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Sephira
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Thread Name: Finding Balance
City/Area: Faldrass/Spirit's Rest Oasis
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Detection: Taking notice of an Attuner's Witchmark
Meditation: Deep breathing helps with focus
Meditation: Visualizing a peaceful place
Meditation: Let go of negative emotions
Meditation: Set aside your guilt
Meditation: Closing your eyes to calm yourself

Non-Skill
Domain Magic - Sparks : Sparks are like living things
Domain Magic - Sparks : A mage must find a balance between themselves and their Spark
Domain Magic - Sparks: Sparks can have their own desires

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown:No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP:No
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Ryder
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Thread Name: That's the Spirit
City/Area: Just outside Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Discipline: Staying on alert at all times
Discipline: Being skeptical despite the promise of power
Discipline: Remaining calm in front of spirits
Endurance: A small incision in the hand
Intimidation: Hollow threats can still be scary
Intimidation: Threatening with a cold glare

Loot: A sweet-ass Diri, as seen in the PSF here
Injuries/Overstepping: Small cut, nothing major
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Devin
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Thread Name: Suspicious Behaviour
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: no
Requested Rewards:

Devin

Knowledge:
Acting: Staying in character is important
Detection: The sound of people having sex
Deception: False Identity: Officer Alexander Hawthorne of the Order of the Wolf
Deception: Lying about the reason for your visit
Interrogation: Interrogating suspects
Etiquette: Introducing yourself
Intimidation: Showing people that you are armed
Intimidation: Assuring people that you know how to use your weapon
Intimidation: I have something even bigger!
Running: Running as quickly as you can to get away from a dangerous situation

Vega: An excellent actress
Vega: Not a drug dealer
Vega: Probably a cannibal
Vega: Eva Lei'nox
Vega: Speaks in tongues

Arlo Creede: Not Mister Arlo
Arlo Creede: Vega's accomplice
Arlo Creede: Not a drug dealer
Arlo Creede: Probably a cannibal
Arlo Creede: The Prince of Eternal Darkness

Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Yes, please! Devin is doing something bad!
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


Vega

Knowledge:
Discipline: Forcing yourself out of a funk
Endurance: Doing exercises to help with pain
Endurance: Physical therapy
Intimidation: Name calling
Intimidation: Shouting
Intimidation: Threatening violence
Intimidation: Giving someone a derogatory name
Investigation: Spotting the flaws in an argument
Persuasion: Putting forward an entirely reasonable argument in an entirely unreasonable way.

PC: Devin: Officer Alexander Hawthorne
PC: Devin: Officer Flopsy
PC: Devin: A Con Man?
PC: Devin: Met him in Viden
PC: Devin: May be unable to perform
PC: Devin: Member of the Order of the Wolf

Order of the Wolf: Probably made up.
Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Up to you
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no



Arlo Creede

Knowledge:
Detection: Listening to what's going on before you enter a room
Interrogation: Pointed questions to get to key facts
Intimidation: Mine's bigger than yours
Investigation: Trying to tease out the facts
Investigation: Don't give away information in an investigation
Investigation: Spotting flaws in a story
Persuasion: Pointing out when leaving is safer
Persuasion: Trying to avoid bloodshed.

PC: Devin: Officer Alexander Hawthorne
PC: Devin: Officer Flopsy
PC: Devin: A Con Man?
PC: Devin: Met him in Viden
PC: Devin: May be unable to perform
PC: Devin: Member of the Order of the Wolf

Order of the Wolf: Probably made up.
Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Up to you
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
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Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Nightshade Eld
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Thread Name: Damn Paperwork
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Doing work while in pain
Discipline: Finishing boring paperwork
Discipline: Not putting things off till the last minute
Endurance: Not getting winded while in pain
Endurance: Changes in stamina based on bodily condition
Endurance: Not throwing up
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Sick with the flu for a couple trials
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic EXP: N/A
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Celeste Andaris
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Thread Name: Bargaining Power
City/Area: Ivorian
Notes/Warnings: Mature themes.
Requested Rewards:

Tessa

Knowledge:
Acting: Appearing pleased when you are not
Acting: Appearing unconcerned
Baking: Home made bread should prove for 12 breaks.
Cooking: Combining ingredients for flavour and texture
Cooking: Roasting small new potato in their skins
Seduction: Slight expressions can make a difference.

Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown:No probably not
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: no

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Rynata
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Thread Name: Nameless But Not Forgotten
City/Area: Scalvoris, Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Not especially, just a little sad.
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Psychology: Fear of death is often fear by association
Meditation: Sitting in silence
Meditation: Focusing in one’s breathing
Discipline: Withholding selfish comments
Discipline: Working together as a team
Business Management: Filling out documents

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Slight for volunteering
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
word count: 74
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Alistair
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Thread Name: It's A Waste of Good Suffering
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Not really

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 6 posts for Ali, 11 knowledges

Alistair:
Deception: Plotting another's downfall
Deception: Playing someone's game and outmaneuvering them
Deception: Setting up a scheme
Tactics: Drawing your enemy into your playing field

Harvesters: Manipulative
Harvesters: Controlling
Harvesters: Need Killing

Jonathan:
Transmutation: Getting your concentration broken is bad.
Transmuation: Practicing and refining corrosion
Transmutation: Practicing and refining identification
Discipline: Practice over and over.
Meditation: Finding peace in repetitive action.
Aberration: The harvester must be fed.
Aberration: The Harvester is manipulative and possessive.

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Probs not
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes for Jon, no for Ali
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Torqin
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Thread Name: Blood from a Stone
City/Area: Ivorian
Notes/Warnings: Mature themes.
Requested Rewards:

Tessa

Knowledge:
Caregiving: Tending to an injured man
Caregiving: Preserving dignity
Discipline: Not showing the shame of public humiliation
Discipline: Not letting disgust show
Endurance: The resounding pain of a blow across the face
Endurance: Smiling with a split lip
Strength: Holding up a man twice your size
Strength: Walking with a deadweight


Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown:Yes, probably. Maybe 10?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: no


Torqin

Knowledge:
Unarmed Combat (Heart of Stone): Keeping your feet beneath you
Unarmed Combat (Heart of Stone): Right handed cross punch
Unarmed Combat (Heart of Stone): Kicking your opponent's leg to disrupt balance
Unarmed Combat (Heart of Stone): Defending your head and face
Unarmed Combat (Heart of Stone): Wear your opponent out, then attack
Unarmed Combat (Heart of Stone): Right handed uppercut
Unarmed Combat (Heart of Stone): Let your opponent come to you
Endurance: Receiving an uppercut to the jaw
Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: Busted Lip, Battered face, sore ribs, daze, nausea, lightly treated. Should mostly heal on own, but be quite sore for several trials.
Renown: Some for winning his first fight in the Alley.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: no
word count: 244
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Alistair
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Thread Name: Trust Me, Darling
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Some minor violence

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 5 posts for Ali, 10 knowledges; 6 posts for Jon, 11

Alistair:
Deception: Leading someone into a trap
Deception: Springing a plot
Deception: Well-done plots can lead to instant assassinations
Deception: Hiding one's motives until the last moment
Necromancy: Using undead to make false scenarios
Polearms: Spear - Shadowspin can kill spirits, too
Hunting: Harvesters are weak when manifesting
Hunting: Harvesters need to manifest when they flay
Stealth: Signaling for a stealth formation
Stealth: Using rocks as cover

Jonathan:
Aberration: Flaying binds a mage to a Harvester.
Aberration: Harvesters need to be fed.
Aberration: Harvesters can be killed.
Aberration: Breaking the sacred bond feels horrible.
Transmutation: Sharpening objects into weapons.
Transmutation: Anything can be a weapon.
Discipline: Keeping your head in a fight.
Discipline: Learning what not to say.
Discipline: Controlling one's emotions.

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes for Jon
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Max
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Thread Name: Anguished by the End
City/Area: Outside Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Merces:
Acrobatics: Narrowly Avoiding a Spear
Unarmed Combat: Counter-striking an adversary
Unarmed Combat: Strike the Face First
Unarmed Combat: Bob & Weave Weapon Strikes
Unarmed Combat: Don't Punch Armor
Unarmed Combat: Guard and Strike Simultaneously
Unarmed Combat: Close the Distance
Unarmed Combat: Infighting
Unarmed Combat: Guarding the ribcage
Unarmed Combat: Combination Punches
Unarmed Combat: Not all strikes land
Unarmed Combat: Missing causes a lack of balance
Unarmed Combat: Proper stances in combat

Max:
Blades (Dagger): Putting a Hole in a Throat
Blades (Gladius): Attacking from Horseback
Blades (Gladius): Attacking to Put an Aggressive Opponent on the Defensive
Blades (Gladius): Cutting at the Legs
Blades (Gladius): Severing the Femoral Artery
Blades (Gladius): Stick Them with the Pointy End
Blades (Gladius): Splintering a Spear Shaft
Blades (Gladius): Swing for the Back of the Neck
Blades (Gladius): Aiming for Unprotected Areas
Deception: Re-purposing Someone Else's Truth for a Convincing Lie
Endurance: Fending Off Fatigue During a Battle

Loot: Up to the reviewer's discretion. Point Bank items (Cloak of Hiding and Kindred Bracelets) for Max.
Injuries/Overstepping: Minor.
Renown: Unlikely
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes, for Merces.

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