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22nd of Vhalar 719

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22nd trial, Vhalar, 719


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Picts. Of all men consumed by cruelty and evil, precious few anger the Cimmerian more than the damned Picts. Especially when they were trying to kill him.

He thought he'd been sly. He'd kept to the Black River, winding down from the mounts, bordering the Wilderness of the Picts and Aquilonia. There were forts and patrols enough that he wagered the raiding parties would not venture so close, other than in a force he could easily see coming and thus avoid. He'd traveled by night and kept to the low ground. He'd presented no silhouette, cast no fire, eating raw meat and black bread and water straight from the river. The mounts had loomed larger and larger to the south, and by the fourth day, he was sure he'd made it.

Then he heard the drums. A distant beat into human hide stretched across wood and bone. Drums that could make a regiment quail and strong men break, for they spoke of nightmares they'd been weaned on for generations. Yet all the Cimmerian felt was a scowling, burning anger. He knew what the drums meant. They were talking. Spreading the word.

You are found, fool. Time to run.

This was the morning of the sixth day, and his second without sleep. They knew he was close to the mountains, the crevices, the winding, narrow passes, and their numbers would count for naught. More to the point, he'd be running straight towards borders guards, Zingaran knights, and unfamiliar lands their people did not know. So their leisurely pursuit had turned into a grueling, hateful, relentless slog across the plains.

They were running him down like they would a deer, or one of the great skulking leopards of the Wilderness. Force them to run and run and run and run while they kept the pace. Never tiring, never pausing, never letting their prey sleep or even slow. Until it slumped, exhausted, or turned to face them with maddened, suicidal fury. They were hoping for the former, and yet-

-the Cimmerian cleaved another of the hide-and-bone-cluttered beasts in two like he was a side of mutton hanging from a hook. The savage shrieks until blood was spewing from his mouth along with everywhere else, tumbling back down the hill... or at least half of him. Still clinging to his sword and flailing, his torso and arms went down, and the bottom half stayed upright for a moment. Then it topped over, and his fellows were already trampling both halves into the ground as they came onward-

-and the Cimmerian was already running again. Blood seeped and oozed for a dozen wounds. Mostly minor. But not all. The javelin through his bicep - a lucky throw, no more - had rendered one of his arms almost useless. Yet he could wield his longsword with just the one, and had been proving such for most of the sun-lit hours. The warband had been whittled down in lives just as they'd whittled him in strength... yet he knew they could afford the losses more than he.

Every step was torture, now. Every stride was another jolt of agony. The arrow through his leg had been broken off at the shaft. Arrow head still poking through the meat of his thigh... but the damage was done. He left blood in every print on the ground. His breath was coming in spurts, angry and animal. He looked up-

Mountains. Get to the snow, and they'll turn away.

-then back over his shoulder-

Still a dozen of them, at least. Tired as me, but not as wounded. Killing rage in their eyes, now. Crom. They might not stop. I wouldn't. Not after this-

He let out a curse as a whistling rain told his body to hit the ground before his mind was fully aware of it. Arrows juddered and whacked into the dirt, clanged off rocks. The Cimmerian rolled behind the nearest, largest one. The Picts behind him crouched, but did not hide. He dared hope for a moment that it was Zingaran border guards. Come down to forage or patrol, make a show of keeping the slopes clear of bandits. But then he saw the arrows. The heads crafted from stolen steel, polished walrus tusk, and covered where wood met steel or bone by a crow's skull.

Bastards. Bastards!

The Picts in cover began to laugh. Their comrades above answered them. An ugly, hooting sounds, like the man-faced apes the Cimmerian had fought against in distant Punt. The handful of archers had moved fast enough, traveled light enough, to somehow head him off. Fool, a fool he was! For thinking he knew a people's lands better than they. Now he looked up and four nocked arrows greeted him, archers still hidden, not taking any chances. A dozen grisly, fetish-strewn weapons of more intimate murder were held by those below him.

The Cimmerian held up his sword. He did not pray, nor ask for divine aid. Crom would not answer mortal words. He asked only that he look upon him, now. To know he died in the way of a true Cimmerian: in battle, bathed in the blood of his killers. He opened his mouth and-

-there was a flash from above, hidden by the rocks. Picts and Cimmerian alike stopped for a moment and turned their heads up towards the blue sky, the white snow, and the grey rocks. The sounds of death struck him. Ugly, meaty ways to die, too. Crunching bone and knuckles pounding into flesh. Snaps and gargles. Cracks and pleas cut of or drowned in blood.

The Picts tensed, and their leader - large as the Cimmerian and wielding a mace capped by a skull cast in iron - started forwards. He'd lost kin and friends to this intruder. He'd not allow him to live any longer, no matter what the interference. At their alpha's movement, the rest followed suite, and-

"Fuckin' mess yuhv got yerself into, eh?"

