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Review Requests 2.1.5

Sun Jul 08, 2018 9:07 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Debts Repaid
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: Allusions to rape and murder
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Empathy: Emotions as Colors
Intelligence: Attentive Listening to gather Information
(I'm open to any others you might glean from this)

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Gwen: My Empath Mentor
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: I don't think so. Only the initiation was touched upon in the thread
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Victor Amielle
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Review Requests 2.1.5

Mon Jul 09, 2018 3:45 am

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Thread Name: [Lysoria] A Walk Around Town
City/Area: Lysoria
Notes/Warnings: no

Requested Rewards:
Jonathan Burr
Knowledge:
Stealth: Sneaking up on someone
Etiquette: It's not polite to wake someone up with a monster.
Etiquette: Try not sneaking into people's bedrooms.
Etiquette: Behaving around nobles.
Etiquette: Revealing mutations in the right company.
Etiquette: Don't run!
Seduction: Bravely running away.
Seduction: Complimenting appearances.
Seduction: Arm around the shoulder move.
Seduction: Learning to wait.
Seduction: Admitting attraction.
Seduction: Physical contact.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: yes
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A

Victor
Discipline: Keeping your cool in an unexpected situation
Discipline: Trying not to show any sign of weakness
Endurance: Running after somebody
Etiquette: How to eat a roll correctly
Etiquette: Don't do the servants' work for them!
Etiquette: Don't have a discussion in front of somebody's bedroom
Interrogation: Sometimes you need to be direct
Intimidation: I have other toys!
Leadership: Telling servants what to do
Persuasion: Asking someone to give you time to sort out your feelings
Seduction: Physical contact
Stealth: Walking on your tiptoes

Jonathan Burr: Is attracted to me
Mutation: The Taste of a Harvester

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes. They were seen. There'll probably be rumours.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: N/A
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Jonathan Burr
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Mon Jul 09, 2018 2:28 pm

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Thread Name: Deoch Daire
City/Area:Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Fieldcraft: using a pit under a fire to help it gain oxygen.
Fieldcraft: lining a fire pit with stones.
Fieldcraft: A lean-to as a shelter.
Fieldcraft: Construction of a lean-to
Fieldcraft: A fire is necessary to keep warm.
Fieldcraft: making your camp.
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP:No.
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Kasoria
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Review Requests 2.1.5

Wed Jul 11, 2018 1:10 am

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Thread Name: The Risen
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Not really... Mild Language?
Requested Rewards:

Three, maybe four parts to come. Enjoy the starter!

Knowledge:
Cooking: Crispy Bacon and Fried Eggs
Cooking: Saving Bacon Grease for Future Meals
Discipline: Not Going Back To Prison
Endurance: Completing a Grueling Exercise
Meditation: Your Mind in One Place, Your Body in Another
Strength: The "Toad-Bird" Exercise


Non-Skill Knowledge:
Etzos: The Forgotten Cells, Hall of Rule and Reprimand

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Nyet
Collaboration: Nein
Magic EXP: Non
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Wed Jul 11, 2018 7:02 am

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Thread Name: Big Trouble in Little Korlasir
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Devin is going shopping and getting on the poor NPC's nerves!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: The heat inside a forge
Strength: Lifting a polearm
Strength: Lifting a big hammer
Strength: The proper diet is important
Strength: If you want to grow stronger, you need to train regularly
Strength: Upending a treasure chest

Location: Scalvoris: Little Korlasir
NPC: Hurk: Owner of Little Korlasir
NPC: Hurk: Blacksmith

Loot: 20 crossbow bolts
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: I'm not sure. Do I get Renown for being really annoying?
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: no
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Review Requests 2.1.5

Fri Jul 13, 2018 3:35 pm

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Thread Name: Man Of Steel
City/Area: Yithiral, Ivorian
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Xander:
Knowledge:
Intelligence: Recruiting new eyes and ears
Intelligence: Only tell your sources what they need to know
Intelligence: Don't press potential sources too hard
Investigation: Asking straight questions gets straight answers
Investigation: Befriend those who could tell you something
Discipline: Not telling too much to a stranger
Discipline: Being comfortable around a giant being
Bladed combat (longsword): Certain swords are designed for certain styles
Bladed combat (longsword): Nothing will ever be as perfect for you as a custom made sword
Loot: -10GN for weapons sharpened
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Probably not
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Varlum:
Knowledge:
Smithing: Gentle strokes
Smithing: Repairs on a blade
Smithing: Specific angles to hammer
Smithing: Mixing powerful and gentle hits
Strength: Hammering metal
Strength: Conserving muscle power
Strength: Hard hits when forging
Strength: Using multiple muscles
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Don't think so
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Sat Jul 14, 2018 4:23 am

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Thread Name: For Safety's Sake
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Devin
Knowledge:
Acting: Making your voice sound deeper
Acting: Playing a fortune teller
Acting: A fake sigh
Deception: Lying about your name
Deception: Telling people what they want to hear
Deception: Lying about the future will bring
Deception: Sometimes you need to think on your feet
Discipline: Trying not to freak out
Disguise: Using a potion to change your voice helps
Endurance: Carrying a lot of stuff for an extended amount of time
Persuasion: I have to eat, I need the money!

