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Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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[b]Notes/Warnings:[/b] (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?)
[b]Requested Rewards:[/b] 
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
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[b]Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:[/b][/style]
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: [Prime Atheneum] X Never, Ever Marks the Spot, Part I
City/Area: Prime Atheneum, Viden Academy
Notes/Warnings: Claiming the rumor found here: viewtopic.php?f=182&t=699&p=94224#p94224. Jon has removed the only clue in the rear of the book mentioned.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Research: Paying attention to small details
Research: Following a clue
Research: Remembering hints
Research: Extrapolating from known data
Research: Loving the knowledge chase
Research: Reading, reading, read some more.

Non-Skill:
Luesco's Fracture
Luesco's Fracture: The aurora over Viden
Viden: Tundra biology
Viden: Tundra description
Viden: History of the City
Yvithia: An ethical quandary
Loot: Poem.
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Collaboration: No

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Magic EXP: (No) N/a
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Sneaky, Like
City/Area: Outer Perimeter, South Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Strong Language

Part two of the three-part training grinder. Enjoy!

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Turning Fast On The Balls of Your Feet
Throwing (Knives): The Faster The Arm, The Greater The Power... And The Lesser The Accuracy
Throwing (Knives): Aim For Soft Spots
Throwing (Knives): Can Easily Disable a Limb
Throwing (Knives): Arms and Legs are Difficult Targets
Throwing (Knives): Underhand Throw


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Lessons with Purchase Part 2
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: no
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Blades (Katana): is heavier than it looks
Blades (Katana): getting used to the feel of the blade in your hand is important
Blades (Katana): drawing the katana
Blades (Katana): building sword calluses in one's hands comes with time, and makes wielding a sword easier
Blades (Katana): repetitive movements build muscle memory
Ranged Combat (Crossbow): in perfect conditions, the maximum range of a crossbow is 100 yards or more depending on your skill

Non Skill Knowledges

Rakahi: language of the Biqaj
Rakahi: a spoken and written language
Rakahi: primarily spoken in Ne'haer
Rakahi: one of three languages spoken in Rynmere
Rakahi: drunken sea songs
Rakahi: "sea"
Rakahi: swears
Rakahi: "Shut up you idiots!"


Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: none
Collaboration: no

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: no
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Blending Genres
City/Area: Outer Perimeter, South Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Mild Language

Three for three! Thanks for sticking with it, and enjoy!

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Forward Roll
Throwing (Knives): Aiming For Unarmored Body Parts
Throwing (Knives): Also Useful for Stabbing (Well, DUH)
Throwing (Knives): Pulling a Knife From a Body and Immediately Throwing It Again
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Palm Heel Strike
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Knife Hand Strike ("Karate Chop")


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Requests of a Patriarch
City/Area: Viden Academy, Viden
Notes/Warnings: Jon is a 100% trash baby
Requested Rewards:
Jonathan

Stealth: Keeping an eye on the door
Intimidation: Threats
Intimidation: Angry eyes
Seduction: Bald offers of sex
Chemistry: Using thicker compounds to affect burn-off of Fire Flowers
Chemistry: It takes time and energy to make enough compound
Chemistry: Properly storing chemicals
Aberration: Without practice, the Harvester begins to lose patience
Teaching: Gaining a first student
Teaching: Concepts, concepts
Teaching: Learn the basics
Teaching: Demonstrating a concept
Teaching: Empathizing with a student
Teaching: Magic theory 101

Isthmae
He'll post his later! Or Ill edit this!

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: 2, for speed-horking stew in the cafeteria.
Collaboration: Yes

Domain Magic Only -
Magic EXP: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Remains of Filliman p5
City/Area: Scalv
Notes/Warnings: For reference, I think Rynata just trashed $15,000 :P
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Climbing: Make use of resources available to you
Cryptography: Creating misinformation
Intelligence: Black market merchandise
Navigation: The quickest route back to Almund
Poison: Not as harmless as it looks
Swimming: Wading to a ship

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: And Then There Were None.
City/Area: Foster's Landing, Etzos.
Notes/Warnings: Violence, language, maybe gore.
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Yana
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Requested Rewards:
SKILL KNOWLEDGE-- (8 posts = 13 skill knowledge)
Blades: Dagger: Slitting a throat
Blades: Shortsword: Footsies
Blades: Shortsword: Severing an arm
Blades: Shortsword: A solid defensive stance
Deception: Pretending to be bounty hunters
Shield: Alder Wood shields can't be broken or split
Shield: The impact of a blow still affects the arm holding the shield
Shield: Using the edge of a shield to break an arm
Ranged: Shortbow: Muting a target with an arrow through the voicebox
Ranged: shortbow: Taking the wind into consideration
Ranged: Shortbow: Arrows don't fly indefinitely
Ranged: Shortbow: Rapid fire
Ranged: Shortbow: Hitting a zig-zagging target

OTHER KNOWLEDGE--
Quiome: Alive
Quiome: Biqaj and human forms
Quiome: Has an Immortal mark
Quiome: Paranoid
Ulehi: Beqluh: Literally means rock
Ulehi: Beqluh: Also means idiot, a stupid person, lit. someone who is 'as dense as a rock'
Sons of Justice: Feel superior to bounty hunters
Sons of Justice: Don't like Immortals
Sons of Justice: Proxy guard of Fosters
Sons of Justice: Hate 'Cuckoo'

Loot: Some gold taken from the men from Ne'haer; I'll leave it up to the reviewer how much. A full quiver of arrows taken from one of the men. -5sn for one night at an inn.