The Cimmerian looked up and found a small, bearded man with a dagger and a hatchet in his bloody hands. He was leaning against one of the rocks and scratched under his chin with the dagger.

"Need'nee help?"

The Pictcs screamed and charged. The Cimmerian bellowed and swung. The Etzori sighed and rolled his eyes.

"Take that as a 'yes'."
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They didn't take long to turn on him. Unfortunately, the visitor took even less time. The doorway in the Veil was bleached bone and ancient stones, carved with runes, faces, images that fascinated him. A name was inscribed above the arch. Written in that neat, straight way of a careful, studious mind. Kasoria brushed his fingertips across the word, mouthing it as he did.

"... Howard..."

He reached down through the water. Grasped the door handle. As he opened it, the door swung inward, motion pulling the rest of him down and under and in-

-into the light, the flash of blinding white after a moment of vision. Blasted wastes ended only by brooding mountains. The smear of a river, clear water made dark by properties mineral and perhaps magical. A black river, coiling like a snake, through a dead land... but not entirely.

Only a moment, did Kasoria get. But in that moment, he saw the pack, and the prey. And when he came out of the sizzling tear in the Dreamscape-

"... shite."

-it was to the stunned faces of four... well, "men" would be too polite. They were nightmares of mankind, parodies of humanity. Regressed to far into twisted bestiality that they looked more like shaved apes that had stumbled across crude weapons and the concept of clothing. They turned to him, jaws slack and teeth yellowed or black, unable to deduce how such a thing had happened.

It lasted a trill. Maybe two. But it was clear how they would resolve this issue. So Kasoria moved-

-just as the bows came about, Cimmerian forgotten, targeting this new, supernatural threat to their rear-

-that covered the distance between they and he within a blink, leaping with a savage bark as he approached the First-

CRUNCH

-flying knee to the Pict's chest crushing his bow against it before he could first, and sending him flying back against the boulder he'd been hiding behind. The savage yelped as he slid down to his knees, but three others were already drawing-

Shield!

SH-SH-SHUNG

The Picts gaped anew as the stranger threw up his hand and a shimmering white barrier burst into form in front of him. Tall and broad enough to hide his body from view, their three crude arrows slammed into it. Knocked aside or simply broken by the impact, they fell to the ground. Kasoria made full use of their confusion, using the couple of trills to turn back to the stunned, wheezing First, who was finally up to one knee-

CRACK

-lashing out with a lunging kick to the Pict's face. Smashing his nose, pulping his lips, merciless force of the blow ruining the Pict's features forever. But that was just cosmetic. The real damage was when the blow snapped the archer's head back-

CRUNCH

-and fractured the back of his skull against the boulder. Brain matter and blood and fragments of bone splattered over a patch of rock. As First died with his mouth open and lips wheezing, Kasoria noticed the smear wiped over grey and black rock as he went. A perfect half-circle of life essence, ending when the archer slumped to the side, and died.

The others spoke in a language he didn't understand. It was low and guttural, delving into hoots and hisses more than once. Kasoria turned back to them, fists tight at his side. No point in trying to negotiate with these... constructs. Whatever fragment of the dreamer's mind they were, they were not permeable to reason. As if to make his point, they tossed down their bows and drew their personal weapons. If arrows wouldn't work, club and hatchet and dagger might. Kasoria swept a gaze across them, and saw an inhuman light dancing in their eyes.

The Etzori smiled and nodded.

"Yer funeral."

They came on at him, and he had to admit, they weren't easy meat. No skill, no training-

as a sweeping blow from the hatchet came for his neck, he swayed, arm coming up to knock the limb aside and let the bearer stagger past him. His torso swiveled hard on his hips as he powered a left hook into the stumbling man’s head. Buying him time, and forming an opening for him to surge forwards, towards the club-wielding man instead

-but they were clearly veterans, survivors, experienced in the ways of war and bloodshed. Bones of animals and men hung about them. Trophies. Proof of prowess and murder-

who swung at Kasoria with equal zeal, backhanded, then forward as Kasoria ducked under it, only for the Etzori to stop the swing with a forearm, kick to the knee dropping the clubber down, other arm hammering an elbow into his face once, twice, blocking arm then yanking the club from the loosened grip and bringing it crashing down on the stunned Pict's skull

-but not against men like Kasoria, or the Cimmerian. Border guards, bounty hunters, their own kind across innumerable clan wars. They had survived conflicts and skirmishes aplenty... but sooner or later, a fighter comes up against someone of superior skill-

he was already turning away when the disarmed and half-headless clubber fell backwards, dagger-man coming in fast and low, forcing him to leap up to avoid the swipe aimed at his groin. But he didn't just go up. He twisted his body and half-spun in the air, body going almost parallel to the ground as the shocked Picts slashed at thin air... right before Kasoria's leg came scything up and down from his spinning form, catching the dagger-man between shoulder and neck, smashing him to the ground