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Rynata: Wanted me to tell her her fortune
Rynata: I told her that the love of her life is blonde and has blue eyes
Rynata: I told her that it will rain blood in Vhalar

Loot: 1gn
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: Yes please
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Rynata
Knowledge:
Detection: Noticing a new addition to a place
Etiquette: A polite farewell
Intelligence: Spotting vague information
Intelligence: Accepting information with a grain of salt
Negotiation: Getting the other to name a price
Negotiation: Caution when dealing with mysterious strangers
Negotiation: The future in exchange for coin
Negotiation: Being generous to ensure good will
Persuasion: Presenting a plan with an attractive outcome
Persuasion: Appealing to someone's conscience
Persuasion: Knowing when to back off

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Theophilus of Viden: A cryptic fortune teller
Scalvoris: Impending cataclysm in Vhalar?!
Rowan: Foretold love interest?!

Loot: -1gn
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: probably not
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Sat Jul 14, 2018 2:48 pm

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Thread Name: Horribly Unprepared
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: no

Requested Rewards:
Faith
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Untangling yourself from a net
Acrobatics: Jumping down from a trap
Fieldcraft: Good footwear is a real bonus.
Fieldcraft: Never underestimate the value of equipment
Fieldcraft: Jungles have bugs. Lots of bugs

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: yes
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A

Padraig
Acrobatics: Untangling yourself from a net
Acrobatics: Jumping down from a trap
Detection: Spotting residue
Fieldcraft: Good footwear is a real bonus.
Fieldcraft: Never underestimate the value of equipment
Fieldcraft: Jungles have bugs. Lots of bugs
Strength: Catching a falling person

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: NA
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: N/A
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Sat Jul 14, 2018 3:38 pm

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Thread Name: An Uneventful Shopping Trip
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: no

Requested Rewards:
Faith
Knowledge:
Design: Planning functional and beautiful spaces
Design: Curtains for a dressing room.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A

Padraig
Investigation: Following a thief
Investigation: Techniques for apprehending
Celarion: Light shield is a very useful technique in conjunction with another

Loot: 150gn ( bounty in Rharne: here) + 1 bag of marbles.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: N/A
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Review Requests 2.1.5

Sun Jul 15, 2018 2:47 am

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Thread Name: Stranger in a Strange Land
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Lei'lira

Skill Knowledge

Caregiving: juggling three small kids isn't easy
Caregiving: young children throw fits to express their needs and feelings in the only way they know how
Cooking: beer can be used as an ingredient
Endurance: the pain of a dislocated shoulder
Linguistics: is the study of languages
Linguistics: the docks are a good place to pick up a few words in a new or unfamiliar language because so many different languages can be found spoken there
Meditation: it is impossible to meditate in a crowd
Mount; Horse: signs of a panicking horse
Mount; Horse: a panicked horse is a dangerous horse
Mount; Horse: a poorly trained horse will ignore the commands of their rider
Mount; Horse: poorly trained horses shouldn't be ridden in crowded areas
Mount; Horse: even in a panic, a well trained horse that hasn't reached the point of bolting will respond to the calming efforts of a person it trusts



Non Skill Knowledge

Lei'lira: is terrified of men
Lei'lira: likes heights
Lei'lira: understands animals better than she understands people
Lei'lira: has a very low tolerance for alcohol

Lei'luna: hates crowds as much as Lei'lira does

NPC: Pythera Venora
Pythera Venora: also called Valkyr
Pythera Venora: a noble of House Venora
Pythera Venora: used to be a Skyrider before being kicked out for violent tendencies
Pythera Venora: a cruel, violent woman
Pythera Venora: hates Vivian
Pythera Venora: likes to corrupt and defile people

Vivian: loves looking at things from high up
Vivian: wanted to be a Skyrider because of her love of heights
Vivian: hates Pythera Venora

Location: Rharne
Rharne: has good farmland
Rharne: the soldiers are rougher than the Iron Hand in Rynmere, but they are also more honest
Rharne: docks
Rharne: Dust Quarter
Rharne: elevator leading from Dust Quarter to Sky Quarter

Dust Quarter: full of run down homes that could fit right in with the ones found in Lowtown
Dust Quarter: is filthy; garbage, and sewage fill the streets
Dust Quarter: home to those who can't afford to live anywhere else
Dust Quarter: not a safe place
Dust Quarter: likely to have a lot of crime

Wine: an acquired taste
Wine: very bitter and acidic
Wine: is made out of fermented grapes
Wine: doesn't taste like grapes
Wine: the more you drink, the better tolerance you have for it


Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: Lei'lira's shoulder was dislocated. While it has been put back into place, the lingering pain will last for several trials.
Renown: Maybe slight for trying to calm a panicked horse in a crowd?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Vivian

Skill Knowledge

Medicine: Using alcohol to help someone sleep
Medicine: Knowing that sometimes, all you can do to help is listen
Etiquette: Making sure your guests are cared for
Etiquette: Offering guests a drink
Animal Training: Dogs are good for helping people relax


Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: none
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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