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Patrick
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Wed Jun 28, 2017 1:55 pm

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Thread Name: Nothing's Changed
Character(s) Involved: Solo
Quick Summary: Return of the Booze King! Kicking things off in the kitchen at the bar he works.
Requested Knowledge: Cooking specifically? Feel free to get creative. ;)
Other Notes: Warning. Dick Lewd Jokes
Fame: Can you get fame for jokes?
Devotion: Does Ilaren approve of people using Faldrun's name in vain?
Magic XP: The only magic here is in the jokes he uses.
Warning: Suggestive language and themes. Such lewd themes.
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Wed Jun 28, 2017 2:41 pm

City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: Beyond the Veil of Shadows
Character(s) Involved: Noth, Kovic, Maltruism with a modbomb
Quick Summary: Noth and Kovic decide to explore his cave, they discover some reality warping jazz.
Requested Knowledge:Unarmed, Mace, Stealth, Detection for Noth.
Other Notes: Kovic has recently left the site. I'm under the impression that you don't actually have to give him a grade.
Fame: Negative for Noth if at all possible.
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: No, it's fairly clean.

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Kayleigh
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Wed Jun 28, 2017 4:08 pm

City/Area Taken Place: Rharne
Thread Name: A Night Under the Stars
Character(s) Involved: Solo
Quick Summary: Kayleigh spends a part of her evening star gazing with her brother
Requested Knowledge: Surprise me!
Other Notes: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: Cheeky cheesy family love
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Wed Jun 28, 2017 6:23 pm

City/Area Taken Place: Gauthrel
Thread Name: Vindarnas
Character(s) Involved: Alistair, Fridgar
Quick Summary: Ali and Fridgar reunite and stuff
Requested Knowledge: Anything
Other Notes: Thanks
Fame: Nah
Devotion: Nah
Magic XP: Nah
Warning: Nah
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Wed Jun 28, 2017 7:18 pm

City/Area Taken Place: Gauthrel, Valendale
Thread Name: [Western Gauthrel][Job Thread] A pup's first kill
Character(s) Involved: Fridgar
Quick Summary: Fridgas is given a task by the Jegers, tries out his new axe and stuff.
Requested Knowledge: Axes & Bludgeons: Broad Axe, Hunting, Tracking, Haltunga (language)/Linguistics
Other Notes: This was one of Fridgar's three trials needed to rank up in the Jeger, Trial of the hunter.
Fame: Probably positive?
Devotion: Nah, unless you count decapitating monsters winning a brawl? Who am I kidding, devotion wont be a thing when this thread gets graded :'(
Magic XP: Fridgar used magic, but didn't push his limits, so no.
Warning: will never get reviewed

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Pash Raj'oriq
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Thu Jun 29, 2017 1:03 am

City/Area Taken Place: Scalvoris Town
Thread Name: A Little Song and Dance
Character(s) Involved: Pash, Kali’rial, and Niv
Quick Summary: Pash plays some tunes in Central Square and attracts an attractive audience, including a surprise dance number by Niv.
Requested Knowledge: Relationships (meeting each other), Musical knowledge, Dancing knowledge, etc. Whatever.
Other Notes: It’s a fun thread.
Fame: Yes?
Devotion: No
Magic XP: Pash resisted the urge to use Empathy, so no. No magic.
Warning: None. This is family friendly (literally).

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Thu Jun 29, 2017 12:03 pm

Hey. I have a request to all y'all reviewers out there.

I have a thread that's been up for over 45 days and has been skipped many times. I don't think people realize it's there anymore. xD
http://standingtrials.com/viewtopic.php ... 839#p43723

Could someone please grade it, if they have the time? I'd very much appreciate it. Thanks. <3
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Zana
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Thu Jun 29, 2017 3:27 pm

Rharne

Mending
Theo and Zana
Following an attack by some clients, Zana has been hiding in her room. She lets Theo in a few days later, they talk and make plans for the future.
Knowledge: Business Management for Theo, please, other than that, as seen.
Fame: Theo gives a gift of a crossbow, bolts and a place to live.
No magic
Warning: It's about mature themes - they business they're talking about is a brothel, they're discussing Zana having been attacked. It's pg-13, though.
No devotion.

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Theo Nji'Ryn
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Thu Jun 29, 2017 9:40 pm

City/Area Taken Place: Rharne [The Dust Quarter]
Thread Name: [Dust Quarter] Acquisition, Logistics and Happy Accidents
Character(s) Involved: Theo
Quick Summary: After having moved out of the Dust Quarter two arcs ago, Theo returns to find an old friend. Failing that, he manages to stumble across a prostitute being attacked and runs off the attacker, then arranges another meeting with her at a later time before leaving.
Requested Knowledge: Dust Quarter in Rharne. Lightening Knights. Business management, logistics, stealth, combat?, detection, acting, negotiation...really, whatever seen.
Other Notes: This is a thread to establish a connection with an npc for a future business arrangement
Fame: Good deed? He saves the girl from an attacker
Devotion: Nope.
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: Not marked mature, but mature themes, innuendo and mild violence. Nothing extreme, just PG 13 stuff.

Note: This request has been moved to 2.1.0
Last edited by Theo Nji'Ryn on Sat Jul 08, 2017 7:47 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 149
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Alistair
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Fri Jun 30, 2017 3:09 am

City/Area Taken Place: Gauthrel
Thread Name: Fellow Jeger
Character(s) Involved: Alistair, Fridgar
Quick Summary: Alistair and Frid discuss joining the Jeger
Requested Knowledge: Anything you see
Other Notes: Thanks
Fame: Nah
Devotion: Nah
Magic XP: N a h
Warning: Sexual content
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