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Wendell
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Review Requests 2.1.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Here
City/Area: Sea off Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: NA
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Navigation: A better view from the Crow's Nest
Navigation: How to tell when you've gone off course
Navigation: Always check the map
Navigation: The technique of tacking to pinpoint direction
Seafaring: Slacking the headsail
Seafaring: Easing out the spanker
Seafaring: How to outrun an enemy ship
Leadership: The importance of having a second in command
Leadership: Give and take

Loot:

Contract for trade route between Rynmere and Rharne.

Injuries/Overstepping: NA
Renown: Not sure
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Oberan
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Profession: Full time nuisance
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Eye of the Tiger
City/Area: Warrick, Rynmere. Memory
Notes/Warnings: This was a little challenge I'd set for myself, and boy did I struggle! It turned out meh because of it. I just hope it's coherent.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Strength: Combat training
  • Unarmed: the importance of distance
  • Unarmed: Know the range of your opponent
  • Unarmed: Circling your opponent
  • Unarmed: Use an opening to strike
  • Unarmed: Know the limits of your capabilities
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (Magic is for those who cannot trust in their natural abilities)
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Thread Name: Building a Better Golem
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Necromancy: Creating a golem
Necromancy: Creating a giant thrall
Necromancy: Combining a giant's strength with a golem's toughness
Necromancy: Implanting wells into thralls
Necromancy: Making a golem from stone and clay
Teaching: Pop quiz!


Loot: +1 Giant stone/clay golem, named Craggy.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes - Necromancy
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Thread Name: Courier
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nothing beyond a bit of crass humor
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Combat [Bludgeon]: Uppercut
Combat [Unarmed]: Targeting the groin
Combat [Unarmed]: Using your body to trip the opponent
Detection: Spotting a Tail
Detection: Listening to footsteps
Etiquette: Shaking someone's hand in greeting

Location: Almund Bazaar
Location: The Kennel
NPC: Dana Guiscard: Kennel Master

Loot: +50 gn (Payment for Odd Job)
-6 sn for bag purchase (Large (4 sn) x Waterproof leather (1.5 multiplier) x Shoulder Straps (.5 multiplier)
Injuries/Overstepping: Perhaps a bit of bruising from where the attacker's legs collided with the right side of his body
Renown: Perhaps a better reputation with The Kennel for a successful completion of the job
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Review Requests 2.1.5

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Thread Name: Refining the Sword
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: no

Requested Rewards:
Doran
Knowledge:
Blades (Longsword): Disarming somebody
Blades (Longsword): Don't hold your sword in a vice-like grip
Blades (Longsword): Cross Strike
Endurance: A practice fight
Endurance: Improves automatically if you regularly work out
Endurance: If you don't build up your endurance, you won't last long in a fight
Strength: Necessary for a swordman to have
Strength: Building up the strength in your arms
Strength: A forceful thrust
Strength: Building up your strength by attaching a weight to your sword
Teaching: Teaching somebody to fight with a sword
Teaching: Asking a student to show you what they are capable of

Zasalamir: My Student

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes, for teaching Zasalamir.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A

Zasalamir
Knowledge:
Strength: Tensing your muscles during exercise is a good method of isolating muscles for working out
Detection: Listening to inflection in tone
Endurance: Pushing Through Exhaustion
Endurance: Ignoring fatigue
Blades: Slice and stab
Blades: An on-guard stance
Armed Combat: Blade is an Extension of the Body
Bladed Combat (long sword): Slicing with a long sword
Bladed Combat (long sword): Trusting when unable to slash
Bladed Combat (longswords): Remain relaxed, flexible and responsive
Bladed Combat (longswords): Fight from the hips
Bladed Combat (longswords): Leaning/ducking to avoid attacks

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: N/A
word count: 246

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Blessings

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Ring of Reversal
Ring of Immunity
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Diamond in the Rough
City/Area: Outside Egilrun
Notes/Warnings: N/A Mentions of murder, subtle hinting at suicide.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 10xp
Appraisal: Consider Return Value
Appraisal: Don't Let Rumors Ruin a Good Deal
Appraisal: Death Makes Real Estate Cheap
Appraisal: How to Spot a "Flip"
Business Management: How to Buy a Property
Discipline: Resist Old Traumas & Persist
Loot: A House! (Previously approved by Pegasus)
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes, please! Small. Rumors spread of a stunning winged woman buying the haunted property, fearless of the home's history. Many expect an ill fate to befall the foreigner.
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No
word count: 110
"At last. It has been too long since I have walked the face of this world. Too long have I been locked there, awaiting my champion to release me. My champion... This is you, daughter of Audrae. You have, whether knowingly or not, released me from my self imprisonment, and are here to fulfill the destiny I have seen written in the tapestry of nature. You, daughter of Audrae's daughter, will be my foothold in this world." - Belaera to The Nightingale, after the 600 arc imprisonment
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