• Graded • Moderated: Cylus Dusk

[Elisabeth Black]

1 Cylus, Arc 721

As she returned to Balthazar’s side, Saoire had answered his questions regarding the Barony. Then a few other people approached the Immortal, speaking of their reasons to want to be considered…or not. Elisabeth didn’t know any of them other than Yeva, but listened intently to each, wanting to learn everything she could about what was going on.

It was announced that most everyone would adjourn to the beach, but apparently not the special guests, including her. Lacing her fingers through Balthazar’s as they walked, she cast her gaze around the island – at least what she could see. The young woman liked it there. There was a peaceful feeling she couldn’t quite put her finger on…but perhaps that was just coming from the event itself. Everything about the evening had been beautiful and serene. There was a tranquility that came with that.

And, of course, having Balthazar to share in that meant everything to her.

Seated, it was time for words and gifts. She watched and listened as Saoire made her way through the guests. When the Immortal finally found her way to the pair, she focused on Balthazar first, speaking to his bravery. Smiling, Elisabeth gently settled her hand on his leg as a pillow was brought forth with not one, but two rings. Her eyes gazed down at the rings, then to Balthazar, curious as to how he would interpret the gift.

Surprisingly, a gift was given to her...from Saoire herself. The young woman gently took the gift in her hands, smiling at the Immortal. "Thank you. I will put it to good use."

Before she knew it, a silver ring was being held out to her.

Gazing softly at Balthazar, she allowed a gentle smile to form. Something inside of her wanted to say something clever about Yaralon but she resisted. Carefully, she reached out her hand to accept the ring, eyes never leaving his gaze as she did. After a moment, she looked down at the ring offered, and then over to his hand, where his ring was already gently wrapped around a finger on his left hand. Smiling, she put her ring on the same hand and finger.

Events moved on. Darius was named as one of the Barons and Elisabeth thought the choice was perfect. She had no knowledge of the other two, so she really had no thoughts about it.

Balthazar’s voice drew her attention again, asking her about the island. “It’s nice. There is something of a peaceful feeling here that I like. I’m not sure where it’s coming from though. It could be that I just like the company…” Gently nudging her body with his, she noted him fumbling over his words a bit.

Stay?

He wanted her to stay.

They hadn’t really talked about what would happen after Scalvoris. She still had a home – and cat – in Rharne, and the plan for Scalvoris really hadn't been so much set in stone as it was vague.

He wanted her to stay. With him.

Elisabeth looked out at the water for a trill, a soft smile forming on her face before turning back to him, speaking softly. “For a while. Forever. They really are the same thing. I’m finally where I want to be. I don’t care if it's Scalvoris…or somewhere else. With you is the only place I want to be.”

And with that, she leaned over and kissed him, completely unconcerned about who was around them.

[Kura Wolfsdotter]

Kura and Cally, when asked, remained in their seats as most of the crowd was led off to the beach for the festival. Those that remained, however, all apparently had gifts from the late Baron. Kura took a blanket from one of the Cadouri and wrapped herself up in it, since it was still rather cold. Cally, on the other hand, turned down the offer of a blanket as she didn't really get cold. Then Saoire started to pass out the gifts from Smooglenuff, barring one that was a gift from Saoire herself.

When it was Kura's turn, she took the necklace gratefully, looking at the owl symbol. The Baron had, Kura suspected, known who and what she was the whole time. There had been a formal Imperial uniform laid out for her during that murder mystery party, and now the necklace bore an owl symbol. It was beautiful, and the power it imbued was no small thing. The Baron, Kura surmised, was both generous and wise with his gifts and she felt that Scalvoris would miss him, though she hoped his successor would be able to fill his shoes.

As Kura put on her new necklace, Cally let out a slight meep of surprise as Saoire turned to her. Cally hadn't even suspected the Baron knew she existed, but there was a gift for her too. The glasses were quite well made and their power was exactly the sort of thing Cally would appreciate, being who she was. She gently took the glasses from the small Cadouri who brought them and studied one of them for a long moment, noting as she did that it filled with with a warm, brownish-clear liquid. After a moment, Cally took a sip and then smiled happily. She had always enjoyed warm apple cider, after all.

Cally handed Kura the second cup and the Mortalborn watched as it filled with what appeared to be milk. Kura gave it a confused look before taking a drink, then looked at the glass in surprise. Karem had, when raising Kura at least, had milk on hand pretty much all the time due to the needs of a child. But rather than the more traditional cow or goat milk, Karem had, of course, used wolf's milk. It was, in Kura's experience, definitely an acquired taste, but she had a nostalgic fondness for it, weird as it was.

Then, of course, there was the matter of the barony. Not one baron, but three. Darius, Devin, and Nir'wei. None of them were what one might traditionally think of when one thought of a baron, but to Kura's mind there was wisdom in the Baron's choice, and Alyssia and Chi-Chi would also become Baroness and take on their own responsibilities. Then, the gifting appeared to be done and the matter of the succession resolved. Kura raised her glass to the empty air, Cally following suit. "Farewell, Rodigruez von Smooglenuff, and enjoy your rest and your reunion with your love. You have more than earned both." the Albarech said, her voice soft.

