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Victor Amielle
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Joined: Wed Jul 26, 2017 3:29 pm
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Profession: Researcher
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Thu Jun 14, 2018 4:17 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Academia Meet Research
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: N/A

Requested Rewards:
Victor Amielle

Skill Knowledge:
Aberration: The Balance
Aberration: Initiation: You don't choose the Harvester, the Harvester chooses you
Aberration: Initiation: You don't know if the Harvester will bond with you or kill you
Aberration: Has a break-in period
Research: Taking advantage of an opportunity for research
Research: Study first, pass judgement later
Research: Interviewing your research subject
Research: There is much to be gained from researching forbidden subjects
Research: Planning to collaborate on a research project with somebody
Transmutation: Corrosion: Allows you to destroy as well as create
Transmutation: As individual as the mage who wields it

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Harvesters: Choose their own form
Harvesters: Respect strength
Harvesters: Satisfy their mage's needs
Harvesters: May have once have been mortal mages
Jonathan Burr: Transmuter and Aberrant
Jonathan Burr: Has a Harvester called Hob
Jonathan Burr: Wasn't Hob's first mage
Jonathan Burr: Had another Harvester before Hob
Jonathan Burr: Wants to make a place where no mages have to hide their spark
Jonathan Burr: Wants to collaborate with me

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: Yes

Jonathan Burr

Knowledge:
Transmutation: Quality of Fire's Heat
Transmutation: As individual as the mages who wield it
Transmutation: Corrosion - can be used to decay materials as through time.
Research: sharing your interests
Research: Asking questions to learn more
Research: Being the subject of an impromptu interview
Research: A research proposal
Research: Seek knowledge first, not violence
Intimidation: Talking a big game.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP:Yes
Last edited by Victor Amielle on Sat Jun 16, 2018 2:18 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Velaine Krome
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Thu Jun 14, 2018 6:03 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Similar but Not the Same
City/Area: Endor, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Etiquette: Keeping Your Best Behavior
Meditation: Stilling Your Mind
Meditation: Pushing Away Excessive Worries
Empathy: Noticing When Someone Tries To Read You
Empathy: Recognizing Another Empath
Empathy: Managing Strings of Fear
Empathy: Quilting Is Important To Ward Off Unwanted Visitors
Empathy: Avoiding Eye Contact So Empathy Doesn’t Work On You
Empathy: Pulsing Strings of Annoyance

Alice Endor: Nathaniel’s Cousin
Alice Endor: An Empath
Alice Endor: Blunt With Her Words

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
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Velaine Krome
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Thu Jun 14, 2018 6:54 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Gracious Host
City/Area: Venora, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Politics: Venorans Have Lavish Taste
Politics: Krome is Still Indebted to Venora
Politics: Donating to Charity
Etiquette: Greeting the Host of a Party
Etiquette: Accepting an Offered Drink
Etiquette: Replying to a Compliment
Etiquette: Greeting a Sergeant
Etiquette: Not Interruptin Ongoing Conversations

Oliver Venora: Almost Became Your Betrothed
Oliver Venora: An Astute Politician
Oliver Venora: In a Relationship with Charlotte Warrick
Nathaniel Endor: Makes You Feel Unbalanced
Nathaniel Endor: Doesn’t Get Along With Xander
Xander Andaris: Doesn’t Get Along With Nate
Charlotte Warrick: In a Relationship with Oliver Venora
Charlotte Warrick: Sergeant in the Skyriders

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: For attending a ball and noble social niceties maybe?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Alistair
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Race: Human
Profession: Doctor
Renown: +520
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Thu Jun 14, 2018 10:08 am

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Thread Name: All Black, All Blue
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Meh

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Alistair
Transmutation: Corrosive Ether Missiles
Transmutation: Flinging an Ether Missile at high velocity
Transmutation: Shape-changing Ether Missiles
Transmutation: Ether Missile: Seemingly stops upon hitting organic material
Detection: Noticing fine details in craftsmanship
Investigation: The way in which a malicious deed was done can verify its malice

