Graded Burdens to Carry

While trying to earn her stay in the human sector, Yeva learns a new craft and prepares for a trek the Temple of Glories to delivery food to trapped residents. OOC: Happy to make this open, but let me know so I can write somewhere for you to jump in. :)

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The human sector was far more animated than the first time she had walked through the streets, a gaggle of Biqaj children playing with a pair of sticks in replacement of training swords. They swung wildly and shrieked with joy, no real learning session outside of their imagination. Pretenders of war, if only they knew what that entailed. It was good they didn't, Yeva thought solemnly, mulling over the rumor she had heard that morning. Was Raskalarn behind the storm that afflicted so many of the Athart's citizens?

A woman named Nora approached and crouched down, handing her a bundle of willow shoots freshly boiled and stripped. She spoke in Dehasin, knowing that the red head did not follow. It had been quite the language barrier, but Yeva found the community close knit and determined. They helped one another, even those who did not quite fit in, and through perseverance, and many, many hand gestures, Yeva had acquired the ability to relay simple thought. If she pointed to herself and repeated Yeva, they understood. If she pointed to them afterwards, they would often introduce themselves. She had learned some very basic nouns, and the words for yes, no, and stop. On the days she was lucky, she found a slave or freeborn willing and able to translate enough to get her through the door and a roof over her head for the night in exchange for work. If she wasn't, she rolled up her cloak and slept beside the streets.

A place to stay had been the bare necessity, but carrying on like this was proving difficult. Her stomach growled and she pretended to not have noticed when the woman tried to meet her eyes. As many of the humans she encountered were slaves in some form or the other, they often did not have much to share and Yeva couldn't bring herself to ask. Very little rice or beans would make it to their plate, sometimes paired with a mashed jungle root or a slice of fruit she did not recognize. Plastering on a smile, she reached for the materials and tapped it in quick succession.

"Reeds," the woman answered followed by twisting and pointing to something behind her, "Basket. Yeva."

"Oh, I see," Realizing they were going to be crafting these structures, she nodded with interest. She had never made one, but it had always seemed like a useful skill, "Reeds," she touched the material and then gestured to where the woman had motioned, "Basket." She nodded but repeated the words slower and Yeva followed, making an effort to hit each syllable. "Bas-ket."

Nora looked pleased and she gently took one of the willow stalks from Yeva's dainty fingers and weighed it in her hand. The intended use of the basket must have determined the thickness of the reed, as a pet basket made of light cane would not have the necessary body or firmness for such a shape or purpose. The slave motioned many times to the length of the piece, which must have been necessary to note, and one by one, Nora pulled six of the thickest reeds from the lot. Pulling a sharpened stone from the pocket of a well worn smock, Nora re-positioned her hands to allow the best view , before cutting small splits into half of their centers. Picking the stick up, she pushed her knife through with practiced ease until each slit remained two inches long and then began working in the untouched three through the holes until a wooden "x" was formed.

"Slath." Nora handed the creation over for Yeva to touch and observe, and the younger woman found it a bit amusing she would learn the Dehasin words for basket weaving, but not the Common terms.
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After observation, Nora continued in her instruction, showing Yeva how to begin weaving the base of the basket and move upward, keeping the reed taught with every nimble curve of her fingers.Other slave women worked alongside them and without the hindrance of instructing another, they did so with surprising skill, leaving Yeva fumbling when it was her turn to demonstrate her new understanding. She struggled to bend the reeds and weave them in the correct pattern, cheeks burning like two suns beneath her skin every time she made a mistake.

Yeva pushed back a wave of hair, the heat building up beneath her blouse in a cloud of discomfort. She kept working, passing the craft to Nora when she reached a snag or the reed reached its end and together they managed to create a suitable structure by lunch. And speaking of lunch...

A pair of men wearing rough spun trousers grunted, hefting a crate of fresh fruit from the orchards. Upon the wood, the name Trevender was stamped, and they began passing out mangoes, peaches, and oranges ripe and beautiful. The brightly colored fruit moved down the lines, disappearing into the new baskets and a man of thirty eyed her briefly before holding out his hand. Unsure, Yeva tentatively took hold of the waxy fruit and began to lower it inside the container but he shook his head, "Yeva eat." His rough hands wrapped around hers and he pushed the offering towards her mouth, "Yeva eat."

"Yeva eat."

She took a bite, sinking into the skin with juice so sweet she almost cried. Her stomach growled again, a whimpering animal, and she had forgotten just how hungry she had become, "Thank you," she breathed after swallowing the first taste, "Thank you so much."

"You're welcome."

He patted her shoulder and looked up, past her red hair at Nora, who smiled patiently. He spoke with the other woman in Dehasin, the two going back and forth as she ate, bouncing her attention between them. A colorful bird swooped lazily overhead and disappeared into the branches of a tree when the man addressed her again, "Yeva"

Her eyes snapped from the rustling leaves, her chewing slowed.