[Nir'wei]

As his speech drew to its natural close, it was good to hear that Saoire agreed; and indeed shared the same vision that he held, since a place of academic learning was about as far detached from his specialties as one could feasibly reach. Practical training, hands-on experience... now there was his time to shine, and he would prove it. Just as he had offered to recover the ecosystem, these were things he did not require Faldrass for, in truth. They were the duties of a Natural Affairs Councillor, to educate in the ways of the wilderness so that citizens could better protect themselves from the elements, and the elements themselves from their own ignorance, and the carelessness associated with it. None of the others would disagree, of that he was certain. Okay, Alyssia and Darius, he was certain. Chi Chi? He didn't know what to make of her. Their one brief exchange hadn't been particularly welcoming, and meant he wasn't really interested in a second, no matter how capable she might be.

Saoire raised her voice to send them all to the beach, but when Nir'wei made to stand, he felt a tugging on his sleeve, and found Armstrong holding him back, so that a more private ceremony could begin. A set of gifts, prepared in advance by Smooglenuff? They had barely known one another a few breaks, but he nodded and settled back in his chair in time for Armstrong to offer yet another mug of the same chocolate brown liquid, which he took eagerly, and sipped from as the Immortal began to move to them each and present a gift. For some, it was physical, and he eyed each item with curiosity. For others, more symbolic, but by no means any less grand; especially in Alyssia's case, for which he hid a wide smile beneath a long draw from his mug. It was a worthy gift, there could be no doubt. To not only be provided for the rest of her days, but to have such benefits directed to her children as well would ensure she lived in comfort and security for the rest of her days. Now all that she needed was a house and a land to put it to good use. Still, there were other gifts to give, some of considerably more interest than others - and finally Saoire ended up before him, and Nir'wei offered yet another empty mug back to the mouse Cadouri that stood at his side, watching with as rapt attention as he did as a book was brought forwards and offered up. A book called... Nir'wei. He hoped she understood his puzzlement. And his shock. Even after his explanation, he'd wondered privately whether everyone actually believed his side of the story, given... well, given the last moments they'd seen him. He didn't say anything, or make any gestures beyond bowing his head silently and accepting the book. "Of course."

Then from her shadow, Alyssia herself appeared, offering something strangely close to an apology for even throwing her hat into the ring for the honour - and Nir'wei raised a hand just as she finished anyway, to stop her from continuing. "Your enthusiasm is commendable." He said it with a rare, genuine smile. "I don't know how many people would be as brave as you, to offer themselves up to take such a position - and at the same time, be honest enough, to do so out of duty, and not greed." She'd make a good leader one of these days, a thought began. He couldn't tell where it had stemmed from, but it was quickly shared by the others, himself included. "Whoever takes up the Barony, I hope you will bring that same enthusiasm and spirit, to help them rebuild Faldrass once more. As I will." Grey, Cold, Myrth and Squeak sniffed after her and Saoire as the Immortal moved to the next person, their tails wagging for the acknowledgement.

The last gifts were offered, Nir'wei still clutching the book tight to his chest with silent, burning curiosity, and they came to the matter of the Barony. Were they to hold a vote? Would Saoire choose in the Baron's stead, or would the Baron appear himself? As it turned out, something even more bizarre still. "The first three, hmm." Well now he felt silly, making that whole speech. "This sounds like the perfect arrangement." Already it seemed Devin had concentrated his focus on the mansion, and frankly he hadn't the faintest idea where to begin on such a project. Darius was still a capable man as ever and with a drive that even he'd struggle to keep up with. Oh yes, this was going to be quite the adventure indeed.

"An interesting man to the end, hmm."

[Darius Baer]

After Darius had offered to support Alyssia in her desire to be head of the Smooglenuff Barony - and then surprised himself by volunteering for the very same responsibility - others took their opportunity to address the gathering. The bearded blond listened with a sense of relief as they spoke, for he had not come to the island of Faldrass to gain any form of power, and he was confident that Saoire and the former baron, in their wisdom, would select a suitable candidate.

Some of the other speakers were more persuasive than others. Nir'wei presented a rousing speech that soon had the mariner nodding in agreement. Darius had wondered if the man would be suited to the role, given his position on the Scalvoris Council, as well as his critical role during the eruption. The mariner doubted he would be alive to offer his services to the people of Faldrass, if it hadn't been for Nir'wei's intervention.

And when Yeva vouched for ChiChi, Darius was willing to support her as Baroness, should Saiore deem her worthy. Of all the people present, she had been the closest to Baron Von Smooglenuff, and she also had a personal relationship with Cassion himself. She understood and believed in the former baron's vision more than anyone else, and although her manner could benefit with a little more tact at times, she had shown herself to be a strong leader.

By the time the group was led towards the beach, the bearded blond was no closer to guessing which of the other candidates Saiore might select. But such curiosities became a distraction as the gifts began to be handed out. Darius wasn't quite sure what to make of such a gesture, but he certainly wasn't going to refuse the final generous gift of a deceased man.

