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Zelferan
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Posts: 50
Joined: Wed Apr 12, 2017 12:42 am
Race: Immortal
Profession: Slaver
Renown: 10
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Wealth Tier: Tier 1

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Zelferan

Zelferan

Age: 37 Arcs

Race: Lotharro

City: Nashaki

Fame: +10

Date of Birth: The 1st of Cylus, Arc 680

Marks: None

Factions Joined: None

Languages Spoken:
Fluent in Common,
Basic in Haltunga

Partners: None
Appearance
Zelferan is the perfect example of a Lothar. He stands at about 6'9 feet tall with an indeterminable weight. His hair is a rich, dark brown like bitter sweet chocolate. His lush locks curl around his head like a majestic mane fit for the beast of a man that he is. His eyes are a sharp green, good at tricking others by feigning affection, kindness, or innocents. Those eyes however are always cold, judging, waiting for the prefect moment when his foes turn their back and leave themselves wide open to attack. As for how he's built, like most Lothar he is a ball of muscle and raw strength. The easiest way to describe him is "built for the gods". There is no way to possibly deny the allure this man flaunts like a weapon. He prides himself on his appearance for this fact and this fact alone. His best ally and his most dangerous weapon is his pretty face, with a hard set jaw and good cheek bones. Very little flesh existing on his body is fat, most of it being grizzle and muscle chiseled to perfection by the hands of Delroth and Edasha. Like most Lothar Zelferan is outfitted with sharp claws and fangs.


Personality
Zelferan has a naturally venomous attitude towards the world. His nature bitter through ages of abuse and neglect, he often is cynical about the world around him. He has embraced this aspect of the world whole heartedly, having decided that if there's going to be betrayal at every turn he might as well be doing the betraying. Of course he tends to put his true nature on the back burner. While in the presence of possible clients or allies in his power fantasy he will act as any good business man, both professional and cold. Once he has drawn someone in he will start to act a bit more buddy buddy with them, trying to win over their favor. If that doesn't work then with his snake like personality he'll slowly begin to turn what allies he has against his new foes. Zelferan tends to bleed people for all they're worth, drinking every last drop of precious money and power that he can before leaving the corpses of the fallen to rot against the stony earth. After all, it was done to him so many times before it's only right. He deserves all this strength, this power. He also deserves women, lots and lots of women. In the presence of the opposite gender Zelferan becomes a seductive smooth talker, schmoozing his way up her skirt. To Zelferan though women are more than just toys or distractions, they're also power. The move a woman relies on you to give her joy, the more she's willing to do whatever you ask. Especially when you don't make it obvious you're abusing that power. Treat a lady well and it's easy to maybe, say, convince her to sway her powerful father to your side. And that's not even considering the fact that every woman pregnant is another future member of your army! Suffice to say, Zelferan has fathered a lot of bastards.
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Zelferan
Approved Character
Posts: 50
Joined: Wed Apr 12, 2017 12:42 am
Race: Immortal
Profession: Slaver
Renown: 10
Character Sheet
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Wealth Tier: Tier 1

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Miscellaneous

Zelferan

History



Long ago there was a monster. Monster lived wild, free, ever able to do as it pleased. It was a very solitary monster, never living with any other monsters except for one. These two monsters were brothers, they couldn't be separated by man or immortal. Or so the two beasts thought, until they did come face to face with an immortals. The monster lost his only brother at the hands of an immortal he was soon to call his god. In complete and total out rage the monster threw himself at the immortal, aiming to try and kill. The beast for all its valor and strength was slaughter like an insignificant pest. It laid dying at the feet of the immortal, unaware of its future that was soon to come. At the hands of Thetros the beast and his brother were reborn as men. With sharp claws, dangerous fangs, and a wild nature the beast of a man was drawn to the life of the Hunter. He and his brother through every life remained close, sometimes even raising each other after their untimely demise. Even among the Lothar who always considered each other to be brothers, these two were close. Together through the ages they traveled almost as one, a single boat set adrift on the rippling seas of fate and life.

