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Review Request 2.2.1

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[b]City/Area:[/b] (Where is this taken place in?)
[b]Notes/Warnings:[/b] (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?)
[b]Requested Rewards:[/b] 
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: (how much and for what?)
Wealth Points: (how many and for what?)  
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed: 
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Initiation: Take Two
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Leaping from foothold to foothold
Defiance: Softening rock
Discipline: Forcing yourself to focus during a panic attack
Meditation: Using breathing to calm down
Strength: Holding your arm straight out in a windstorm
Strength: Pulling yourself up onto a rock

Magic: A mage can only initiate 6 times

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Maybe? Was initiated into a magic by being chucked into a windstorm.
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Defiance, for the initiation and the use of defiance during it.
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word count: 100
Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Bonding Moments: Part 3
City/Area: Eternal Empire
Notes/Warnings: Memory Thread
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Animal Husbandry: Signs of suspicion in a barghest
Animal Husbandry: Whale eye in dogs and barghests
Animal Husbandry: Social grooming in barghests
Animal Training: Responding appropriately to animal body language
Animal Training: Covering food in your scent to endear yourself to an animal
Animal Training: Properly petting a barghest

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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word count: 83
Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Hina
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Eyeballs
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Medicine: Anatomy of the eye
Medicine: Function of the eye
Graft: It is possible to change the type of flesh
Graft: Growing an organ off of another organ is a fruitless endeavor
Meditation: It’s hard to overcome the will of the spark
Meditation: Frustration leads to giving up

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: up to u
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes Graft
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Eyeball Arms
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Medicine: The cornea and lens focus
Medicine: Iris regulates light
Graft: Corrupting flesh into an eye
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): Gouging out eyes
Loshova Spring's Bounty: Plant life grows quickly around Hina
Seduction: Knowing you look good

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: up to u
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes Graft
Reviewed by Strange
Last edited by Hina on Sat Apr 13, 2019 7:51 pm, edited 2 times in total. word count: 73
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Mappy Must Die
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Kinda gross/graphic slaughter of a pig.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Graft: Overstepping has a way of making you hungry.
Graft: Energizing skin to heal paper cuts.
Graft: Scars from Energizing can become discolored, especially upon overstepping.
Graft: Pushing to heal a greater area than you're otherwise capable of can lead to heavy overstepping.
Graft: Overstepping can lead to hideous scars and mutations.
Discipline: Enduring the worst mental anguish of his life.

Loot: Some meat.
Injuries/Overstepping: Moderate-Heavy Overstepping. Mutation: Thick, hairy hide grows on his back, forming a hideous pattern that resembles an eye.
Renown: Maybe someone heard his bellyaching.
Wealth Points: NO
Collaboration: NO
Magic Experience?: Yes level up with Graft.
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 129

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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: What Lurks in the Shadows
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Violence, bloodshed
Requested Rewards:

Blades{Dao Sword}: Cuts through thugs like hot butter
Blades{Dao Sword}: Doesn't have the reach of a long sword
Strength: The amount of force needed to Decapitate someone
Thrown Weapons{Knives}: Widespread throws
Investigation: Staking out the target before you strike
Tactics: Luring them close for a kill shot

Injuries/Overstepping: Stab wound on left arm, minor cuts
Renown: +10
Wealth Points: (5wps for wealth thread)

Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
Reviewed by Strange
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Did a whoops. Removed thread :)
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: All as One: Part 1
City/Area: Eternal Empire
Notes/Warnings: Memory
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Polearm (Scythe): Using a wide sweep to scare opponents into each other
Polearm (Scythe): Best to keep an enemy just out of effective range
Polearm (Scythe): Attacking someone behind you over the shoulder
Shield (Tower Shield): Unbalancing an opponent with a shove
Shield (Tower Shield): Clipping an enemy under the chin
Mathematics: Numbers can go below zero

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 94
Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Hina
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Catch The Thief
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None

Hina:

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): Leg Tackle
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): Getting in the middle of a fight
Unarmed Combat (Wrestling): Kicking is a good way to escape a hold
Investigation: taking Names
Seduction: Making yourself difficult to resist
Seduction: Shameless flirtation

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: up to u
Renown: up to u
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

Abathor:

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Empathy: Anger color
Empathy: Fear Color
Empathy: Sadness color
Empathy: Colors can be hard to tell apart
Empathy: not easy to manipulate emotions
Running: chase criminal
Attunement: Compass tracking
Running: breathing hard

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: up to u
Renown: up to u
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No


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