When it was his turn to receive something, a grin formed across his bearded cheeks as he recognised Walt, the fish-breathed otter cadouri who had gifted him the book not long before. But when he saw what the gift was - and, in particular, the size of it - his cheeks reddened as a blush formed amidst the Cylus gloom. Immediately, his mind drifted to the woman whose hand he had held earlier, who in that moment stood aboard the deck of a ship anchored offshore, and the blush deepened. He thanked Walt for delivering the gift, and the otter seemed relieved to no longer have to carry such an awkward item.

It was not long, however, before Saiore returned the group's attention to the barony. Darius couldn't help but allow himself to get a little excited at the prospect of ChiChi possibly becoming Baroness Von Smooglenuff, but the names that were actually spoken by the Maiden of Gifts left him temporarily speechless.

Three barons? Three? And he was to be one of them? Baron Baer? Baeron?

Darius' head was still spinning when he took in the names of the others. Nir'wei certainly seemed like a good choice, though he knew nothing of Devin's leadership abilities, but he was sure Saoire wouldn't have chosen him if he wasn't capable of doing a fine job.

"Th-thank you," he eventually managed to say. "I am honoured."

The seafarer glanced towards Yeva, then to Oram, and then to Balthazar and Elisabeth, before shifting to Alyssia and ChiChi. Were they pleased with this decision? He would do all he could to protect them and provide for them.

He glanced, then, towards Nir'wei and Devin, and he approached both of them to offer his congratulations. It felt strange to do so as an equal. A shared nobility was unusual, but it would mean they could work together, and use their individual strengths to benefit the people of Faldrass.

"So," he said to them as the reality of the daunting task before them began to settle in, "I suppose we should arrange to meet and discuss details..."

[Yeva]

It hadn't been her intention to make a woman as stalwart and sturdy as ChiChi overcome with emotion, but she smiled reassuringly, hugging the woman who had done so much for her, both at Faldrass and in the aftermath that had followed. She had not offered her praise lightly, but honestly and with consideration. And while ChiChi may not have become baroness, the baron's legacy was in capable hands. And if it wasn't, she was sure they would hear about it from ChiChi herself.

ChiChi pulled away and Yeva looked around. Each one was given a gift, an honor. Yeva could barely look at Saiore when the time had come and she was addressed. A hero among many. She wasn't sure about that but smiled with a sad tension, giving a soft thanks as she took the small rectangular box from the Cadouri passing out gifts. She opened it and stared at the star, mouth dropping as she touched it, looking up to watch ChiChi get appointed as a Lady and she reached out to cling to her again.

"You deserve it," she whispered in the woman's hair, speaking Dehasin. Once a slave, a servant, a friend, a Lady. Yeva gently pried ChiChi's arms away and took her by the shoulders, staring into her eyes, "You are so good." she began to wipe away her tears, "He knew that."

For those who were granted their gifts, they began to admire them, some where shared. Darius seemed to be red-faced, lost in thought. Elisa and Balthazar were kissing, content. Alyssia looked tired - a sentiment she felt entirely. Kalortah was giving something to Saiore, and Oram seemed interested in his glasses. Funny, she thought. She had never imagined him wearing spectacles. The woman, Kura and her companion Cally were speaking softly, raising their mugs and she could faintly hear the honored toast.

"Farewell, Rodigruez von Smooglenuff, and enjoy your rest and your reunion with your love. You have more than earned both."

Yeva lifted her glass, giving a nod that may or may not have been noticed among so many others. A Rharnian should never miss a drink of honor, and she smiled that same tired smile and drank, wondering if the Baron was resting at all. Hadn't Saiore said he had refused to pass? "Farewell," she whispered.

The medic was about to withdraw, feeling suddenly out of place, when Devin turned to Alyssia and ChiChi, making quite the proclamation

“You will live in a house that will be just as beautiful as the Baron’s old mansion, and I’ll fill it with books again, just like the ones that he used to have in his study. There will be lots of exciting adventure stories! You mentioned having no knowledge. I can teach you a lot of things!”.

ChiChi, composing herself, added to that while looking at Alyssia with red-rimmed eyes, "I will offer all zat I know, if you wish. Ze baron was a great man."

Yeva, seeing everyone mingling and planning, sipped her tepid cocoa and pulled away, stepping back into the darkness with her necklace and making her way up the beach. Away from the fire. Away from the celebration. She needed some time to think and wished now that her cloak didn't glow as it did. She wished she could be invisible, staring out at the water and the stars, gathering the courage she needed. Yeva lowered herself upon the sand and drew her knees up to her chest, wondering how anyone could call her brave. She wanted to run away. To go someplace far away where she wasn't Yeva of Rharne. The idea tempted her with every soft wave that rolled upon the shore. What if she had a boat as Darius did? What if she could go anywhere? She felt a little more peace. Yeva drew her hood over her hair and laid back in the sand, one ankle crossed over the other, staring upwards at the stars with her new necklace held against her chest and listened to the sounds of gentle water and distant sounds of communion.

