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Review Request 2.1.1

Thu Aug 17, 2017 3:19 pm

Peer Review Requests
PLEASE DON'T EDIT OR REMOVE REVIEW REQUESTS.
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Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
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Review Request 2.1.1

Thu Aug 17, 2017 9:46 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Everything Counts In Large Amounts
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: suggestive themes at End with ftb
Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge: (5 out of 8 for 3 posts)
Detection: Hearing danger in your sleep
Discipline: Prepared to fight anytime
Short Bow: How to release without firing
Seduction: Use of suggestive tone
Seduction: Innuendo

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Pash: Blessed by Zanik
Pash: Clumsy when excited
Pash: Easily distracted by nudity
Pash: Shares special moments with you, even when it's late

Elithem Mark: Playing emotional songs makes others emotional
Elithem Mark: Just a little more irresistible

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Fame: n/a
Devotion: n/a
Collaboration: Yes, with Pash
Magic EXP: No

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Review Request 2.1.1

Fri Aug 18, 2017 10:36 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Freedom
City/Area: Surrounding Waters and Landmarks
Notes/Warnings: n/a
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge: (8 out of 11 for collab with 6 posts)
Detection: Picking out figures from a distance
Detection: Recognising signs of a shipwreck
Persuasion: Showing you're not a threat
Socialisation: Using caution during new meetings
Caregiving: Offering water to Mero
Caregiving: Comforting Mero
Detection: Knowing when to get help
Running: How to lope

Non-Skill Knowledge
Mero: Shipwrecked stranger
Mero: Half boy, half bird
Mero: Can't (or won't) talk
Mero: Half Avriel
Mero: You feel protective for him
Baya: Has a mount now
Baya: Is tenacious
Baya: Can produce flowers to soothe the stomach
Pash: Appears when you need him
Pash: Is wonderful with scared children
Pash: Carried Mero
Faith: Calm under pressure
Faith: Has knowledge of Athart
Faith: Blessed by Moseke
Faith: Works at The Order of Adunih
NPC: Squid (Order of Adunih)

Location: House of The Order of Adunih
Location: Athart
Athart: Is a slave city

Race: Avriel

Blessing of Sevrath: Can be used to heal

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Fame: +1 Kindness to Mero
Devotion: n/a
Collaboration: Yes with Pash, Mero and Baya
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.1

Sat Aug 19, 2017 1:50 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Field Research II
City/Area: Oakleigh
Notes/Warnings: n/a
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge: (6 max)
Endurance: Continuous, strenuous exercise builds resistance
Endurance: Enduring extreme pain
Endurance: Moderate pain feels great compared to extreme pain
Research: Understanding reference material
Research: Finding written records

Non-Skill Knowledge
LYCHL, the Jourkadri with a sickness
LYCHL: Warrior and father
LYCHL: "Knife of Soul"
Jourkadri libraries housed trade records
Strange Illness: Source of Jourkadri suffering

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Fame: n/a
Devotion: Yvithia: Discovering a forgotten library
Vri: Seeing the dead?
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.1

Sat Aug 19, 2017 2:35 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Crystal Clear
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Nudity, Sexual theme and suggestions, fade to black
Requested Rewards:

Yanahalqah
Knowledge:
  1. Seduction: Lustful Whisper
  2. Seduction: Suggestive Sauntering
  3. Rathaan: Yludih
  4. Rathaan: Human Form
  5. Rathaan: Wants to try a relationship with you
  6. Rathaan: Knows you are Yludih
  7. Rathaan: Knows your human form
  8. Rathaan: Doesn't deal with Yludih revelation as easily as you
  9. Ulehi: Best not to speak it in Idalos, lest someone overhear
  10. Yludih Melding: Fusion of bodies
  11. Yludih melding: Intense pleasure
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Skill:
Strength: If at first you don't succeed, continue to force your way out

Other:
Yludih Melding: Not like other sex
Yludih Melding: Difficult to get out
Yludih Melding: Sharing Asterism pulses
Yludih Melding: Intoxicating
Saeri: Yludih
Saeri: Never told you about her family
Saeri: Likes you, wants you
Saeri: Blessing from Aelig?
Saeri: Convinced you some more

