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Navyri
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Carving of the Raven Pt 2.
City/Area: Wilderness outside Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Violence/torture.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Logic: Weigh the Pros and Cons of a Situation
Poisons: Use Safety Precautions When Handling Substances
Poisons: Fairy Stone - Keep the Mind, Stop the Body
Sewing: Threading a Needle
Torture: Sewing Someone’s Hands Together
Torture: Draw Out the Punishment

Loot: Deducted 20gn for the poison.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Yes, please! Since he is left alive, Navyri should get some.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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"At last. It has been too long since I have walked the face of this world. Too long have I been locked there, awaiting my champion to release me. My champion... This is you, daughter of Audrae. You have, whether knowingly or not, released me from my self imprisonment, and are here to fulfill the destiny I have seen written in the tapestry of nature. You, daughter of Audrae's daughter, will be my foothold in this world." - Belaera to The Nightingale, after the 600 arc imprisonment
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Pash Raj'oriq
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Fool me twice, Part One
City/Area: Little Korlasir, Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Nah. Pash goes shopping. Talks it up with the musician/blacksmith Carl and his dad, Hurk. Good times are had. I'm in this for the loot, so PLEASE send me a PM if I've screwed up the alchemical calculations. It's ... complicated.

Requested Rewards:
Non-Skill Knowledge:
Location: Scalvoris Town: Little Korlasir Blacksmiths
NPC: Hurk, a knowledgable blacksmith
NPC: Carl, the musician's blacksmith
NPC: Rhob, Hurk's alchemist connection

Skill Knowledge:
Negotiation: Using your story
Negotiation: Appreciate the work
Negotiation: Being honest about your expectation
Negotiation: Being on friendly terms aids in pricing
Unarmed Combat: Assessing armor for maneuverability
Unarmed Combat: Knowing your weaknesses

Loot: -943gn, 80sn for materials, masterwork craftsmanship, and alchemy. Everything is detailed in the last post, but the loot is as follows:

1 chocolate pastry
1 woven cotton sash
1 Masterwork Cotton Shirt, Hard (or Tough, whichever works better) as Malorite
1 Masterwork Leather Breeches, Hard (or Tough, whichever works better) as Malorite
2 Wool Cloaks, Warm as Orange Sand
1 Leather Vest, Hard (or Tough, whichever works) as Malorite
1 Masterwork Leather Cuirass, Hard (or Tough, whichever works) as Malorite
1 Masterwork Leather Fauld, Hard (or Tough, whichever works) as Malorite
1 Pair of Masterwork Leather Vambraces, Hard (or Tough, whichever works) as Malorite

Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Reviewer's discretion for hanging with the Korlasir Blacksmiths telling adventure stories and jamming with Carl by the Scalvoris Town Square fountain at the end
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Rakahi | Rakahi Pidgin | Common | Xanthean

Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Arlo Creede
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Harbour Songs
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Violence.

Requested Rewards:
Vega
Skill Knowledge:
Discipline: Not responding to insults with your fists
Discipline: Considering someone else before you act
Endurance: Brief bouts of unconsciousness
Endurance: Trying to ignore a minor concussion
Fieldcraft: Orange sand for warmth
Fieldcraft: Use bags of sand to exclude drafts
Fieldcraft: A tarp over a tent can add warmth
Fieldcraft: Ensuring that there are no gaps in tent construction to avoid wind traps
Unarmed combat: Kick to the shin


Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruises on her temple, some cuts and scrapes where she fell.
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: No

Arlo
Skill Knowledge:
Cooking: Seasoning a cast iron pot
Endurance: Letting him get one good punch in
Fieldcraft: Using bags of sand to prevent drafts
Fieldcraft: Maximizing space
Strength: Carrying another person
Unarmed combat: Duck and weave
Unarmed combat: Time your punch
Unarmed combat: Use the environment
Unarmed combat: Distraction tactics

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: 1 x black eye, bruises on cheek/face and bruised knuckles.
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Arlo Creede on Wed Dec 06, 2017 4:21 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 181
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Nauta F'mos Geey
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Thread Name: How to train your Anak
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Memes
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Endurance: An Anak of Force's painful game of catch
  • Unarmed: Rebound of a force assisted blow
  • Unarmed: Rapid strikes stance
  • Unarmed: Reactionary defence
  • Discipline: Matching a routine practiced with another
  • Thrown: Bouncing a projectile to hit yourself
Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Fame: -
Collaboration: -
Magic EXP: -

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Last edited by Nauta F'mos Geey on Wed Dec 06, 2017 6:05 pm, edited 2 times in total. word count: 63
But I don't want to cure cancer. I want to turn people into dinosaurs.
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Navyri
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Thread Name: Things Better Left Unsaid
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: A simple conversation that I tried to make as interesting as possible.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill
Poisons: The Dangerous Death Cap
Poisons: Death Cap Symptoms
Poisons: The Red Podostroma Cornue Damae
Business Management: Simple Economics
Intimidation: Don’t Let Them Get Too Comfortable
Detection: The Feeling of Being Watched