Injuries/Overstepping: No physical injuries. Both Yana and Quio are tired from the fight.

Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: Yes.
Quio
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Requested Rewards:
SKILL KNOWLEDGE-- (7 posts = 12 skill knowledge)
Blades: Dagger: Killing quickly, efficiently
Blades: Dagger: Fighting with an inadequate weapon
Blades: Dagger: Knowing when your weapon is at a disadvantage
Blades: Dagger: Bleeding an enemy from multiple wounds
Navigation: Layout of Foster's Landing
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: Dodging armed attacks
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: Speed and endurance are important
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: A kick to the knee
Unarmed Combat: Pulling a punch
Medicine (general): Knowing when an injury is debilitating
Medicine (general): Symptoms of blood loss
Medicine (yludih): Lifelight is only visible from deep injuries

OTHER KNOWLEDGE--
NPC: The Bloodlass
The Bloodlass: Pirate captain near Foster's Landing
The Bloodlass: Sent Meeks and the pirates after you
Yanahalqah: Yana is the mercenary from Rynmere
Yanahalqah: Has a human form (her mercenary form)
Yanahalqah: Dangerous, and a skilled fighter
Yanahalqah: Was on the Humble Son
Yanahalqah: Knows your first biqaj and second human forms
Yanahalqah: Saved your life again
The men from Ne'haer: Are dead
The men from Ne'haer: Didn't have the pearl seashell
The men from Ne'haer: Died before you could get information on the buyer
Ulehi: Beqluh literally means stone or rock
Ulehi: Beqluh can be used as an insult, meaning "stone man" or "stupid man"
PC: The "Cuckoo"
Faction (Etzos): The Sons of Justice aka the Turkey Company
The Sons of Justice: Hate immortal worshippers
Foster's Landing: Locations of inns (ex: the "Land Inn'", the "Dolph's Inn")

Loot: -100gn to pay for surveillance in Foster's Landing. -6gn, 1sn for three whiskeys and an ale. -1sn to pay the runner. Total -106.2.0gn. Quio retrieved two rings made of yludih crystal from Tedrik, one of his mother and one of himself. He also lost a shirt when it was ripped into bandages.

Injuries/Overstepping: A shallow cut on Quio's forearm from the ax. The cut on his forearm should heal up fine within a couple weeks. Quio also took a hit by the ax to his side. The ax sheared into his ribs, cutting a flap of skin from his side, but didn't cut deeply. The wound is likely to bleed a lot, but with bandaging and rest it shouldn't do any permanent damage. It should heal by the end of the season. Also, both Yana and Quio are tired from the fight.

Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: Yes.
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Like Flies to Carrion
City/Area: Desnind
Notes/Warnings: Nzi tries to make sick kids even sicker. Sad. Also quasi abandoned thread. Rose told me I can go ahead and turn it in. I tried messaging Noah on site and in discord, but haven't gotten a reply. Plz leave a note for them in case they return to those characters, to resubmit if they want knowledge from the thread. Otherwise they get points.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Persuasion: Insinuating himself into a healer's hut.
Poisoning: Dropping diseased materials into some tea.
Poisoning: Cultivating and creating diseased material.
Resistance: Test tasting tea that's been diseased.
Storytelling: Contriving irony.
Storytelling: Easy enough to entertain children.
Storytelling: Inserting listeners into a story.
Storytelling: From Point a to Point b.
Linguistics: Switching from one language to another, on a dime.

Loot: Notice me, Lisirra!
Injuries/Overstepping: Doesn't matter? Maybe a cold or something.
Renown: minor bad/good deed, entertained some childrens.
Collaboration: Yes

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Identity

Nzi'Fuma is going by the name Zemos until further notice

Marks

Yithnai: Nzi'Fuma has glowing green eyes.
Witchmarks and Mutations:
  • Dread Warpaint: Zemos' upper face has a darkened discoloration, like sticky tar to the touch. It resembles warpaint.
  • Flies and other insects tend to crawl over his body intermittently. Sometimes a maggot can be seen crawling over his skin.
  • He has a slight slowness to his speech, as if he struggles to keep his tongue low in his mandible.

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