[Pegasus]

1st Cylus, 721

Looking around, Saoire added the final thing - the last piece of information which she had to share. "These gifts were from, or on behalf of, the Baron," she said. "For my part, I wish to give a gift, too. So, I will give you what I can - my time, my support," The Immortal gestured to the area in question and said, "Faldrass needs to be rebuilt and we will help with that." She gestured to Horatio Thunderbussel and his wife, the other Cadouri. "Here, together, in our new home. I will build a school here, and you will all - all of you - be most welcome." Saoire was very good at making each person feel like she was talking to them alone, and this was no different.


However, all good things must end and, as the evening drew to a close, Saoire was pleased with how it had gone. So, it was time for her to leave, but before that, she bade them each good evening, individually, personally. She looked at Kalortah in surprise and delight when he gave her a gift. "That is so very thoughtful" the Immortal said, "That is a rare and precious gift and I will treasure it," She put her hand on his arm and said, her voice sincere, "You have surprised and delighted me tonight, Kalortah. I look forward to your music, and the wonder it brings." Then, she moved to Oram, "I envy you the wonders that await you nestled on the pages of books. Good night, Oram." To Alyssia, she spoke in a gentle voice. "I am already proud, Lady Smooglenuff"

As she bade Devin goodnight, she did so with a smile. "Goodnight, Baron von Smooglenuff," she said to him. "I look forward to seeing what wonders you make here." Approaching Balthazar and Elisabeth, she addressed them both. "I wish you both good evening, and much happiness," she said, quietly. "I'm sure I'll see you again." She smiled as she walked away, pleased for the young couple.

To Kura and Cally, too, she addressed them both, "I'm so grateful for you both - and people like you." she said. "I hope you have a lovely evening, thank you for coming here."

Nir'wei and Darius, she spoke to together. "The three of you- yourselves and Devin - you have quite a job ahead of you" she said with a nod of her head. "I have no doubt that you will be marvellous. Call on me, should you need me. " When she bade Yeva goodnight, Saoire spoke to her earnestly, also, and made the offer she did not make to all that evening.. "If you need my help, Yeva, then you can always, always call on me. I hope you have a lovely evening, and I look forward to seeing you soon."

And finally, the Immortal left and they were able to mingle or - if they wished - be alone with their thoughts.

OOC Info

Ok so - the new Barony is up! here!
I will be doing the review in the next 24 ish hours, but you may now assume you have the gifts etc. Thank you for humouring me with this thread and introducing Saoire to Scalvoris! Our players really make this place!

[Pegasus]

Your Review

Kalortah

Overview

I really enjoy the way you write Kal - you manage to juggle the arrogant, superior avriel with that hint of compassion and wanting to belong. He's a really nuanced character and I very much appreciate how you write him. Saoire was impressed, too, hence the note.

Points

XP: 20
Renown: 15

Loot

• Your gift from Saoire: "A small harp which accompanies Kal when he sings, if he wishes it. It plays exactly what he wishes in order to maximise his performance - never more beautiful than his voice, but a perfect accompaniment to it"
• A Book Entitled: The Legend of the Smooglenuff. This is a collection of stories about Enri Smooglenuff and the stories he told.
• After the event, in a few days, Saoire sends a basket of food to you - these are all individually chosen and are your favourite things. With it is a note of thanks.
  
• Saoire was very touched by Kal giving her a gift and she sends a personal thank-you note. In it, she invites Kal to consider teaching singing, performance, etc, at the school she will be opening. With the note is a small and delicate clasp, suitable for a cloak or coat. It shifts in colour as he wears it and is quite exquisite.

!	Message from: Second Can Do 1
	You read the book! In your gift from Saoire is a full copy of Smooglenuff's Guide to Falldrass. It's a set of books which includes Flora, Fauna, Legends and History.

!	Message from: Second Dan Do 2
	You had a chat! You may have an extra 3 knowledge in one of Linguistics, Sociology, Psychology OR Etiquette

Knowledge

Skill Knowledge:
Acting x 2
Cosmetology x 2
Detection x 3
Discipline x 2
Etiquette x 3
Singing x 3


Non-Skill Knowledge:
You may choose up to 5 non-skill knowledge on each PC / NPC you met and spoke with here.
You may choose up to 3 non-skill knowledge on each PC / NPC you saw here.
These must be appropriate / able to be found in the thread.

Oram

Overview

I love how you play Oram - he's very realistically portrayed and touches like being interrupted "mid-grump" make him that much more human. He's a really well thought-out pc and I enjoy reading your posts enormously.

Points

XP: 20
Renown: 15

Loot

• Your gift from Saoire: "A pair of spectacles which are more-or-less indestructible. When Oram wears them, he can read up to five languages - these must include Common and may not be restricted languages. He can also write in those languages. The spectacles only work for him, to anyone else, they seem like normal glasses."
• A Book Entitled: The Legend of the Smooglenuff. This is a collection of stories about Enri Smooglenuff and the stories he told.
  
• After the event, in a few days, Saoire sends a basket of food to you - these are all individually chosen and are your favourite things. With it is a note of thanks. Oram's note contains a small box which has in it a sphere of solid glass, it seems. It is swirling with colours and seems to contain within it constellations of stars. Oram will discover that it is a reflection of the stars above him and, with a little practice, allows him to navigate by the stars, even when he can't see them.

