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Fridgar
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Tue Jul 04, 2017 8:59 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: [Kaer Jeger] Smash<Hack
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: No dummies were harmed in the making of this thread
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Axes & Bludgeons (Broad Axe): Horizontal slashes for accuracy
Axes & Bludgeons (Broad Axe): Vertical slashes for power
Axes & Bludgeons (Broad Axe): Momentum is key, don't stop moving
Axes & Bludgeons (Broad Axe): If you miss, swing again
Haltunga: Basic affirming and dissenting
Haltunga: Difficult to understand when spoken quickly, listen closely
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Location: Kaer Jaeger: Barracks
[NPC] Halden: The Dire Jeger that has taken you under his wing
[NPC] Halden: Surprisingly sneaky
[NPC] Halden: Your friend
[NPC] Halden: Gave you a Terrendyte Broad Axe

Loot: 1x Standard quality Terrendyte broad axe, gifted by Fridgar's future pack leader.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Proabably negative
Devotion: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Alistair
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Race: Human
Profession: Doctor
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Tue Jul 04, 2017 10:54 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Pups On Their Own Part 3. Shelter
Alistair
City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Depressing
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Psychology: Anger disorders
Psychology: Mental health issues can lead to suicidal thoughts
Rhetoric: Matched apologies
Persuasion: Trying to better a situation with an enticing offer
Fieldcraft: A cave is a good place to be alone
Endurance: Going on with an empty stomach and a broken heart
Endurance: Struggling through extremely emotionally taxing conditions
Detection: Seeing through a diversion

Me: A shit
Anger has brought me to suicide
Fridgar: I hurt him, dearly

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Heartbreak
Fame: No
Devotion: Lots of anger - Syroa?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Fridgar
City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Depressing
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acting: Feigning innocence
Acting: Feigning stability
Detection: Alistair in danger
Discipline: Pretend everything is okay when it really isn't
Discipline: Putting your love above your comfort
Psychology: Everything will be okay
Endurance: Crying until it hurts, and then continuing on
Psychology: Let it all out

Alistair: Hurt himself because of you
Alistair: Struggles badly with his anger
Alistair: Turned on you
Alistair: Left you in the dirt
Alistair: Needs help, now more than ever
Alistair: needs you

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Heartbreak
Fame: No
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Zana
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Posts: 442
Joined: Fri Jun 16, 2017 1:12 am
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Living a libertine lifestyle.
Renown: +114
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Wed Jul 05, 2017 1:06 am

Rewards Requested Zana
Thread Name: Business Management
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Mature Themes, PG 13 though
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Cosmetology: Dress to enhance your body type
Cosmetology: Confidence is key
Detection: Note preference on entrance
Etiquette: How to answer the boss' question
Etiquette: Understand the role of your handler
Seduction: A slight covering can enhance desire
Seduction: The art of innuendo
Seduction: Judge how sophisticated your target is
Seduction: Slow, languid appraisal
Psychology: Biqaj eye colour denote moods

Non Skill Knowledge:
Theo: My handler
Theo: Biqaj heritage
Theo: New at the whorehouse business.
Theo: Knows I'm mortalborn

Loot: (If applicable) NA
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable) NA
Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable) None
Devotion: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable) None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Rewards Requested Theo
Thread Name: Business Management
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Mature Themes, PG 13 though
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)

Acting: Appearing to be more wealthy than you are
Acting: The art of a well told lie.
Business Management: Avoid competition by removing the possibility
Business Management: Managing girls requires focus
Business Management: Identify your employees strengths early on
Business Management: Appraising the goods you have to work with
Detection: Watching what isn't said, as well as what is
Discipline: Not being distracted by flesh
Seduction: Mirroring movements.
Seduction: Long, slow, appraising looks


Other Knowledge:
Zana: A prostitute
Zana: You will be her handler
Zana: Can fill a few scraps of cloth
Zana: Mortalborn daughter of Delrith

Loot: (If applicable) NA
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable) NA
Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable) None
Devotion: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable) None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Doran
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Joined: Sat Sep 03, 2016 3:43 am
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Alchemist
Renown: +255
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Wed Jul 05, 2017 4:57 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A new Laboratory
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Cleaning up and organizing a room for breaks
Chemistry: Analyzing an unknown substance
Chemistry: Physical properties: odor, color and viscosity
Chemistry: Chemical properties: reactivity with other substances
Sesser: Thespian: allows you to discard your emotions as you see fit
Strength: Dragging heavy objects

Golden Salamander: Produces a milky substance that can be used as a fireproof coating
Golden Salamander: Most common around Sirothelle
Golden Salamander: Source of alchemical reagents


