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Edalene
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Posts: 409
Joined: Wed Mar 08, 2017 3:15 am
Race: Human
Profession: Seeker
Renown: +39
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Wed Jun 28, 2017 7:21 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Seasons of Change
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: None.

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge
  • Intelligence: Problem Solving Gaps In Writing
  • Research: Easier To Move Backwards in History
  • Research: Working From A Core Group of Central Knowledges
  • Research: Skim Reading
  • Research: Reading Aloud Helps Understanding
  • Research: Taking Multiple Sets of Notes for Different Purposes
History Knowledge:
  • History: The Induk of Idalos Emerged First
  • History: The Dragons Aren't Well Recorded
  • History: The Shay Were The First Civilisation
  • History: The Shay Regarded The Originals As Gods
  • History: The Shay Died When The Originals Did
  • History: It Is Not Known Why The Originals Died
  • History: The Shay Did Not Seem To Have Seen The Shattering Coming
  • History: The Shay Were Linked Spiritually To The Originals
Culture Knowledge:
  • Book: The Emergence of the Originals
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None.
Collaboration: No.

Thanks! I hope I did this right!
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Alistair
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Posts: 2367
Joined: Thu Apr 21, 2016 6:12 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Doctor
Renown: +600
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Thu Jun 29, 2017 4:10 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Plenipotentiary
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge
Politics: The Powers of the Eastern Half of Idalos
Politics: Betraying your liege for a better one
Negotiation: Preparing a negotiation beforehand
Politics: Seeking an ambassador for advice
Politics: Remembering your own inexperience
Deception: Baiting someone into a prank

Other Knowledge
Raskalarn: Doesn't like others sitting on thrones in her presence
Raskalarn: Enjoys others claiming for her
Kura: Phelan, Familiar
Kura: Not currently counseling the Empire
Night Vision Glasses

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
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word count: 107
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Yanahalqah
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Posts: 575
Joined: Sun Jun 19, 2016 5:21 pm
Race: Yludih
Profession: Knight Captain of the Iron Hand
Renown: +196
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Fri Jun 30, 2017 3:05 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Learning by Crystal Light
City/Area: Uleuda
Notes/Warnings: A bit of punching. Some wacky dialogue. Genuvah mentions Ulehi in his first couple posts, but it's actually Qa that's being spoken.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  1. Unarmed Combat: Sucker Punch
  2. Detection: Locating a sound's source
  3. Linguistics: Qa
  4. Qa: sounds like nonsense
  5. Qa: coded language
  6. Investigation or Intelligence: Recognizing the signs of a cult
  7. Rhetoric: dramatic voice
  8. Endurance: Bracing yourself
  9. Acrobatics: Roll to disperse impact from falling
  10. Endurance: leaning on someone to walk
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruises, I think? Also a damaged leg.
Fame: Probably none
Devotion: None
Collaboration: (Yes)
word count: 112
"Speaking" - Thinking - "Others speaking"
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Kura Wolfsdotter
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Posts: 426
Joined: Tue Jun 21, 2016 12:39 am
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Council Member
Renown: +164
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Sat Jul 01, 2017 5:10 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Plenipotentiary
City/Area: Rharne, The Harpy Inn
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Rupturing: Capable of Sending You Long Distances
Teaching: Continuing an Old Students Education
Teaching: Correcting a Students Mistakes
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes, with Alistair
Magic EXP: No
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Aeon
Posts: 530
Joined: Sat Aug 13, 2016 4:16 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Hero :|
Renown: +183
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Medal count: 10

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Sat Jul 01, 2017 6:52 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Heading East [part 1]
City/Area: Uthaldria/Eastern Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Socialization: Requires you to speak to someone
Hunting: Stekir tracks
Fieldcraft: Setting up a tent
Leadership: Learning from a true leader

Korim: A reminder of Ryqos
Korim: Tends to laugh a lot
Aethelwolf: Lothar jeger (hunter)

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Positive, killing monsters. Pretty please
Devotion: Never!
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Aeon
Posts: 530
Joined: Sat Aug 13, 2016 4:16 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Hero :|
Renown: +183
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Sat Jul 01, 2017 7:39 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Heading East [part 2]
City/Area: Eastern Gauthrel (Uthaldria)
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Sounds in the wilderness
Detection: Determining the time of death of a corpse
Fieldcraft: Preparing a campfire
Swimming: Against a chaotic river
Acrobatics: Jumping off a rough surface
Acrobatics: Landing on a rough surface