!	Message from: Second Can Do 1
	You read the book! In your gift from Saoire is a full copy of Smooglenuff's Guide to Falldrass. It's a set of books which includes Flora, Fauna, Legends and History.

!	Message from: Second Dan Do 2
	You had a chat! You may have an extra 3 knowledge in one of Linguistics, Sociology, Psychology OR Etiquette

Knowledge

Skill Knowledge:
Discipline x 3
Etiquette x 3
Investigation x 2
Navigation x 2
Rhetoric x 2
Storytelling x 3


Non-Skill Knowledge:
You may choose up to 5 non-skill knowledge on each PC / NPC you met and spoke with here.
You may choose up to 3 non-skill knowledge on each PC / NPC you saw here.
These must be appropriate / able to be found in the thread.

Ari'sora

Overview

I was really not sure what to do here, since Ari'sora would be in the Order at this point. So, I've opted for assuming she wasn't there. This will mean you don't get any knowledge, but I've justified everything else which you receive. I hope that works for you!

Points

XP: 15
Renown: 10

Loot

On the 2nd Cylus, a large, beautiful basked it delivered to the Order where Ari is staying. In it is a note from Saoire, saying that she is sorry Ari'sora had to miss the event, but that she had a seat there and that the Baron had remembered her in his last will. In there is:

• Your gift from Saoire: "A plain but pretty necklace with a small pendent in the shape of a twinkling star. When worn, it gives a sense of hope. It isn't strong enough to overcome Ari's current situation but it will help her see a hopeful future "
• A Book Entitled: The Legend of the Smooglenuff. This is a collection of stories about Enri Smooglenuff and the stories he told.
• A basket of food to you - these are all individually chosen and are your favourite things.

!

Message from: Can Do Objective 1

You met this objective! The words were all there! For that, in the gift box Saoire sends you there is a small box with 10 chocolates / candies. They are, frankly, beyond delicious and taste like your very favourite thing. You find yourself unable to more than 1 on any trial. But each one provides the following to whoever eats it for the next 6 hours: "Saoire's domain of Gifts is not merely one of physical goods, but of the happiness and joy that comes with both giving and recieving a well meant gift. This ability allows the Blessed to give both themselves and anyone they're with a feeling of joy and good cheer, banishing negative feelings like sorrow, anger, and fear."

!	Message from: Second Can Do 1
	You read the book! In your gift from Saoire is a full copy of Smooglenuff's Guide to Falldrass. It's a set of books which includes Flora, Fauna, Legends and History.

Knowledge

None due to not being in the actual event.
Skill Knowledge:
Non-Skill Knowledge:

Balthazar

Overview

The thing I most enjoy about how you write Balthazar is the way that his thoughts are clear and so congruent with his actions - but yet, he's got so much more going on internally. I love his inner dialogue, how he views the world is very clear - as is his commitment to his friends.

Points

XP: 20
Renown: 15

Loot

• Your gift from Saoire: "A pair of silver rings which are connected to each other. Whoever wears them knows if the other is in danger or needs help and knows which direction they are in."
• A Book Entitled: The Legend of the Smooglenuff. This is a collection of stories about Enri Smooglenuff and the stories he told.
• After the event, in a few days, Saoire sends a basket of food to you - these are all individually chosen and are your favourite things. With it is a note of thanks.

!

Message from: Can Do Objective 1

You met this objective! The words were all there! For that, in the gift box Saoire sends you there is a small box with 10 chocolates / candies. They are, frankly, beyond delicious and taste like your very favourite thing. You find yourself unable to more than 1 on any trial. But each one provides the following to whoever eats it for the next 6 hours: "Saoire's domain of Gifts is not merely one of physical goods, but of the happiness and joy that comes with both giving and recieving a well meant gift. This ability allows the Blessed to give both themselves and anyone they're with a feeling of joy and good cheer, banishing negative feelings like sorrow, anger, and fear."

!	Message from: Can Do Objective 2
	You met this objective! Beautiful words spoken! For that you get +5 XP specifically on one of the following skills: Storytelling, Persuasion, or Rhetoric. Only one of those skills and all 5 XP must be used on it.

!	Message from: Second Can Do 1
	You read the book! In your gift from Saoire is a full copy of Smooglenuff's Guide to Falldrass. It's a set of books which includes Flora, Fauna, Legends and History.

!	Message from: Second Dan Do 2
	You had a chat! You may have an extra 3 knowledge in one of Linguistics, Sociology, Psychology OR Etiquette

Knowledge

Skill Knowledge:
Detection x 3
Etiquette x 3
Discipline x 3
Rhetoric x 3
Socialisation x 3


Non-Skill Knowledge:
You may choose up to 5 non-skill knowledge on each PC / NPC you met and spoke with here.
You may choose up to 3 non-skill knowledge on each PC / NPC you saw here.
These must be appropriate / able to be found in the thread.

Elisabeth

Overview

It was very interesting seeing Faldrass through the eyes of Elisabeth, who has never been there before. She's a real observer, I feel and there was a sense that she was "outside, looking in" but that was fine because she was with Balthazar and so was comfortable. Very thoughtful and reflective pc who's beautifully written!