Eventually after a great many existence, came the story of Zelferan and Helios. After the two died protecting their home from a vicious beast they were raised by their brothers, like any Lothar would be. From the moment Zelferan was old enough to think he knew he would bound to the path of the Hunter. On the other hand Helios knew he was to be a Breeder. Together the two trained their respective Paths to the best of their abilities. However, one day Helios grew bored by it all. To his brother Helios purposed an interesting idea that Zelferan had never even pondered in all his years. Leave. Zelferan had never left the city he called home, and in all his lives he had never left the region he was born in. As far as he knew or cared he would always be born there and always die there. Helios however was a freer spirit, eventually convincing Zelferan to leave with him. When the two were roughly 16 arcs of age and strong enough to take care of themselves they left. Zelferan was a very curious man, always poking his nose where it didn't belong. He liked to learn things, sneaking around and watching others. His favorite thing was to watch the other races. How the interacted, how they thought, what the women were like. He wanted to know everything he possibly could. Helios on the other hand could care less. Zelferan often found himself being the one to take care of both of them. Zelferan was usually the one with a job, Zelferan was usually the one to drag Helios to whatever inn they were staying at after he got drunk, Zelferan was usually the one to deal with the angry pregnant women who came after his brother for what he'd done. Slowly Zelferan started to get a little sick of it. After two arcs of putting up with the nonsense he confronted his brother, asking what in the hell was going on. Helios broke into tears, playing on the sob act. He said that he honestly didn't mean to do what he did, it just sort of happened. He couldn't control himself! He gave into his vices. Zelferan, ever the fool, forgave him.

At around 20 arcs of existing in this life the pair came across the city of Nashaki for the first time. Zelferan fell in love with the city. He wasn't sure exactly what it was but the city itself called to him like a siren. He wanted to stay there for the rest of his days and every day past that. Helios on the other hand, hated it. While in the city Zelferan paid no attention to his brother, often letting the other man fend for himself. This upset Helios beyond all belief, and for the first time Helios lashed out at Zelferan. It started out as nothing more than a simple fist fight. Helios however quickly turned it into something a lot more violent. He began scratching, clawing, punching to break as many things as possible. Helios ended up winning, beating Zelferan into a bloody pulp and calling it punishment for ignoring and disrespecting his brother. This was when Zelferan started to realize that something was wrong, very wrong. Zelferan, ever the fool, forgave him. The two left the city after that, Helios trying to find someplace that wouldn't draw Zelferan's attention to so. Zelferan didn't care though, there was a part of his spirit that was broken with his bones the day of that fight. Zelferan quickly became a shell of his former self. This carried on for a couple more arcs, though something in Helios seemed to have changed. His habits made almost a 360, he started working alongside Zelferan, saving money and ignoring women. For a time Zelferan had hope that his brother had returned to his senses. For a time life was good, great even as Zelferan discovered the thing that would quickly become the most important thing to ever walk into his life.

In Scalvoris Zelferan met a woman with skin and hair like snow and eyes like fire. Her name was Zix. Zelferan quickly became obsessed with this woman, spending every moment of his time with her and trying to win over her favor. Zix's eyes however seemed to be a reflection of her spirit as she refused to let Zelferan sweet her off her feet, a spirit like pure flames keeping her independent and free. Zelferan however stayed to determined. Zix, realizing he wasn't giving up, gave him a chance and ended up falling in love. Zelferan adored Zix with all of his heart, and decided that she would be his life mate. Helios quickly caught on to what was going on, and he was furious. Both Zix and Helios disappeared for a time, 2 seasons to be specific. When they returned Zix was broken beyond repair, fattened with a child. Again, Helios had punished his brother for his disloyalty. Helios expected Zelferan to completely break this time, and the man did, but not in the way that Helios was hoping for. Zelferan realized in the moment he saw them, that his brother no longer existed. He left Scalvoris with Helios, and Zix who Helios wished to use as a pet, allowing his enemy to think that he was broken. Zelferan attacked Helios the moment they were far enough from Scal no one would be able to hear his screams. Zelferan with all the strength and anger of his old monster self tore off the arm of Helios, but unfortunately allowed Helios to escape. There was always the chance that Helios would survive, and almost a certain chance that he would come back reincarnated unless some animal ate him like he deserved.

