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Lucas Nardovino
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Sat Jan 26, 2019 5:45 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Battered and Bruised
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:

Faith
Knowledge: Non requested
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Maxed out already
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

Lucas
Knowledge:
Endurance: Functioning with a headache
Endurance: Struggling through the symptoms of concussion
Endurance: Allowing wounds to heal naturally helps build endurance
Detection: Noticing uncertainty in anothers actions
Strength: Standing with weakened and tired muscles
Loot: Some clean clothes
Injuries/Overstepping: Split lip, 5 trials to heal if not rebusted. Split Knuckles, 14 trials to heal if not reopened. General overall bruising will heal overtime.
Renown: Don't think so
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Sat Jan 26, 2019 6:24 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Two Arcs Later
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Faith and Tristan meet up
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge:
None


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: None for me!
Collaboration: Yes!
Magic Experience?: no



Tristan is away from the site, atm, so he'll add knowledges if he wants them. Please could he just have points in the meantime. Thanks.
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Sat Jan 26, 2019 8:07 pm

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Thread Name: Illuminations
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Padraig

Knowledge:
Engineering: Break the problem down to its most simple.
Engineering: Consider safety first, but then consider functionality
Engineering: How to direct light
Engineering: Identifying appropriate places to work from a plan diagram
Engineering: The simplest solution is probably the best one.
Strength: Grinding glowstones is hard work.


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Probably not here, no.
Collaboration: Yes!
Magic Experience?: no


Faith

Knowledge:
Engineering: Break the problem down to its most simple.
Engineering: Consider safety first, but then consider functionality
Engineering: How to direct light
Engineering: Identifying appropriate places to work from a plan diagram
Engineering: The simplest solution is probably the best one.
Strength: Grinding glowstones is hard work.


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Maxed
Collaboration: Yes!
Magic Experience?: no
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Sat Jan 26, 2019 8:38 pm

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Thread Name: Finding Fei
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Padraig

Knowledge:
Acting: Pretending to be asleep.
Physics: The interconnected nature of reality
Physics: Utilising a body part to understand limits
Physics: The possibility of realms of existence.
Physics: Harnessing the power of lightning.
Physics: Using a magnet
Physics: Focusing energy


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Probably not here, no.
Collaboration: Yes!
Magic Experience?: no


Faith

Knowledge:
None


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Maxed
Collaboration: Yes!
Magic Experience?: no
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Navyri
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Sat Jan 26, 2019 10:16 pm

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Thread Name: His True Majesty
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: A job thread and hopefully a thread to further Nav's blessing mark.
Requested Rewards: 10xp
Intelligence: Monitor Guard Rotation
Deception: How to Control the Gossip
Deception: Give them Someone Else to Blame
Stealth: Hiding in Plain Sight
Stealth: Manipulating Blind Spots
Stealth: Make them Fearful, Make them Predictable
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Scalvoris Town: Museum
Loot: A lovely painting of Delroth, created by an unknown artist.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewer's choice.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Sun Jan 27, 2019 3:43 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: i. The Ninth Circle
City/Area: Etzos Underground
Notes/Warnings: Language and Some Violence

First in a three-parter, detailing Kas' imprisonment after capture by... well, you'll find out. Part three will be modded, but these first two parts are alllllll yours, baby! Or brah. Whoever it may be...

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Knowledge:
Detection: Surmising Who Commands a Group, Based on Deference Shown to Them
Detection: Knowing When Magic is Being Directed At You [NOTE: Not sure if this would qualify as an Abrogation Lore - Kas will have been initiated by this date - but there might be overlap]
Detection: Recognizing the Telltale Signs of an Incoming Punch
Discipline: Accepting What You Are
Philosophy: A Bloody Life Has a Bloody End
Tactics: Even When a Man is Chained, Stay out of Arms Reach


Non-Skill Knowledge:
"The Combs": Mythic Vigilante Gang In the Black Guard
Black Guard: Possesses Trained Mages and Wizards, Known as "Black Mages"
Watch Commander Yusef: Abrogator, Career Blackjack, Leader of The Combs
Corporal Drix: Former Academy Instructor, Busted Down to Corporal, Yusef's Second-in-Command
Senior Guardsman Watkins: Lifelong Blackjack, Old Comrade of Cadet Kasoria
Guardsman Kristof: Blackjack and Newest Member of The Combs


Injuries/Overstepping: Probably a bruised cheekbone, missing a tooth, but his injuries from earlier are still stabilized
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Sun Jan 27, 2019 3:56 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Hunted
City/Area: Etzos, the wilderness.
Notes/Warnings: Raelynn's rewards will need be withheld until she is approved, also there's a dead horse.

Atashi

Atashi
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  1. Strength: Leaning your weight into pulling a horse carcass out of the way.
  2. Strength: Using your leg muscles to pull a dead horse out of the way.
  3. Strength: Moving large objects in a team is a lot easier than doing so alone.
  4. Strength: Using your whole body strength to move a chest across the ground.
  5. Strength: The proper form while lifting heavy things prevents injury.
  6. Strength: A sharp exhale while exerting force helps push just a little harder.
  7. Strength: During team lifts, it helps your partner to keep the load even.
  8. Strength: The proper form for team lifting a toppled wagon.
  9. Strength: The proper form for team lifting a heavy chest.
  10. Strength: The proper form for pulling a dead horse with a partner.
  11. Endurance: Holding the cart in place while a small girl runs underneath it.
  12. Endurance: Carrying a heavy chest onto a wagon.
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Thaddeus: Probably a girl.
Thaddeus: Didn't protest when you subtly called them a girl so must be girl?
Thaddeus: Suddenly a lot more talkative with an addition to the party.
Thaddeus: Good with animals.
Thaddeus: Distraught by the dead horse.
Thaddeus: Prayed for the horse.
Thaddeus: Polite.
Thaddeus: Contested your judgement.
Thaddeus: Saved Binx from a tree
Raelynn: Named Raelynn.
Raelynn: Has a pet cat named Binx.
Raelynn: Almost got squashed by the wagon.
Raelynn: Not human.
Raelynn: Has talons for feet.
Raelynn: Heading to Etzos.
Raelynn: Agreed to travel with you and Thaddeus.
Raelynn: Strange.
Raelynn: You shouted at her.

