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Victor Amielle
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: I. Arrival in Melrath
City/Area: Melrath
Notes/Warnings: First of a series of solos describing Victor's arrival and his adventures in Melrath.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Deception: Hiding your mutations under clothing
Detection: Seeing land in the distance
Endurance: A long sea voyage
Research: Researching how an event affected different cities
Research: Journaling helps you gather your thoughts
Psychology: Running from your past

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping:-
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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word count: 82

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Due to one of his Awakenings, Victor's eyes glow with a soft silver light.

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Victor owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Woe
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Shaking off the Cobwebs
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: old thread that I never got around to having with Vera. Decided to finish it alone since... I don't think Vera is gonna post haha
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Deception: Sticking to your story.
Discipline: Resisting the urge to spill the beans.
Meditation: Maintaining a semblance of calm
Psychology: Therapy: Taking notes while interviewing a patient.
Psychology: Relief can be interpreted in several ways, not all of them favorably.
Psychology: Talking through experiences can reveal underlying motives that escaped notice at the time.

Loot/Losses: nah
Injuries/Overstepping: nah
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Doran
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Reversal
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: This is just a little solo to explain how Doran acquired an item from the Point Bank and grind a few Strength knowledges.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Training in the cold
Endurance: Training until exhaustion begins to set in
Strength: Training with extra-heavy weapons
Strength: Repetition is key
Strength: Breathing slowly and steadily helps
Strength: The soreness of your muscles after a good workout

Loot: 1 Ring of Reversal, 1 masterwork+ quality longsword made of Grave Gold
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
 ! Message from: Werewere
Claimed
word count: 101

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Ring of Reversal
Ring of Immunity
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Oberan
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Tristan Venora 1
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Part 1
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: IDK
Collaboration: No
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word count: 27
Just because I shouldn't doesn't mean I won't.


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Oberan
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Tristan Venora 2
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Part 2
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: IDK
Collaboration: No
 ! Message from: Werewere
Claimed
word count: 27
Just because I shouldn't doesn't mean I won't.


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Oberan
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Tristan Venora 3
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Part 3
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: IDK
Collaboration: No
 ! Message from: Werewere
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word count: 27
Just because I shouldn't doesn't mean I won't.


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Soren Kvistson
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Surprise Guest
City/Area: Raelia, Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Nah

Navyri
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Standing Forward Bend
Tactics: Studying Floor Plans
Tactics: Sudden Interruption as a Diversion
Tactics: Don’t Ally with Reckless Strangers
Detection: How to Notice Twitches and Restlessness
Detection: Spotting Lies Through Tone & Body Language
Detection: Compare What You See to What You Know
Discipline: Don’t Listen to False Voices
Stealth: Masks Draw Attention
Stealth: Creeping Silently Along Rooftops
Miirduz (Imprison): Rises from the Ground
Miirduz (Imprison): Takes Concentration
Miirduz (Imprison): Instantly Traps a Target

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Small, for making a beggar remember not to mess with her
Wealth Points: +5 for a PC Customer in a PC business Navyri works for. Wealth thread for season: viewtopic.php?f=446&t=19889
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)


Alex
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Stealth: watch your back
Stealth: hide in the trash
Stealth: You need to hide better
Stealth: Do not get caught
Deception: Using a fake voice
Deception: Hiding your true face
Deception: Do not bring up your wrong doing
Persuasion: act worried for another person
Persuasion: Talk things over
Persuasion: Barter is on the table
Intimidation: Maybe using your ablities would be intimidating
Intimidation: Try not to scare the wait staff
Combat Blades (Dagger): not every situation requires a stab

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Medium, for attracting a lot of unwanted attention
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)


Soren
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Appraisal: Differentiating real silverware vs lesser metals using the glass test
Appraisal: Fuchsite arries a fake sparkle but not true iridescence
Business Management: Leaving your partner's half of the business to them
Business Management: Not turning away strange customers who can pay
Business Management: Making special accommodations for special needs customers
Intelligence - Navyri: Able to whisper from a distance
Intelligence - Contact: Unnamed leatherbound man with skin condition (ULM for short)
Intelligence - ULM: Can mimic the voice of Soren's dead wife
Intelligence - ULM: Has a unique accent
Intelligence - ULM: Clearly a thief
Leadership: Always bring a subordinate to watch your back
Leadership: Contacting your specialist in matters

Loot: N/A
Injuries: Small for dealing with a public nuisance
Wealth Points: +7 for a PC customer thread in his PC business. Wealth thread for season: viewtopic.php?f=446&t=19889
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)

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Abra
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Tested
City/Area: Melrath
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Don’t take shortcuts when analyzing frequencies
Meditation: A clear mind is needed for Attunement
Attunement: Note: Myself
Attunement: Committing a frequency to memory
Attunement: Can be useful for detecting attacks
Attunement: Even abstract concepts have notes

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: no
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: Attunement tier progression
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word count: 71
Abra
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Test of Wills
City/Area: Melrath
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Don’t fall for the taunt
Discipline: Passing a test of willpower
Meditation: Keep the spark’s pride in check
Empathy: The strong minded can’t be easily affected
Empathy: Empathy was less effective against an Abrogator
Empathy: Hand motions make things easier

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion, although the point was to stop before going overboard
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: Empathy
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Llyr Llywelyn
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: 40 Notches
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Imprisonment, mature themes, bleakness. Memory thread 717.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Trapped in the deathly scents of a torture room.
Endurance: Pain is Proof You're Still Alive.
Rhetoric: Can be used in tandem with negotiation.
Rhetoric: Catering to the mentality of those you speak to.
Socialization: When you're both imprisoned in the same space.
Persuasion: Sometimes the truth doesn't matter.

Injuries/Overstepping: Memory.

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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