Zelferan offered Zix one final "mercy", killing her quickly by stabbing her in the head. The child on the other hand, festering in her gut, he offered no such kindness to. With his dagger he carved his former life mate wide open, his mind completely having been lost in his wrath and his madness. He pulled the half formed child and out stabbed it. He stabbed it and stabbed it and stabbed it until it was a puddle of blood and flesh, whatever was left he set ablaze.

After that Zelferan returned to Nashaki. The city had taken on a completely different light. He could see the dark half, the dangerous half, the half that he now belonged to. He used what funds he's stolen from Helios to buy a house in the city. He decided he didn't want to be the underdog anymore. He would be the leader, the alpha. He decided that he was going to rule Nashaki. And he knew the perfect way to go about it.


Housing



Zelferan's new housing is roughly the same size as the old one. Owing to the terrible heat of the day, the underground chambers are kept very cool. Being underground, there are no windows to be had, but in place of them, the chamber is somewhat more nicely furnished than it would otherwise be, and is provided with some very heavy bedding to ward off the cool of the night. The chamber also a has a floor mat with some additional heavy bedding in case Zelferan has a slave staying the night with him, whether it be a personal slave or tower slave, and he doesn't want lesser beings in his bed.


Companions



N/A
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Zelferan
Approved Character
Posts: 50
Joined: Wed Apr 12, 2017 12:42 am
Race: Immortal
Profession: Slaver
Renown: 10
Character Sheet
Templates
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Zelferan

Skills


SkillTotal PointsSkill Level
Blades(Dagger)10/250Novice
Business Management0/250Unskilled
Deception4/250Unskilled
Disguise0/250Unskilled
Endurance25/250Novice
Etiquette0/250Unskilled
Forgery0/250Unskilled
Intelligence0/250Unskilled
Interrogation0/250Unskilled
Intimidation4/250Unskilled
Leadership0/250Unskilled
Lock Picking0/250Unskilled
Mathematics0/250Unskilled
Negotiation0/250Unskilled
Persuasion14/250Novice
Politics0/250Unskilled
Pick Pocketing0/250Unskilled
Psychology0/250Unskilled
Rhetoric0/250Unskilled
Seduction10/250Novice
Socialization0/250Unskilled
Sociology0/250Unskilled
Strength(FT)10/100Novice
Tactics0/250Unskilled
Torture0/250Unskilled
Unarmed10/250Novice
Writing0/250Unskilled

Skill Levels
Unskilled (0 Points)
Novice (1:1, 0 Knowledge) (1 - 25 Points)
Competent (2:1, 5 Knowledge) (26 - 50 Points)
Expert (3:1, 10 Knowledge) (51 - 75 Points)
Master (4:1, 15 Knowledge) (76 - 99 Points)
Legendary (5:1, 20 Knowledge) (100 Points)

Secondary Weapons Skill Levels
Unskilled = 1 Knowledge
Novice = 5 Knowledge
Competent = 10 Knowledge
Expert = 20 Knowledge
Mastery = 30 Knowledge
Legendary = 40 Knowledge


Knowledge

Locations

Location: Scalvoris (RM)

Self

Zix: Murdered by your brother (RM)

NPCs

NPC: Ravenna: Major Player in the Tower of Flesh
Ravenna: A Means to an End

PCs

PC: Noth
Noth: "Prince of Eternal Mercies"
Noth: A new rival? Enemy?
Noth: A petulant, naive child
PC: Eddrick Brodon: Warchief of the Rhakrii Raiders

Monsters

Risen Dead: Hotlands Hazard to be Burned, Beheaded or Both

Blade

1. (SP)Blades(Dagger): What side is the pointy end
2. (SP)Blades(Dagger): Best uses for a dagger
3. Blades: Using a knife on unarmed victim

Bludgeon

1. Bludgeon: Mace: Getting the Feel of Weapon's Balance
2. Bludgeon: Mace: More Reach and Impact Than a Fist
3. Bludgeon: Mace: Not For Thrusting