Non-Skill
Flora: Death Cap Mushroom
Flora: Podostroma Cornue Damae Mushroom

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Negative for mentioning immortals in Etzos
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Last edited by Navyri on Wed Dec 06, 2017 10:33 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 92
"At last. It has been too long since I have walked the face of this world. Too long have I been locked there, awaiting my champion to release me. My champion... This is you, daughter of Audrae. You have, whether knowingly or not, released me from my self imprisonment, and are here to fulfill the destiny I have seen written in the tapestry of nature. You, daughter of Audrae's daughter, will be my foothold in this world." - Belaera to The Nightingale, after the 600 arc imprisonment
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Nauta F'mos Geey
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Thread Name: The Heavy Lifting
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Shannaro!!! (I'm sorry not sorry)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Deception: In whose best interest?
  • Negotiation: Reserve another's wants to get what you want!
  • Strength: Force assisted lift
  • Unarmed: Grappling: Force assisted grip
  • Unarmed: Grappling: Force assisted throw
  • Unarmed: Grappling: Improper transition between a grab and a throw will fail
Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: Pride
Fame: Getting ass handed maybe. But its an obvious curbstomp so not too much yeah?
Collaboration: -
Magic EXP: -
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Last edited by Nauta F'mos Geey on Sat Dec 02, 2017 7:24 pm, edited 3 times in total. word count: 84
But I don't want to cure cancer. I want to turn people into dinosaurs.
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Vega
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Thread Name: Why are you such a dweeb?
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Vega is obnoxious

Requested Rewards:
Vega
Skill Knowledge:
None

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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Arlo Creede
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Changes
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Violence.

Requested Rewards:
Vega
Skill Knowledge: 9 posts = 14 knowledge
Combat: Blade: Draw your sword ready
Discipline: Focusing in the face of a powerful distraction
Endurance: Staying up all night
Hunting: Searching for tracks in the snow

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping:
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: No

Arlo

Skill Knowledge: 8 posts = 13 knowledge
Cooking: Storing eggs for a journey
Discipline: Focusing in the face of a powerful distraction
Endurance: Staying up all night
Ranged Combat: Bow: Ready position
Ranged Combat: Bow: Anticipating moving targets
Ranged Combat: Bow: Eye shot (even when there are a lot of eyes)
Storytelling: Birds as messengers from beyond the grave
Unarmed Combat: Charge and tackle
Unarmed Combat: Breaking combat
Unarmed Combat: Shielding another with your body


Loot: 2 x pairs of undead giant spider pincer
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: No
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Max
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Thread Name: Dancing into the Night
City/Area: Almund
Notes/Warnings: Suggestions and language
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Max:
Seduction: Using Innuendos
Seduction: Using Weapons to Add Excitement
Seduction: Attracting with Wit
Seduction: Fighting for Dominance
Seduction: Playing Hard to Get
Seduction: Public Displays of Affection
Seduction: Challenging Bedroom Prowess
Etiquette: Proper Way to Hold Utensils While Eating
Location: The Sapphire Inn
Ceressa Reyes: a Sapphire Inn Employee
Merces: Arrogant and Alluring
Merces: Keeps Me on my Toes

Merces:
Seduction: Using Innuendos
Seduction: Attracting with Wit
Seduction: Public Displays of Affection
Seduction: Implying Bedroom Prowess
Seduction: Fighting for Dominance
Seduction: Turns Words to Action
Seduction: Wooing Women with Luxury
Negotiation: Securing Food and a Place to Stay
Location: The Sapphire Inn
Ceressa Reyes: a Sapphire Inn Employee
The Sapphire Inn: Makes Good Food
Max: Beautiful and Stubborn
Max: Has a Venomous Tongue

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Kayleigh
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Joined: Tue Dec 06, 2016 8:28 am
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Profession: Freelancer
Renown: 49
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Returning to the Beginning
City/Area: Outskirts of Ne'her
Notes/Warnings: Touching goodbye perhaps?
Requested Rewards:
Skill Related:
  • Endurance: Extended Travel Via Foot
  • Endurance: Carrying Luggage
  • Storytelling: Significance in Events
Non-Skill Related
  • Personal: The Trip Back To Ne'haer
  • Vhalar: A Beautiful Season
  • Uphrisca: Was Quite An Adventurer
  • Uphrisca: Once Was Young and Beautiful
  • Uphrisca: Adores You
  • Philosophy: Live Every Moment Following Your Heart
  • Personal: Temporary Good-byes
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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