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Val Valencia
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Posts: 64
Joined: Tue Apr 10, 2018 10:55 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Dancer
Renown: +35
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Wed May 16, 2018 12:15 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: So You Think You Can Dance?
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Dance: Leaping
Dance: Basics of Improv Style
Dance: Keeping up with Tempo
Acrobatics: Back Bend
Acrobatics: Balancing on one Leg
Endurance: Holding Dance Poses
Location: Rynmere's Theater House

Loot: Extra for "The Forgotten Gift" at Rynmeres Theater House
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruised knees
Renown: Maybe for becoming part of a big play?
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Val Valencia on Sun May 20, 2018 4:27 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Max
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Posts: 368
Joined: Mon Nov 06, 2017 4:53 am
Race: Mixed Race
Renown: +257
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Wed May 16, 2018 6:03 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Little Fish in a Sea of Sharks
City/Area: The Beneath/Slags Deep, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: As always, language and violence.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Diving Away From a Strike
Acrobatics: Sliding Down a Hole
Deception: Distracting a Defier's Guardian with a Feint
Detection: Looking for an Escape
Endurance: Fighting Through Withdrawals
Resistance: Withdrawals Worsen Over Time

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: Unlikely.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No.
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Val Valencia
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Posts: 64
Joined: Tue Apr 10, 2018 10:55 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Dancer
Renown: +35
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Wed May 16, 2018 5:16 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Heart of Lake Krome
City/Area: Lake Krome/Krome
Notes/Warnings: Almost drowning?
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Holding Ones Breath
Swimming: How to Sink
Swimming: Frog Stroke
Strength: Dragging a Net Full of Rocks
Fishing: How to Drag a Fishing Net
Acrobatics: Using Your Toes to Grip Objects

Non-skill
Location: Lake Krome
Location: Krome

Loot: 3 gold nel for the attempt of finding the necklace
A simple bronze pendant with a broken chain
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A but she lost her fishing net?
Renown: Potentially for attempting a good deed?
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Val Valencia on Sun May 20, 2018 4:28 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Amaris
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Posts: 463
Joined: Mon Mar 27, 2017 10:18 pm
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Councilor of Natural Affairs
Renown: +157
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Wed May 16, 2018 7:34 pm

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Thread Name: Let’s Get Down to Business
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Amaris 7 posts = 12 knowledges
Skill
Detection: awareness can keep you alive
Discipline: staying focused with distractors present
Endurance: taking a hit
Logistics: planning ahead
Polearm: Spear: basic stance
Polearm: Spear: lower stance for defense
Polearm: Spear: don’t let go of the weapon to protect self with hands
Polearm: Spear: loosening grip to accommodate forward movement
Polearm: Spear: proper stance for a thrust
Polearm: Spear: lunge for further reach
Polearm: Spear: coil and thrust
Tactics: foreseeing possible error

Other
Sephira: a kind teacher
Sephira: patient
Sephira: uses a saber
NPC: Curtis

Sephira 6 posts = 11 knowledges
Skill
Blades (Saber): Footwork is important during combat
Blades (Saber): A low guard stance presents a smaller target to your opponent
Blades (Saber): A downward parry can push the opponent’s weapon away from you
Blades (Saber): Adding enough force behind a parry to create an attack opening
Detection: Noticing the shift in stance before an opponent attacks
Detection: Noticing subtle hand movements that might indicate an attack
Socalization: Offering to provide training to a stranger
Tactics: Choosing a weapon that best suits your body shape
Tactics: Using your peripheral vision during combat
Tactics: Choosing the right stance before beginning combat
Tactics: Using the length of a weapon to keep an opponent at bay

Other
Amaris – Incredibly tall
Amaris – An excellent student
Amaris – Preferred to use a spear


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Maybe some for showing up at a land troop location for the councilor, and for Sephira training said councilor
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Yanahalqah
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Posts: 554
Joined: Sun Jun 19, 2016 5:21 pm
Race: Yludih
Profession: Steward of the Iron Hand
Renown: +93
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Wed May 16, 2018 8:02 pm

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Thread Name: Comeuppance
City/Area: Foster's Landing, Etzos area
Notes/Warnings: Torture
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Intimidation: the threat of torture
Interrogation: Gleaning information through torture
Torture: The basics
Torture: practice on a spare target first to get the hang of it
Torture: Inflicting pain to force compliance
Torture: Can take a while

Renown: prolly not
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: Magic is for cheaters
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Yanahalqah
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Posts: 554
Joined: Sun Jun 19, 2016 5:21 pm
Race: Yludih
Profession: Steward of the Iron Hand
Renown: +93
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Wed May 16, 2018 8:05 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Comeuppance part deux
City/Area: Foster's Landing, Etzos area
Notes/Warnings: Torture
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Torture: More than inflicting physical pain
Torture: sensory deprivation
Torture: mental assault
Torture: keeping the victim alive
Endurance: Keep on going while fatigued
Medicine: cauterizing wounds to prevent bleeding

