Review Request Thread 2.1.8

[Sorinar]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Intro to Chemistry: Rivers of Gold
City/Area: Viden/The University of Viden
Notes/Warnings: Contains a discussion on urine and describes eye socket disfigurement.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cryptography: Hidden Meanings
Chemistry: Bodily Fluids Are Valid Chemicals
Chemistry: The Need for Secrecy
Chemistry: Interpreting Chemist Code
Chemistry: Cover the Vulnerable Flesh!
Chemistry: Fermenting and Heating Urine: Cold Fire Stone

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: My Dignity
Renown:
Collaboration: No

[Yrmellyn Cole]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Late in Vhalar
City/Area: Rharne in Vhalar 717
Notes/Warnings: Yrmellyn buys a home in Rharne. I hope to get a collection of small bottles as loot. Would prefer to leave the content unknown as I want to use them for investigation. If/when I use them in roleplay later on I will check my ideas with city staff before I write.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Mount, horse: Sit in the middle of the saddle for good balance
Mount, horse: Align your feet with your knees for a correct position
Mount, horse: Look past the horse’s ears makes and relax but don’t slouch
Mount, horse: Staying patient and in a good mood to make your horse feel safe
Investigation: Examination of options for housing
Negotiation: Negotiating the contract when buying a home

Loot:
Rharne mage registration papers
A collection of twelve small bottles with hitherto unknown content, only labeled with figures 1-12.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No

[Kyreen]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Tart Responses
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Job thread. Food everywhere.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Baking: shortcrust pastry
Baking: puff pastry
Baking: Cheese and chutney tarts
Baking: filling tarts to the correct level
Baking: rolling out pastry dough
Mathematics: tesselating shapes


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Collaboration: No

[Sorinar]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Intro to Chemistry: The Five Elements
City/Area: Viden/The University of Viden
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Chemistry: The Five Elements
Chemistry: Deals in the Quantifiable
Chemistry: Retort
Chemistry: Collection Flask
Chemistry: Burner
Physics: The Four States: Liquid, Solid, Gas, Energy

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown:
Collaboration: No

[Yrmellyn Cole]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: First Flutter to Desnind
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Short little thread. Yrmellyn leaves Ne'haer in Vhalar 717.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)

Mount, horse: To lead a horse outdoors before mounting
Mount, horse: To greet the horse and make friends before mounting
Mount, horse: To check and adjust the horse’s equipment before mounting
Mount, horse: To use a mounting block in order to spare the horse’s back
Mount, horse: Riding at walk pace
Discipline: Forcing oneself to not give in to panic

The Flutter-bus is a gigantic insect!

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No

[Vega]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Last Time We Met We Didn't Know We Knew Each Other
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Vivian

Detection: Spotting a slight limp
Etiquette: Proper introductions
Investigation: Working out connections between people
Investigation: Noting physical differences
Investigation: People come in types
Storytelling: Making a tale sound interesting
Storytelling: The story of the Sword of Shiru
Socializaiton: Not every question needs an answer
Socialization: Explaining your weird drinking powers
Tactics: Need to know basis is fine with me.

Arlo

Acrobatics: Avoiding people while running
Discipline: Not giving in to teasing
Endurance: Running up steps
Etiquette: Soothing ruffled feathers
Etiquette: Reassuring that there are no hard feelings
Rhetoric: Metaphor
Socialisation: Managing introductions in a group
Socialisation: Making everyone feel comfortable
Storytelling: Putting your story in context, even when it's shared.
Storytelling: A shared story can be a powerful thing
Storytelling: Lots of metaphors in storytelling
Tactics: Cheating in a race

Vega

Acrobatics: Avoiding people while running
Business Management: Use attractive men to make a bad business idea more attractive.
Discipline: Not showing worry
Discipline: Defending by denial
Endurance: Running up steps
Storytelling: The tale of Desnind
Storytelling: Give it some wellie.
Tactics: Cheating in a race


Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Maybe slight, for being seen and around? 5?
Collaboration: yes

[Kasoria]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Enlightened Self-Interest
City/Area: Etzos Prime
Notes/Warnings: Violence and Language (Delicious and Foul, respectively)

Well, this should have been a proper collab but Quio had to duck out for RL reasons, so I thought I'd make what I could out of it! Thanks for taking this, any questions, lemme know!

Kasoria

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Intimidation: I Know Who, What, and Where You Are
Interrogation: Seek Names and Places, Not Rumor and Hearsay
Investigation: Seeing When the Suggested Motive For a Crime Makes No Sense
Investigation: Recognizing Further Leads to be Investigated
Politics: Real Power is in Favors, Not Gold
Psychology: Knowing When a Will is Broken
Stealth: Show Yourself When YOU Choose To
Tactics: You Should Go For The Head
Throwing (Knives): Easily Hidden Weapons
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq - Combo): Catch a Foot, Break a Knee (with an elbow)
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Brass Knuckles Can Block a Blade (if you're good enough)

Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Freyda: Pickpocket
NPC "Mister Sit": Vorund's Connection to the Citadel Authorities
NPC Screever: West Side Fence
NPC Wersham: Mysterious Fence, Deals in Antiquities

Quio

Requested Rewards: Just the XP, if his post qualifies him for any

Renown: Some for Kasoria, once word gets out how he tore about those likely lads
Collaboration: Kinda...

[Woe]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Birthday Gift
City/Area: Augiery
Notes/Warnings: Slavery. This is the first part of Woe's exodus from Augiery. If anyone cares to see the series in sequence, it goes this thread, then:
Chapter 2, Chapter 3, and then Conclusion.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Deception: Pretending to be afraid.
Detection: Eavesdropping while someone else is talking to you.
Linguistics: Dehasin, a slave's langauge.
Linguistics: Lorien, a slaver's language.
Negotiation: Offering just enough value for trade. Not enough to keep.
Psychology: Unraveling the motivations of one's superiors.

Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: This thread began a long time ago. A scar on the skin around his right eye.
Renown: Nah
Collaboration: No

[Rey'na]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Blood for Blood
City/Area: Rynmere, Mantis Blacksite
Notes/Warnings: Not really, aside from the new Rey'na
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Intimidation - Hollow eyes spark fear
Intimidation - An empty smile
Intimidation - Showing your true nature
Intimidation - Leaving a man weak
Intimidation - Turning love to fear
Discipline - No feelings means no fear
Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Vomiting for a few hours after the power, same with a burning spot where her legs had grown
Renown: Nope, I doubt he'll be talking much
Collaboration: Nope

[Arlo Creede]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: If You Go Down To The Woods
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Arlo

Discipline: How to stay focused when "Hidden Truth" activates
Endurance: Fighting through what feels like a temperature
Investigation: Working out where things will be buried.
Investigation: Using historical facts.
Fieldcraft: Avoiding brambles on rubbish trails
Mortalborn Ability: Hidden Truth: Experience of hot / cold.
Mortalborn Ability: Hidden Truth: Leads you to stories
Mortalborn Ability: Hidden Truth: Very difficult to ignore
Mortalborn Ability: Hidden Truth: Sharing your vision with another

Vega

Discipline: Receiving and making sense of an unexpected vision
Fieldcraft: Yaralon specific
Fieldcraft: Avoiding brambles on rubbish trails
Hunting: Looking where there are likely to be tracks.
Hunting: Consider the wider environment
Medicine: Diagnosing a temperature.
Strength: Digging in the dirt.
Strength: Pushing yourself against the environment.




Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Probably not
Collaboration: yes