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Doran Cooney
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Fri May 18, 2018 5:37 am

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Thread Name: The Meat of the Problem
City/Area: Rynmere/Andaris
Notes/Warnings: Minor violence? It's all pretty tame.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Twisting Your Body to Avoid Getting Knocked Down in a Crowd
Acrobatics: Stooping Low to Help Someone Up
Acrobatics: Learn Away from Punches to Reduce Impact
Acrobatics: Short Backwards Blind Hop
Acrobatics: Dodging Thrown Projectiles
Strength: Bracing for Impact of a Rioting Crowd
Strength: Maintaining Standing by Grabbing onto Something Sturdy
Strength: Supporting Another’s Weight
Unarmed Combat: Stepping Back Out of the Way of a Punch
Unarmed Combat: Ducking to Avoid a Punch
Unarmed Combat: Capitalising on an Overextended Punch to Knock One Off Balance
Endurance: Rolling With Punches

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruised jaw and knuckles
Renown: Maybe?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Etiquette: Thanking Someone for Caring for Them
Endurance: Not Fainting After Vomiting
Endurance: Forcing Oneself to Walk when Tired
Meditation: Counting Breaths to Keep Calm
Negotiation: Using Logic to Try to Prevent a Fight
Persuasion: Pleading to Get Ones Way
Socialization: Using Humor as a Distraction
Tactics: Walking Instead of Running to Avoid Suspicion

Non-skill:
Andaris: The People are Restless
Andaris: Meat Market Protest
Andaris: Shortage of Meat
Doran: Took Care of Val
Doran: Always Polite
Doran: Helps Those in Need
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruises from being elbowed and shoved around
Renown: Maybe?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Victor Amielle
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Posts: 244
Joined: Wed Jul 26, 2017 3:29 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Researcher
Renown: +135
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Fri May 18, 2018 5:42 am

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Thread Name: The Smell of Old Books
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: It's a job thread!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Research: Wear gloves when handling old books
Research: Old books need to be handled with care
Research: Old books need to be kept in a dark and dry environment
Research: Avoid opening old books more often than necessary
Research: Comparing current and historical research
Detection: The smell of old books

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: I don't think so.
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: no
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Max
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Race: Mixed Race
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Fri May 18, 2018 6:23 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A World of Hurt
City/Area: Slags Deep/The Beneath, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Language and violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Mercedes:
1 Defiance: Meld Can Be used In combat
2 Endurance: The Pain Of Being Tail-Whipped
3 Unarmed Combat(Brawling): Grapple the Legs First
4 Unarmed Combat(Brawling): Grappling to Immobilize Opponents
5 Unarmed Combat(Brawling): Pull Em' Down
6 Defiance: Softening The Earth To Cushion Impact
7 Discipline: Remain Focused On Victory
8 Leadership: Trust Those That Follow You

Non-skill:
Max: Wants to Fight Rupturers
Domain Magic: Abrogation
Ran'dar: Brutal Combat Instructor
Max: In Debt To Ran'dar Too

Max:
Acrobatics: Jumping
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): Uppercut
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): Front Kick
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): Taking out a Knee
Endurance: Fighting After a Short Recovery from the Last
Endurance: Taking Hits from an Ithecal
Endurance: Accepting Pain as a State of Being
Tactics: Teamwork Makes the Dream Work
Tactics: Playing to Yourself and Your Ally's Strengths

Non-Skill:
Stormy Skies: Masking the Movements of Yourself and Your Ally
Ran'dar: Will Teach and Protect in Exchange for Valuables
Mercedes: Powerful Strategist

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Minor cuts and bruises
Renown: Unlikely
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes, for Mercedes
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Doran Cooney
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Joined: Wed Oct 26, 2016 8:10 am
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Profession: Performer
Renown: +40
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Fri May 18, 2018 7:15 am

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Thread Name: Chop Chop
City/Area: Rynmere/Venora
Notes/Warnings: Memory Thread
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Strength: Swinging an Axe
Strength: Alternating Carrying Methods to Work Different Muscles
Strength: Widening Your Stance to Increase Power of a Swing
Endurance: Using Numbness to Push Through Fatigue
Endurance: Switching Between Different Muscles to Slow Fatigue
Endurance: Letting the Weight of an Axe Carry It to Conserve Energy

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Minor muscle fatigue
Renown: Maybe?
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Zipper
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Posts: 668
Joined: Sat May 13, 2017 9:14 am
Race: Human
Profession: Professional Scowler
Renown: 0
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Fri May 18, 2018 7:50 am

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Thread Name: Sight
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: That's Keene Ward above me
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Attunement: Compass
Attunement: Compass: Able to measure direction and distance between the Attuner and held frequencies
Attunement: Compass: A mastery of direction and spatial awareness
Attunement: Dousing
Attunement: Omnivision
Discipline: Staying focused in an Attunement trance
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: For Attunement, yes
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Zipper
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Joined: Sat May 13, 2017 9:14 am
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Profession: Professional Scowler
Renown: 0
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Fri May 18, 2018 8:14 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Blaming of the Necromancer
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: That's Keene Ward two posts above me
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Padraig
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Posts: 943
Joined: Mon Oct 03, 2016 3:22 pm
Race: Human
Renown: +544
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Fri May 18, 2018 6:37 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Relief Effort: Collapse!
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:


Faith


Knowledge:
Persuasion: String theory makes no sense
Psychology: Awareness of what separates you from madness is useful
Psychology: Making the world a better place starts with you


Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: She's maxed
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no



Padraig


Knowledge:
Construction: Where to shore up fallen buildings
Construction: Applying the theory of physics to a collapsed building
Detection: Identifying key areas in a collapsed area.
Leadership: State your demands clearly
Persuasion: State opinion as fact
Persuasion: String theory

Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Yes, helping in the relief effort.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
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Faith
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Posts: 3150
Joined: Sat Jun 25, 2016 12:12 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Philanthropist
Renown: +1000
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Sat May 19, 2018 12:33 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Relief Effort: Identification
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Deals with death
Requested Rewards:


Faith


Knowledge:
Leadership: Explaining the real reason why you do it
Leadership: You won't get thanked for this.
Meditation: Focus on the dawn for a feeling of calm
Meditation: Being outside can aid you in clearing your mind.
Sociology: Religious significance of death
Sociology: Dignity in death is a societal construct.

Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: She's maxed
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
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Alistair
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Posts: 2255
Joined: Thu Apr 21, 2016 6:12 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Doctor
Renown: +520
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Sat May 19, 2018 10:52 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: What Could I Ever Do For You?
City/Area: Oakleigh
Notes/Warnings: Minor sexual themes. Doran is GST so he doesn't get any rewards. ;(

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 8 Knowledges for Ali

Rhetoric: Using Haltunga to speak powerfully
Rhetoric: Using words to illustrate love
Linguistics: Becoming more comfortable in a language
Linguistics: Mixing languages together in a conversation
Linguistics: Making adjustments to words to masculinize them

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Ellen'wyn
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Posts: 295
Joined: Sat Oct 14, 2017 12:42 am
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Huntress
Renown: +69
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Sat May 19, 2018 6:51 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Food for the Expedition
City/Area: Etzos Frontier
Notes/Warnings: Just my job thread from Cylus. Pretty basic stuff.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 6 total
Hunting: Game can be scarce in Cylus
Hunting: Stalking prey from the air
Hunting: Signs of hares foraging
Hunting: Hares stay near cover
Ranged (Shortbow): Knowing when you can’t make the shot
Endurance: Keep moving to stay warm
Loot: It would have long been eaten.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: n/a
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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