Korim: Speaks Haltunga
Korim: Truly fearless
Korim: A mage?
The Lotharro: Are reborn from their corpses
Language: Haltunga
Haltunga: Language of the Lothar

Loot: Stekir hide pls
Injuries/Overstepping: Yes, on the thigh and the calf, will probably leave a bruise
Fame: Nah
Devotion: Never
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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"A hero is someone who steps up when everyone else backs down"
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Yanahalqah
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Posts: 575
Joined: Sun Jun 19, 2016 5:21 pm
Race: Yludih
Profession: Knight Captain of the Iron Hand
Renown: +196
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Medal count: 8

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Sat Jul 01, 2017 7:37 pm

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Thread Name: Back Again
City/Area: Uleuda
Notes/Warnings: Self-loathing, probably some badly portrayed ptsd, also some combat against supernatural darkness creatures

Yanahalqah

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Posts:7 (Skill related knowledge is numbered)
  1. Meditation: Reflecting on the past
  2. Strength: struggling to break free from grasp
  3. Endurance: trying to endure the silent judgement of others
  4. Negotiation: suggesting a compromise
  5. Discipline: trying to keep calm while assaulted
  6. Intelligence: Sharing information
  7. Tactics: When the situation is dire, run
  8. Rhetoric: Using arguments to support your opinion
  9. Endurance: not chickening out
  10. Ranged combat: Aiming
  11. Ranged combat: Shooting from point blank
  12. Meditation: Introspection
  • Ulehi: Chimes to communicate
  • Nulliem: Swift and agile
  • Nulliem: Usually come in groups
  • Sintih: Able commander
  • Sintih: broken Ulehi
  • Sintih: Cold and distant
  • Risalqah: Yellow
  • Risalqah: tried to help in the worst possible way
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: only mental trauma
Fame: None, I think?
Devotion: none
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: No

Sintih

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Posts:7 (Skill related knowledge is numbered)
  1. Tactics - keeping eyes in the front and back
  2. Tactics - pack mentality: sticking together saves lives
  3. Tactics - information before the battle saves lives
  4. Blades: shortsword - throwing works... sometimes
  5. Rupturing - Tethering to blink
  • Yanahalqah - afraid and useless
  • Denetuih - Ancient with crystals in all the right places
  • Sintih - of course I am in charge
  • Sintih - afraid of Nulliem?
  • Ulehi - Chimes to communicate
  • Nulliem - Swift and agile
  • Nulliem - Never alone
  • Nulliem - love you to death
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Fame: Probably positive? Leading a team to victory in combat?
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
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Aeon
Posts: 530
Joined: Sat Aug 13, 2016 4:16 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Hero :|
Renown: +183
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Sun Jul 02, 2017 1:04 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Library Adventures!
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: Really short. Really grindy. Really boring. Sorry
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Linguistics: Differences between Haltunga and Common
Linguistics: The intricacies of the Common language
Linguistics: Sentence structure in Common
Linguistics: Verbs vs nouns
Linguistics: Doesn’t always make perfect sense
Hunting: The monsters of Gauthrel

Abanaxus: Appearance, abilities and weaknesses
Albion: Appearance, abilities and weaknesses
Scalv Ziemia: Appearance, abilities and weaknesses

Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: Nah
Devotion: Never!
Collaboration: Apparently also never
Magic EXP: No
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"A hero is someone who steps up when everyone else backs down"
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Alistair
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Posts: 2367
Joined: Thu Apr 21, 2016 6:12 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Doctor
Renown: +600
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Sun Jul 02, 2017 4:23 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Tidvatten
City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Polearms: Spear- Spinning Parry
Polearms: Spear - Striking Apart an Arrow
Polearms: Spear - Overhead Block
Acrobatics: Gentle Dodges
Acrobatics: Twirling Around Projectiles
Acrobatics: Persistent Evasion

Jeger: Initiation Trial Procedures
Jeger: Demand Perfection
Fields of Gauthrel: One must never be injured
Jeger Initiation: Failed

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Shallow cut across the chest, hole in shoulder - due to Sesser, Alistair will heal incredibly quickly.
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Alistair on Sun Jul 02, 2017 6:56 am, edited 2 times in total. word count: 95
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Alistair
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Profession: Doctor
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Sun Jul 02, 2017 4:28 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Insomnus
City/Area: Uthaldria, Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Polearms: Spear - Insomnus
Polearms: Spear - Underarm Swing
Acrobatics: Frontflip
Acrobatics: Vertical Cartwheel
Acrobatics: Diagonal Cartwheel
Acrobatics: Fluid Voiding

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Collaboration: None
Magic EXP: None
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