Review Requests 2.1.0

[Vega]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Unknown
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
None.

Please could it be noted that this is Vega's initiation into Dreamwalking. Could that be included in the review, please. Thanks.
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: No idea
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: No

[Pash Raj'oriq]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Freedom?
City/Area: Scalvoris coast, Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge: (4 posts=8+1 knowledges)

• Detection: Trusting your gut
• Detection: Assessing the situation
• Empathy: A child’s tangle
• Empathy: Keeping someone calm
• Empathy: Tapestry: seeing a thread’s source
• Discipline: Keeping a magic connection while moving
• Persuasion: Offering a song as distraction
• Persuasion: Quiet tones for comfort
• Strength: Carrying someone with wings

Non-Skill Knowledge:

• Mero: The shipwrecked boy
• Mero: Mute
• Mero: Lived in a cage
• Mero: Half-arviel
• Baya: Always up for a song
• Faith: Order of the Adunih, Blue cloak
• Kali’rial: Always glad to see you

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: Minor Overstepping (headache, dizziness)
Fame: Maybe? Your discretion. Pash did carry Mero through town, and not part of a parade. LOL
Devotion: N/A (I don’t think carrying Mero counts as a feat of great strength. He’s a scrawny critter.)
Collaboration: Yes: Mero, Baya, Kali’rial, and Faith (it was a party).
Magic EXP: Yes

[Vega]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: They Say it's a Small World
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Talk of slavery, nothing major.

Rewards Requested: Vega

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Animal Husbandry: Horses have personality
Animal Training: Less spirited animals are easier to train
Detection: Spotting what's out of place
Detection: Spotting wealth
Investigation: Searching for clues in someone's home
Investigation: Considering things which are out of place
Investigation: Secret compartments
Investigation: Trying to think where clues could be hidden
Mount: Horse: Getting to know your horse is important

Loot: Horse, Dress etc. Deducted from ledger
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: No
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: No

Rewards Requested: Arlo

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Animal Husbandry: Horses have personality
Animal Training: Less spirited animals are easier to train
Detection: Spotting what's out of place
Detection: Spotting wealth
Investigation: Searching for clues in someone's home
Investigation: Considering things which are out of place
Investigation: Secret compartments
Investigation: Trying to think where clues could be hidden
Mount: Horse: Getting to know your horse is important

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: No
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: No

[Nightshade Eld]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Key to the Past
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: This was written as both me practicing to write sad things and an attempt at Right in the Feels. If it didn't necessarily hit home then feed back would be great! There's some mild cussing and violence but nothing massive or descriptive.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skills-
Cartography: Rechecking for magnetic north
Intelligence: Solving Riddles
Intelligence: Context Clues
Navigation: True north vs magnetic north
Navigation: Using the sun's location to ascertain direction
Negotiation: Doesn't work on the blood thirsty

Marks-
Taithir: Enduring Scales: Can't block everything
Taithir: Enduring Scales: Very basic armor, not very good

Other-
Father: Proud of you
Father: Left you gifts
Mother: Proud of you
Mother: loved you very much
Mother: Is sorry
Mother: Left you knowledge

Avrielian Script: How to write 'look up'


Loot: 3 keys to father's basement
Injuries/Overstepping: A shoulder wound. Can't go a single thread without getting hurt in some way or another.
Fame: +6(killing 2 bandits) +4(Victory in single combat) = +10
Devotion:
Ethelynda- +5(Defend an Innocent) +5(Rescue an imprisoned innocent) +5(catch a murderer, if the bandits count)= +15

Maybe +3 to Ashan if the children counted as freeing the enslaved? Or maybe preventing them from being sold to Athard as slaves? Not important, but it would be nice.
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: Nope

[Navyri]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Meeting Curio
City/Area: Orm'del Sea
Notes/Warnings: Don't think so.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

• Feathered Friend (Tarouz): Aware of Emotions & Mental States
• Feathered Friend (Tarouz): The First Perk of Tarouz is Companionship
• Feathered Friend (Tarouz): Good for Hunting & Scouting
• Linguistics: Working Around Unknown Words
• Seafaring: Monitor Wind Direction
• Endurance: The Side Effects of Starvation
  ----
• Language: Rakahi
• Location: Orm'del Sea
• Curio: Your Feathered Friend
• Curio: Can Read Your Mind?
• Delroth: Savior

