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Review Request 2.1.2

Sun Dec 10, 2017 5:46 pm

Peer Review Requests
PLEASE DON'T EDIT OR REMOVE REVIEW REQUESTS.
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Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Loot: (If applicable)
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Review Request 2.1.2

Sun Dec 10, 2017 6:59 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Writing Letters to the Void
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:


Faith
Knowledge: (6 knowledge max)

Leadership: Stating what you are going to do
Leadership: Having clear boundaries.
Leadership: Ensuring that everyone knows their role
Writing: Writing letters to loved ones.
Writing: How to start a letter.
Writing: Using writing to organise thoughts

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.2

Mon Dec 11, 2017 2:07 am

Qit'ria
Thread Name: Far Too Civilized
City/Area: Sweetwine Woods, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Not really
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill Knowledge
1 Endurance: Pulling a loaded cart for two days
2 Field Craft: Make camp near drinkable water
3 Trapmaking: Traps can be made from any tools you have on hand
4 Trapmaking: Trip Wire Alarms
5 Trapmaking: Use different sounds for alarms to know which trap was triggered
6 Field Craft: Using vines for rope
7 Detection: Hearing trip wire alarms triggered
8 Intimidation: Threaten to kill
9 Thrown: Thrown rocks work in a pinch
10 Thrown (Javelin): Shuffle slide throw
11 Running: Get a head start by distracting with an attack
12 Running: Spinning to maintain momentum while changing direction
13 Stealth: Don't appear where you're expected to appear
14 Intimidation: Angry questions should be shouted
15 Climbing: Using low hanging branches to climb a river bank

Other Knowledge
1 Location: My camp in Sweetwine Woods
2 Merces: Camp Invader
3 Merces: Makes death threats and compliments along side each other
4 Merces: Wind Talker
5 Merces: Friend to the Wind
6 Merces: Doesn't know where to find animals in the forest
7 Merces: Learned his magic, not born with it
8 Merces: Wants to kill giant bone man
9 Merces: Thinks the Undead deserve to walk Idalos
10 Merces: Wants to kill me
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic EXP: (No)
Merces
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
1)Defiance: Using Wind To Trigger Trip-wire
2)Defiance: Redirecting Projectiles Using Air
3)Defiance: Power comes with Abundance
4)Defiance: Coaxing Is More Efficient
5)Defiance: Using Flame To Cut Off A Path
6)Defiance: Striking and Dancing Simultaneously
7)Defiance: Coaxing Water To Strike
8)Defiance: Effects prior to Overstepping
9)Defiance: Changing the Direction of Wind
10)Defiance: Fire is the most beautiful Element
11)Defiance: Manifested Fire is Blue
12)Defiance: The Voice Of Water
13)Defiance: Fire Is My Closest Friend
14)Defiance: Kin Element Fire
15)Intimidation: Glare of Malice

Other Knowledge:
Qit'ria: Lives In The Sweetwine woods
Location: Qit'ria's Camp
Qit'ria: One I will Slay
Qit'ria: Insulting, Vile, Pest
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Depression, Extreme Exhaustion for 2 Trials, more TBD
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic EXP: (Yes, Defiance)
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Review Request 2.1.2

Mon Dec 11, 2017 2:15 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Blood in the water
City/Area: Scalvoris Harbor
Notes/Warnings: Violence against sea creatures. This thread may feel like it ended abruptly, but it's from Saun and we all agreed to just sort of wrap it up and move on. It's an okay ending, but it could have been better had the thread flowed faster (my bad). Also, Victor's request is missing, so hopefully he'll submit later.

Requested Rewards:
Pash Raj'oriq
Skill Knowledge:
Seafaring: Navigating in close quarters
Seafaring: Stopping a sloop's motion unexpectedly
Seafaring: Setting the sail quickly to move short distances
Seafaring: Bracing for impact
Blades: Cutting free from debris under water
Swimming: Blood-clouded waters
Swimming: Holding your breath
Swimming: Avoiding debris

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Fauna: Northern Sea Wolf

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Fame: Reviewer's discretion! (Positive for helping during the sea wolf attack, please.)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Kali'rial
Skill Knowledge:
Swimming: How to hold your breath
Strength: Dragging someone to safety through water
Detection: Gauging the size of prey under water
Hunting: Waiting for the right moment to strike
Hunting: A clean kill is a good kill
Ranged Weapon (Shortbow): Aiming for vital body parts

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Fauna: Northern Sea Wolf

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Fame: Reviewer's discretion! (Positive for helping during the sea wolf attack, please.)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Vega
Skill Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Swinging off a boat
Acrobatics: Jumping to a capsized boat
Blades: Maintaining stance on a rocking boat
Blades: Stab movement to aim for a quick kill
Bow: Aiming for creatures in the water
Bow: Aiming when unable to stay still
Seafaring: Parts of a boat
Strength: Lifting people from the seas

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Fauna: Northern Sea Wolf
Loot: Carcass of 1 northern sea wolf
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Reviewer's discretion! (Positive for helping during the sea wolf attack, please.)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Kura Wolfsdotter
Skill Knowledge:
Ranged Combat: Firing from a precarious position
Ranged Combat: Timing your shots
Ranged Combat: Using height for better accuracy
Acrobatics: Maintaining balance on a sinking ship
Acrobatics: Climbing in and out of a capsized ship
Axes & Bludgeons: Using your axe to make entrances (Might fall under another skill)
Tactics: Getting higher up to get better a better view
Leadership: Getting startled soldiers moving

