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Jonathan Burr
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Thread Name: 1st Annual Viden Academy Polar Bear Run
City/Area:Viden Academy
Notes/Warnings: Public nudity, streaking
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Jon:
Seduction: Luring someone back into bed
Seduction: Sleeping with a virgin
Whips (Bullwhip): Disarming an opponent
Whips (Bullwhip): Using an enchanted weapon to break your opponent's
Running: Running across tabletops
Running: Streaking!!

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: He did run through the Viden Academy Cafeteria buck naked at breakfast time.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Xander Andaris
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Thread Name: Just Another Knight?
City/Area: Ivorian
Notes/Warnings: no
Requested Rewards:

Tessa (Celeste)

Knowledge:
Acting: A moan of pleasure
Acting: Pretending you don't care about the bruises
Deception: Faking a response
Deception: Faking desire
Detection: Spotting when you've got an odd customer
Detection: Reading emotions in eyes
Persuasion: Asking for money
Persuasion: There's no helping girls like me.
Seduction: Greeting a new customer
Seduction: Reassure your customer that you're worth it.


Loot: +3gn
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: I'd think yes.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


Xander

Knowledge:
Discipline: Resisting your own wife's seduction
Discipline: Persisting on an idea even when someone else does not believe you
Investigation: Searching the streets
Investigation: Asking the hard questions
Investigation: Using your eyes to garner extra information
Detection: Spotting bruises on the body
Detection: Noticing a familiar face

Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Probably not
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

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Nixie
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Thread Name: A Little Rebellious. (Solo, Memory)
City/Area: Scalvoris • Surrounding Waters & Landmarks
Notes/Warnings: Warning: Some tentacle action. :p Note: The thread's mostly used for me to get to know the PC better, so I don't expect much in the way of exp, but I'll list some, even if the request is a stretch. I'll understand if you disagree on some of the requests. :p
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Stealth: Keep to the shadows.
Investigation: Poking around where you don't belong.
Swimming: Trying to keep up with a boat.
Persuasion: Don't lose your cool.
Socialization: Not everybody like surprises.
Torture: Tentacles are effective and even a little kinky.
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: Bite marks on tentacle?
Renown: I don't think so.
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No.
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Thread Name: Learning the Path
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: This is the first time doing one of these requests on my own so I hope im doing it right
Requested Rewards:
Zasalamir
Abberation: The Bond of a Harvester
Abberation: Having Chaos at one's Fingertips
Abberation: An Addiction to Ether
Archery: The first arrow is always a warning shot
Archery: Release the arrow as if were your own breath
Archery: Accuracy is Key
Empathy: Drowning in the Feeling
Empathy: The Symphony of one's Emotions
Empathy: Become an Emotional Sponge
Seduction: Ignoring personal space means more touching
Seduction: A pleasure deferred is a pleasure enhanced
Seduction: That blessing glow, though

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic EXP: No)
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Thread Name: Shake It Off
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: A touch boring unfortunately
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Meditation: Uncomfortable sitting position
Meditation: Used to organise a cluttered mind
Meditation: Getting over a murder
Meditation: Easier in serene areas
Meditation: Finding inner peace
Tactics: Planning out the future


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: The Hyena Den
City/Area: Slags Deep, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Language. Mature sexual suggestion.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Noticing Malice in Someone's Expression
Detection: Attempting to Identify Strengths by Appearances
Detection: Transitioning Focus Between Senses
Detection: Surveying a New Environment
Detection: Noticing Faked Expressions
Tactics: Go With It

Non-skill:
Domain Magic: Attunement
Audrae: Marked Me with a Black Star
Root of Dissent: Identifies the Origin of a Grudge
Stare Down: I Can't Feel Fear

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Maybe slight or small.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 98
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Thread Name: A Noose for the Loose
City/Area: Foster's Landing, southeast of Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Moderate Language and some Violence

Welp, this was a placeholder from Ashan I totally forgot about, but when Zipper and mine's thread mentioned tying up a loose end NPC... well, I had to make use of it! Went on for longer than I thought it would, but I hope you enjoy. I don't know how to request it, exactly, but I suppose the "Region Effecting Consequences" of the thread are just that Roy's death is seen as a suicide. Kind of a shaky one, given a few choice discrepancies, but... who's gonna say otherwise?

Lemme know how that would work, and either way, enjoy the story!

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Acting: A Facade of Reassurance and Appreciation
Deception: Making a Murder Look Like a Suicide-By-Hanging
Field Craft: Tying a Secure Noose
Stealth: Using Piles of Goods to Hide
Stealth: Staying Behind a Target
Strength: Hoisting Up a Corpse With a Rope


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Mmm.... I don't think so. Kinda defeats the purpose
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Victor Amielle
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Thread Name: The Taste of Sunlight
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: There's not much happening. Victor reaches Expert Transmutation and experiences an Awakening.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Changes in the way you perceive reality
Discipline: Keeping your cool in spite of having undergone a mutation
Endurance: In order to build up your endurance, you need to train regularly
Linguistics: There are some sensations there are no words for
Strength: Strengthening one's forearms for sword handling
Strength: Executing a forceful thrust

Location: Lysoria: The castle
Mutation: The taste of sunlight
Mutation: The taste of steel

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: no
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Due to one of his Awakenings, Victor's eyes glow with a soft silver light.

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Victor owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Ryder
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Thread Name: Iron and Steel
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Not that violent but eh, combat
Requested Rewards:
Longsword: Stabbing through the shin
Longsword: Finding chinks in armor
Strength: Ramming a sword through armor
Strength: Ramming a sword through bone
Loot: Some loot from a heavily armored caravan (It's split between him and four others so nothing too generous)
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope, we gucci
Renown: Maybe 10 or 15?
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 80
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Jonathan Burr
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Thread Name: Fire Flowers, Part I
City/Area:Viden Academy
Notes/Warnings: Jon has discovered barium salts, which result from a rapid decomposition of barium oxide.
Requested Rewards:

Jon:
Alchemy: Component: Barium salts
Alchemy: Component: Barium metal
Chemistry: rapid decomposition of barium yields green light
Chemistry: Quick chemical reactions are more explosive compared to slower ones
Transmutation: A marriage of transmutation and alchemy produces interesting results

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: One lab in the Viden Academy now smells like dry cleaning and sulfur.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
word count: 94
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