Deception

1. Deception: How to tell a white lie (RM)

Discipline

1. Discipline: Keep Your Mind Occupied
2. Discipline: Patience in Negotiation

Endurance

1. Endurance: Resisting attacks

Field Craft

1. Field Craft: The Harsh Nature of the Desert

Intelligence

1. Intelligence: Successful Bandits Don't Establish Patterns
2. Intelligence: There are Walking Corpses in The Hotlands

Intimidation

1. Intimidation: Stop them with a glare (RM)
2. Intimidation: Using your size to your advantage
3. Intimidation: Using your sadism to your advantage

Negotiation

1. Negotiation: Holding an Auction
2. Negotiation: Replacing a promised item with a different item of equal value
3. Negotiation: Knowing when to be honest and when to toe the party line
4. Negotiation: Be Prepared to Wait
5. Negotiation: Posturing With Offers of Vague Rewards

Persuasion

1. (SP)Persuasion: Tell people what they want to hear
2. Persuasion: Appeal to fear (RM)
3. Persuasion: Offering a way out of a bad situation

Psychology

1. Psychology: Humorous Banter in Life-or-Death Situations

Strength

1. (SP)Strength: How to build muscle
2. Strength: How to squat (RM)
3. Strength: Carrying someone over the shoulder
4. Strength: Not budging

Story Telling

1. Story Telling: The Story of a Brother's Betrayal

Seduction

1. (SP)Seduction: Target the weak

Torture

1. Torture: Working with a companion to brand a slave
2. Torture: Only those without empathy rise to the top
3. Torture: Using a knife to gut a man alive

Trap Making

1. Trap Making: Clifftop Lemming Drop Lure Trap

Unarmed Combat

1. Unarmed Combat: How to throw a punch (RM)


Skill Point Ledger




Thread/Skill NamePoints AwardedPoints DeductedTotal
Character Creation50050
Racial Bonus(Endurance)252550
Strength01040
Persuasion01030
Seduction01020
Unarmed01010
Blades0100
(RM)Deception040
(RM)Persuasion040
(RM)Intimidation040
Slave No More15015
Flesh in the Sands15030
Trials of Bandit Hunting15045
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Zelferan
Approved Character
Posts: 50
Joined: Wed Apr 12, 2017 12:42 am
Race: Immortal
Profession: Slaver
Renown: 10
Character Sheet
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Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Zelferan

Marks


Marks

Abilities

Knowledge

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Zelferan
Approved Character
Posts: 50
Joined: Wed Apr 12, 2017 12:42 am
Race: Immortal
Profession: Slaver
Renown: 10
Character Sheet
Templates
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Zelferan

Items
  • One set of clothing (coat, shirt, pants, boots, etc)
  • One Set of Toiletries: Soap, A comb or brush, razor, toothbrush, toothpaste,
  • One waterskin
  • Two sets of eating utensils
  • Tinderbox
  • The Dagger he used to kill Zix and the child(Prized possession)
  • Combat Knife
Ledger


ItemDebit/CreditTotal
City Dwellers Pack +100 gn 100 gn
Combat Knife -5gn 95 gn
Total Currency: 0 ON, 95 GN, 0 SN, 0 CN
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Zelferan
Approved Character
Posts: 50
Joined: Wed Apr 12, 2017 12:42 am
Race: Immortal
Profession: Slaver
Renown: 10
Character Sheet
Templates
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Zelferan

Fame Leger


Item/ThreadPointsTotal
Lothar+10 +10
Bandit-10 0
Nashaki+10+10
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Zelferan
Approved Character
Posts: 50
Joined: Wed Apr 12, 2017 12:42 am
Race: Immortal
Profession: Slaver
Renown: 10
Character Sheet
Templates
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Zelferan

Thread List


Solos

Joint

Trials of Bandit Hunting (Ashan 25th, 717)
Slave No More (Saun 8th, 717)

Jobs

Memories

Dreams

Special/Moderated

Flesh in the Sands (20th Ashan, 717)

Global

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