Loot: information
Injuries/Overstepping: exhaustion, fatigue
Renown: prolly not
Collaboration: nope
Magic EXP: Who even uses this shit anyways?
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Zevan
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Posts: 34
Joined: Mon Jan 08, 2018 2:45 am
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Traveler
Renown: +30
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Thu May 17, 2018 5:11 am

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Thread Name:Pavel Trung's Trunk of Treats or Tricks
City/Area: Bayward
Notes/Warnings: Mild language?
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Noticing behavior
Detection: Noting patterns in travel
Storytelling: Listening is as important as telling
Storytelling: Being enraptured in a tale

Slake: Works slowly over time
Slake: Inspires others to adventure

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Drunkenness?
Renown: Not yet
Collaboration: Solo
Magic EXP: No
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Ela Wolfsdotter
Posts: 75
Joined: Thu Feb 22, 2018 8:24 pm
Race: Mortal Born
Renown: +55
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Thu May 17, 2018 11:09 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Getting an upgrade
City/Area: Scalvoris Town and the woods surrounding
Notes/Warnings: Uh, no. Not really
Requested Rewards:
Axes and Bludgeons - Two-headed axe: Testing the weight
Axes and Bludgeons - Two-headed axe: Downward swing
Axes and Bludgeons - Two-headed axe: Keeping good posture
Axes and Bludgeons - Two-headed axe: Footwork is important
Axes and Bludgeons - Two-headed axe: Using momentum helps
Strength: Lifting a heavy weapon

Loot: A cool nickname
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: Nopeeee
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Torqin
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Posts: 66
Joined: Tue Dec 19, 2017 1:15 am
Race: Lotharro
Profession: Bodyguard
Renown: +10
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Thu May 17, 2018 9:29 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Family Reunion
City/Area: Yithiral, Ivorian Empire
Notes/Warnings: Plenty of violence + 1 PC Death

Xander
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Bladed combat (longsword): Fighting in an enclosed space
Bladed combat (longsword): Choosing an appropriate attack for your surroundings
Bladed combat (longsword): Slicing the neck offers a quick death
Bladed combat (longsword): Remember to move your feet and body too
Detection: Keeping sight on a target from afar
Detection: Watching through windows
Deception: Making use of misfortune as a cover
Deception: Faking your departure
Intelligence: Gathering first hand information
Intelligence: Misleading your target with false information
Tactics: Sometimes you don't have a plan
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes
Magic EXP: No

Torqin
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Axes & Bludgeons (Spiked Club): Blocking a swung fire poker
Axes & Bludgeons (Spiked Club): Upward swing into exposed arm pit
Intimidation: Using a feral taunt to interrupt a reluctant combatant
Running: Sprinting with a shield raised
Shielded Combat (Heater Shield): Shield Charge
Shielded Combat (Heater Shield): Upward Shield Punch
Shielded Combat (Heater Shield): Sideways Swinging shield to remove grappling enemies
Tactics: Make a shock and awe styled entrance
Tactics: Creating distance when fighting multiple enemies
Unarmed Combat (Heart of Stone): Dodging an attack while pressing in for your own

Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping:
Bruised Ribs - Should heal on own, sore for several trials.
Broken Nose - Will need set
Small Puncture in Back - Will need stitches, risk of infection
Bruising on Back - Will heal on own, sore for several trials
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes
Magic EXP: No)

Celestessa
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Acting: Like everything's alright
Baking: Adjust ratio of ingredients to counteract moist ingredients in bread
Blades (Knife): StabbingBlades (Knife): Repeated movements to increase damage
Caregiving: Speaking to your babiesCaregiving: Protecting your children
Caregiving: Reassuring someone
Deception: Pretending to be happy
Discipline: Not allowing yourself to panic in public
Discipline: Preparing yourself for a difficult evening
Seduction: Undressing to make sure they're looking.
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes
Magic EXP: (/No)
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Jonathan Burr
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Posts: 347
Joined: Mon Mar 12, 2018 12:01 am
Race: Human
Profession: Academic
Renown: +45
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Fri May 18, 2018 1:26 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Shape of Life
City/Area:Road to Ne'Haer
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Aberration: Focusing ether
Aberration: Opening a conjunction
Aberration: Flaying a living creature
Aberration: Every living thing contains ether
Aberration: The Harvester as mentor, teacher, partner.
Discipline: Sneaking through a wooded area
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes
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