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Tue Aug 15, 2017 3:48 pm

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Thread Name: When One Door Closes
City/Area: Rynmere.
Notes/Warnings: None.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
1. Fieldcraft: Making use of all available materials.
2. Carpentry: Joining two halves of wood together.
3. Carpentry: Angling nails to provide a better seal.
4. Carpentry: Fitting complimentary pieces.
5. Carpentry: How to restore a shattered door.
6. Strength: Lift with your knees.
7. Fieldcraft: Repair before you replace.
8. Fieldcraft: Scavenge ideal pieces first.
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Positive, Good Deed
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Faith
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Tue Aug 15, 2017 3:59 pm

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Thread Name: When One Door Closes
City/Area: Rynmere.
Notes/Warnings: None.

Requested Rewards: Faith

Knowledge:
Carpentry: Making use of all available materials.
Carpentry: Joining two halves of wood together.
Carpentry: Angling nails to provide a better seal.
Carpentry: Fitting complimentary pieces.
Carpentry: How to restore a shattered door.


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Positive, Good Deed
Devotion: Famula: Service without recompense (+1), Maintain position as valuable servant / slave (+5), champion master's ideals (+3)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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"Every evil has its good, and every ill an antidote."

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Faith
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Tue Aug 15, 2017 4:29 pm

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Thread Name: Freedom
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None.

Requested Rewards: Faith
Knowledge:
Caregiving: Tone of voice with patients in shock
Caregiving: Giving as much information as one can
Caregiving: Remaining calm
Investigation: Asking questions to aid diagnosis
Investigation: Thorough examination leads to efficient diagnosis
Leadership: Preparing for a medical admission
Leadership: Telling people what you need, clearly
Leadership: Directing and requesting

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Positive, Good Deed (volunteering time, helping medically, offering a place to live)
Devotion: Famula: Service without recompense (+2) (volunteering, offering a place to live), give another mortal employment (+3)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Faith on Sun Aug 27, 2017 11:35 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 111
"Every evil has its good, and every ill an antidote."

~ Rharne HQ
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Neronin
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Tue Aug 15, 2017 7:33 pm

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Thread Name: Pestilential Waters
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Gross Blight undead violence. You have been warned.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Necromancy: Blight
Necromancy: Blight thrall can be dangerous when damaged
Necromancy: Blight takes trials to Create
Stealth: Rolling Footsteps to be Quieter
Intimidation: Leaving Al'Angyryl Mark to Scare People

Location: Underground Reservoir

NPC: Bervic the Cobbler

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Reviewer discretion
Devotion: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes: Necromancy
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Last edited by Neronin on Sat Aug 19, 2017 1:16 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 82
“That is not dead which can eternal lie, And with strange aeons even death may die.” - Lovecraft
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Silv
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Wed Aug 16, 2017 3:02 am

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Thread Name: The Ringing of Bells
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: Just a combat training thread
Requested Rewards:
Acrobatics: How to duck a punch
Detection: Utilizing auditory cues to judge movement
Endurance: Getting up from hard landings
Unnarmed Combat: Kren Maii stance
Unnarmed Combat: Defend with forearm punches
Unnarmed Combat: Knee Strike

Location: Fist of Aedirn
Kren Maii: A Style of Efficency

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruises, perhaps mild headaches
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Padraig
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Wed Aug 16, 2017 2:50 pm

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Thread Name: The Future
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Padraig
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Logistics: Planning surprises
Logistics: Planning ways around cultural norms
Logistics: To do lists to aid planning a pregnancy
Persuasion: Mutualism is a scientific thing, honest.
Persuasion: Putting forward emotions as scientific facts
Psychology: Allaying fears
Sociology: Maintaining secrets among immediate family only is culturally appropriate
Sociology: Cultural norms for behavior during pregnancy

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: No
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: No
Faith
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Interrogation: Trying to find out what secret your significant other is keeping
Logistics: Planning together requires time and communication
Persuasion: Trying to wheedle information out of someone
Psychology: Maintaining the illusion of control helps
Psychology: Put fears out in the open, then dismiss them
Sociology: Cultural norms for behaviour during pregnancy

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: No
Devotion: Vri: Act of True Love (+3), Confess your Love (+2)?
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: No
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Neronin
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Wed Aug 16, 2017 3:57 pm

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Thread Name: Bonemaker: Raid
City/Area: Etzos Outskirts
Notes/Warnings: Undeath, violence
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Requested Rewards:
Necromancy: Corpse Molding
Necromancy: Gaunt
Necromancy: Customizing your Gaunts
Tactics: Using Undead as Shock Troops
Investigation: Checking The Victim's House for Items
Stealth: Creeping Up on a House

Loot: Two iron brooches with brackets for gems, draft horse and two-wheeled wagon.
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Reviewer discretion
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
Noth
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Intimidation: Undead are Scary
Leadership: Testing Follower's Abilities
Leadership: Testing New Monstrosities
Unarmed Combat: Claws are Very Dangerous
Tactics: Using Underlings to Fight
Psychology: Children's Death's Weren't Your Fault, or Neronin's
Psychology: Donning the Persona
Investigation: Burning the Evidence

Loot: Assorted Armor and one brass ring with a black bird on it
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Reviewer discretion
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Neronin on Sat Aug 19, 2017 1:17 pm, edited 2 times in total. word count: 154
“That is not dead which can eternal lie, And with strange aeons even death may die.” - Lovecraft
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Tio Silver
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Profession: Pirate Captain
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Wed Aug 16, 2017 4:54 pm

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Thread Name: Form of the Shark 1
City/Area: Uleuda
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Meditation: Difficult on hard floors
Meditation: Gets easier with age
Research: Reading up on shark facts
Research: Looking in libraries
Animal Training: Sharks have lots of sharp teeth
Animal Training: Sharks are dangerous

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Tio Silver on Sat Aug 26, 2017 6:43 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 74
Currently very sick and light-headed. Apologies if my replies take a while and don't always make sense.
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Edalene
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Thu Aug 17, 2017 4:43 am

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Thread Name: This Must Be The Place
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: FTB incest sex.
Requested Rewards:

Aeodan (11 Skill Knowledges)
Caretaking: Drawing a bath
Caretaking: Easing someone’s anxieties
Caretaking: Massaging sore muscles
Cooking: The perfect temperature for steak
Cooking: Roasting vegetables together
Cooking: Sauteeing asparagus for flavor
Cooking: Pairing the right wine with steak
Cooking: Finishing a steak in the oven
Psychology: Finding solutions to someone’s problems

Edalene: Depressed
Edalene: Is jealous of you and Duncan
Edalene: Appreciates you

Edalene (12 Skill Knowledges)
Psychology: Pretending You're Okay
Psychology: Focusing on the good things in life
Psychology: Affirming someone's worth
Rhetoric: Proposing a Toast

Aeodan: Wants to take care of you
Aeodan: Doesn't miss your parents
Aeodan: Has feelings for Duncan
Duncan: You're jealous of him
Red Wine: From Hiladrith


Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope
Devotion: Aeodan - +3 to Vri (help someone overcome a great sadness), +3 to Vri (an act of True Love), +5 to Cassion (dedicating a meal and story to a new adventure)
Edalene - +3 to Vri (an act of true love), +1 to Ralaith (pray to Ralaith)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Pegasus
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