Points

XP: 20
Renown: 15

Loot

• Your gift from Saoire: "A book which will record Elisabeth's spoken words (can be whispered) if directed to the book. Only she can read it, to anyone else it seems to be empty"
• A Book Entitled: The Legend of the Smooglenuff. This is a collection of stories about Enri Smooglenuff and the stories he told.
• After the event, in a few days, Saoire sends a basket of food to you - these are all individually chosen and are your favourite things. With it is a note of thanks.

!

Message from: Can Do Objective 1

You met this objective! The words were all there! For that, in the gift box Saoire sends you there is a small box with 10 chocolates / candies. They are, frankly, beyond delicious and taste like your very favourite thing. You find yourself unable to more than 1 on any trial. But each one provides the following to whoever eats it for the next 6 hours: "Saoire's domain of Gifts is not merely one of physical goods, but of the happiness and joy that comes with both giving and receiving a well meant gift. This ability allows the Blessed to give both themselves and anyone they're with a feeling of joy and good cheer, banishing negative feelings like sorrow, anger, and fear."

!	Message from: Second Can Do 1
	You read the book! In your gift from Saoire is a full copy of Smooglenuff's Guide to Falldrass. It's a set of books which includes Flora, Fauna, Legends and History.

!	Message from: Second Dan Do 2
	You had a chat! You may have an extra 3 knowledge in one of Linguistics, Sociology, Psychology OR Etiquette

!	Message from: Can Do Objective 2
	You met this objective! Beautiful words spoken! For that you get +5 XP specifically on one of the following skills: Storytelling, Persuasion, or Rhetoric. Only one of those skills and all 5 XP must be used on it.

Knowledge

Skill Knowledge:
Detection x 3
Endurance x 3
Etiquette x 3
Discipline x 3
Socialisation x 3


Non-Skill Knowledge:
You may choose up to 5 non-skill knowledge on each PC / NPC you met and spoke with here.
You may choose up to 3 non-skill knowledge on each PC / NPC you saw here.
These must be appropriate / able to be found in the thread.

Lady Alyssia Smooglenuff

Overview

Lady Smooglenuff, always a pleasure! It is, genuinely, a pleasure to read Alyssia she's such a lovely pc. She's so eager and so determined and yet polite. I want to take her home and look after her! Still, now she's got Barons and stuff attending to her. Just make sure they don't try and marry her off to someone rich!!!!!! Enjoy your rewards!

Points

XP: 20
Renown: 15

Loot

• Your gift from Saoire: "Your gift is a large, beautiful quill made of an enchanted feather. It is always perfectly inked and the ink will be any colour Alyssia wishes"
• A Book Entitled: The Legend of the Smooglenuff. This is a collection of stories about Enri Smooglenuff and the stories he told.
• After the event, in a few days, Saoire sends a basket of food to you - these are all individually chosen and are your favourite things. With it is a note of thanks.
  
• Saoire sends Alyssia a set of jewelry - all with the same symbol on it. The note with the jewelry explains that this symbol was the symbol used by Baron von Smooglenuff. The three aspects are Dedication, Courage and Perseverance. In the letter, Saoire is clear. If there is anything Alyssia needs, Saoire's door is always open. The set of jewelry is made of gold and combines diamonds and star sapphires. Pieces in it are:
  • A necklace
  • Earrings
  • Bracelet.
  • Ring.
  • A brooch.
  • A circlet

!	Message from: Second Can Do 1
	You read the book! In your gift from Saoire is a full copy of Smooglenuff's Guide to Falldrass. It's a set of books which includes Flora, Fauna, Legends and History.

!	Message from: Second Dan Do 2
	You had a chat! You may have an extra 3 knowledge in one of Linguistics, Sociology, Psychology OR Etiquette

Knowledge

Skill Knowledge:
Running x 2
Persusion x 2
Detection x 3
Discipline x 2
Etiquette x 3
Politics x 3


Non-Skill Knowledge:
You may choose up to 5 non-skill knowledge on each PC / NPC you met and spoke with here.
You may choose up to 3 non-skill knowledge on each PC / NPC you saw here.
These must be appropriate / able to be found in the thread.

Baron Darius von Smooglebaer

Overview

I'm so struck by the change in Darius in the last year - he's really grown and his experiences have shaped him so much. He was always a quietly thoughtful PC, and now that's tempered with experience and perhaps even the beginning of wisdom! Who'd have thought it, when he first started? Lovely writing - interesting and very 3-d character!

Points

XP: 20
Renown: 15

Loot

• Your gift from Saoire: "A "bolster"-type pillow which will never get saggy. It is (when he puts his head on it) the most comfortable pillow he has ever slept on. One hour of sleep on this pillow counts for a full night in terms of rest and body repair / relaxation. After an hour, he awakes feeling refreshed and alert. It will work for him plus one other, but his head must be on it for it to work."
• A Book Entitled: The Legend of the Smooglenuff. This is a collection of stories about Enri Smooglenuff and the stories he told.
• After the event, in a few days, Saoire sends a basket of food to you - these are all individually chosen and are your favourite things. With it is a note of thanks.