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Fauna: Northern Sea Wolf
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Fame: Reviewer's discretion! (Positive for helping during the sea wolf attack, please.)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.2

Mon Dec 11, 2017 7:00 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Ivory Rose
City/Area: Fort Endor, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Cute tho.
Requested Rewards:


Oliver
Knowledge: (6 knowledge max)

Appraisal: Checking a finished piece for quality
Appraisal: Ensuring you get what you pay for
Endurance: Resisting the urge to flinch at pain
Etiquette: Wear clothing in front of knights
Research: Word of mouth information gathering
Storytelling: Relating memories into stories for others



Loot: 1 carved Trostium ivory rose worth 45gn
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.2

Mon Dec 11, 2017 10:00 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Molly
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Um, language. And it's pure dialogue. 1700 words of pure dialogue shoved down your throat. Beware.
Requested Rewards:
Detection: Detecting a bald-faced lie
Intelligence: Recruitment - Targeting a contact based on close proximity to Intelligence
Intimidation: Bullying 101
Intimidation: Belittling tactics
Intimidation: Hurling a list of escalating accusations
Intimidation: Veiled threats

Non-Skill Knowledge
Immortal: Thetros
Uthaldria: Location - Temple of Thetros
NPC - Molly
Albion: Winged beast of the Gauthrel plains
Albion: Beast of flesh and shards
Molly: Best friends with Finn
Molly: Absolutely did not have sex with Finn
Molly: Was mute until recently due to the death of her family
Molly: A spy for Finn’s own good
Molly: Your personal bell on Finn’s cat collar
Finn: In contact with a mysterious bird person
Finn: Has been visiting the Tower of Ministers
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Negative if possible
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.2

Mon Dec 11, 2017 7:24 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Elbows & Knees
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:


Vega

Knowledge:
Discipline: Better to say nothing than too much
Discipline: Keep quiet to avoid making things worse
Fieldcraft: Keep warm, keep your tent warm
Fieldcraft: Identify ways to keep the wind out of a tent.
Rhetoric: Singular. Not plural.
Rhetoric: Use of analogy to describe feelings
Sociology: Items can have cultural or family significance.


Loot: None. Carpentry kit is deducted from ledger and recorded in previous thread.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: +2 (give a gift of carpentry kit)
Collaboration: Yes


Arlo

Knowledge:

Discipline: Not pointing out obvious flaws in personality
Discipline: Knowing when funny teasing isn't funny at all.
Fieldcraft: Keep warm, keep your tent warm
Fieldcraft: Identify ways to keep the wind out of a tent.
Fieldcraft: When to break camp, when not.
Rhetoric: Double negatives.
Sociology: Items can have cultural or family significance.
Storytelling: Explaining why this time is not like that time.
Storytelling: The importance of a promise, clearly stated.
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.2

Tue Dec 12, 2017 3:19 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The pen is mightier than the sword
City/Area: Etzos - outlying cities
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:

Gangui

Skill Knowledges
Deception: Purpose of a Forgery
Politics: Appealing to Ideology
Politics: The Effects of Bureaucratic Restrictions
Politics: Playing Two Sides of the Same Coin
Politics: Government Contracts
Politics: The Role of a “Middle-man”
Politics: Judge and Possie
Negotiation: Making Demands
Negotiation: Defining terms.
Discipline: Keeping Composed When Stressed

Non-Skill Knowledges
The Black Guard
Black Guard: Liason is Zipper
Black Guard: Contracts Turkey Company
Turkey Company: The new sheriff in town.
Zipper: Cunning Woman

Zipper
Skill Knowledges
Deception: Diverting suspicion to other likely suspects
Discipline: Holding back the cussing during a negotiation
Intelligence: Putting yourself in a position to access vital street-level information
Negotiation: Playing up the benefits
Negotiation: Downplaying the negatives
Politics: Government subsidies for enterprising start-ups
Politics: Navigating the Bureaucracy of Foster’s Landing
Politics: The role of a liaison
Politics: The strength and restrictions of the vast Bureaucracy
Politics: Keeping the favor of the public

Loot: Nupe
Injuries/Overstepping: Nupe
Fame: Nupe
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nupe
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Review Request 2.1.2

Tue Dec 12, 2017 8:21 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Privateer Navy
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Logistics: Recruiting Foreigners to Help
Logistics: Paying Someone Who Knows Someone


Loot: -25 Golden Nels
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Negative 1 for blatantly requesting pirates.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No


This one was a bit short, but it was a solo, and it's setting things up for future events elsewhere. :)


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As a note: Noth is a Grandmaster in Intimidation. That means that he's at least as scary as the Count from Sesame Street. Beware.

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Review Request 2.1.2

Wed Dec 13, 2017 9:00 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Steel on the Aftermath
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: nupe
Requested Rewards: N/A
Loot: Nu
Injuries/Overstepping: Nuh
Fame: nupe
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: nu

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