: Mon Sep 18, 2017 1:58 am
Race: Sev'ryn
Profession: Huntsman
Renown: +38
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Mon Jul 16, 2018 5:37 pm

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Thread Name: Unseen Enemy
City/Area: Sweetvine Woods, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Hunting related violence, mild nudity

Nir'wei
Requested Rewards:
Skills Knowledge:
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Point-blank shot.
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Firing from a lying position.
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Don't full-draw during rapid-fire shots.
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Using wide-head arrows to deliver payloads, not inflict direct damage.
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Proper positioning is key in lining up the perfect shot.
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Picking out targets in large crowds.
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Knowing the maximum range of your bow.
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Better to waste some arrows and be sure you hit than conserve them and let your target escape.
Stealth: When in dense foliage, avoid snagging branches from bushes and low trees.
Stealth: Be aware of where you stand.
Stealth: Crouch to keep a low profile and make yourself seem smaller.
Stealth: Roll from ball to heel with your steps to reduce noise.
Stealth: Keep distractions to a minimum to avoid losing concentration.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Small - Successful hunting and capture trip
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic EXP: (No)


Qit'ria
Skill Knowledge
Acrobatics: Running up the base of a tree for increased vertical leap
Detection: The taste of Hafrein urine
Hunting: Using your own scent to drive prey in a specific direction
Poisons: Scarf Rot for tranquilizing animals
Stealth: Taking the longer route to avoid easier detection
Thrown (Javelin): Throwing using movement from the waist up only
Trapmaking: Planning trap locations in blind corners of trails
Trapmaking: Antler snag trap
Trapmaking: Blind trip fall
Trapmaking: Combining multiple traps for best results
Unarmed Combat (Inner Beast): Choke hold to induce unconsciousness
Unarmed Combat (Inner Beast): Using legs to maintain hold on a target

Non-Skill Knowledge
Location - Scalvoris: The Menagerie

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Small - Successful hunting and capture trip
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic EXP: (No)
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Kasoria
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Race: Human
Profession: Problem-solver
Renown: +215
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Mon Jul 16, 2018 5:39 pm

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Thread Name: Mix 'N Match
City/Area: South Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Not really... oddly enough
Requested Rewards:

Pretty simple post, more an extra grinder than anything else. Story'll pick up again in the next one!

Knowledge:
Blades (Throwing Knives): Turning and Throwing
Blades (Throwing Knives): Release When Hand, Blade, and Target Line Up
Discipline: Sticking With Exercise For Seasons At A Time
Endurance: Fighting Through Exhaustion to Throw Your Blades
Strength: Pull Ups
Tactics: One Stratagem Doesn't Work? Try Another


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
"This is the life we choose, the life we lead. And there is only one guarantee: none of us will see Heaven."
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Arlo Creede
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Profession: Traveler
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Mon Jul 16, 2018 11:38 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Magic Beans
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: no

Requested Rewards:
Vega

Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Standing perfectly still
Acrobatics: Moving your weight in time with your partner
Detection: Recognising when you've stepped on a trap
Detection: Spotting a tripwire
Intimidation: Where I'm going to shove that.
Navigation: Map reading from hand drawn maps
Navigation: Getting a rough sense of direction
Persuasion: Just stick to the story
Persuasion: Magic beans are real.
Strength: Working together to lift a stone lid
Unarmed Combat: Push and pull in a scuffle


Loot: 1 x very old coin.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: yes please if applicable
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A


Arlo

Acrobatics: Not colliding with someone who is standing suddenly still
Acting: Appearing to be less of a threat than you are
Acting: Playing along when they underestimate you
Navigation: Map reading from hand drawn maps
Navigation: Getting a rough sense of direction
Persuasion: Logic is nigh on impossible with Vega
Strength: Working together to lift a stone lid
Tactics: Replacing weight with weight
Tactics: Puzzle solving
Unarmed Combat: Push and pull in a scuffle
Unarmed Combat: Punching bugs
Unarmed Combat: Fighting mass (small) opponents

Loot: 1 x masterwork dagger
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes please, if appropriate.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: N/A
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Max
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Wed Jul 18, 2018 1:18 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Sisters
City/Area: Slags Deep, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Violence. Language.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Mercedes:
Unarmed Combat: Resisting a Choke by Grappling
Unarmed Combat: Roundhouse Kick
Unarmed Combat: Striking Sensitive Areas Of the Body-weight
Unarmed Combat: Throwing Body-weight into a Strike
Defiance: Iron-Sand Moves Very Slowly
Tactics: How To Catch an Opponent Off-guard
Tactics: The Best Defense Is a Strong Offense
Tactics: Monitoring Ether Usage

Non Skill:
Mer: Fish-Man hybrid creatures
Mer: Can Breathe Under Water
Mer: Don't have to communicate verbally
Location: The Stronghold

Max:
Blades (Gladius): Cutting What Binds You
Blades (Gladius): Plunging Through the Chest
Blades (Gladius): Parrying a Spear
Resistance: The Sting of a Rusalka's Acid
Swimming: Holding Your Breath
Swimming: Flutter Kick
Swimming: Light Signals the Surface
Swimming: Diving Beneath the Surface

Non-Skill:
Rusalkis: Higher Levels Can Summon Twisters
Rusalkis: Higher Levels Possess an Octopus Familiar
Rusalkis: Higher Levels Can Shoot Acid from Hands
Rusalkis Familiar: Venomous
Turbulent Waters: Can Be Used in a Deep Pool
Turbulent Waters: Other Rusalka Are Immune

Loot: Gladius for Max; Mer Totem for Mercedes
Injuries/Overstepping: Assortment of minor lacerations
Renown: Yes, for successfully invading and staking claim over a coveted, well-known resource in Slags Deep.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes, for Mercedes.
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Faith
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Wed Jul 18, 2018 1:23 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Augustin Experience
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Job thread. Sorry!

Requested Rewards:
Faith

Knowledge:
Design: Fashion: Beauty is in the eye of the beholder
Design: Fashion: Different fabrics behave differently
Design: Fashion: Ensure that you give alternatives
Design: Fashion: Check every detail
Design: Fashion: Satin is a common accessory / edging
Textile Production: An integral part of the design process
Textile Production: The best way to ensure a bespoke outfit is with bespoke fabric
Textile Production: Bespoke abilities need to be considered at a production level.

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Max already
Collaboration: Yes (Pepper has gone on hiatus, so only one post, but was a collab)
Magic EXP: N/A
"To be free is not merely to cast off one's chains, but to live in a way that respects and enhances the freedom of others."

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