-and they had no recourse for this. Their fighting became wilder, more desperate. Savage from the wastes or soldier from the city, rage and anger would muddy any combat effectiveness. It made you sloppy, blind, prone to errors. After the first two died-

hatchet-man came in again, from the rear, and Kasoria yelped as he slid to the side to avoid a slash that would have taken his arm off, but still bit into the meat of his arm. He glared at the ax-man, who came on at him, slashing and hacking, little man backing up, over and over, until his arm jerked up and he met ax-head with club-head, both men frozen for a moment, weapons above their heads, until Kasoria's knee buried itself between the Pict's legs. The savage's eyes nearly popped from his skull, and an instant later Kasoria's forehead spread his nose across his face with a shattering impact. The Pict staggered, mind reeling along with his body, and Kasoria snatched the hatchet from his hand-

-hurling it into the chest of dagger-man, only now getting back to his feet, one arm limp and useless at his side. The Pict coughed up blood, looking down with crossed eyes at the unwelcome addition of an ax sunk into his chest. He fell back down and died that way, staring in disbelief, as the last Pict shook his head clear and refocused on the small, hairy, angry arrival-

Kasoria saw an instant of recognition, right before the man died. A moment of clarity, long enough for him to see the hurtling blur of the bone-headed club. Right before it smashed into the side of his skull and shattered everything inside it. The Pict died on his back, choking on blood, brain to scrambled and riddled with bone shrapnel to do anything but scream silently within him. The little man picked up the dagger, and the hatchet... then remembered the rest of what he'd seen.

Then he didn't need to, because he heard it. Furious, desperate battle, beyond those rocks. Now stalled as they apparently heard his own efforts. Kasoria appeared behind them, caked in the blood of the Pict's kin and bearing their weapons. He spoke his words and sized up the situation. One possible alley, and... perhaps eight enemies. Not great odds, but he'd faced worse... probably.

"Need'nee help?"

He got no answer but a snarl and a swing of a massive, black-steeled sword. The savages closed in on the fighter and Kasoria gave a sigh of false annoyance. False because, well... injury aside, real and carved into his living flesh, this was more than what he'd expected. A fine fight, a decent challenge... and now he had his body to truly experience it with.
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The Cimmerian did not care who the monstrous little man was. He cared only that he was an ally, if only of moment. When the vultures circled and jackals found courage to attack, one did not question what fickle muses of Fate granted one any additional advantages. He was now facing these men, in the true and honest battle he was so gifted at. They, and not the archers in the rocks. And now he was aided further, as a trio of Picts broke off from the pack to hurl themselves at the newcomer.

The Cimmerian gave a bloody-lipped grin. More the fool them.

Bone and pilfered steel met the black meteorite metal of his sword. Five of them, attacking at once, no care given to individual honor. Against any other man, they would have been overwhelming. But whenever they struck and hacked and thrust, they found their weapons turned away, clanging uselessly against his sword. One overextended as another tripped on a rock, giving him an opening to cleave his chest open. It exploded like rotten fruit, spewing offal, shrieking Pict trying to jam his innards back into him. In a flash he saw how fared his ally-

"Crom..."

He moved with the fluid brutality he'd only seen in the fighting masters of Khitan, whose most deadly warriors eschewed blades and spears, favoring instead fists wrapped in leather and spiked with enchanted iron. He thought of them as he saw the little man duck and dance around enemy strike, retaliating with clinical precision.

A saw-toothed sword swung for his head and the hatchet was there to meet it, bone meeting bone as the little man darted past the swordsman-

-slashing the dagger across his stomach as he did, then again across his shoulder as he passed him with a backhanded strike. The Pict howled as blood spurted into the cold air, spinning around in a fury, in a rage, not thinking, not seeing-

-the little man duck under the blow, Pict's blow swinging into nothing-

-burying the hatchet into his stomach and leaving it there. Shoving the dying man to the side and into another enemy closing on him, both Picts going down in a tangle of limbs and cursing, bleeding, spitting, shrieking bodies-

-leaving the little man to explode at the third Pict, roaring out a wordless battle cry as a rune-etched club was swung at him. He ground his teeth and covered the distance, throwing up his free arm and feeling his forearm tremble as he caught the blow with it. Not the head of the club; on the handle just below, but that was enough for agony to ripple through him-

-but not enough to stop him, even to slow him-

SHUCK-SHUCK-SHUCK

The Cimmerian couldn't suppress a twitch of appreciation as the stolen Aquilonian dagger moved in a blur. Flashing silver vanished under the Pict's ribs, gouging deep into the pumping organs in his stomach. Then again, almost in the same second, thrust between ribs and then yanked back out again, covered in blood. Lung burst, heart pierced, liver and kidney, skewered, the man was already dead on his feet. But the little man wasn't done. The third blow, a trill later, went into the side of the man's neck-