Loot: One wagon filled with various goods. One heavy locked chest with unknown contents.
Injuries/Overstepping: Had sore muscles prior, advance to Pulled muscles?
Renown: None.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: None

Thaddeus

Knowledge:
  1. Strength: using your weight to push heavy objects
  2. Strength: having a good footing as not to injure yourself or others
  3. Strength: Buddy lift helps when things are too heavy
  4. Strength: Easing weight down or up makes injury less likely to ones self
  5. Fieldcraft: Always check your straps
  6. Hunting: using deductive reasoning in deciphering which direction something was headed based on tracks left
  7. Fieldcraft: using snow as a means to wash off gore
  8. Discipline: Not dropping the heavy wagon when startled
  9. Endurance: Enduring the strain of keeping the wagon up so not to crush someone
  10. Leadership: Knowing to diffuse tension in a situation to prevent it from escalating.
  11. Animal Husbandry: Knowing how to approach a strange animal to earn its trust
  12. Caregiving: Making sure less prepared companions do not freeze
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Atashi: Definitely thinks I'm a girl
Atashi: is not going to like this
Raelynn: Clumsy
Raelynn: Likes animals?
Raelynn: Has a cat named Binx
Raelynn: Doesn't seem prepared for Cylus...
Binx(Cat): Responds well to soft words
Binx(Cat): Do not pick up unless needed

Loot: Shared with Atashi
Injuries/Overstepping: Had sore muscles prior, advance to Pulled muscles?
Renown: None.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: None

Raelynn

Knowledge:
  1. Animal Training: Teaching a cat to respond when called.
  2. Discipline: Resisting the urge to attack an Ithecal that's shouting at you.
  3. Discipline: Keeping calm while being touched.
  4. Endurance: Pushing through the cold.
  5. Endurance: The pain of falling on my face.
  6. Etiquette: Addressing someone politely.
  7. Etiquette: Apologizing for causing trouble.
  8. Fieldcraft: Wrapping your talons to keep them warm in cold weather.
  9. Running: Chasing after a cat through the snow.
  10. Running: Running through the snow.
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Atashi: His name is Atashi.
Atashi: Stopped a wagon from crushing you
Atashi: Yelled at you
Atashi: Has a bit of a temper
Atashi: Is going to Etzos as well
Atashi: Offered for you to join them
Atashi: Seems to be strong
Atashi: Has killed a haggen-forl
Atashi: Oddly chivalrous
Thaddeus: His name is Thaddeus
Thaddeus: Quiet
Thaddeus: Looks like a girl
Thaddeus: Travelling with Atashi
Thaddeus: Saved Binx
Thaddeus: Kind
Thaddeus: Picked you up

Loot: Shared with Atashi.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: None
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Sun Jan 27, 2019 4:10 pm

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Thread Name: [Treth] Sea Tales
City/Area: Treth, Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Mentions of blood, but nothing graphic. This thread is eligible for holiday rewards.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Cooking; Ingredient: Kelp
Cooking; Ingredient: Sea Fennel
Gardening: kelp makes a good fertilizer
Medicine: inflammation is the body’s response to start the healing process from an injury
Medicine: uses for kelp as an herb
Medicine: uses for oyster shells as an herb

Non Skill Knowledges

Kelp: is a type of seaweed
Kelp: grows in shallow saltwater near the coast

Ei'ryl: doesn't do well in the heat

Ne'haer Holiday: Commemoration of the Sea
Commemoration of the Sea: is on the 43rd of Ymiden

Loot: +2 Bonus Skill Points, and Free Item: The Mystic Conch Shell -- At the end of the thread the player will find a mysterious conch shell awaiting for them in water. The shell glows a rainbow iridescent hue, somehow more noticeable when submerged, and surprisingly echoes with sounds of the deep depths of the ocean when listened to
Injuries/Overstepping: Headache and tiredness from using one of Moseke's abilities, but nothing that a good night's rest won't cure.
Renown: Possibly slight (5) or small (10) for trying to celebrate the Commemoration of the Sea by taking her class on a field trip, and for helping her brother.
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Sun Jan 27, 2019 5:19 pm

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Thread Name: Magical Duel
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings:

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Meditation: Don’t let nerves sway you from your path.
Discipline: Practice makes perfect
Discipline: Focusing on winning
Unarmed (brawling): Throwing a punch at an earth wall
Unarmed (brawling): Kicking someone in retaliation
Endurance: Taking a punch to the stomach

Stare down: I can still act scared, even if I can’t feel scared

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: getting punched and kicked a lot
Renown: 5-10 from a flashy mage duel
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: maybe some? this wasn't the focus of the thread though
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Sun Jan 27, 2019 5:23 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A little acrobatics
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Memory thread

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Cartwheel
Acrobatics: Round off
Acrobatics: Hand stand
Discipline: Following through with a training plan
Endurance: Muscle fatigue from a day of arm work
Strength: Supporting body weight with arms

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: soreness but it's a memory thread
Renown: 0
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?:0
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