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Review Requests 2.1.5

Fri Jul 06, 2018 7:19 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: You are a person...
City/Area: Almund, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Gore, nudity, death
Requested Rewards:

Ko Ko:
Negotiation: Pleading your case
Unarmed Combat: Cutting off air with rope
Unarmed Combat: Mounting someone's back
Unarmed Combat: Shoving a person with force
Unarmed Combat: Throwing a woman by her hair
Unarmed Combat: Using nails to gouge eyes

Non-Skill:
Shovia: In the wrong place at the wrong time
Mercedes: Forced me to kill
Mercedes: Will hurt me if I raise a hand to him

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Broken nose [in memory]
Renown: You decide.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Sat Jul 07, 2018 11:33 am

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Thread Name: Quarantine zone No2
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: spoof/satire
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N/a
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (No)
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Sat Jul 07, 2018 1:01 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Three Stages of Grief
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: A bit graphic at one point when the body is burnt. Also it is a memory thread of an active PC which has been approved by Chronicle.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Caregiving: Support the weight of the weak
Caregiving: Feeding the sick
Caregiving: Keep ‘em warm
Medicine: Lapse in recovery
Medicine: Symptoms determine the herbs
Psychology: The Strength of Denial

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Hmmm, caring for the sick perhaps and organizing a funeral.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Sat Jul 07, 2018 6:20 pm

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Thread Name: Tea with Faith
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope. Adam retired, so just claiming for Faith.

Requested Rewards:
Faith
Knowledge:
None

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope
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Sat Jul 07, 2018 7:20 pm

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Thread Name: Until the Last Drop
City/Area: Slags Deep, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Violence. Language.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Mercedes:
Discipline: Remaining Vigilant Under Stress
Discipline: Battling outraged outbursts
Meditation: Keep your eyes closed
Meditation: Pay attention to your surroundings
Tactics: Baiting an opponent into attacking
Tactics: Remain on guard at all times
Tactics: Defensive Tactics
Tactics: Applicable in high stress situations

Max:
Blades (Dagger): Slashing with a Dagger
Blades (Dagger): Stabbing with a Dagger
Blades (Dagger): Aiming for the Chest
Detection: Finding Your Target in the Dark
Detection: The Sound of Broken Stone
Detection: The Sound of a Blade Through Air
Detection: The Taste of Blood
Detection: Confidence in Someone's Voice

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Some bruising.
Renown: Neg.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
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Sat Jul 07, 2018 7:32 pm

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Thread Name: A Second Smile
City/Area: Slags Deep, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Violence. Language,
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Mercedes:
Tactics: Planning Ahead During Combat
Tactics: Missing an attack purposefully
Tactics: Marking an opponent
Tactics: Attempting to Predict Movement
Tactics: Never Underestimate an Opponent
Tactics: Observing an Opponents Attack Patterns
Tactics: Can be used in the heat of combat
Defiance: Iron-Sand
Defiance: Embrace can be used in a variety of ways

Max:
Acrobatics: Fitting Through Small Spaces
Blades (Dagger): Slitting an Opponent's Wrist
Blades (Dagger): Slashing a Throat
Detection: A Naerikk's Shadow and Illusion Forms
Detection: The Sound of a Sword Being Unsheathed
Leadership: Giving Orders, Not Requests
Leadership: Leading Allies into Battle
Stealth: Sneaking Back into Familiar Territory
Tactics: Forming a Basic Plan
Tactics: Accounting for Known Enemy Strengths

Non-Skill:
Naerikk: Gift of Shadows

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Minor
Renown: Yes. For attacking a well-guarded and envied resource.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
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Sat Jul 07, 2018 9:38 pm

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Thread Name: Bested by a Beast
City/Area: Augiery; Started this thread before Nymph finished the Naer edits so some things are a little confusing, but I don't think it warrants a complete re-write.
Notes/Warnings: Violence.
Requested Rewards: 10XP
Knowledge:
Skill
Unarmed Combat: The Zone of Control
Unarmed Combat: How to Replicate Strong Footwork
Unarmed Combat: Show No Mercy
Strength: What is Muscle Fatigue
Endurance: Being Choked
Acrobatics: How to Recover Your Center of Balance

Non-Skill
Lotharro: All Male Race
Lotharro: Possess Incredible Endurance
Lotharro: Animalistic & Formidable
Location: Uthaldria
Uthaldria: Monster City of the Lotharro

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Yes.
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Review Requests 2.1.5

Sat Jul 07, 2018 10:58 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Shackles and Shadows
City/Area: Scalvoris, Almund
Notes/Warnings: Alcohol and slight seduction. Since Adam retired so suddenly, I had to rewrite what I originally wrote to wrap up the thread. My total word count is 1600+.
Requested Rewards:15xp
Skill Knowledge:
Poisons: Nightbane
Poisons: Capable of Affecting Emea
Discipline: Resist the Advances of Lesser Beings
Seduction: How to Exploit Sexuality
Seduction: Playing Hard to Get
Seduction: The Best Things Are Worth Waiting For
Seduction: Make Them Desire You, Say No
Deception: Use an Ambiguous Tone

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Almund: Buckle and Chain
Adam Micheals: Gives (Too) Many Compliments
Adam Micheals: Seductive, but Too Eager
Adam Micheals: A Generous Lover

Loot: Mostly filled bottle of very expensive Scalvoran Schnapps (Strawberry).
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Small - Rumors surface that Navyri is a tease, or at the very least, not easy to tame and challenging to please? :D
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No
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Review Requests 2.1.5

Sun Jul 08, 2018 4:57 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Well... That's new
City/Area: Sweetvine Forest, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Not really
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Becoming: Listening to the whims of your spark
Becoming Ability: Assimilation
Becoming: Assimilating a totem
Field Craft: Removing Poison Ivy
Medicine: Soothing poison ivy itch with water and mud
Resistance: Poison Ivy
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (Yes, becoming)
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Review Requests 2.1.5

Sun Jul 08, 2018 6:24 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Secrets and Lies
City/Area: Slags Deep, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Language. Domestic Violence.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Mercedes:
Tactics: Multi-directional attacks
Tactics: Paying close attention to thee environment
Intelligence: Gathering information based on past experiences.
Detection: The sound of Movement against rock
Psychology: People can have blind faith
Defiance: Iron-Sand Limbs
Defiance: Iron Sand is heavy, and Dense
Tactics: Blades can be countered with hard objects
Psychology: Manipulating an opponent using rhetorical questions
Tactics: Making an opponent move by applying pressure

Max:
Acrobatics: Sliding
Blades (Gladius): Stringing Slashes Together
Blades (Gladius): Swinging at a General Shape
Discipline: Refusing to Have Beliefs Shaken
Intelligence: Cross-referencing Stories
Intelligence: Entertaining Other Theories
Intelligence: Weeding Through Facts
Intelligence: Coming Up With Alternative Explanations
Intelligence: Deciding on What Will Confirm Suspicions
Intelligence: Dismissing Nonsensical Theories
Intelligence: Gathering Information Based on Past Experiences

Non-Skill:
Domain Magic (Defiance): How Defiers Can Fake Death
Stormy Skies: Providing a Distraction

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Extensive bruising.
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
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