Comments: Heya, just a quick heads up for Balthazar. Your CS needs attending to. While mages aren't necessarily required to keep a separate ledger for magic xp, the xp awarded for magic
is treated as separate from ordinary skills. As such, each thread that awards magic xp must be marked in your ledger. So what I want you to do is just go back through his threads, find which ones award magic xp, and then just put (defiance) or (rupturing) next to the points awarded, so reviewers know how you've been earning magic xp. Once you do that, I'll dole out your rewards for this thread. Thanks!
Well, this investigation escalated quickly! I love that trick Balthazar pulled with the large pillar of stone, and then punching it to send shrapnel/projectiles of earth at the other guys.
Lorraine, I love that you took the time to write a song for your thrall, and how you play your bone song during the fight was very neat.
Overall, this thread was a fun read, and I look forward to more collabs between you two.