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Vega
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Spark of Fire
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned thread

Requested Rewards:
All

Knowledge:
None

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: N/A
word count: 36
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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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Isen Fydar
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Back to Basics
City/Area: Viden - Viden Academy - Facility of Retrospective Analysis
Notes/Warnings: Corpse Being Dissected.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Necromancy: Preserve
  • Necromancy: Organs Maintain Preserving Effects after Removal.
  • Surgery: How to Dissect a Human
  • Surgery: Proper Use of Medical Tools
  • Research: Keeping Information Up to Date.
  • Research: Step by Step Documentation
Loot: Preserved Heart in a Jar
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No


Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: Yes - Necromancy
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: Novice
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:No
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Linika
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Merciless Concoctions
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Swearing and Violence? (C'mon, it's Linika)
Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
  • Acrobatics: Pulling an Enemy's Arm Down and High-Stepping onto it
  • Acrobatics: Using Counter Inertia Against a Foe at the Other End of a Line
  • Acrobatics: Repeated Full Body Spins
  • Blade (Dagger): The Hilt can be Used to Move a Stabbed Enemy
  • Detection: Using Mirrors to Spot Those Watching You
  • Intimidation: Offering Worse Pain to Offset Existing Pain
  • Investigation: Always Cross-Check a Package's Content List
  • Logistics: Moderate Demand is the Most Easily Recorded
  • Unarmed Combat: Knees are a Good Initial Target
  • Unarmed Combat: Coins Wrapped in a Scarf as an Improvised Weapon
Non-Skill Knowledge:
  • PC: Caius Gawyne
  • Viden Location: South Apothecary
Loot: Nothing
Injuries/Overstepping: Probably some scrapes and bruises
Renown: +5? for making a semi-public scene
Collaboration: Yes, but Caius left July 22nd, after two posts.
I hope this does not negate Linika's qualification for 10 knowledges under the Collaboration Thread basis. :shock:

No Domain Magic concerns
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Doran
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: [Prime Atheneum] In Which A Lizard Learns to Sit Still
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Cuau's player was banned. I tried to finish the thread somehow.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Medicine: A thorough amamesis is a crucial part of any diagnosis
Medicine: Possible signs of drug abuse
Medicine: Reasons why someone might think they are haunted
Poisons: The dose makes the poison
Teaching: Recommending books

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: yes

No magic!
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Lorena
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Where The Sun Hits The Sea, It Calls Me
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards: Points plz xD
Knowledge: Nope.
Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
word count: 35
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Cervantez
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: ☠ Sword in the Bone ☠ Ch.3 part B
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:

Investigation: Ensure you know all the details
Investigation: Steer a conversation, don't direct it
Investigation: Asking questions for clarity
Investigation: A good investigation starts with a plan
Investigation: Going to the right person for the information you need
Intimidation: Demanding an answer in spite of politeness

Non-skill:
The Envoys: Have influence across the eastern continent
Du'umurat: Was a great mage
Du'umurat: Wielded a "cursed" sword called "Dinok Qola'as"{Death Herald}

Loot: The Journal of Du'umurat
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Up to Reviewer
Collaboration: (No)
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Lorena
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: A Night of Mischief
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Climbing: Rocky Terrain
Deception: Skirting Around Subjects
Deception: Half Truths Make For Easier Lies.
Detection: The Aroma of Fish
Detection: What Uncertainty Looks Like
Discipline: Biting Back Your Tongue
Discipline: Standing Your Ground
Fieldcraft: Lighting a Fire
Gambling: Counting Cards
Gambling: Gauging The Tells of Others
Socialization: Intentionally Making People Uncomfortable

Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Renown: Maybe?
Collaboration: Yes
word count: 78
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Mads
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Ah yes, Vrieapers
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: none
Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: not applicable
Renown: none requested
Collaboration: no
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Virikai Talius
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: You've Made Quite a Mess...
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Cuau gone so I rounded off the thread as best I could.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Leadership: Bollocking in Public
Leadership: Private vs Public Conversations
Leadership: Taking Charge When it is Not Your Responsibility
Politics: Be Diplomatic
Rhetoric: Tone of Voice is Important
Teaching: Going Beyond What is Required
Teaching: Offering Others a Chance
Teaching: Some Students Have no Funds
Teaching: The Benefit of the Doubt

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: not applicable
Renown: Maybe something for intention to help another?
And/or for stopping the disruption in the library
Collaboration: yes
word count: 106
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Ellen'wyn
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Learning Together
City/Area: Desnind
Notes/Warnings: A younger Ellen didn't appreciate Juniper's attitude.
Requested Rewards:

Stealth: Hiding in the bushes
Stealth: Utilizing cover to sneak up on prey
Hunting: Hares can be found around edge habitats
Shortbow: Shooting through bushes
Shortbow: Shooting from a crouch
Shortbow: Leaves can interfere with aim
Shortbow: Don't rush the shot
Intimidation: Looming over someone smaller than you

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Collaboration: Yes
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