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: +1 Syroa: Praying to Syroa
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Navyri
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Posts: 387
Joined: Mon Jun 19, 2017 5:27 pm
Race: Naerikk
Profession: Thief
Renown: -163
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Wed Jul 05, 2017 6:28 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: [Krome] Illegal Fighting Pits
City/Area: Krome, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Mild Violence.
Requested Rewards:
Warren
Skill Knowledge
Detection: Reading Body Language
Discipline: Trust No One
Endurance: Surviving Starvation
Melee Combat (Battle Axe): Spinning Swing
Melee Combat (Morning star): Using Momentum To Deal Damage
Seduction: Flirtatious Jokes
Strength: Fighting In Chains And Shackles
Strength: Wielding A Morning star With One Arm
Unarmed Combat: Dodging An Opponents Attacks
Unarmed Combat: Right Hook

Non-Skill Knowledge
Benn: Cell Mate In The Fighting Pits
Benn: Died In The Fighting Pits
Benn: Had A Wife In The Fighting Pits
Fighting Pits: Guards Know You'll Try To Escape
Fighting Pits: Illegal And Owned By Powerful Nobles
Fighting Pits: Spectators Will Kill You If You Don't Please Them
Navyri: A Captive In The Fighting Pits
Navyri: A Naerrik
Navyri: A Theif
Navyri: Knows How To Pick Locks
Navyri: Little Damsel
Navyri: Made An Unfortunate Judgement Call And Owes A Debt
Navyri: Thought Warren Fought Well
Navyri: Wanted To Help With Warren's Wounds

Navyri
Skill Knowledge
Lockpicking: The Proper Tools Make All The Difference
Lockpicking: Counting Pins
Intelligence: Patterns of Behavior
Intelligence: Scout A Perimeter
Intelligence: Utilize the Eyes and Ears of Another
Intimidation: Exploit Previous Fears
Persuasion: Use a Name to Personalize an Offer
Unarmed Combat: Resisting an Armored Opponent
Tactics: Judging Odds of Success
Detection: Signs of Being Nervous

Non-Skill Knowledge
Location: Rynmere
Location: Krome
Location: Krome Fighting Pits
Krome Fighting Pits: Illegal
Krome Fighting Pits: Holds Unfair Matches
Warren Kade: A Decent Fighter
Warren Kade: Bounty Hunter
Warren Kade: Calls you "Little Damsel"
Warren Kade: Unsettled by the Undead

Loot: Navyri - Piece of Rope
Injuries/Overstepping: Warren has a messed up face.
Fame: As seen?
Devotion: As seen.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
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Alistair
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Race: Human
Profession: Doctor
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Wed Jul 05, 2017 6:30 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Hal-tongue-a
Alistair
City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Linguistics: Octaves and accents
Linguistics: Haltunga is steeped in passion
Linguistics: Learning by means of conversation
Linguistics: Learning from a native speaker
Tactics: Manning siege weaponry
Strength: Leaning all of your weight into a pull
Strength: Using the strength of a collective to outdo a superior creature
Siege Weaponry: The Submission Chains
Navigation: Viewing a landscape from above

Krigers: Badasses
Lotharen Siege Weapons
Location: Eastern Gauthrel
Location: Fields of Gauthrel, likely to be attacked at any moment
Haltunga: Pronunciation
Haltunga: Accent
Haltunga: Passionate language
Haltunga: I love you
Haltunga: Many words for each thing
Haltunga: Saying you want to punch someone
Uthaldria: Everything is done at a high volume
Bestiary: Trachadon
Lotharro: Marriage tradition

Loot: +1 Trachadon totem for Kaiserion
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: +6 Fame, Killing High Level Beast
Devotion: Lots of anger - Syroa?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Fridgar
City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Linguistics: Octaves and accents
Linguistics: Haltunga is steeped in passion
Linguistics: Learning by means of conversation
Linguistics: Learning from a native speaker
Becoming: Adapt: Cheaper than borrowing
Becoming: Adapt: As fast as unleashing
Becoming: Adapt: 'Humanoid' is not a trait that can be adapted
Becoming: Adapting legendary strength is a brilliant idea
Becoming: Echo: Can be used to 'speak' in animal forms

Krigers: Badasses
Lotharen Siege Weapons
Location: Eastern Gauthrel
Location: Fields of Gauthrel, likely to be attacked at any moment
Haltunga: Pronunciation
Haltunga: Accent
Haltunga: Passionate language
Haltunga: I love you
Haltunga: Many words for each thing
Haltunga: Saying you want to punch someone
Uthaldria: Everything is done at a high volume
Bestiary: Trachadon
Lotharro: Marriage tradition

