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Adruria
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: You're Welcome!
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Nothing but Stupidity

Adruria

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics:Graceful Movements
Dancing: More than just Twirling
Dancing: Men Normally Lead
Dancing: Requires Grace
Persuasion: Asking for a Coin
Djas: Mortalborn
Djas: Can't Dance
Djas: Treats Me Like a Child
Loot: Body chain (silver) containing Djas' 'token' (not sure the exact price maybe around 12gn?)
Injuries/Overstepping: Just her pride
Renown: If deemed fit
Collaboration: Yes, Oberan
Magic EXP: Nope

Oberan

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: the look of a Naerikk
Detection: spotting a person of interest in a crowd
Acrobatics: Holding an odd pose
Acrobatics: Maintaining balance without moving
Acrobatics: Living Statue
Acrobatics: Dodging Thrown Pebbles
Acrobatics: Minimalist movements
Unarmed Combat: Novices are unpredictable
Stealth: Colorful uniforms draw attention
Adruria: Odd Naerikk
Loot: Some Money
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: If deemed fit
Magic EXP: Nope
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Thread Name: Helping Hands: Slender Blue Ones!
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nurp. Medical thread.
Requested Rewards:

Rynata

Knowledge:
Strength: Weight distribution helps ease the strain
Strength: Lift with the knees
Endurance: Carrying heavy objects
Acrobatics: Balancing on one foot
Detection: The scent of herbs
Navigation: Reading maps of city streets
Medicine: Raft bandage
Medicine: Keep burns wet
Medicine: Identifying the severity of burns
Medicine: Removing clothing from sites of injury
Medicine: Breathing for patients who cannot
BM: Receiving proper paperwork

Non Skill
Location: Order of Adunih Outpost
Faction: Order of Adunih
Hookor: Studies medicine at the academy
Faith: Healer of the Order


Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Yes, probably. Maybe 10?
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


Hookor

Knowledge:
Medicine: Triaging Burns
Medicine: Treating Burns
Medicine: Treating Wounds - The Raft
Medicine: Treating Wounds - The Poultice
Medicine: Assessing the ABCs
Medicine: Smoke Inhalation
Medicine: Thinking on your feet (finding equipment for intubation on fly)
Medicine: Anesthesia (milk of poppy)
Medicine: Creams and Ointments
Leadership: Running a Code (saving the young girl)
Surgery: Intubation (actual procedure of intubating)
Intelligence: Faith is a member of the Order
Intelligence: Redirection is the key to anxiety (no counting when in charge)

Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: As Rynata
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


Faith

Knowledge:
Leadership: Sometimes you just have to make do with what you've got
Leadership: Prioritising where you can
Socialization: A guided tour
Socialization: Helping others feel at ease.


Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: At maximum.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

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Jonathan Burr
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Thread Name: Practice Makes Polished
City/Area: Outside of Ne'Haer, near Alistair's residence.
Notes/Warnings: Self-training thread. Jon is exploring the applications of the transmutation ability Brilliance.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Transmutation - Brilliance: Focusing light in your hand.
Transmutation - Brilliance: Can be small or big, bright or dim.
Transmutation - Brilliance: Can produce a glow in any part of the body.
Transmutation - Brilliance: Produces a bright flash to blind enemies.
Transmutation - Brilliance: Exists for as long as it's been fed ether.
Discipline: Refocusing yourself after expending ether.
Loot: N/a
Injuries/Overstepping: N/a
Renown: N/a
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Absolutely
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Torqin
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Thread Name:No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Mild Violence. This is a Memory Thread to explain Torqin's exile from Rynmere proper, and establishing his relationship with Celeste.

Celeste
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Acting: Friendly and upbeat
Acting: Carefree
Acting: Like I'm supposed to be here
Animal Husbandry: Talk to your horse
Deception: Add in a little casual touch to make people think it's ok
Discipline: Trying not to show the help that you're afraid
Discipline: Promising that you will not allow someone you care for to be hurt
Endurance: Being dragged by your shoulder is painful
Endurance: Blows to the face cause immense pain
Etiquette: Be polite to the help.