-the third and final Pict roared and charged at him, little man grabbing the doomed, blood-spewing Pict in front of him by the back of the head and twisting hard-

The Cimmerian roared as his curiosity cost him a stripe of skin scored out of his back. He rounded on the bastard who'd had the impudence, and found him grinning in delight. The Cimmerian knocked the sword aside, thrust into him with both hands and ripped the blade out through the side of the man's ribcage. Bone fragments spewed over the three remaining Picts... and at the sight of that, the feel of wet, warm bone across their face... and what was unfolding further uphill...

Kasoria had hurled the Pict into the path of the last one. Big, bearded cunt with a double-headed ax. Big enough to casually kick aside the "obstacle" Kasoria had tried to present him with, and keep on coming. The Etzori cracked his head to the side and went into the shadow of the giant. Came in low and from the side, dagger held straight as if he were going for a stab and when he lunged-

-he didn't, he dodged, to the side, away from the hammering vertical blow that came down where he would have been-

-and leaped up and back as the giant followed up with a low sweep, aiming to hack both his legs off, and yet the ax-head found stone instead of flesh.

Kasoria remembered the terrain, even though it wasn't his own. He knew the boulder was behind him. Round, white, covered in lichen and moss. No obvious use, of course... but change the circumstances, steer the fight, even just remember it's there... and who know? It might, say, provide a platform for his feet to land on. Already bent, ready to leap, the giant looking up and seeing him perched there-

-too slow to react, when Kasoria exploded straight at him. Landing knee first into his face and sending him toppling back. Kasoria's free hand grabbed as much hair as he could and held him close, dagger stabbing wildly into his neck, his throat, his face, anything that could draw blood. Over and over until the air was filled with mist and the bellows were screams were gargles that were coughed up into Kasoria's own shrieking mouth-

The last Picts watched their biggest fighter fall down without a face, and the little man who killed him slowly get up... and look at them. The Cimmerian in front of them flourished his sword, scored and cut in a few places but no worse for wear. The whirling metal stopped sharply in a defensive stance... and he grunted.

The three men turned and fled without so much as a whoop.

The Cimmerian watched them go and hurled oaths from his homeland at them. Calling into doubt both their genders and ancestry. Fucking wasted on savages like that, but it made him smile. The smile was still there when he turned back to see if his "ally" was about to turn on him, too, but instead of a little man covered in blood he saw-

-that flash of light again, that vast tearing sound. A doorway had been torn in the thin, frigid air. The little man was about to step through it. He paused and spoke some words to him, making no move to attack. He looked down at the dagger and said something, shaking his head. Instead of taking the trophy, he tossed it to the Cimmerian. The Northman caught it and saw the little man make a gesture that could only have been farewell... and speak one final word before pointing straight at him.

The Cimmerian opened his mouth to speak, but with a step and a crack of air filling an empty space, the man was gone. Leaving the Cimmerian standing surrounded by bodies, bleeding, and confused.

"Who is 'Howard'?"
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Kasoria the Barbarian Raggedy Man
Skill Points: +10 (cannot be used for magic)
Magic XP: None.

Renown: None.

Injuries/Overstepping: Shallow gash on left bicep, easily sewn up and sanitized.
Wealth Points: None.
Loot: None.

Skill Knowledge:
  • Blades (Dagger): Switching from Straight to Reverse Grip with a Flick of a Wrist
  • Blades (Dagger) - Combo: Stab to the Liver, Stab Between the Ribs, Stab Into the Neck
  • Dual Wield: Dagger x Waraxe
  • Tactics: Remembering Environmental Features, in case They Can be Used Later
  • Tactics - Capstone: Fighting Armed Enemies While Barehanded
  • Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Butterfly Twist Kick
Non-Skill Knowledge:
  • Dreamwalking - Crossing: Injuries Carry Over Back to the Waking World
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You know I enjoyed this. This was such an excellent mash-up of style, character, and an homage world premise. I couldn't find any fault with the usage of REH's world and terms. Thus, the details made it believable to read instead of trite.

The NPC scene, to the backing-up to the PC's beginning beforehand, then back to NPC technique was well-used here. I liked how much was added through narrative that the reader could be aware of, but that Kasoria ICly would be unaware of (such as Picts being called Picts) to help the immersion without getting the scene bogged down in the character's IRP understanding. He doesn't need to know they are called Picts to bash their head in! Wonderful balance of details in-dialogue vs. details in-narrative that supported the scene.

Awesome job and enjoy your rewards!

PM me if you have any questions, issues or concerns.

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