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Neronin
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Thread Name: Let the Bodies hit the Flour
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Necromancy: Finding a nice corpse
Necromancy: Using undead to distract your enemy
Appraisal: Judging the merits of a stranger
Deception: Hiding one's purpose
Location: Etzos: Underground

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Don't think so.
Fame: Reviewer disgression
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes

Kovic left the site before we finished and before I got a clear idea of his requested feedback form this thread.
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Thread Name: Better Than Home
City/Area: Etzos, Noth's Cavern
Notes/Warnings: No, not really, just Noth's face.

Neronin
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Noth's Cavern: A New place to Practice Magic
Noth: Intimidating visage
Noth: Cares for the goose
Necromancy: Requires a safe space to Learn
Rupturing: Can Blink across water
Negotiation: Sell your strengths
Leadership: Asserting a plan to win favor
Loot: Study space in Noth's Cavern?
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No idea
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
Noth
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Neronin: Rupturer
Neronin: Needs a space to practice his magic
Neronin: Can provide undead soldiers
Leadership: Using intimidation to enforce your orders
Leadership: Show of strength goes a long way
Leadership: Inspire loyalty boy refusing payment
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No idea
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Necromancy Notations II: Ravens
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Necromancy: Link: Ravens make good observation thralls
Necromancy: Small animals are easy to animate
Necromancy: Ravens need practice to control in flight
Leadership: Getting children to do your bidding
Leadership: Giving incentive
Negotiation: Children work for less than adults

Loot: Dead raven
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Perhaps?
Devotion: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes
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Thread Name: Statement
City/Area: Etzos, Surrounding Farmland
Notes/Warnings: Gruesome violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Necromancy: Using Thralls to write messages
Rupturing: Blinking to close distance to Prey
Intimidation: Use undead to scare folk
Intimidation: Build a dark persona
Leadership: Reigning in your undead

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: I'm guessing Negative
Devotion: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes
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Theo Nji'Ryn
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Profession: Whatever the Whim
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Thread Name: Sweat Stained Nights
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Mature themes and content.

Zana
(4 posts = 9 knowledge)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Deception: Putting on a smile in the face of true hardship
Deception: Telling someone you hate them when you mostly don't
Detection: The smell of a poor quality establishment
Detection: Watching a crowd during a fight
Discipline: Not showing that you are uncomfortable
Endurance: Eating something which is not fit for consumption
Etiquette: A good wine doesn't help a bad meal
Etiquette: Appropriate seating standards
Etiquette: Playing a role in a group


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Theo

(4 posts =9 knowledge max)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: The smell of a poor Inn
Detection: The smell of sweat
Discipline: Dealing with demanding women
Discipline: Focusing in times of stress
Etiquette: Don't ask what the meat is.
Unarmed Combat: Grabbing someone to protect a lady
Unarmed Combat: Throwing down stairs
Unarmed Combat: Drunk opponents relax
Unarmed Combat: Relaxed opponents can take more damage.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Give a gift (+2)
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Every crowd has a silver lining.
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Oliver
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Thread Name: Sweat Stained Nights
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Mature themes and content. Also, I know I'm not approved yet, but I hope to be by the time this thread gets graded. Otherwise my stuff with be here for when I do

Oliver
(5 posts = 10 knowledge)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Rolling with a Punch
Detection: Pinpointing Weaknesses Before a fight Starts
Discipline: Resisting a Head On Charge
Discipline: Holding Firm Until an Opportune Moment
Psychology: Making an Opponent Feel Mocked
Socialization: Alcohol Yields Awkward Introductions
Unarmed Combat [DB]: Headbutt
Unarmed Combat [DB]: Uppercut
Unarmed Combat [DB}: Using Feints to set up a follow-up strike
Unarmed Combat [DB]: Knee Strike

Bronze Boar: A Place to Fight
The Lady Libertine: In the Glass Quarter
Theo Nij'Ryn: A Businessman
Zana: Quiet Armcandy


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruised Shoulder
Fame: +4 (Victory in Single Combat) [Note: I'd take less given that the fight only lasted one post]
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Aeodan
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Thread Name: Field Research I
City/Area: Oakleigh
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Swinging a pickaxe repeatedly
Endurance: Working in the suns
Discipline: Staying calm under pressure
Detection: Finding artifacts in the cairns

Jourkadri Cuts: Placed on their cairns
Jourkadri Cuts: Carved into ivory pieces
Jourkadri Tribes: Isolate their burial mounds
Jourkadri Tribes: Bury their dead with tribute to Vri
Judah: Baker's son
Judah: Loves horses
Judah: Soldier
Judah: Grew up poor
Judah: Poor relationship with his father

Loot: 4x Jourkadri Chests ( Belong to the Academy ), 4 Jourkadri Skeletons ( Belong to the Academy )
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Positive for discovering history?
Devotion: Yvithia for discovering a new source of language
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Nah

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Faith Augustin Champion
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Thread Name: Second, Seasoning
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope

Faith
(4 posts = 9 knowledge)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cooking: Soak potatoes in water to remove starch
Cooking: When potatoes have less starch, they crisp up better
Gardening: Growing in confined spaces
Gardening: Identifying places which are appropriate, even for a traveller


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Arlo

(4 posts =9 knowledge max)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cooking: Using dried ingredients
Cooking: Spit roast chicken
Cooking: Flat bread with chillies
Cooking: Potatoes in their jackets
Cooking: Making stock from marinade juices
Fieldcraft: Putting a tent over a cart for better shelter
Fieldcraft: Using unusual material to your benefit
Fieldcraft: Drying ingredients to make them last longer
Storytelling: Describing places to give visuals

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: No
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Padraig
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Thread Name: Growth
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope

Faith
(4 posts = 9 knowledge)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Agriculture: Layout of a farm is important
Agriculture: Livestock ratios and land size
Agriculture: Optimizing for crop yield
Agriculture: Planting to minimise pests
Detection: Noticing lingering tastes in food

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: Vri: (+1 pray to Vri, +3 confess love) Total to Vri: 4. Famula: (+1 pray to Famula, +1 pray to Vri, +1 service with no recompense). Total to Famula: 3
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Padraig

(4 posts =9 knowledge max)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Agriculture: Livestock ratios and land size
Agriculture: Planting to minimise pests
Alchemy: The blood of marked individuals changes as the mark increases in power
Alchemy: Consider the environmental issues when working outdoors

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: No
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Pash Raj'oriq
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Thread Name: Never Not Trouble
City/Area: The Harlot ’n’ Hound, Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Suggestive/Mature themes
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
(4 posts = 8+1 Knowledges)
  • Etiquette: Buying a round of drinks for the crowd
  • Persuasion: Forgiveness before permission even with a chair
  • Psychology: It’s hard to say no
  • Rhetoric: Make some small talk while waiting for your drink
  • Rhetoric: Everyone likes a story
  • Seduction: The more the merrier
  • Seduction: Tell a good story
  • Seduction: Sometimes you’re the performer, sometimes you’re the audience
Non-Skill Knowledge:
  • Location: Rharne: Earth Quarter
  • Location: Rharne: The Harlot ’n’ Hound
  • Immortal: Ilaren
  • Immortal: Ilaren: When in Rharne, buy her a drink
  • Patrick: From Rharne
  • Patrick: Works at the Bronze Boar
  • Patrick: Invited you “places”
  • Patrick: Makes great stew, apparently
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Playing music for the crowd, Buying a round of drinks instead of being paid
Devotion: +2 Ilaren (Buy a drink for others in Ilaren’s name)
Collaboration: Yes, with Patrick
Magic EXP: No.
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Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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