Loot: Fish bones.
Injuries/Overstepping: Sunburn.
Fame: Don't think so.
Devotion: Prayer to Delroth, use of Tarouz (Feathered Friend)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Sintih]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Epiphany
City/Area: Andaris City
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge for Doran
Chemistry: Manipulating plants so that they glow in the dark
Chemistry: Definition and uses of a centrifuge
Deception: Sometimes it's better to lie about what you really need something for
Gardening: Characteristics of flash poplar
Gardening: Characteristics of duckweed
Gardening: Characteristics of bamboo
Gardening: Characteristics of roses
Persuasion: Promise people to mention their name in your research to get what you want
Research: In the early stages it's best to consider every possible option

Location: Andaris: Herbal Shop
Location: Andaris: Ser Nade Brecht's house
Location: Rynmere: Haakon's Isle
NPC: Hannah Yavich: the owner of the "Herbal Shop"
NPC: Ser Nade Brecht: A knight
NPC: Ser Nade Brecht: A proponent of banning magic
NPC: Ser Nade Brecht: Has an old war injury

Knowledge for Sintih
Gardening: Characteristics of flash poplar
Gardening: Characteristics of duckweed
Gardening: Characteristics of bamboo
Gardening: Characteristics of roses
Research: Organizing your findings
Animal husbandry(?): fireflies, sea pansies and squids: Glow-in-the-dark animals
Alchemy: Living donor for living receiver
Alchemy: Theory: glow-in-the-dark plants
Chemistry: the centrifuge

Doran: seems to dismiss your hard work
Doran: Already has the answer you worked for
Doran: Cares not for sleep?
Location: Andaris: Herbal Shop
Location: Andaris: Ser Brecht's house
Location: Andaris University
Andaris University: Slow to make decisions
Andaris University: Supplies researchers with what they need
NPC: Hannah Yavich: Owner of the Herbal Shop
NPC: Ser Brecht: Former knight
NPC: Ser Brecht: Against magic
NPC: Ser Brecht: Not like the rumours

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Doran for making connections with known people, Sintih for being Doran's assistant
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Padraig]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Planning on the Porch
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None

Faith

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: The smell of paint
Endurance: Morning sickness
Etiquette: Tell your significant other that you are not feeling well, even if they can't do anything about it.
Investigation: Putting together clues to pregnancy
Rhetoric: Telling the story of your ideal wedding

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: No
Devotion: Nope
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: No

Padraig

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Checking the taste of tea
Discipline: Not giving in to being tormented
Etiquette: Don't call ladies round, they don't like it.
Investigation: Putting together the signs of pregnancy
Persuasion: Persuading your significant other to do what she wants, not what's expected.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: No
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: No

[Silv]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Our Ancestor's Shaperate
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: Fridgar and Alistair have seemed to have left the site, so I'm just finishing this thread so I can get my skill points. Could only scratch up five of my eight Knowledges, would love the rest if I'm even eligible given that the thread was abandoned
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Business Management: Personally directing 'customers' to the right sections
Business Management: Banter with co-workers strenghtens the work environment
Detection: Listening to echos to determine location
Disipline: Curbing one's curiosity to begin work
Research: Determining key words for search

Location: Ancestor's Shaperate
Fridgar: Husband to Alistair
Alistair: Husband to Fridgar
Alistair: Lord of the Northern Realms

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Aeodan]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Zin'mataa I: Force
City/Area: Oakleign, Eastern Settlement
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Unarmed Combat, Zin'mataa: The Three Tilao
Unarmed Combat, Zin'mataa: Far Eastern Combat Style
Unarmed Combat, Zin'mataa: Balance is the most important Tilao
Unarmed Combat, Zin'mataa: Shoulder throw
Unarmed Combat, Zin'mataa: Instinctive reactions
Endurance: Repeatedly being thrown on the ground hurts

Judah: Prefers to fight with his hands
Judah: Prefers to spend time with you
Judah: Is cheeky
Judah: Likes jokes

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Yanahalqah]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Talking Works too
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: I am garbage at this kind of thread. If possible, I'd appreciate some feedback/thoughts on this one.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

1. Intimidation: Pulling Rank
2. Leadership: Talking about a problem with your subordinates
3. Leadership: The honest approach
4. Logistics: Writing reports
5. Politics: Influence a group of people by getting their leader on your side
6. Politics: Removing a problem does not equal eliminating it completely

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Fame: idk
Devotion: none
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: no