Non Skills:
Torqin: My friend
Torqin: My saviour
Torqin: Always welcome where I am
Torqin: Risked everything to protect me

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic EXP: (No)

Torqin

Skill Knowledge
  1. Detection: The scent of alcohol on someone's breath
  2. Discipline: Maintaining a daily routine
  3. Discipline: Waking early to start the day
  4. Endurance: Using slow motions during a work out to increase its difficulty
  5. Endurance: Repeatedly swinging a heavy rope
  6. Etiquette: Treat noble children as if they are adults
  7. Strength: Carrying a hay bale
  8. Strength: Standard Chin Ups
  9. Unarmed Combat (Heart of Stone): Shoving in the chest
  10. Unarmed Combat (Heart of Stone): Grabbing your opponent's weapon
  11. Unarmed Combat (Heart of Stone): Striking first while you have the element of surprise
Non-Skill Knowledge
  1. Location: Astedia Estate
    Location: Astedia Stables
    Contact: Toddy - Stable boy at Astedia
    Celeste Andaris: Daughter of the Andaris Line
    Celeste Andaris: Owns a white Warrick Whinny named Sparkle
    Baron Benji Andaris: An abusive drunkard
    Self: I rescued Celeste Andaris from her abusive father at great cost
    Celeste Andaris: Her grandfather will protect her
    Celeste Andaris: The only person to truly be leader
    Celeste Andaris: She saved my life with her silence
    Celeste Andaris: I owe her everything

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic EXP: (No)
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Alistair
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Thread Name: Rusty Veins
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Minor violence at the end

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 12 Knowledges for Ali, 11 for Jon

Alistair:
Necromancy: Protocol: Can be used with signals and voice
Necromancy: Protocol: Typically used to add to a minion's routine
Necromancy: Siphon: Can be channeled off of wither or sap
Necromancy: Siphon: Adds a life-stealing energy to withering and sapping
Necromancy: Siphon: Exhilarating, unparalleled rush
Teaching: Attempting to minimize your student's flaws
Teaching: Being stern with your students
Teaching: Not letting irritation impact your teaching
Teaching: Teachers need to learn in peace, too
Acrobatics: Slipping a large frame through small windows
Stealth: Sneakily listening to conversations

Jonathan:
Discipline: Learning to ask fewer questions.
Discipline: containing exuberance
Discipline: Probing into another's past
Stealth: sneaking into a lesson
Stealth: writing something down without getting caught.
Stealth: Dont knock things over!
Stealth: watching through a door crack.
Stealth: keeping quiet
Aberration: There is no reversing flaying
Aberration: You can do something even the immortals cannot.
Aberration: Taking a soul seriously.

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes for Ali, no for Jon
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Thread Name: Life Continues
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: I have no answers. I give no explanations.
Requested Rewards:
Dream
Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: (how much and for what?)
Collaboration: Yes. With Robin.
Magic EXP: No
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Doran Cooney
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Thread Name: Debtor's Dilemma
City/Area: Rynmere/Venora
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Unarmed Combat: Blocking a Roundhouse to the Face With Both Forearms
Unarmed Combat: Headbutting in Close Proximity
Unarmed Combat: Roundhouse Kick to the Torso
Unarmed Combat: Short Jab
Unarmed Combat: Follow-up Jab
Strength: Using Your Strength to Increase the Force of Punches
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Rynata
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Profession: Merchant
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Thread Name: The Crossroads
City/Area: Scalvoris, Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Decided to turn this in.
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge: (3+1 posts = 9 knowledges)
Rhetoric: Eye catching slander
Intelligence: Identifying lack of supporting evidence
Intelligence: Collecting information from individual sources
Investigation: Interviewing potential sources of information
Acrobatics: Dodging a lunging attack
Acrobatics: Breaking a fall with one's arms
Socialization: Recovery from an awkward introduction
Tactics: Be friendly but ready for anything
Stealth: Conversing away from prying eyes and ears

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Location: Scalvoris Town, The Cabin Boy
Location: The Cabin Boy, prints rubbish

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: A little for that public display of weirdness
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Thread Name: Relief Effort 6: Feeding
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Part 6 of a 16 (ish) part series. This is the end of Day 1 Aegis to review please
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge:
Baking: Twice cooked bread
Baking: Extra large croutons
Leadership: Standing up for yourself
Persuasion: Not arguing, just standing your ground.
Writing: Clear statement of facts.
Writing: Expressing emotions through the written word.

Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Yes, probably. Maybe 10?
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: no

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Max
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Thread Name: And It All Came Crashing Down
City/Area: Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Faith:
Caregiving: Sometimes, the best thing to do is act like nothing's wrong.
Logistics: Means of communication when out of contact
Logistics: Organising rescues from the rubble
Logistics: Always have a back up where you're lifting people
Surgery: Immobilizing the patient for movement
Strength: Slow and steady lifting of a dead weight.
Strength: Working in conjunction with another to ensure maximum efficiency
Strength: Holding a rope and using your strength to keep steady.

Max:
Discipline: Not Letting an Injury Slow You Down
Discipline: Mind Over Matter
Endurance: Persisting Despite Inferior Strength
Endurance: Battling Through Burning Muscles
Strength: Use Your Legs
Strength: Controlling Someone's Descent
Strength: Using Arms to Pull
Strength: Keeping Something Heavy Elevated

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes, for relief effort aid.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
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