• Closed • The Facts of Life

Kai tries to make Mae focus on her studies...

Stronghold of education and learning, this fortress is in one of the coldest areas of Idalos and home to many knowledge seekers in a variety of disciplines. However, unknown to most, below the city are those who suffer for the sake of science. While all are welcome, not everyone will be treated as they expect.

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Doran Cooney
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Posts: 461
Joined: Wed Oct 26, 2016 8:10 am
Race: Human
Profession: Performer
Renown: 40
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Wealth Tier: Tier 1

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The Facts of Life

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Maebella Arval
Knowledges
Etiquette: Being Naked Around Slaves is Bad
Research: How to Revise
Research: Objective vs Subjective
Research: Studying in Bed?
Research: You Don’t Need Proof
Seduction: Positive Mood Helps
Seduction: Staying Naked
Teaching: Requires Interested Students

Literature: Oral Narratives
Literature: Plays
Literature: Poetry
Literature: Prose
Literature: Rhyming Helps to Remember
Oral Narratives: Ballad Traditions
Oral Narratives: Can Convey More than Written Word
Oral Narratives: Gesture is Important
Oral Narratives: Voice is Important

Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Renown: N/A

Points 15
Virikai Talius
Knowledges
Leadership: Having Another’s best Interests at Heart
Persuasion: Using Logic
Persuasion: Using Positive Rewards
Seduction: Butterfly Kisses
Seduction: Erogenous Location: Inner Thighs
Seduction: Erogenous Location: Lower Torso
Seduction: Staying Naked
Teaching: Carrot and Stick Method
Teaching: The Value of Revision
Teaching: Teach Students to Teach Themselves

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Injuries: N/A
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Points 15
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The two of you have really similar writing styles which helps to make the whole thread feel like a continuous story - something I really enjoyed while reading. Virikai is so saucy, he makes me smile with all of his little quips. Maebella has a really interesting balance between her uncertainty in herself but confidence in her partner that I think you both played off very well; Maebella with her focus on the teaching at hand and Virikai in his - mostly helpful - little rewards and practiced, wordless acknowledgement of listening. It was a very soft, sweet thread, and once you set the atmosphere, you maintained it very well. I could very clearly see them chatting away, bare in bed!
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