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes
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Jonathan Burr
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Posts: 353
Joined: Mon Mar 12, 2018 12:01 am
Race: Human
Profession: Academic
Renown: +45
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Thu Jun 14, 2018 12:05 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Making a Point
City/Area: Ne'haer - On the Road to Lysoria
Notes/Warnings:

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Aberration: Reality changes inside of the sphere
Intimidation: Using a past victim to make a point about the present
Intimidation: Killing a man to make a point to his companions
Intimidation: Displaying dominance through confidence
Whips (Bullwhip) - Targeting a man's face more accurately
Whips (Bullwhip) - Learning to strike from a mounted position


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes
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Velaine Krome
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Thu Jun 14, 2018 12:28 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Into the Pits
City/Area: Krome, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Quest thread, but since both of the mods had retired figured I should just turn it in
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Deception: Coming Up With a Fake Name
Deception: Pretending To Be Lovers
Meditation: Ignore the Crowd, Focus On Your Opponent
Unarmed Combat: Go For the Eyes
Unarmed Combat: Using Arms to Shield Your Face
Empathy: Touch Makes the Strands Brighter
Defiance: Reaching For Your Spark
Defiance: Combining Magic with Fighting
Defiance: Using the Earth to Hold Your Ground

Cormag: Trustworthy or Not?
Cormag: Servant By Day, Fighter By Night
Tengre: In Charge of the Pits
Tengre: Has an Ulterior Motive

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
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Doran Cooney
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Posts: 459
Joined: Wed Oct 26, 2016 8:10 am
Race: Human
Profession: Performer
Renown: +40
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Thu Jun 14, 2018 2:54 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: What Do You Do?
City/Area: Rynmere, Venora
Notes/Warnings: Feel free to just post the points! : )
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Nu.
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Caius Gawyne
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Joined: Wed Nov 01, 2017 11:31 pm
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Arbitrary Lord
Renown: +164
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Thu Jun 14, 2018 6:27 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Not Your Sarding Hero
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Dead thread. My contribution is 1,533 words in two posts.

Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge (8):
• Research: Knowing when your sources are limited
• Research: Gleaning facts even from the most paltry of sources
• Stealth: Using the darkness of Cylus to your advantage
• Stealth: Leaping from the shadows for a surprise attack
• Unarmed Combat (Grappling): The shoulder slam
• Unarmed Combat (Grappling): Using a grappled opponent as a body shield
• Unarmed Combat (Grappling): Recovering your footing
• Blades (Saber): The quick riposte

Non-Skill Knowledge:
• Religion: Mastes, Immortal of Compulsion, Trickery, and Vices
• Religion: Kata, Immortal of Insanity, Injustice, and Ruin
• Religion: Syroa, Immortal of Acting, Fury, Lust, and Transformation
• Religion: Immortals have allies and enemies amongst themselves
• Religion: Mastes and Kata are allies with Syroa
• Religion: Mastes and Kata are enemies of Ziell

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: Ew. Never.
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Vega
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Posts: 1207
Joined: Sun Jan 08, 2017 5:43 am
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Wandering, wondering.
Renown: +310
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Thu Jun 14, 2018 11:47 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Generosity
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None. Possibly dull....

Requested Rewards:
Vega

Knowledge:
Musical Instrument: Harp: Basic position for playing
Musical Instrument: Piano: Musical notation for each hand
Musical Instrument: Piano: Will help you learn to play the harp
Musical Instrument: Piano: Musical notation has patterns which help playing.
Musical Instrument: Piano: Soft pedal changes timbre
Musical Instrument: Piano: When you press a key, a hammer strikes up to three strings

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: An antique fiddle. This is a renown reward and is PSF approved here. It has the following ability:
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Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: Nope
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Doran Cooney
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Profession: Performer
Renown: +40
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Fri Jun 15, 2018 8:27 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Where Did You Come From?
City/Area: Rynmere, Between Andaris and Venora
Notes/Warnings: Please feel free to skim!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Stealth: Tensing One's Muscles to Keep From Shifting Around
Stealth: Ignoring the Sound of One's Own Heartbeat
Stealth: Moving in Time With Another's Footsteps
Stealth: Strike First
Stealth: Waking Another by Holding a Hand Over the Other's Mouth

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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