Loot: +1 Trachadon Totem
Injuries/Overstepping: Heartbreak
Fame: +6 Fame, Killing High Level Beast
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
word count: 313
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Alistair
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Race: Human
Profession: Doctor
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Wed Jul 05, 2017 6:54 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: That Dying Sky
Alistair
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: Slight sexual themes
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Psychology: Anxiety led frustration
Seduction: Teasing your lover after awaking

Fridgar: God of Punching
Fridgar: God of Sex
Fridgar: Has weird dreams
Fridgar: Dared to imagine you a breeder
Ellasin: Here in Gauthrel
Location: House of Buggery

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Fridgar
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: Slight sexual themes
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Psychology: Alistair grows anxious in the face of real danger
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Location: Uthaldria: The house of buggery (your home!)
Alistair: Wasn't Ellasin's ex?
Alistair: Thinks you're the god of punching
Alistair: Thinks you're the god of sex
Alistair: Terrified of Ellasin
Ellasin: Dead at the first opportunity

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: N/A
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Zana
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Posts: 442
Joined: Fri Jun 16, 2017 1:12 am
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Living a libertine lifestyle.
Renown: +114
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Wed Jul 05, 2017 8:32 am

Rewards Requested: Theo
Thread Name: Warm Hands, Cold Heart
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Mature Themes

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acting: Setting up a scenario
Acting: Stepping in as understudy
Acting: Costumes
Business Management: Understanding all aspects of a business
Business Management: Being prepared to step in for a missing employee
Business Management: You need to understand what your girls can do
Endurance: Extreme cold
Psychology: Perception is reality
Psychology: Some people get comfort from touch



Delroth: Immortal of Winds, Birds, Vanity and Greed
Zana: Mortalborn domains of Air, Reflection and Attachment
Zana: Mortalborn ability: Breath of life
Zana: Mortalborn ability: Trinket of desire
Zana: Mortalborn ability: Reflected experience

Loot: (If applicable) NA
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable) NA
Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable) NA
Devotion: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable) NA
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Rewards Requested: Zana
Thread Name: Warm Hands, Cold Heart
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Mature Themes

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Caregiving: Wrapping in a blanket
Caregiving: Hugging to keep warm.
Cosmetology: Long clothes can still be revealing
Detection: Lean in close to ascertain eye colour
Endurance: Sudden onset migraines
Etiquette: Always maintain a physical relationship with your handler
Etiquette: Check if tactile contact is acceptable
Persuasion: Some people are persuaded by the truth
Seduction: Greet with a kiss


Mortalborn Ability: Reflected Experience: Imparting cold
Mortalborn Ability: Reflected Experience: Change the angle of reflection
Mortalborn Ability: Reflected Experience: Causes migraine
Theo: Raised by a single mother in the Dust Quarter

Loot: (If applicable) NA
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable) NA
Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable) NA
Devotion: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable) NA
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Zana
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Profession: Living a libertine lifestyle.
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Wed Jul 05, 2017 9:21 am

Rewards Requested: Theo
Thread Name: Judgement Call
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Mature Themes. Violence.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Bladed Combat: Dagger: Used dagger with a sword
Bladed Combat: Dagger: Beware the blade you can’t see
Bladed Combat: Sword: Drawing the sword in combat takes time
Bladed Combat: Sword: Using your environment
Business Management: You have to be able to do your job.
Ranged Combat: Crossbow: Close range requires less aim
Ranged Combat: Crossbow: Loading and firing quickly
Strength: Shoulder charging a door


NPC: Billie: One of the girls you have responsibility for
NPC: Billie: Got attacked by clients
NPC: Peter: Your boss
NPC: Peter: Short sighted & greedy?
Zana: Got attacked by clients
Zana: Killed one of the men who attacked her

Loot: (If applicable) NA
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable) NA
Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable) Positive for defending Billie, defending Zana, then got rid of 3 x attackers and looked after both girls.
Devotion: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable) NA
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Rewards Requested: Zana
Thread Name: Judgement Call
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Mature Themes. Violence

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Bladed Combat: Dagger: Drawing a blade in combat
Bladed Combat: Dagger: Stabbing in the neck
Endurance: The pain of a physical beating
Endurance: Adrenaline helps to improve endurance.
Psychology: Instincts can be useful
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: Front kick
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: Use your nails
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: Utilise the environment

NPC: Billie: Theo’s other girl.
NPC: Billie: Got attacked the same time you did
NPC: Peter: Owns the Lap of Luxury
NPC: Peter: Told you not to be silly
Theo: Fought off my attackers
Theo: Killed one of the men who attacked me
Mortalborn Ability: Reflected Experience: Can be made more intense

Loot: (If applicable) NA
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable) Zana has been badly beaten. She is covered in bruises and small cuts and abrasions. These will take 15 trials to heal fully and the psychological damage is likely to take longer.
Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable) I think positive for killing one of the attackers?
Devotion: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable) NA
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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