!

Message from: Can Do Objective 1

You met this objective! The words were all there! For that, in the gift box Saoire sends you there is a small box with 10 chocolates / candies. They are, frankly, beyond delicious and taste like your very favourite thing. You find yourself unable to more than 1 on any trial. But each one provides the following to whoever eats it for the next 6 hours: "Saoire's domain of Gifts is not merely one of physical goods, but of the happiness and joy that comes with both giving and recieving a well meant gift. This ability allows the Blessed to give both themselves and anyone they're with a feeling of joy and good cheer, banishing negative feelings like sorrow, anger, and fear."

!	Message from: Can Do Objective 2
	You met this objective! Beautiful words spoken! For that you get +5 XP specifically on one of the following skills: Storytelling, Persuasion, or Rhetoric. Only one of those skills and all 5 XP must be used on it.

!	Message from: Second Can Do 1
	You read the book! In your gift from Saoire is a full copy of Smooglenuff's Guide to Falldrass. It's a set of books which includes Flora, Fauna, Legends and History.

!	Message from: Second Dan Do 2
	You had a chat! You may have an extra 3 knowledge in one of Linguistics, Sociology, Psychology OR Etiquette

Knowledge

Skill Knowledge:

Navigation x 3
Detection x 3
Leadership x 3
Etiquette x 3
Seafaring x 3


Non-Skill Knowledge:
You may choose up to 5 non-skill knowledge on each PC / NPC you met and spoke with here.
You may choose up to 3 non-skill knowledge on each PC / NPC you saw here.
These must be appropriate / able to be found in the thread.

Yeva

Overview

I felt so sorry for Yeva in this thread - she's struggling so much with her place in things and there's a real sense that everyone is watching her to make sure that she's ok, which almost makes her feel worse. I really admire how you write Yeva - her relationships are so important to her. What's great is that is as true for ChiChi (an NPC) as it is for Darius, her very dear friend.

Points

XP: 20
Renown: 15

Loot

• Your gift from Saoire: "A necklace with a glass star. That star will function only when the stars are visible in the sky at night. When Yeva activates it (once per season) it is as if they speak to her, giving intangible hints as to where things are, the best way to go to reach them, and what hazards may lie in whichever path she takes. The glares of starlight seem to take on brief shapes that warn and direct. She is the only one who sees itt"
• A Book Entitled: The Legend of the Smooglenuff. This is a collection of stories about Enri Smooglenuff and the stories he told.
• After the event, in a few days, Saoire sends a basket of food to you - these are all individually chosen and are your favourite things. With it is a note of thanks.
• On the way out, Yeva realises that she's not cold - and that her Fire-Forged Diri is with her. Being back on Faldrass was, it seemed, all it took.

!

Message from: Can Do Objective 1

You met this objective! The words were all there! For that, in the gift box Saoire sends you there is a small box with 10 chocolates / candies. They are, frankly, beyond delicious and taste like your very favourite thing. You find yourself unable to more than 1 on any trial. But each one provides the following to whoever eats it for the next 6 hours: "Saoire's domain of Gifts is not merely one of physical goods, but of the happiness and joy that comes with both giving and recieving a well meant gift. This ability allows the Blessed to give both themselves and anyone they're with a feeling of joy and good cheer, banishing negative feelings like sorrow, anger, and fear."

!	Message from: Can Do Objective 2
	You met this objective! Beautiful words spoken! For that you get +5 XP specifically on one of the following skills: Storytelling, Persuasion, or Rhetoric. Only one of those skills and all 5 XP must be used on it.

!	Message from: Second Can Do 1
	You read the book! In your gift from Saoire is a full copy of Smooglenuff's Guide to Falldrass. It's a set of books which includes Flora, Fauna, Legends and History.

!	Message from: Second Dan Do 2
	You had a chat! You may have an extra 3 knowledge in one of Linguistics, Sociology, Psychology OR Etiquette

Knowledge

Skill Knowledge:
Cryptography x 3
Detection x 3
Discipline x 3
Etiquette x 3
Storytelling x 3

Non-Skill Knowledge:
You may choose up to 5 non-skill knowledge on each PC / NPC you met and spoke with here.
You may choose up to 3 non-skill knowledge on each PC / NPC you saw here.
These must be appropriate / able to be found in the thread.

Kura

Overview

It was really nice to read Kura in a more reflective / quiet mood. She's usually in a position where she needs to take charge whenever you're in a modded thread with me, so I guess that's why it's noticeable here. I think the thing that I love most about how you write Kura is that she comes across as old, as having seen a lot. Sometimes, she's just tired and a bit melancholy, and that's perfectly reasonable and fantastic role playing.