From his strained expression, the young medic learned very quickly how limited his Common was, "We leave now. You stay?"

Without thinking, she blurted, "Where go?" A quick grimace and she tried again. 'Sorry,' "Where are you going?"
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"We are going to the Temple."

Which one? Yeva's expression must have been of lost confusion, because the slave pressed fingers to his mouth, "We feed masters. Masters hungry. Masters give favor."

"Who know?" Nora was quick to add, not wanting to get any hopes up, but in the Avriel's time of need, maybe they would one day return the favor to those they had kept under their heel for so long. At the very least, these were uncertain times for anyone in the city, and the humans, who had been forced to rely on the Avriel over the arcs, felt the anxiety of their absence. It was a long shot and Yeva finally understood. Nora began to check the baskets for strength, "We try."

The medic looked to the sky, nodding in quiet resolution. What if Azrael was there, looking for among the groups of slaves? "Yeva go."

When they had said 'temple', she had imagined a religious space, struggling to piece together 'pious' and 'Avriel' in the same sentence. But she had heard and seen a few signs of various worship by the winged race, particularly to Syroa. It made sense, given their creation story.

"Masters like Yeva for food?"

"Hm," Nora, having collected the supplies while Yeva cleaned up her craftsmanship, "No. But..." she lowered her voice, beckoning Yeva to join and began to speak slow, unsure how to share this thought in without Dehasin, "People say the Avriel are grounded. We will go see for ourselves."

Oh.

Yeva was not sure she understood, ears straining and brows furrowed as Nora spoke. Avriel. Ground. We go see. The other words were lost on novice ears and she looked ahead in quiet worry. She feared something had happened to the wings of feathered citizens; And what of Azrael? With so many rumors spreading across the city like wildfire - from rebellion to war and now the true weakened state of the upper class - Athart felt on the verge of devastation.

A very important question weighed down her shoulders, slowing her as she climbed the path towards the Temple of Glories, fruit in hand, and a heart bound in fear.

What could she do to stop it?

Even before they arrived, Yeva could feel the crowd's electricity. It buzzed through the air, the sounds of anxious shouting merging to create a cacophony of requested attention. It took a nudge from another slave to keep her moving towards the cluster, a wave of awe shifting her perspective. She was surprised by the sheer amount of wingless people, holding up baskets of prepared food, shouting in hopes to be noticed. Eyes peered from high above in the temple, shadows stood behind sheer curtains, ever observant from their elevated places. Whether they cared or not for the masses crying for answers and notice was something that didn't seem to matter.

Yeva's brown eyes searched, "Azrael!" she screamed, holding up the food cultivated from the Trevender Estate, "Azrael! Azrael!" she shouted into the wind, another voice among many, but her need to find her friend cause her voice to turn raw, her arms aching the longer she held up the weighted basket, "Where is Azrael?" The energy of the crowd had a toxicity to it. An allure that kept her projecting her voice, knowing how futile it was, knowing that even if Azrael was locked away with the others, he wasn't likely to actual spot her. Her saving grace was her hair, which burned like a flaming arrow among the blondes and brunettes around her, "Azrael! Please! I have foo-"

Something large and dark swooped from above, causing her to cry out as her weight was thrown forward and her basket spilled some of its content onto the dirt and mosaic floor. When she looked up, she saw the black wings of a Avriel beating, the wave of cool air rolling across their skin. He effortlessly glided to one of the balconies and Yeva saw his face. It was not Azrael, she did not know this man. He eyed her for only a moment. Stolen apple in hand, he shone it against white alabaster cloth pants and took a bite, no longer interested in the rabble below.

Yeva did not see him again all evening, and no one with answers gave her any notice. Eventually, when she could no longer hold her gifts or yell alongside the others, she was forced to return back to the slave sector with Nora and the others.

Another day alone, another burden to carry.
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Re: Burdens to Carry

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Yeva:

Knowledge:
Skill Knowledge:
Basketweaving
Boil, Soak, & Dry Willow Stalks
Use Thicker Reeds for a Basket's Base
Forming a Slath
Linguistics
The Importance of Hand Gestures
Imitate Native Speakers for Fluency
How to Switch Between Different Grammatical Structures

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Language: Dehasin
Dehasin: Spoken by Athartian Slaves
Dehasin: The Common Sounds of the Language
Simple Sentence Structure

Lorien
Spoken by Athartian Masters
Simple Sentence Structure

Athart
Popular Immortals Among Avriel


Loot: A small handmade basket.
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: 5
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 10
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Comments: There’s something about your writing style that makes your posts entertaining and easy to read. I thought that the description of Yeva using hand gestures in order to make herself understood despite the language barrier was well-written. I also have a bit of a weakness for basket weaver PCs, I have to admit. In your review request you mentioned that you lost complete interest in this thread and that you were sure that would come across in your writing. Well, I enjoyed this solo, and I didn’t really notice anything!

Enjoy your rewards!

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