Collaboration: Yes

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Review Request 2.1.1

Sat Aug 19, 2017 3:05 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Medicine Woman
City/Area: Ne'Haer
Notes/Warnings: Pretty tame, Rorom gets a bit nauseous and about to throw up, but doesn't.
Requested Rewards: 15 points each since the thread was concluded successfully.
Knowledge:
Rorom:
1. Endurance: Maintaining consciousness with a head injury.
2. Endurance: Not throwing up while nauseous.
3. Endurance: Walking while concussed.
4. Animal Handling: Pet warfare
5. Animal Handling: Dogs are protective of humans.
6. Animal Handling: Avian/Canine relations
7. Location: Ne'Haer: Temple of U'frek and Chrien
8. Location: Ne'Haer: Lochgrass Gardens
9. Medicine: Patient must sit still while being attended to.
10. NPC: Sniffer: Sel'ma's canine companion.
11. PC: Sel'ma, a good healer.
12. PC: Sel'ma, owed a favor by Rorom.

Sel'ma:
1. Animal Handling: Pet warfare
2. Animal Handling: Even birds can grow attached to their human companions.
3. Animal Handling: Avian/Canine Relations
4. Location: Ne'Haer: Temple of U'frek and Chrien
5. Location: Ne'Haer: Lochgrass Gardens
6. Medicine: Patient must sit still while being attended to.
7. Medicine: It's not good to sleep on an untreated headwound.
8. Medicine: Treating a concussion.
9. Medicine: Proscribing directions to a patient.
10. PC: Rorom: An honest sailor.
11. PC: Rorom: Owes Sel'ma a favor.
12. NPC: Fortuna: Rorom's avian companion.


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Rorom had a concussion, but this thread was sometime ago. Maybe a scar on his scalp.
Fame: Sel'ma for helping a Ne'Haer fisherman and bringing him to safety to the temple.
Devotion: Not sure about Sel'ma's devotion. Probably nothing for Rorom except promising to take her somewhere via his boat. So nothing for Rorom.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

EDITs: I edited the note about Sel'ma, as she got back to me and is fine with the knowledges as I wrote them.
Also numbered the knowledges for easy reading. I know I'm not supposed to edit but thought it would be easier for you all if I did those small edits.
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Padraig
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Review Request 2.1.1

Sat Aug 19, 2017 10:45 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Pragmatic Presents Prevail
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope

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Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Logistics: Organising a surprise
Logistics: Changing a plan based on new information

Loot: I've deducted 810gn from my ledger.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Positive, please
Devotion: Vri: Act of True Love (+3), Confess Your Love (+3)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Padraig


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Persuasion: Explaining why you need nothing
Rhetoric: Explaining complex concepts
Seduction: The ancient and well-practiced art of sweeping the girl off her feet. Literally
Strength: Carrying a person, even a small one, requires muscles.
Teaching: Using fresh produce as visual aids

Loot: +1 telescope, box of lenses and journal
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Don't think so
Devotion: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Nir'wei
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Profession: Animal Handler of The Menagerie
Renown: +146
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Review Request 2.1.1

Sun Aug 20, 2017 5:35 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Dolphin's Cry
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere.
Notes/Warnings: Animal abuse.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Strength: Knowing where to apply force.
Strength: Proper positioning of your feet.
Strength: Distribute force evenly across the body.
Strength: Bracing with your shoulder.
Strength: Adding to existing momentum.
Strength: Working with objects larger and heavier than yourself.
Endurance: Keeping reserves of energy.
Endurance: Applying constant pressure over long periods.
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Good deed?
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes, but the other person abandoned it.
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.1

Sun Aug 20, 2017 5:50 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Off The Beaten Path
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Bit of violence.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Shortbow: How to rapid-draw.
Shortbow: Aim for the head first.
Shortbow: Shooting at point-blank range.
Shortbow: Always have a second arrow ready.
Shortbow: When you can't use precision, use speed.
Stealth: Avoid cluttered environments.
Stealth: The best attacks are on unsuspecting prey.
Stealth: There's a time where it's necessary.
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Good deed?
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.1

Sun Aug 20, 2017 5:59 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Lending A Hand
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Animal Training: Commanding movement using hand gestures.
Animal Training: Commanding movement through use of reins.
Animal Training: Handing control to others.
Animal Training: Teaching more refined commanding gestures.
Animal Training: Combat mount training.
Teaching: Giving basic instructions.
Teaching: Practical instruction.
Teaching: Sometimes, demonstrations are better.
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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