Points

XP: 20
Renown: 15

Loot

• Your gift from Saoire: "A necklace with a symbol of an owl on it which feels warm if someone knowingly lies to Kura. This is not lying in her presence, but lying directly to her."
• Cally's gift: " A pair of cut-crystal glasses which always contain the drink you want. Cally will be able to interact with and experience the sensation of drinking when she uses one of them - they function independently, so may be different drinks in each one."
• A Book Entitled: The Legend of the Smooglenuff. This is a collection of stories about Enri Smooglenuff and the stories he told.
• After the event, in a few days, Saoire sends a basket of food to you - these are all individually chosen and are your favourite things. With it is a note of thanks and a reiteration of Saoire's hope that they can work together

!	Message from: Second Can Do 1
	You read the book! In your gift from Saoire is a full copy of Smooglenuff's Guide to Falldrass. It's a set of books which includes Flora, Fauna, Legends and History.

!	Message from: Second Dan Do 2
	You had a chat! You may have an extra 3 knowledge in one of Linguistics, Sociology, Psychology OR Etiquette

Knowledge

Skill Knowledge:
Socialisation x 3
Detection x 3
Discipline x 3
Etiquette x 3
Meditation x 3


Non-Skill Knowledge:
You may choose up to 5 non-skill knowledge on each PC / NPC you met and spoke with here.
You may choose up to 3 non-skill knowledge on each PC / NPC you saw here.
These must be appropriate / able to be found in the thread.

Baron Nir'nuff von Smooglewei

Overview

You know, I think what I'm most impressed with by how you write Nir is just how much of a conundrum he is. He's incredibly astute, but seems barely to be paying attention, he's strong-minded and individual, yet is part of this collective and - the thing which came across most strongly here? - he's been through so much, yet he's still got faith in abundance.

Points

XP: 20
Renown: 15

Loot

• Your gift from Saoire: "When Nir'wei reads that book he reads his history. All of it, as told by Ralaith and written by Cassion. Upon reading it he is able to understand, finally, who he is. Mechanically, this means that any MB Domains (abilities) you have not used may be changed and you may gain 1 additional ability in any one of them"
• A Book Entitled: The Legend of the Smooglenuff. This is a collection of stories about Enri Smooglenuff and the stories he told.
• After the event, in a few days, Saoire sends a basket of food to you - these are all individually chosen and are your favourite things. With it is a note of thanks.

!

Message from: Can Do Objective 1

You met this objective! The words were all there! For that, in the gift box Saoire sends you there is a small box with 10 chocolates / candies. They are, frankly, beyond delicious and taste like your very favourite thing. You find yourself unable to more than 1 on any trial. But each one provides the following to whoever eats it for the next 6 hours: "Saoire's domain of Gifts is not merely one of physical goods, but of the happiness and joy that comes with both giving and recieving a well meant gift. This ability allows the Blessed to give both themselves and anyone they're with a feeling of joy and good cheer, banishing negative feelings like sorrow, anger, and fear."

!	Message from: Can Do Objective 2
	You met this objective! Beautiful words spoken! For that you get +5 XP specifically on one of the following skills: Storytelling, Persuasion, or Rhetoric. Only one of those skills and all 5 XP must be used on it.

!	Message from: Second Can Do 1
	You read the book! In your gift from Saoire is a full copy of Smooglenuff's Guide to Falldrass. It's a set of books which includes Flora, Fauna, Legends and History.

!	Message from: Second Dan Do 2
	You had a chat! You may have an extra 3 knowledge in one of Linguistics, Sociology, Psychology OR Etiquette

Knowledge

Skill Knowledge:
Leadership x 3
Detection x 3
Discipline x 3
Etiquette x 3
Persuasion x 3


Non-Skill Knowledge:
You may choose up to 5 non-skill knowledge on each PC / NPC you met and spoke with here.
You may choose up to 3 non-skill knowledge on each PC / NPC you saw here.
These must be appropriate / able to be found in the thread.

Baron Devin von Smooglethorn!

Overview

Devin is so much more complex than he seems to be at first sight! He's nuanced and beautifully written - I really enjoy reading his sense of fashion and fun and his impassioned speech about Alyssia was truly lovely. I really am so impressed with your writing of this pc.

Points

XP: 20
Renown: 15

Loot

• Your gift from Saoire: "A wooden handle which fits into the palm of his hand. Twice a trial it will change into any tool Devin wishes. While the tools are not inherantly magical, they are of masterwork quality and are always excellently maintained."
• A Book Entitled: The Legend of the Smooglenuff. This is a collection of stories about Enri Smooglenuff and the stories he told.
• After the event, in a few days, Saoire sends a basket of food to you - these are all individually chosen and are your favourite things. With it is a note of thanks.

!	Message from: Second Can Do 1
	You read the book! In your gift from Saoire is a full copy of Smooglenuff's Guide to Falldrass. It's a set of books which includes Flora, Fauna, Legends and History.

!	Message from: Second Dan Do 2
	You had a chat! You may have an extra 3 knowledge in one of Linguistics, Sociology, Psychology OR Etiquette

Knowledge

Skill Knowledge:
Musical Instrument: Lute x 2
Cosmetology x 2
Detection x 3
Discipline x 2
Etiquette x 3
Persuasion x 3


Non-Skill Knowledge:
You may choose up to 5 non-skill knowledge on each PC / NPC you met and spoke with here.
You may choose up to 3 non-skill knowledge on each PC / NPC you saw here.
These must be appropriate / able to be found in the thread.

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